高三英語三模讀后續(xù)寫 比金牌更重要的東西 講義

讀后續(xù)寫原題目呈現(xiàn)：MyhusbandKennyandigrewupplayingsports.Webothworkedinthefieldofphysicaleducationandcoachyouthhighschooltrackandfield,soKennyandiweren'tsurprisedwhenourdaughter,Becky,showedearlyathleticpromise.我和丈夫肯尼是在運(yùn)動(dòng)中長(zhǎng)大的。我們都在體育教育領(lǐng)域工作，也都是高中田徑隊(duì)的教練。所以，當(dāng)我們的女兒貝基很早就展現(xiàn)出運(yùn)動(dòng)的希望時(shí)，肯尼和我并不感到驚訝。Watchingheroutrunotherkidsontheplayground,Iknewshewasdestinedforwinningmedalsonthetrack.$lowlybutsurely.tracktookoverourlives,Weekendsweredevotedtotraining,Westoppedtakingvacationssothegirlwouldn'tmissanypractices,Wemissedherbirthdaysandfamilyoutings,Ievenrestrictedthetimeshecouldspendhangingoutwithherfriends,whichwouldconsumetheenergysheneededforcompetition.看著她在操場(chǎng)上跑得比其他孩子快，我知道她注定要在賽道上贏得獎(jiǎng)牌$地位低下但肯定。田徑占據(jù)了我們的生活，周末專門用于訓(xùn)練，我們停止休假，這樣女孩就不會(huì)錯(cuò)過任何訓(xùn)練，我們錯(cuò)過了她的生日和家庭郊游，我甚至限制了她與朋友們一起玩的時(shí)間，這會(huì)消耗她比賽所需的能量。Wedidn'treallyaskBeckyifthatwaswhatshewanted,Ofcourseshedid!Whowouldn'twanttouseaGod-giventalenttothefullest?Occasionally,Beckywouldopenupafteraloss."IwishyouwerethesameevenifIhaveabaddayonthetrack,Ifeellikeyoudon'tacceptmejustforwholam."我們并沒有真正問貝基這是不是她想要的，她當(dāng)然問了！誰會(huì)不想充分利用上帝賦予的天賦呢？偶爾，貝基會(huì)在輸球后敞開心扉?！拔蚁Ｍ阋惨粯?，即使我在賽道上度過了糟糕的一天，我覺得你不會(huì)因?yàn)槲沂钦l而接受我?！盚onestly,thathurt,Inmyheart.Iknewwhatshesaidwastrue.lcouldbehavemorelikeacoachthanaMomonthesideline,Butididn'tmind,Ensuringheronthetrackofwinningwasmyonlygoal,iprobablycaredmoreaboutthemedalsthanshedid,BythetimeBeckystartedmiddleschool,ourfamilylifehadrevolvedaround(以……為中心)practicesandcompetitions.lhadvisionsofcollegescholarships,maybeeventheOlympics.Oneday.ataregionalJuniorOlympicsqualifyingevent，shetwistedherlegandendedupinaheavyfall,screaminginpain.Thiswasnotsupposedtohappen.Kennyandlpushedhertoohardthedaybeforeandsheattemptedtobreaktherecordwhichwasclearlybeyondherreach.老實(shí)說，那很傷人，在我心里。我知道她說的是真的。我可以表現(xiàn)得更像一個(gè)教練，而不是場(chǎng)邊的媽媽，但我不介意，確保她走上勝利的軌道是我唯一的目標(biāo)，我可能比她更關(guān)心獎(jiǎng)牌。當(dāng)貝基開始上中學(xué)時(shí)，我們的家庭生活已經(jīng)圍繞著(以……為中心)練習(xí)和比賽。我曾設(shè)想過大學(xué)獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金，甚至奧運(yùn)會(huì)。有一天。在一次地區(qū)青少年奧運(yùn)會(huì)資格賽上，她扭傷了腿，摔得很重，痛苦地尖叫著。這是不應(yīng)該發(fā)生的?？夏岷臀仪耙惶鞂?duì)她施加了太大的壓力，她試圖打破紀(jì)錄，這顯然超出了她的能力范圍。Werushedhertothehospitalrightaway.Neverdidlimaginesittinginadoctor'soffice,staringattheX-rayresultasthedoctorcalmlyexplainedthatBecky'sposteriorcruciateligament------thethicktissuestabilizingthebackofherkneewastorn.我們馬上把她送到醫(yī)院。我從來沒有想過坐在醫(yī)生的辦公室里，凝視著X光檢查結(jié)果，醫(yī)生平靜地解釋說貝基的后十字韌帶——穩(wěn)定她膝蓋后部的厚組織撕裂了。續(xù)寫第一段："Herprofessionalcareerasanathletewasover,"thedoctorbrokethenewstome.續(xù)寫第二段：Followingthehardfoughtrecovery,Iwatchedherrunningwithanewattitude.

“Herprofessionalcareerasanathletewasover,”

thedoctorbrokethenewstome.

Thewordshitmelikeatonofbricks.MyheartsankasIrealizedthedreamsIhadforBeckywerenowshattered.Shehadsacrificedsomuchforthetrack.Nowitwasallgone.Ifeltguiltyforpushinghertoohard.Howwewishwehadlistenedtoherwhenshesaidshewantedtobeacceptedforwhoshewas,notjustforhermedals.

“Shecanstillrunifaidedwithrecoverydrills,”

thedoctorcontinued.Ithankedandprayedtearfully.(87words)

Followingthehard-foughtrecovery,Iwatchedherrunningwithanewattitude.

Nolongerwasitaboutwinningmedalsorbreakingrecords.Instead,itwasaboutherenjoyingthesportsheloved,aboutherchallengingherselfandgrowingstrongerandstayinghealthy.Beckywasstilltalented,stillcompetitive,butmoreimportantly,shewashappy.

Shefoundnewpassionsandinterestsapartfromtrack,andourfamilylifeslowlyreturnedtonormal.

Herfallmadeusawarethatmedalsortrophiesarenothingcomparedwithloveandhappinessweshareasafamily.(80words)

語言積累：Sweepingawaytearsinherface,Ipattedherbackandtoldher,Dear,pleasecheerup.Nomatterwhathappened,wewillalwaysbeyourside.Letsconquerthedifficultytogether!"Hearingthedoctor'scoldvoice,ifeltlikelwasfallingintothedepthofdespairandthewholeworldwascrashinginfrontofmyeyes.Asthesunsinkstowardsthehorizon,castinglongshadowsonherenergeticbody,Icouldn’thelpbutrejoiceasiclearlyknewbothBeckyandIbadfoundthetruemeaningforrunning,notforwin,butforpassionandlove.Fortunately,shewasstillincrediblyhopefultoherlife.Withhopegrowingdim,Ionlywishherco