河南省2024八年級英語下冊Unit5Whatwereyoudoingwhentherainstormcame寫作能力提升練課件新版人教新目標版

UNIT5Whatwereyoudoingwhentherainstormcame？UNIT5寫作能力提升練假如近期你所在中學的校刊開辟了英文專欄，征集發(fā)生在大家身邊的感人故事。請你根據(jù)以下提示，為該專欄投稿。要點提示：1.在一個寒冷的早晨，你買早餐時看到前面的女孩買了面包和牛奶；2.女孩要離開時，發(fā)現(xiàn)樹下有一位老乞丐，他看上去很餓；3.女孩走到乞丐身旁，把食物遞給了他；4.乞丐向女孩道謝，女孩微笑著離開；5.你很感動……參考詞匯：

乞丐beggar；

感動bemoved［謀篇布局］理清文章要素，構(gòu)建文章結(jié)構(gòu)。交代時間、人物—時間：onacoldmorning人物：agirl;anoldbeggar 介紹事情的經(jīng)過—wasgoingtoleave;found;hungry;cameupto;saidthanksto;smile介紹我的感受—wasmoved;decided［遣詞造句］根據(jù)結(jié)構(gòu)圖中的要點寫出句子。1.

當我正買早餐時，我看見在我前面的女孩買了一些面包和牛奶。WhileIwas

buyingbreakfast

?

，Isawagirlinfrontofme

buysomebreadandmilk

?.buyingbreakfast

buysomebreadandmilk

123452.

當她要離開時，她發(fā)現(xiàn)樹下有一個老乞丐。Whenshe

wasgoingtoleave

?

，shefound

anoldbeggarunderatree

?.wasgoingtoleave

anoldbeggarunderatree

123453.

那個女孩走到他身旁，把她的早餐給了他。Thegirl

cameuptohim

?and

gaveherbreakfasttohim

?.cameuptohim

gaveherbreakfasttohim

123454.

當那個乞丐向女孩道謝時，她什么也沒說，然后微笑著走了。Whenthebeggar

saidthankstothegirl

?

，shesaidnothingand

wentawaywithasmile

?onherface.saidthankstothegirl

wentawaywithasmile

123455.

我被那個女孩所做的事感動了。I

wasmoved

?bywhatthegirldid.wasmoved

12345［巧妙銜接］簡述事情時，用一般過去時和過去進行時。這兩種時態(tài)配合使用可以建立起上下文的邏輯聯(lián)系。全文按照事情的發(fā)展過程來描述，運用連詞when或while，使文章過渡自然。［連句成篇］Onacoldmorning，whileIwasbuyingbreakfast，Isawagirlinfrontofmebuysomebreadandmilk.Whenshewasgoingtoleave，shefoundanoldbeggarunderatree.Helookedveryhungry.Thegirlcameuptohimandgaveherbreakfasttohim.Whenthebeggarsaidthankstothegirl，shesaidnothingandwentawaywithasmileonherface.Iwasmovedbywhatthegirldid.Herkindnesstouchedmealot.Idecidedtolearnfromherandbeakindperson.Ishouldhelpthepeopleinneedfromnowon.在你的生活中一定有一些難以忘記的經(jīng)歷，請你根據(jù)下面的提示，以“AnUnforgettableExperience”為題寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文，描述一次讓你難忘的經(jīng)歷。提示：1.Whenandwheredidithappen？2.Whatwereyoudoingwhenithappened？3.Howdidyoufeelaboutit？AnUnforgettableExperience

Ifyouaskmewhatmyunforgettableexperienceis，Iwilltellyouastoryaboutmeandalittledog.

Ifyouaskmewhatmyunforgettableexperienceis，Iwilltellyouastoryaboutmeandalittledog.

LastSaturdayafternoon，Itookawalkinaparknearby.WhenIwasgoingback，adogwalkedafterme.ItfollowedmeuntilIgottothedoorofmyhouse.WhenIwasopeningthedoor，itwassittingonthegroundandlookingatmesadly，asifitweresaying，

“Igotlost.Couldyoupleasehelpme？”

“Whatapoordog！”Ithought.ThenIletitinandgaveitsomefoodandwater.Afterthat，Iputupanoticeinourneighborhood.

LastSaturdayafternoon，Itookawalkinaparknearby.WhenIwasgoingback，adogwalkedafterme.ItfollowedmeuntilIgottothedoorofmyhouse.WhenIwasopeningthedoor，itwassittingonthegroundandlookingatmesadly，asifitweresaying，

“Igotlost.Couldyoupleasehelpme？”

“Whatapoordog！”Ithought.ThenIletitinandgaveitsomefoodandwater.Afterthat，Iputupanoticeinourneighborhood.

Thenextday，theownerofthedogcametomyhouseandtookitaway.Hethankedmealotbeforeleaving.IwasveryhappybecauseIwasabletogiveothersah