高考英語(yǔ) 概要寫(xiě)作話題訓(xùn)練8 生活方式課件

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生活方式人與環(huán)境主題語(yǔ)境:生活方式關(guān)鍵詞:overweight語(yǔ)篇類型:現(xiàn)象說(shuō)明短文詞數(shù):266語(yǔ)篇難度:★★★建議時(shí)間:22mins閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要Manypeopleareconcernedaboutthehealthofchildren.Onebigproblemisthatchildrenarebecomingmoreoverweight.Beingoverweightisaproblemthatcostsmoney.Peoplearelessproductivewhentheyweightoomuch.Theyalsohavemorehealthissueswhentheyareoverweight.Onethingthatmakespeopleoverweightiseatingtoomuchjunkfood.Chips,candyandsugarysnacksarecalledjunkfood.Junkfoodisnothealthyforpeople.Itcanmakethemoverweight.Mostjunkfoodcontainstoomuchfatandsugarwhenchildrenhavetoomuchfatandsugarintheirdiets,theycanbecomeoverweightorevenobese.Teenagersandchildreneatalotofjunkfood.Somestudiessaythatteenagersdrinksodaeverydayandeattoomuchfastfood.ThegovernorofCaliforniawantschildrentobehealthier.Heheldaspecialsummitmeetingtotalkabouttheproblem.Heinvitedseveralotherhealthgroups,aswellaschildren.Hetalkedtothechildrenaboutstayinghealthy.Heaskedthemtoexercisemoreandtostayawayfromjunkfoodthegovernoralsotookawalkwiththechildren.Hewantedtoshowthemthatexercisecanbefun.Heaskedthestudentsforacommitmenttostayhealth.Thegovernoralsosignedanewlaw.ItlimitsthesaleofjunkfoodandsodainschoolcafeteriasLawmakershopethatthisnewlawwillstopchildrenfromeatingsomuchjunkfood.Theyhopethiswillhelpmakechildrenhealthierinthestate.語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)津junkfood的說(shuō)法來(lái)自葡萄牙語(yǔ)。大約500年前,在葡萄牙語(yǔ)里有一個(gè)詞junk,意思是“oldpiecesofrope(舊日纜繩)”。時(shí)間一長(zhǎng),這個(gè)詞的意思逐漸演變?yōu)槿魏慰衫玫膹U棄材料。最后,junk用來(lái)指價(jià)值不高或根本沒(méi)有任何價(jià)值的東西。于是,人們就稱沒(méi)有多少營(yíng)養(yǎng)的食物為junkfood文章來(lái)源本文選自英文網(wǎng)站,原文題目為“GovernorWantsKidstoEatHealthily”《州長(zhǎng)想讓孩子吃得健康》,作者不詳。語(yǔ)篇解讀本文是一篇說(shuō)明文,主要說(shuō)明了孩子的肥胖問(wèn)題是吃過(guò)多垃圾食品而導(dǎo)致的。解決問(wèn)題的唯一途徑就是遠(yuǎn)離垃圾食品并且多運(yùn)動(dòng)。難句解讀原文：Whenchildrenhavetoomuchfatandsugarintheirdiets,theycanbecomeoverweightorevenobese譯文:當(dāng)孩子們的飲食中含有太多的脂肪和糖時(shí),他們就會(huì)變得超重甚至肥胖。分析:When引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。筆前點(diǎn)睛★審題分析從寫(xiě)作素材來(lái)看,本篇概要必須涉及以下幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)1.孩子們超重成為許多人擔(dān)心的問(wèn)題。2超重的原因是孩子們吃太多垃圾食品。3.加利福尼亞州州長(zhǎng)開(kāi)峰會(huì)專門(mén)討論孩子的健康問(wèn)題;他本人以身作則,親自帶孩子進(jìn)行鍛煉4州長(zhǎng)簽訂新法律來(lái)限制垃圾食品。思路點(diǎn)撥本文是一篇說(shuō)明文。本概要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)先介紹孩子們的健康問(wèn)題,然后以一般過(guò)去時(shí)介紹加利福尼亞州州長(zhǎng)為解決孩子們的健康問(wèn)題而釆取的措施高分范文Thatkidsarebecomingoverweightisabigproblemwhichconcernsmanypeople.(要點(diǎn)1)It‘sknownthateatingtoomuchjunkfoodmakeskidsoverweight.(要點(diǎn)2)Tosolvetheproblem,thegovernorofCaliforniaheldaspecialsummitmeeting,whichheinvitedhealthgroupsandchildrentoattend.Notonlydidheaskkidstostayawayfromjunkfood,buthehadawalkwiththemtoshowthatexercisecanbefun.(要點(diǎn)3)Furthermore，

hesignedanewlawtolimitthesaleofjunkfoodandsodainschools.(要點(diǎn)4)(74words)★高級(jí)語(yǔ)塊重要短語(yǔ)invitesb.todosth.邀請(qǐng)某人做某事stayawayfrom遠(yuǎn)離concerns(vt.)使….擔(dān)心notonly….butalso….不但..而且..高級(jí)語(yǔ)塊★高級(jí)句型Thatkidsarebecomingoverwiehtisabigproblemwhichconcernsmanypeople(That引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句;which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句)

It'sknownthateatingtoomuchjunkfoodmakeskidoverweight(it是形式主語(yǔ),that引導(dǎo)的從句作真正的主語(yǔ))Notonlydidheaskkidstostayawayfromjunkfood,buthehadawalkwiththemtoshowthatexercisecanbefun(notonly位于句首,其后的句子要用倒裝;that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從精彩點(diǎn)評(píng)全文要點(diǎn)齊全,敘述有條理,思路清晰,主題突出。使用了不同的句式和短語(yǔ),以及銜接上下句的過(guò)渡詞,語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用靈活,功底扎實(shí)。。語(yǔ)境演練Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeopletorush.Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry.However,itisbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone.閱讀短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofdoingwrongsinarush.Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactionsinahurry,theycannotmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater.Asthesayinggoes,"Hastemakeswaste.Weshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionanddoourworklessquickly.Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly.Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter.Forexample,takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane.However,takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnewfriends.Besides,itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway.Onthecontrary,beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesinenjoyingourlife.Finally,slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthyconditionsforus.Asisknowntoall,takingactionsinahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress.Peoplethinkiftheyarenotinahurry,theywillbecomealoserandthatannoysthem.Beinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally.Accordingtosomestudies,peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdiseases,tendtobehappierandlivemuchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense,eveniftheformerfinishjobsmoreslowlythanthelatter.Inshort,workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeoursocietymoreadvanced.Howevermuchstresscan'tbringenjoyment,friendsandhealth,whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages.Therefore,takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________高分范文Tolivelifeataslowerpaceisbetterthantolivelifeinahurry.Thereare