2024屆高考英語(yǔ)概要寫(xiě)作課件(共27張)

SummaryWriting檔次描述第五檔(21-25)1.理解準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋全部要點(diǎn)2.能準(zhǔn)確使用相應(yīng)的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯3.有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使所完成的概要結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊4.

完全使用自己的語(yǔ)言第四檔(16-20)1.理解準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋絕大部分要點(diǎn)2.所使用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯可能有些許錯(cuò)誤，但完全不影響意義表達(dá)3.比較有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使所完成的概要結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊4.有個(gè)別整句抄自原文各檔次的給分范圍和要求:contents

coherencelanguage1)Readforthestyle,topicandstructure.2)Getthemainideabyfindingoutkeyinformationandtopicsentences.3)Paraphrase(explaininyourownwords)thekeywordsandsentences.4)Considercoherence[k?u?hi?r?ns](連貫性）Howtowriteagoodsummary技能一：學(xué)會(huì)概括要點(diǎn)Howtowriteagoodsummary閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

Advertisingplaysamajorroleinthecompetitivebusinessworld.Manyindustriestakeadvantageofthepowerofadvertisingtoattractortowincustomersawayfromtheirbusinesscompetitors.Theinfluenceofadvertisingissohugethatitcausesmanypeopletobuythingsthattheydon’twantatthestart.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

Advertisingplaysamajorroleinthecompetitivebusinessworld.Manyindustriestakeadvantageofthepowerofadvertisingtoattractortowincustomersawayfromtheirbusinesscompetitors.Theinfluenceofadvertisingissohugethatitcausesmanypeopletobuythingsthattheydon’twantatthestart.

Advertisingencouragespeopletobuythingsthattheydon’twantthroughmisleadingideas.

Advertisingisproventobeasuccessfultooltostressthefeaturesoftheirproductstothepubliceventhoughit’sregardedundesirablesuchascigarettes,drugs,alcoholsandsoon.Forexample,Dunhill,acigarettecompanywhichsponsorsmanyfootballteams,seemstobepromotingcigarettestothepublic.Withoutthesponsorship,thecompanywillbelessknowntothepublic,resultinginfewersalesofcigarettes.

Advertisingencouragespeopletobuythingsthattheydon’twantthroughmisleadingideas.Advertisingisproventobeasuccessfultooltostressthefeaturesoftheirproductstothepubliceventhoughit’sregardedundesirablesuchascigarettes,drugs,alcoholsandsoon.Forexample,Dunhill,acigarettecompanywhichsponsorsmanyfootballteams,seemstobepromotingcigarettestothepublic.Withoutthesponsorship,thecompanywillbelessknowntothepublic,resultinginfewersalesofcigarettes.

Besidesthat,advertisinghasalargeinfluenceonthedecisionsmadebythepeopleintheireverydaylife.Manybusinessesuseadvertisingasaformofpromotingtocreateawarenessabouttheirproductsinthemarket.Forinstance,inafastfoodindustry,theintroductionofthenewflavorofburgerneedsadvertisingtoincreasesales.Children,especially,areeasilyinfluencedbyadvertisementsandwillhavethedesiretodineatfastfoodrestaurantsafterthat.Althoughfastfoodisbadforhealth,ithassuccessfullybecomeappealingtothepublicthroughadvertising.

Besidesthat,advertisinghasalargeinfluenceonthedecisionsmadebythepeopleintheireverydaylife.Manybusinessesuseadvertisingasaformofpromotingtocreateawarenessabouttheirproductsinthemarket.Forinstance,inafastfoodindustry,theintroductionofthenewflavorofburgerneedsadvertisingtoincreasesales.Children,especially,areeasilyinfluencedbyadvertisementsandwillhavethedesiretodineatfastfoodrestaurantsafterthat.Althoughfastfoodisbadforhealth,ithassuccessfullybecomeappealingtothepublicthroughadvertising.

However,advertisingplaysapartinhelpingcustomerstocompareaproductintermsofprice,quality,reliabilityandsoon.Withoutadvertising,itwillbeverydifficultforcustomerstojudgetheworthinessofaproduct.Forexample,advertisementspublishedbyvariouscompanieshavegiventhecustomerstheopportunitytochoosewiselywhenpurchasinganitem.Withoutthepowerofadvertising,customerswillbestucktoabrandwhichmaynotofferthebestchoice.

However,advertisingplaysapartinhelpingcustomerstocompareaproductintermsofprice,quality,reliabilityandsoon.Withoutadvertising,itwillbeverydifficultforcustomerstojudgetheworthinessofaproduct.Forexample,advertisementspublishedbyvariouscompanieshavegiventhecustomerstheopportunitytochoosewiselywhenpurchasinganitem.Withoutthepowerofadvertising,customerswillbestucktoabrandwhichmaynotofferthebestchoice.

技能二：學(xué)會(huì)表達(dá)要點(diǎn)Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?

Tips:1)paraphrasewithsynonyms/antonyms

(同義詞/反義詞)2)wordschangedintophrases(單詞與短語(yǔ)互換)3)rewritesentencestructure(改句型)4)changethepartofspeech(改變?cè)~性)5)changethevoice(主動(dòng)、被動(dòng)轉(zhuǎn)換)閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

Advertisingplaysamajorroleinthecompetitivebusinessworld.Manyindustriestakeadvantageofthepowerofadvertisingtoattractortowincustomersawayfromtheirbusinesscompetitors.Theinfluenceofadvertisingissohugethatitcausesmanypeopletobuythingsthattheydon’twantatthestart.Point1.Advertisingisessentialinthecompetitivecommercialworld/isofvitalimportance/isabsolutelynecessary...

Advertisingencouragespeopletobuythingsthattheydon’twantthroughmisleadingideas.Advertisingisproventobeasuccessfultooltostressthefeaturesoftheirproductstothepubliceventhoughit’sregardedundesirablesuchascigarettes,drugs,alcoholsandsoon.Forexample,Dunhill,acigarettecompanywhichsponsorsmanyfootballteams,seemstobepromotingcigarettestothepublic.Withoutthesponsorship,thecompanywillbelessknowntothepublic,resultingfewersalesofcigarettes.Point2.Advertisingtemptspeopletobuyundesirablethings/persuadepeopletobuywhattheydon’treallyneedbyoverstressingthefeaturesoftheproducts.

Besidesthat,advertisinghasalargeinfluenceonthedecisionsmadebythepeopleintheireverydaylife.Manybusinessesuseadvertisingasaformofpromotingtocreateawarenessabouttheirproductsinthemarket.Forinstance,inafastfoodindustry,theintroductionofthenewflavorofburgerneedsadvertisingtoincreasesales.Children,especially,areeasilyinfluencedbyadvertisementsandwillhavethedesiretodineatfastfoodrestaurantsafterthat.Althoughfastfoodisbadforhealth,ithassuccessfullybecomeappealingtothepublicthroughadvertising.Point3.Itkeepspeople(well)informedof/makespeopleawareofnewly-madeproducts,affectingpeople’sdecisionsintheirdailylife.

However,advertisingplaysapartinhelpingcustomerstocompareaproductintermsofprice,quality,reliabilityandsoon.Withoutadvertising,itwillbeverydifficultforcustomerstojudgetheworthinessofaproduct.Forexample,advertisementspublishedbyvariouscompanieshavegiventhecustomerstheopportunitytochoosewiselywhenpurchasinganitem.Withoutthepowerofadvertising,customerswillbestucktoabrandwhichmaynotofferthebestchoice.

Point4.Advertisingcanhelpcustomerstocomparedifferentproductssothattheycanmakewisechoicesabouttheirpurchases.技能三使用有效的連接手段如果歸納出的是keywords，把相應(yīng)的keywords用已學(xué)的地道的句型表達(dá)出來(lái)，即連詞成句；如果找出的是topicsentences，用不同的英語(yǔ)句型解釋一下,即paraphrase。然后再用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞連句成段。最后成文。Point1.Advertisingisessentialinthecompetitivecommercialworld.Point2.Advertisingtemptspeopletobuyunfavorablethingsbyoverstressingthefeaturesoftheproducts.Point3.Itkeepspeople(well)informedofnewly-madeproducts,affectingpeople’sdecisionsintheirdailylife.Point4.Advertisingcanhelpcustomerstocomparedifferentproductssothattheycanmakewisechoicesabouttheirpurchases.

Advertisingisessentialinthecompetitivecommercialworld.Sometimesittemptspeopletobuywhattheydon’treallywantbyoverstressingthefeaturesoftheproducts.Italwayskeepspeopleinformedofnewly-madeproducts,affectingpeople’sdecisionsintheirdailylife.However,advertisingcanhelpcustomerstocomparedifferentproductssothattheycanmakewisechoicesabouttheirpurchases.However,ifitwerenotforadvertising,peoplecouldn’tmakecomparisonsaboutproducts.Inthatcase,theywouldfailtochoosethemostsuitableitem(一件商品/物品).Point1.Advertising_______________/____________________________________/____________________________________inthecompetitivecommercialworld.isessential

Advertisingplaysamajorroleinthecompetitivebusinessworld.isofvitalimportanceisabsolutelynecessarycontribute

toAdvertisingcontributesalottoacompanyinthecompetitivecommercialworld.Point2.Advertising______/_______/______peopletobuy__________/___________/____________things.Advertisingencouragespeopletobuythingsthattheydon’twantthroughmisleadingideas.temptsunfavorableleadspersuadeundesirableunnecessaryUseNounClause(名詞性從句)Advertisingpersuadepeopleintobuyingwhattheydon’treallyneed.

Besidesthat,advertisinghasalargeinfluenceonthedecisionsmadebythepeopleintheireverydaylife.Manybusinessesuseadvertisingasaformofpromotingtocreateawarenessabouttheirproductsinthemarket.Forinstance,inafastfoodindustry,theintroductionofthenewflavorofburgerneedsadvertisingtoincreasesales.Children,especially,areeasilyinfluencedbyadvertisementsandwillhavethedesiretodineatfastfoodrestaurantsafterthat.Althoughfastfoodisbadforhealth,ithassuccessfullybecomeappealingtothepublicthroughadvertising.Point3.Advertisinghasremarkableeffectsonpeople’sdecisionUsepassivevoice