2023年浙江省嘉興市大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)模擬考試(含答案)

【2023年】浙江省嘉興市大學(xué)英語(yǔ)6級(jí)大

學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)模擬考試（含答案）

學(xué)校:班級(jí):姓名:一考號(hào)：

一、1.Writing。0題）

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1.簡(jiǎn)要分析圖表

2.分析觀眾喜歡看體育節(jié)目的原因

WhyDotheViewersLikeWatchingSportPrograms?

2.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritealetterto

consoleyourfriendwhorecentlyfailedinTOEFL.Youshouldwriteatleast

150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.得知好友John未通過(guò)托?？荚?，他情緒低落

2?幫他分析可能存在的問(wèn)題，提出合理建議

3.鼓勵(lì)他戰(zhàn)勝失敗

ALetterofConsolation

3.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledIs

ItNecessaryforaCollegeStudenttoOwnaMobilePhone?Youshouldwrite

atleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.調(diào)查顯示80%的大學(xué)生擁有手機(jī)

2.你認(rèn)為大學(xué)生需要手機(jī)嗎?

3.你的理由

IsItNecessaryforaCollegeStudenttoOwnaMobilePhone?

4.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledSayNotoAvianInfluenza.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.“禽流感”危害的后果及其嚴(yán)重性

2.造成這種突發(fā)疫情的原因

3.我們應(yīng)該如何對(duì)待

Usefulwordsandexpressions:

禽流感：avianinfluenza

預(yù)警系統(tǒng)：warningsystem

應(yīng)急機(jī)制：emergencyresponsemechanism

SayNotoAvianInfluenza

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledFallofCarPriceVersusRiseofItsCost.Youshouldwriteatleast

150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.當(dāng)前汽車(chē)降價(jià)促使汽車(chē)銷(xiāo)量增大。

2.你要買(mǎi)車(chē)，就應(yīng)該在經(jīng)濟(jì)上的心理上有所準(zhǔn)備。

3.就我而言，寧愿打車(chē)也不買(mǎi)車(chē)。

6.1.調(diào)查顯示，某大學(xué)61%的學(xué)生需要人際關(guān)系方面的心理幫助

2.出現(xiàn)這種情況的主要原因

3.我的建議

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledisaDiplomaEverything.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

accordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.目前社會(huì)上存在著迷信文憑的現(xiàn)象

2.造成這一現(xiàn)象的原因

3.我對(duì)此的觀點(diǎn)

8.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopic:InnovationandTradition.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.目前我國(guó)十分重視創(chuàng)新

2.傳統(tǒng)文化也應(yīng)得到重視

3,二者之間的關(guān)系應(yīng)如何處理

InnovationandTradition

9.1.目前，中國(guó)高等教育不再是少數(shù)人享有的教育，擁有大學(xué)文憑的人

數(shù)日益增加

2.大學(xué)生失業(yè)不再新鮮，因此有人認(rèn)為讀書(shū)無(wú)用

3.我對(duì)大學(xué)教育目的的認(rèn)識(shí)

ThePurposeofCollegeEducation

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritealetter

toyourcousinTom.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourletter

onthesituationgivenbelow:

Tom剛剛考上大學(xué)，不適應(yīng)大學(xué)的學(xué)習(xí)和生活，為此，他寫(xiě)信給你（大

三學(xué)生）向你請(qǐng)教。你回信給他向他講你的大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)和生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)。

二、2.ReadingComprehension（SkimmingandScanning）（10題）

11.

Thegovernments'policestoattractnewresidentsandslowdepopulation

processmightbecomefutileonce.

12.

WhendopeoplewhoretirestartcollectingSocialSecuritybenefits?

A.Immediatelyaftertheyretire.

B.2monthsaftertheyretire.

C.2yearsafterthenormalretiringage.

D.2yearsbeforetheyretire.

13.

Weoftenusethetermcravingwhenreferringtoaddiction.

14.

Thefar-flungoutragedestroysfieldsandplantsbecausetheymisidentified

15.

Itisapoliceman'slegalrighttopulloveracarifhehasseenitcommitted

16.

Theanimalslivinginextremeoceanicenvironmentshavetofeedoncertain

bacteriathathelpthemgetenergyfrom.

17.

Accordingtosomeresearchers,inthebodycangiverisetocertain

mentalchanges.

18.

InsomeAsiancountriesknownforstrictdisciplinesuchasJapanand

Singapore,youngpeoplesufferseriouspsychologicalproblems.

A.YB.NC.NG

19.Itmaytakelargebodiesofwaterandicedecadestorespondtochanges

intemperature.

20.

OnlybeallowedtoentertheancientOlympicGames.

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10題)

21.(47)

22.聽(tīng)力原文:Scientistssaysharkshavelivedintheworld'soceansfor

millionsofyears.Scientistssaytherearemorethanthree-hundred-fifty

differentkindsofsharks.

Sharksdonothavebones,andasharkhasanextremelygoodsenseofsmell.

Itcanfindsmallamountsofsubstancesinthewater,suchasblood,body

liquidsandchemicalsproducedbyanimals.Sharksalsosenseelectricaland

magneticpowerlinkedtonervesandmusclesoflivinganimals.These

powerfulsenseshelpthemfindtheirfood.Somesharkswilleatjustabout

anything.Manyunusualthingshavebeenfoundinthestomachsofsometiger

sharks.Theyincludeshoes,dogs,acow'sfootandmetalprotectiveclothing.

Aboutfortypercentofthedifferentkindsofsharkslayeggs.Theothersgive

birthtoliveyoung.Somesharkscarrytheiryounginsidetheirbodieslike

humansdo.

Scientistsarebeginningtounderstandtheimportanceofsharkstohumans.

Medicalresearcherswanttolearnmoreabouttheshark'sbodydefensesystem

againstdisease.Theyknowthatsharksrecoverquicklyfrominjuries.Sharks

appearnevertosufferinfections,cancerorheartdiseases.

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A.Callonpeopletoprotectsharks.

B.Pointoutthelivingenvironmentofsharks.

C.Explainwhythesharksaredangerous.

D.Anintroductiontosharks.

23.聽(tīng)力原文：M:Iamsorelieved,IjustfinishedthestoryIwasworkingon

forourcreativewritingcourse.

W:Ihaven'tquitefinishedmineyet.Ihadtroublegettingpastthebeginning.

M:Howcome?

W:Well,Iwasreallyhappytobewritingadetectivestory.Butafterthefirst

fewpages,Isortoffrozeupmentally.Ijustcouldn'twriteanymore.

M:Thesamethinghappenedtome.IthoughtitmeantIlackimagination.

W:Well,ProfessorWilsonsaidit'sprettycommonforwriterstogetstucklike

that.

M:Youwenttotalktoheraboutit?

W:Actually,Iwenttoaskformoretimetofinishtheassignment.Butinstead

shegavemesomeadviceaboutbowtokeepfromgettingstalledwritinglike

that.ShesaidthatthefirstthingIshoulddoisjustwriteanythingthatcomes

intomyheadevenifitdoesn'tmakeanysense,sortofwarmupexercise.

M:Thatisinteresting.WhenIgetstuck,Ishifttosomethingelse,youknow,

dosomeworkforoneofmyothercourses.

W:Well,hermethodsseemtohaveworkedforme.I'vewrittenmostofthe

story,andIshouldbeabletohandinontime.ButfirstIneedtogotothe

jewelrystore.

M:Youaregoingshopping?Can'tyouwaituntilyoufinishyourstory?

W:Iamgoingthereformystory.Mydetectivesolvesajewelrystorerobbery,

soIwanttotakealookathowthejewelrycasesarearranged,wherethe

securitycamerasarelocated,thatsortofthing.

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A.Adetectivestory.

B.Theirwritingassignment.

C.ProfessorWilson'swritingcourse.

D.Ajewelrystorerobbery.

24.

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25.(32)

A.Manknowswherethesocietyisgoing.

B.Peopledon'twelcometherapiddevelopmentofmodemsociety.

C.Thespeakerisworriedaboutthefutureofourmodemsociety.

D.Mancandonothingabouttheproblemofpollution.

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27.聽(tīng)力原文：W:Tony,whoarethestreetpeople?Howdidtheygettobe

livinginthestreet?

M:Well,someofthemlosttheirjobs,someofthemhavementalproblems,

andsomeofthemdrink.

Q:Whichofthefollowingfactorsisnotmentionedasacauseofbecoming

streetpeople?

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A.Unemployment.

B.Familybreakup.

C.Mentalproblems.

D.Drinking.

28.(34)

A.4,0005,100.B.4,0001,500.C.14,0001,500.D.4,0002,500.

29.(28)

A.Becauseabelltowerwastobebuiltonthesite.

B.Becauseitwasfoundunsafe.

C.Becauseaparkinglotwastobebuiltonthesite.

D.Becausenoonewantedtopreserveit.

30.(26)

A.LearnmoreaboutAmericanwomen.

B.Joinacourseonwomenstudieswithhim.

C.Allowthehistoryprofessortosavehisface.

D.Listentosomeclassesonwomenstudies.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)

31.

WhatisAmerica'sfavouritegame?

A.Baseball.B.Basketball.C.Professionalfootball.D.Soccer.

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Inprehistorictimes,ceremonieswereadoptedto.

A.showandimitatehumanfearsorconcerns

B.taketheplaceofdramainreligiousactivities

C.createdramaticsituationsundertheforceofnature

D.driveawayevilspiritsandreinforcethefaithinGod

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六、6.ErrorCorrection。題）

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38.AreAmericansbeautifulpeoplewithperfectteethandbodies

sculptedbyplasticsurgeonsandaretheyoverweightcouchpotatoes

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whosmoketoomuchandrarelyexercise?

Bothimagesareprobablytrue.Americaisayouthful-orientedS2.

culture,soayouthappearanceishighlyvalued.Alargehealthand

fitnessindustryhasbeencreatedasAmericanstrytostayphysically

fitandbuildperfectbodies.However,manyAmericans,thinkingthey

cangetoffwithanything,eatwhattheywant,whentheywant,andS3.

endwithhealthproblemsthatrequireabouttreatment.S4.

IfthemillionsofAmericanswouldengageinanactivelifestyle,

expertssay,theycouldmakesubstantialimprovementsintheirhealth.

Butafteryouembarkonafitnessprogram,heedtothefollowingS5.

advice.

Consultyourphysicianforacheck-uptomakesureyoudon't

haveanyhealthconditions,suchashighbloodpressure,thatcouldS6.

makeexercisingdangerous.Yourdoctormayrecommendabeginning

exerciseplanbasedonyourageandhealthstatus.

Beginwithacomfortablelevelofactivity-evenit'sjust5S7.

minutespersession—andgraduallybuildupyourdurance.Youshould

S8.______

neverbeinpainorunabletospeakcomfortablyduringphysical

activity.Walking,biking,swimmingandotherlow-impactexercisesare

oftenrecommendedforbeginnersandolderpeople.

Enjoyexercisebooststheoddsthatyou'llstickwithit.It'saS9.

goodideaforbeginnerstoconsultanexperiencedpersonaltrainer

whocandemonstratepropertechniquesforweight-trainingmachines

andsuggestsasafeworkoutplan.S10.

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參考答案

l.WhyDotheViewersLikeWatchingSportPrograms?Thesportprograms

havebeenenjoyingaboomamongTVviewers.Accordingtotheabovegraph

78percentofTVviewersfrequentlywatchsportswhichisobviouslyfar

aheadofothertelevisedevents.Newsfollowssecondwith68percentof

viewerscomparedwith54percentmovieswatchers.Documentariesseem

preferableamongpeoplethanthespecialsdowith42percentand20percent

respectively.Apassionforsportshastakenpossessionofthousandsofpeople.

Oneofthereasonsperhapsisthatsportsprovideanoutletforopen-up

emotions.Peopleextractthemselvesfromroutinelifeendfullyexpresstheir

feelingstowardssports.Stimulatedbytheexcitementtheyapplaudforthe

victoryandholdtheirbreathfortheexhilaratingcompetition.Inasensesports

areaheavenforpeopletoescapefromboredomendtension.Enthusiasmfor

sportsalsoreflectspeople'sdesiretotranscendgeographicalandcultural

limits.Freedfromborderandlanguagedifferencesportsareaccessibleto

everyone.Peoplewillnolongerbeconfinedtoacertainlivingcircle.They

cansharethesamefantasywiththeviewersatanotherhemisphere.Takenby

sportstheycanroamfromcountrytocountrycontinenttocontinent.Sports

thusbecomeacommonlanguageforallthepeoplethroughouttheworld.Why

DotheViewersLikeWatchingSportPrograms?Thesportprogramshave

beenenjoyingaboomamongTVviewers.Accordingtotheabovegraph,78

percentofTVviewersfrequentlywatchsports,whichisobviouslyfarahead

ofothertelevisedevents.Newsfollowssecondwith68percentofviewers,

comparedwith54percentmovieswatchers.Documentariesseempreferable

amongpeoplethanthespecialsdo,with42percentand20percent

respectively.Apassionforsportshastakenpossessionofthousandsofpeople.

Oneofthereasonsperhapsisthatsportsprovideanoutletforopen-up

emotions.Peopleextractthemselvesfromroutinelifeendfullyexpresstheir

feelingstowardssports.Stimulatedbytheexcitement,theyapplaudforthe

victoryandholdtheirbreathfortheexhilaratingcompetition.Inasense,

sportsareaheavenforpeopletoescapefromboredomendtension.

Enthusiasmforsportsalsoreflectspeople'sdesiretotranscendgeographical

andculturallimits.Freedfromborderandlanguagedifference,sportsare

accessibletoeveryone.Peoplewillnolongerbeconfinedtoacertainliving

circle.Theycansharethesamefantasywiththeviewersatanother

hemisphere.Takenbysports,theycanroamfromcountrytocountry,

continenttocontinent.Sportsthusbecomeacommonlanguageforallthe

peoplethroughouttheworld.

2.ALetterofConsolation①DearJohn②Iamsorrytolearnthatyoufailed

inTOEFLlastweekandyousufferabadmood.③CheerupJohn;itisnot

yourdoomday.YoustillhaveachancetotaketheexamnextALetterof

Consolation①DearJohn,②IamsorrytolearnthatyoufailedinTOEFL

lastweek,andyousufferabadmood.③Cheerup,John;itisnotyourdoom

day.Youstillhaveachancetotaketheexamnext解析：①審題及布局。

本文是一篇典型的應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，主要目的是安慰好友，鼓勵(lì)他振作起來(lái)。

在布局上，第一段對(duì)好友John未通過(guò)托?？荚嚤硎景参浚坏诙螌?duì)他

未通過(guò)考試的原因進(jìn)行分析；第三段鼓勵(lì)好友戰(zhàn)勝失敗，要注意措辭的

方式，或采用激將法，或引用名言。②語(yǔ)言。本文是一篇安慰信，所以

用詞應(yīng)口語(yǔ)化，感情應(yīng)真摯。

3.1sItNecessaryforaCollegeStudenttoOwnaMobilePhone?Chinais

becomingacountrywiththebiggestpopulationofmobilephonesubscribers

andanincreasingnumberofcollegestudentsarejoiningtheexistingusers.

StatistilsItNecessaryforaCollegeStudenttoOwnaMobilePhone?China

isbecomingacountrywiththebiggestpopulationofmobilephone

subscribersandanincreasingnumberofcollegestudentsarejoiningthe

existingusers.Statisti

4.SayNotoAvianInfluenzaAvianInfluenzaknownasaninfectiousdisease

swiftlysweepthewholecountry.Sounexpectedlyandpowerfullydoesit

comethatitsoonbecomepervasivearoundAsiaandallovertheworld.Such

kindofdiseaseoccursnotonlyinthedevelopingcountriesbutalsointhe

developedcountries.Peoplewhohavecaughtthediseasewillsufferfrom

highfevermuscleacherunnynoseandsorethroat.Somemayevengeteye

problemandhavedifficultybreathingatalaterstage.AvianInfluenza

becomesanepidemicwhichhasseriouslyaffectedpeople'sdailylifeand

nationaleconomyaswell.Itisevidentthatsuchphenomenoncanbe

attributedtothefollowingreasons.Directcontactwiththeinfectiouspoultry

whichmakespeoplefallillisviewedasthemajorreason.Furthermore

contaminatedobjectsincludingdailynecessitiesmaycastamalignantshadow

onpeople'slifethroughwhichpeopleeasilygetinfected.Finallybreathand

foodtransmissionmakespeoplehon'ifiedinthemulti-organfailure.Avian

Influenzafactuallyprovokesfearandpanicamongthenativesandtouristsas

well.InmyopinionAvianInfluenzamaycausetheglobaloutbreakofthe

diseaseifitisnotbroughtunderthecontrol.Governmentshouldmonitorthe

wholesituationestablishingthewarningsystemtopreventthepeoplefrom

infectionandadoptingtheemergencyresponsemechanismtoreducethe

deathrate.Moreimportantpeoplemustberesponsibleforthemselves.They

shouldenjoygoodhabitandlifestylesuchasself-cleaningandprotection

thoroughcookingofpoultrymeatseparationofrawfoodfromthecooked

foodandetc.Onlyinthiswaycanwereallyavoidthedisaster.SayNoto

AvianInfluenzaAvianInfluenza,knownasaninfectiousdisease,swiftly

sweepthewholecountry.Sounexpectedlyandpowerfullydoesitcomethat

itsoonbecomepervasivearoundAsiaandallovertheworld.Suchkindof

diseaseoccursnotonlyinthedevelopingcountriesbutalsointhedeveloped

countries.Peoplewhohavecaughtthediseasewillsufferfromhighfever,

muscleache,runnynoseandsorethroat.Somemayevengeteyeproblemand

havedifficultybreathingatalaterstage.AvianInfluenzabecomesan

epidemicwhichhasseriouslyaffectedpeople'sdailylifeandnational

economyaswell.Itisevidentthatsuchphenomenoncanbeattributedtothe

followingreasons.Directcontactwiththeinfectiouspoultrywhichmakes

peoplefallillisviewedasthemajorreason.Furthermore,contaminated

objectsincludingdailynecessitiesmaycastamalignantshadowonpeople's

life,throughwhichpeopleeasilygetinfected.Finally,breathandfood

transmissionmakespeoplehorrifiedinthemulti-organfailure.Avian

Influenzafactuallyprovokesfearandpanicamongthenativesandtouristsas

well.Inmyopinion,AvianInfluenzamaycausetheglobaloutbreakofthe

diseaseifitisnotbroughtunderthecontrol.Governmentshouldmonitorthe

wholesituation,establishingthewarningsystemtopreventthepeoplefrom

infectionandadoptingtheemergencyresponsemechanismtoreducethe

deathrate.Moreimportant,peoplemustberesponsibleforthemselves.They

shouldenjoygoodhabitandlifestyle,suchasself-cleaningandprotection,

thoroughcookingofpoultrymeat,separationofrawfoodfromthecooked

food,andetc.Onlyinthisway,canwereallyavoidthedisaster.

5.TodayawarofcarpriceinChinapromotestheever-increasingcarsales.

Manypeoplecan'tresistthetemptationtogetonetorealizetheircardream

withoutnoticingtherisingcostsinmaintenancegasolineinsuranceand

traininginstruction.Youhavetobefinanciallyandpsychologicallyprepared

whenyoubuyacar.There'snodenyingthatacarprovidesyouwithcomfort

andconvenience.Butbeforebuyingacaryouhavetotakeintoaccountthe

annualcostswhichusuallyrangefromseveralthousandtoovertenthousand

yuan.Besidesyouwillhavetofaceuptotheworriesoftherelevantincreasing

costswhichislikelytobe.AsfarasIamconcernedIdon'tthinkI'llpurchase

acar.IwouldrathertakeataxithandrivemyowncarifIgooutforan

appointmentdinnerpartyetc.What'smoreIwon'ttakethetroubletoguard

againstmycarbeingstolenandI'llleavethetroubleoffindingaparkinglot

tothetaxidriver.Anothernegativepointisthatyouwillfindyourselfeven

lazierinthissocietyofmodemmachinebyowningacarofyourown.

Whereveryougoyouareatthewheelwhichmaydamageyourhealthinthe

longrunAnywaytobuyornotinthepresentwarofcarpriceandtheriseof

relevantcoststhechoicelieswithyou.Today,awarofcarpriceinChina

promotestheever-increasingcarsales.Manypeoplecan'tresistthe

temptationtogetonetorealizetheircardream,withoutnoticingtherising

costsinmaintenance,gasoline,insuranceandtraininginstruction.Youhave

tobefinanciallyandpsychologicallypreparedwhenyoubuyacar.There'sno

denyingthatacarprovidesyouwithcomfortandconvenience.Butbefore

buyingacaryouhavetotakeintoaccounttheannualcostswhichusually

rangefromseveralthousandtoovertenthousandyuan.Besidesyouwillhave

tofaceuptotheworriesoftherelevantincreasingcosts,whichislikelytobe.

AsfarasIamconcerned,Idon'tthinkI'llpurchaseacar.Iwouldrathertake

ataxithandrivemyowncarifIgooutforanappointment,dinner,partyetc.

What'smore,Iwon'ttakethetroubletoguardagainstmycarbeingstolen,

andI'llleavethetroubleoffindingaparkinglottothetaxidriver.Another

negativepointisthatyouwillfindyourselfevenlazier,inthissocietyof

modemmachine,byowningacarofyourown.Whereveryougo,youareat

thewheel,whichmaydamageyourhealthinthelongrunAnyway,tobuyor

notinthepresentwarofcarpriceandtheriseofrelevantcosts,thechoice

lieswithyou.

6.0nCollegeStudents'InterpersonalRelationship?Accordingtothefigure

showninaresearchabout61%collegestudentsneedpsychologicalguidance

incopingwithinterpersonalrelationship.②Severalfactorscanaccountfor

thisphenomenon.③Foronethingsincemanystudentsfromone-child

familieshaveneverlivedindormitoriesbeforeenteringcollegeit'scommon

forthemtomeetdifficultiesingettingalongwithothers.Foranothermost

middleschoolsgivingprioritiestothegraspofknowledgeandhighgrades

haveneglectedthenurtureofstudents'soundpersonalityandabilityof

communication.Besidessomeparents'improperwayofeducationalsoleads

tothechildren'sincompetenceinhumanrelations.?ConsideringalltheseI

suggestthatcollegesestablishacompletesystemofmentalcounselingfor

studentsincludingregularspeechesandcoursesonpsychologyfree

professionalconsultationsetc.?Parentsarealsosupposedtogiveahandin

dealingwithchildren'semotionaldilemma.Finallystudentsthemselves

shouldtakeanactiveattitudetowardsgrouplifeandconsciouslydevelop

harmoniousrelationswithothers.OnCollegeStudents'Interpersonal

Relationship?Accordingtothefigureshowninaresearch,about61%

collegestudentsneedpsychologicalguidanceincopingwithinterpersonal

relationship.?Severalfactorscanaccountforthisphenomenon.③Forone

thing,sincemanystudentsfromone-childfamilieshaveneverlivedin

dormitoriesbeforeenteringcollege,it'scommonforthemtomeetdifficulties

ingettingalongwithothers.Foranother,mostmiddleschools,giving

prioritiestothegraspofknowledgeandhighgrades,haveneglectedthe

nurtureofstudents'soundpersonalityandabilityofcommunication.Besides,

someparents'improperwayofeducationalsoleadstothechildren's

incompetenceinhumanrelations.?Consideringallthese,Isuggestthat

collegesestablishacompletesystemofmentalcounselingforstudents,

includingregularspeechesandcoursesonpsychology,freeprofessional

consultations,etc.?Parentsarealsosupposedtogiveahandindealingwith

children'semotionaldilemma.Finally,studentsthemselvesshouldtakean

activeattitudetowardsgrouplife,andconsciouslydevelophannonious

relationswithothers.解析：①審題及布局。這篇作文要求在說(shuō)明、解釋

現(xiàn)象的基礎(chǔ)上提出建議。在布局上，根據(jù)題中給出的三段式提綱來(lái)展開(kāi)

即可。首先要描述現(xiàn)象，即人際關(guān)系對(duì)很多大學(xué)生造成軻擾；第二段說(shuō)

明導(dǎo)致這種現(xiàn)象的原因，從大學(xué)生自身、學(xué)校、家長(zhǎng)三個(gè)方面論述；第

三段提出解決問(wèn)題的建議。②語(yǔ)言。本文意在探討大學(xué)生人際關(guān)系這一

熱點(diǎn)問(wèn)題，語(yǔ)言應(yīng)概括、清晰，注意邏輯性；根據(jù)內(nèi)容需要可使用一般

現(xiàn)在時(shí)，現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。

7.1saDiplomaEverything?Nowadays①thereisawidelyheldbeliefthat

diplomaiseverything.Somepeoplewillgainahigherdiploma②atallcosts

andothersforcetheirchildrentogetahigherdiploma.Thisphenomenoncan

beexplainedbyatleast③tworeasons.④Ontheonehandpeoplebelieve

ahigherdiplomacan?guaranteeaprosperousfuturesuchassuccessful

careersandrespectablepositions.@Ontheotherhandthediplomapeople

hold⑦isattachedtotoomuchimportance.Havingadiplomaisa

preconditionforpeopletodoalmosteverythingforexampletofindajobto

haveadatewithagirl.⑧Inmyopinion⑨itisnodoubtthatdiplomais

importantbecauseitshowsaperson'sacademiclevelandability.Howevera

diplomacannotproveeverything⑩nomatterhowhighadiplomais.A

higherdiplomacanonlytellothersthattheholderhasreceivedthiskindof

education.Asforwhetherheorsheiscompetentinworkingandwhetherhe

orsheisvirtuousthesestillremainasquestions.IsaDiplomaEverything?

Nowadays①thereisawidelyheldbeliefthatdiplomaiseverything.Some

peoplewillgainahigherdiploma②atallcosts,andothersforcetheir

childrentogetahigherdiploma.Thisphenomenoncanbeexplainedbyat

least③tworeasons.(4)Ontheonehand,peoplebelieveahigherdiploma

can⑤guaranteeaprosperousfuture,suchassuccessfulcareersand

respectablepositions.@Ontheotherhand,thediplomapeoplehold⑦is

attachedtotoomuchimportance.Havingadiplomaisapreconditionfor

peopletodoalmosteverything,forexample,tofindajob,tohaveadatewith

agirl.?Inmyopinion,⑨itisnodoubtthatdiplomaisimportant,because

itshowsaperson'sacademiclevelandability.However,adiplomacannot

proveeverything,⑩nomatterhowhighadiplomais.Ahigherdiplomacan

onlytellothersthattheholderhasreceivedthiskindofeducation.Asfor

whetherheorsheiscompetentinworkingandwhetherheorsheisvirtuous,

thesestillremainasquestions.解析:［寫(xiě)作點(diǎn)撥］①由題目可知這是一

篇分析型作文，需要運(yùn)用“描述現(xiàn)象一解釋原因一提出解決辦法”的模式。

本文按照要求可分成二部分。第一段簡(jiǎn)單介紹目前社會(huì)存在的現(xiàn)象；第

二段分析造成這一現(xiàn)象的具體原因；第三段闡述自己對(duì)該問(wèn)題的看法。

②在每段的論述中請(qǐng)注意句式的變化，如定語(yǔ)從句、讓步狀語(yǔ)從句等；

注意銜接手段的使用，如however,asfor等。

8.1nnovationandTraditionNowadaysinnovationisdrawingmoreandmore

attentioninChina.Itisregardedasanapproachtoorevenacriterionfor

China'smodernization.Thusinnovationinallthefieldslikescienceand

technologyeducationandmanagementandadministrationisencouragedand

manypeoplearenowactivelyinvolvedintheeffortsinrenovationand

innovation.AtthesametimeChinesetraditionalcultureisalsoattached

adequateattentionto.Forexamplemoreclassicalworksarebeingreprinted

fortoday'sreaders.HundredsofConfuciusCollegeshavebeenandwillbe

establishedabroad.Morecontentinvolvedintraditionalcultureisincludedin

students'textbooks.Andwhat'smoreimportantmorefundsaregrantedto

sponsorsomescientificprojectsassociatedwithtraditionalculture.Thisis

completelycorrectformypart.Forinnovationcanneverbeachievedwhen

detachedfromtradition.Insteadinnovationiscloselyconnectedwith

traditionalcultureandthelatterprovidessoilandfertilizerfortheformer.

Onlytheequaldevelopmentofthesetwocanleadtothedevelopmentof

China.InnovationandTraditionNowadaysinnovationisdrawingmoreand

moreattentioninChina.Itisregardedasanapproachtoorevenacriterion

forChina'smodernization.Thusinnovationinallthefieldslikescienceand

technology,education,andmanagementandadministrationisencouragedand

manypeoplearenowactivelyinvolvedintheeffortsinrenovationand

innovation.Atthesametime,Chinesetraditionalcultureisalsoattached

adequateattentionto.Forexample,moreclassicalworksarebeingreprinted

fortoday'sreaders.HundredsofConfuciusCollegeshavebeenandwillbe

establishedabroad.Morecontentinvolvedintraditionalcultureisincludedin

students'textbooks.Andwhat'smoreimportant,morefundsaregrantedto

sponsorsomescientificprojectsassociatedwithtraditionalculture.Thisis

completelycorrectformypart.Forinnovationcanneverbeachievedwhen

detachedfromtradition.Instead,innovationiscloselyconnectedwith

traditionalculture,andthelatterprovidessoilandfertilizerfortheformer.

Onlytheequaldevelopmentofthesetwocanleadtothedevelopmentof

China.

9.ThePurposeofCollegeEducation?Nowadayswiththepolicyofcollege

enrollmentexpansioninChinahighereducationisnolongertheprivilege

onlyenjoyedbyminorities.Anincreasingnumberofpeopleowncollege

diplomawhichnodoubtbenefitstheminmorethanoneway.②Howeveras

thesayinggoeseverycoinhastwosides.③Everyyearsomanygraduates

pourintotheemploymentmarketandgreatlyinte