Unit4Whydontyoutalktoyourparents.-八年級(jí)英語下冊(cè)單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)（人教版）（學(xué)生版）

Unit4Whydon’tyoutalktoyourparents?單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度煩惱與建議闡明自己與他人的煩惱，并向他人征求意見本單元的話題為“煩惱與建議”。該話題習(xí)作通常闡明自己與他人的煩惱，并向他人征求意見或給出合理的解決辦法，最后提出祝愿。在寫作時(shí)，首先要學(xué)會(huì)運(yùn)用“Myproblemisthat…/Ican't…”等描述生活中存在的問題，學(xué)會(huì)用“should/could/whydon'tyou…/whynot…/whatabout…/howabout…”提出建議以及用“Inmyopinion…”等闡述觀點(diǎn)與理由。寫作步驟◆步驟一：1.描述煩惱；◆步驟二：給出合理化的建議；◆步驟三：表達(dá)祝愿，希望對(duì)方走出困境。真題感知（2023·遼寧鞍山·統(tǒng)考中考真題）眼睛是心靈的窗戶。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近為近視感到困擾。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格的提示信息給他寫一封電子郵件，說明他近視的原因并提出建議。要求：（1）不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、人名等相關(guān)信息。（2）根據(jù)中文和英文提示，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（3）內(nèi)容完整、意思連貫、符合邏輯、書寫整齊。（4）詞數(shù)：80~100詞。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。近視原因長(zhǎng)時(shí)間使用電子產(chǎn)品；讀書時(shí)間過長(zhǎng)。建議控制使用電子產(chǎn)品時(shí)間；養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣（如飲食、做眼保健操）……希望……參考詞匯：視力eyesight；近視myopia；電子產(chǎn)品electronicdeviceDearMike,Howisitgoingwithyou?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing【單元寫作素材】◆開頭句①Gladtohearfromyou，butI’msorryto…②Weallhavesomeproblemsandstressinourlives.③Iknowyouareupsetthesedays.◆中間句①Hereissomeofmyadviceforyou.②Whynotbuysomeflowersforyourbestfriend?③First，you…Second，you…Third，you…◆結(jié)尾句①Last,ifyouhavetoomuchstress，you’dbetterseeadoctor.②That’llbeenoughtomakehimhappy.③Ihopeyouwillhaveagoodtime.

【常用句式】Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...我寫此信來表達(dá)我關(guān)于……的觀點(diǎn)。Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout...，andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestions.

對(duì)于你來信問我關(guān)于……的事，現(xiàn)提供幾條有益的建議。Iwouldliketosuggestthat...我建議……Whynot.../Whydon'tyou...？為何不……？I'dliketosuggestthat...我想要建議......Inmyopinion,...在我看來，......IfIwereyou,Iwould...如果我是你，我會(huì)......You'dbetterdo.../notdo...你最好/最好不......Ithinkitwillbeagoodidea/morebeneficialifyoucould...我認(rèn)為……是個(gè)好辦法/有利的。It'simportantto.../Ithelpsto...Itshouldbeagoodideato...很重要/有幫助/是個(gè)好主意。Iamwritingtoputupsomesuggestionsconcerning...我提出幾條有關(guān)于……的建議。Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice.Thanks.請(qǐng)仔細(xì)考慮我的建議，謝謝。Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestions/remendationshelpful/useful.希望這些建議對(duì)你有幫助。Thankyouforyourattention.感謝你對(duì)此事的關(guān)注?！糁V語積累AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作不玩耍，聰明的孩子也變傻。Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患難見真情。3.Truefriendshipislikehealth.Youdon’tknowitsvalueuntilyouloseit.真正的友誼好像健康，失去時(shí)才知道它的可貴?！纠摹縂ina最近遇到了一個(gè)問題，她給某雜志的專欄作者Jenny寫了一封信，以尋求幫助。DearJenny,IamnotwellthesedaysbecauseIcan’tsleepwell.Ialwaysthinkaboutthethingsinthedaytime.Idon’tknowwhatIshoulddo.Canyouhelpme?Thanksalot！Yours,Gina根據(jù)信件內(nèi)容及下列提示內(nèi)容，幫Jenny給Mrs.Smith寫一封回信。80詞左右。提示：1.盡量放松，不要想太多；2.睡前做些運(yùn)動(dòng)；3.在床上聽一些輕音樂。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________審題體裁應(yīng)用文話題談?wù)搯栴}，提出建議時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)人稱第一.二人稱二．文章布局開頭：點(diǎn)明主題以“Iamsorrytohearthatyoucan'thaveagoodsleep...”引出問題文章段落結(jié)構(gòu)文章段落結(jié)構(gòu)正文：提出建議不同問題，不同建議結(jié)尾：表達(dá)祝愿以“Ihopeyouwillbebettersoon.”表達(dá)祝愿三．遣詞造句①詞匯庫放松Relax;鍛煉exercise;睡覺sleep;輕音樂lightmusic;建議advice/suggestion;苦惱trouble/problem②短語箱盡量Tryto;在意careabout;太多toomuch;睡覺gotobed;聽音樂listentomusic;鍛煉dosports;擔(dān)心worryabout;解決workout③鏈接句型Iamsorrytohearthatyou....Inyourletteryourproblemisthat...Thanksfortellingmeaboutyourproblem.Don’tworryaboutthat./Itisnormalforyourage.Herearesomegoodpiecesofadviceforyou.Ihopeeverythingwillworkout./Ihopeyouwillbebetter./Ihopethesesuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.You'dbetterdo...Youcan/could/shoulddo....提建議的句型Whydon'tyou/Whynotdo...提建議的句型Wouldyouliketodo....What/howaboutdoing...Itwillbebetter/important/necessaryforyoutodo...四、參考范文DearGina,I’msorrytohearthatyoucan’tsleepwell.Don’tworryaboutthat.Herearesomepiecesofadvice.Firstofall,you'dbettertrytorelaxandnotcareabouttoomuch.Secondly,youcandomoreexercisebeforeyougotosleep.Itwillhelpyougotosleepveryquickly.Next,Whynotlistentosomelightmusicwhenyouareinbed?Finally,Ifyouarereallyserious,itisnecessarytoseeadoctor.Ihopethesecanhelpyou.Youwillbebettersoon.Yours,Jenny（一）問題類短語1.對(duì)某人生氣 beangrywithsb2.與某人吵架 getintoafightwithsb3.不能與同學(xué)和睦相處 notgetonwithclassmates4.給某人施壓 givesbpressure5.與同學(xué)競(jìng)爭(zhēng) petewithclassmates6.太多的作業(yè) toomuchhomework（二）建議類短語1.與父母交流 municatewithparents2.早點(diǎn)睡覺 gotosleepearlier3.給某人寫信 writetosb4.主動(dòng)提出幫助 offertohelp5.給某人打 callsbup6.歸還某物 returnsth7.給某人道歉 saysorrytosb8.根據(jù)某人的看法 inone’sopinion句子積累（一）佳句欣賞與模仿1.Youshouldcallhimsothatyoucansayyou’resorry.【sothat為的是；以便】你應(yīng)該在課堂上認(rèn)真聽講，以便你能取得好成績(jī)。Youshouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyinclasssothatyoucangetgoodgrades.2.MyproblemisthatIcan’tgetonwithmyfamily.【myproblemisthat...我的問題是……】我的問題是我沒有時(shí)間做我自己喜歡的事情。MyproblemisthatIdon’thavetimetodowhatIlovetodo.3.Thetiredchildrendon’tgethomeuntilafter7：00p.m.【not...until...直到……才……】學(xué)生們直到晚上10：30才睡覺。學(xué)*科網(wǎng)Studentsdidn’tgotobeduntil10:30p.m.（二）根據(jù)提示詞，用不同的句型表達(dá)生活中存在的以下問題。1.【notsleepwell】MyproblemisthatIcan’tsleepwell.2.【notgetalongwellwithmyclassmates】Ican’tgetalongwellwithmyclassmates.3.【notgetgoodgrades】IamsorrytotellyouthatIcan’tgetgoodgrades.4.【havetoomuchhomework】MybiggestproblemisthatIhavetoomuchhomework.5.【haveafightwithmybestfriend】IamreallysadthatIhaveafightwithmybestfriend.（三）完成下列提建議的句子（每空一詞）1.Youshouldjustbeyourself.2.Whydon’tyoutalktoyourparents?3.What/Howaboutcallinghimupandsayingsorrytohim?4.Whynotdosomesportstokeephealthy?5.Whydon’tyoutalkaboutthesefeelings?例文：現(xiàn)在，中學(xué)生在校內(nèi)能保證一定時(shí)間的運(yùn)動(dòng)量，但在校外普遍缺少運(yùn)動(dòng)甚至不運(yùn)動(dòng)。請(qǐng)就此現(xiàn)象寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?nèi)容包括：1.缺少運(yùn)動(dòng)甚至不運(yùn)動(dòng)的原因；2.缺少運(yùn)動(dòng)甚至不運(yùn)動(dòng)對(duì)學(xué)生的影響；3.針對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象提出合理的改善建議。要求：1.詞數(shù)：80—100（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。參考詞匯：beshortof缺少M(fèi)anystudentsareshortofexerciseintheirsparetimenow________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作展示】Manystudentsareshortofexerciseintheirsparetimenow.Theythinkdoingexercisecanaffecttheirstudies.Thereforetheyhavelesstimetostudy.Doingsportsisgoodfortheirhealth.Apersonwhotakesexercisesregularlywillkeepfit.Intheschool,studentsareforcedtotakeexerciseinthePEclass,theyneedtojoincertainactivities.Inthisway,studentsliveinahealthylifestyle,theywon’tgetsickeasily.Butaftertheyleavingschool,nooneforcesthemtodoso,sotheyarelazytotakeexercisesothattheirbodiesgetweaker.Ithinkstudentsshouldtakeexerciseeverydayoutsidetheschool.Inaword,exerciseishelpful,importantandabsolutelynecessary.（2024·新疆克孜勒蘇·統(tǒng)考一模）最近你和父母針對(duì)“青少年該不該在周末和朋友外出”進(jìn)行了討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列表格中的信息提示，以“Shouldteenagersgooutwithfriendsonweekends?”為話題，寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。You’reparents’ideasYourideas1.gooverlessons1......2.haveagoodsleep2......3.helpparentsdohousework3.........要求：1.所寫內(nèi)容包括表格中提供的父母的想法2.至少給出你的三個(gè)想法。Shouldteenagersgooutwithfriendsonweekends?RecentlyI’vehadadiscussionwithmyparentsaboutwhetherteenagersshouldgooutwithfriendsonweekends._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2024·西藏拉薩·統(tǒng)考一模）某英文報(bào)社正就青少年與父母關(guān)系這一話題開展主題為“HowtoKeepaGoodRelationshipwithParents”的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語短文參加此次活動(dòng)。要點(diǎn)：1.父母規(guī)矩太多，過于強(qiáng)調(diào)學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)，不理解自己等問題；2.你與父母保持良好關(guān)系的做法；3.表達(dá)對(duì)父母的理解。（2024·福建三明·統(tǒng)考一模）漢語在國(guó)際交往中發(fā)揮著越來越重要的作用，學(xué)習(xí)和研究漢語的人也越來越多。你的英國(guó)朋友Anna的學(xué)校即將開設(shè)特色選修課程，她在考慮是否選修漢語，來信詢問你的建議。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給她寫封回信。注意事項(xiàng)：1.必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；3.信中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4.詞數(shù)80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearAnna,I’msogladtohearfromyou._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua（2024·福建南平·統(tǒng)考一模）新課標(biāo)對(duì)學(xué)生的英語課外閱讀提出了更高的要求，培養(yǎng)閱讀習(xí)慣變得更為重要。目前，許多中學(xué)生課外閱讀量很少。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合以下表格提示，寫一篇英語短文，對(duì)這一現(xiàn)狀進(jìn)行分析并提出合理的建議。詞數(shù)80左右。注意事項(xiàng)：1.必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名、校名和地名。Atpresentmanystudentsdolittlereadingafterclass.Hereareseveralreasons.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·黑龍江哈爾濱·一模）假如你是李平，你的英國(guó)筆友Peter因?yàn)樯眢w瘦弱而苦惱，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息，談?wù)勀愕目捶?，并告訴他如何做一名身體健康的中學(xué)生。寫作要點(diǎn)：1.因他的信任而高興。2.你的看法：①參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng)是必要的。②體育運(yùn)動(dòng)即能增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)又能調(diào)節(jié)情緒。3.告訴他如何做一名身體健康（ingoodhealth）的中學(xué)生。寫作要求：1.不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)。3.字跡工整，語言精練，條理清晰。4.至少80詞。DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing（2023·福建福州·福建省福州銅盤中學(xué)?？寄M預(yù)測(cè)）六月，全國(guó)節(jié)能宣傳周和全國(guó)低碳日活動(dòng)的主題是“踐行節(jié)能低碳，建設(shè)美麗家園”。請(qǐng)以“共建文明城市，低碳生活我先行”為主題，根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇倡議書。詞數(shù)80左右。主題Let’screateacivilizedcitytogether具體做法waysbenifits1.ride,walkreduce,save...2.throw,spitclean...3.plantbeautiful,environment...你的建議聯(lián)系生活實(shí)際提出至少2條合理的建議。注意事項(xiàng)：1）根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2）意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及校名。Let’screateacivilizedcitytogetherAsmiddleschoolstudents,it’sourdutytohelpbuildacivilizedcity.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·陜西渭南·統(tǒng)考模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假如你是李華，看到某英語報(bào)社將要組織勞動(dòng)體驗(yàn)和體育鍛煉夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)的宣傳。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語給編輯寫一封信，談一談你更想?yún)⑴c的一種活動(dòng)及理由，并對(duì)你選擇的活動(dòng)提出建議。SummerCampLivingskillstrainingSportstraining

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