讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)慢跑女孩的快跑講義-高三英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)慢跑女孩的快跑閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。It'stwoo'clock.ThegirlsinClass5C

andtheirPEteacherwereinthegym.TheywerewaitingforRuby.Wherewasshe?Rubywasinthechangingroom.ShehatedPE.It'sherworstsubject.Rubyisgoodatschool,butshedoesn'tlikePE.Shelikesreading,painting,andplayingherrecorder.RubyhatedThursdaybecausethereweretwoPElessonsintheafternoon.Rubycan'trunveryfastbecauseshegottiredquickly.Andshecan'tclimbveryhighbecauseshegot

dizzy.SometimestheothergirlsgotangrywithRubywhentheylostagamebecauseofher.Nobodywantedherintheirteam.Ruby'sPEteacherisMsButcher.Sheoftenshouts,"Runfaster,Ruby!””Climbhigher,Ruby!""Youcandobetter,Ruby!”It'stenpasttwo.Rubywasstillsittinginthechangingroom.MrButcherwasinthere,too.ShewaslookingforRuby."eon,Ruby.Yourteamiswaitingforyou.Todaywearehavingacrosscountryrace."Thethree

othergirlsinherteamdidn'tlookhappy.Theyknewthattheywouldbelast,becauseRubywassoslow.Fiveminuteslater,theracestarted."Onyourmarks.Getset.Go!”

Rubywasveryslowandherteamwaslast."Faster,Ruby!"everyoneshouted.Theyranacrossafieldandtheyranoverabridge.Butwhentheyranintotheforest,Lily,agirlinthegreenteam,slippedandfelldownahill.Somestonesandatreetrunkfelldownthehill,too.ThegirlsinLily'steamstoppedrunning.Anotherteamarrived,too.Theydidn'tknowwhattodo.Lily'slyingatthebottomofthehill.There'satreetrunkonherlegandherheadwasbleeding.Somegirlscried,andothersstoodthereinshock.TheylookeddownatLilybutnoonedidanything.FinallyClaireasked,"Where'sMsButcher?""She'satthefinishline,"saidGrace."That'stoofar!Runbackandgetsomeone,"Emilyshouted.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150詞左右:2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。SoonRubyarrivedwithherteamandsheknewexactlywhattodo.Tenminuteslater,theyheardanambulancesiren(鳴笛聲).續(xù)寫(xiě)范文；SoonRubyarrived

withherteam

andshe

knewexactlywhattodo.

Quicklybutcarefully,

sheclimbed

downthehilltotheplacewhereLilywaslying.

HorrorandpaincouldbeeasilydetectedfromLily'sface.

Notimetowaste!Ruby

immediatelygot

theothergirlstohelpherliftthetreetrunkfromLily'sleg,onlytofindher

legwasbroken.

Withoutanyhesitation,sheputLilyintothebestpositionandhuggedthis

trembling

girlcloselytokeepherwarm.

Afterashorttime,

Gracerushedback,yelling,"Theambulanceisingsoon.”Tenminuteslater,theyheardanambulancesiren.

Thentwomenwithastretcherandadoctorarrived.Thedoctorasked,"Whoputthegirlintothispositionandhelpedherstaywarm?”"Idid,”Rubyanswered."Welldone!”thedoctorgaveherathumbup.GratefullylookingupatRuby,Lilysmiled,"Thankyou.”

Thunderousapplause

fromthe

girls

aroundburstout,includingthoseinRuby'steam.

Happyandproud,Rubycouldn'thelpwhisperingtoherself,"Icanbefastwhenit'simportant.”續(xù)寫(xiě)翻譯很快，魯比和她的團(tuán)隊(duì)到達(dá)了，她知道該怎么辦。她迅速而小心地爬下山坡，來(lái)到莉莉躺著的地方。從莉莉的臉上很容易就能看出她的恐懼和痛苦。沒(méi)有時(shí)間浪費(fèi)了！魯比立刻讓其他女孩幫她把樹(shù)干從莉莉腿上抬起來(lái)，結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)莉莉的腿斷了。她毫不猶豫地把莉莉放在最佳位置，緊緊地?fù)肀е@個(gè)顫抖的女孩，為她保暖。過(guò)了一會(huì)兒，格蕾絲沖了回來(lái)，大喊：“救護(hù)車很快就來(lái)了?！笔昼姾螅麄兟?tīng)到救護(hù)車的警笛聲。隨后，兩名男子抬著擔(dān)架和一名醫(yī)生趕到。醫(yī)生問(wèn)：“是誰(shuí)把女孩放在這個(gè)位置并幫助她保暖的？”“是我做的，”魯比回答?！案傻煤茫　贬t(yī)生豎起大拇指。莉莉感激地抬頭看著魯比，微笑著說(shuō)：“謝謝你?！敝車呐儽l(fā)出雷鳴般的掌聲，包括魯比團(tuán)隊(duì)中的女孩們。魯比高興又驕傲，忍不住小聲對(duì)自己說(shuō)：“重要的時(shí)候我可以很快?！崩m(xù)寫(xiě)亮點(diǎn)Quicklybutcarefully,

sheclimbed

downthehilltotheplacewhereLilywaslying.

運(yùn)用了主從復(fù)合句。HorrorandpaincouldbeeasilydetectedfromLily'sface.

運(yùn)用了含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。Ruby

immediatelygot

theothergirlstohelpherliftthetreetrunkfromLily'sleg,onlytofindher

legwasbroken.

運(yùn)用了onlytodo結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)。Afterashorttime,

Gracerushedback,yelling,"Theambulanceisingsoon.”運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)。GratefullylookingupatRuby,Lilysmiled,"Thankyou.”運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)。Thunderousa