2023年安徽省銅陵市大學(xué)英語六級模擬考試(含答案)

【2023年】安徽省銅陵市大學(xué)英語6級大

學(xué)英語六級模擬考試（含答案）

學(xué)校:班級:姓名:考號:

一、l.Writing（10題）

1.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthe

topic:DeepenChina'sReform.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccording

totheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.現(xiàn)有的改革成果已為進一步深化改革奠定了基礎(chǔ)

2.然而改革的道路并不平坦

3.建議我們應(yīng)該……

2.Directions:Forthispartyouareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledThePurposeofCollegeEducation.Youshouldwriteatleast150

wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.目前，中國高等教育不再是少數(shù)人享有的教育，擁有大學(xué)文憑的人數(shù)

日益增加

2.大學(xué)生失業(yè)不再新鮮，因此有人認為讀書無用

3.我對大學(xué)教育目的的認識

ThePurposeofCollegeEducation

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritea

compositiononthetopic:HowtoDealwithPersonalCrisis.Youshouldwrite

atleast150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegiveninChinese

below:

1.HowtoDealwithPersonalCrisis

1,造成個人危機的起因；

2.應(yīng)對個人危機的方法。

4.Direction:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopic:MyViewonthepost-graduateCraze.Youshouldwriteatleast

150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:

1.目前考研究生形成熱潮

2.形成這股熱潮的原因是什么

3.我的看法

5.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledIs

ItNecessaryforaCollegeStudenttoOwnaMobilePhone?Youshouldwrite

atleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.調(diào)查顯示80%的大學(xué)生擁有手機

2.你認為大學(xué)生需要手機嗎？

3.你的理由

IsItNecessaryforaCollegeStudenttoOwnaMobilePhone?

6.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthe

topic:OncollegeStudents'RentingHousesoffCampus.Youshouldwriteat

least150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.眼下大學(xué)生在外租房居住的現(xiàn)象十分普遍

2.對比分析在外租房居住和在學(xué)校座的利弊

3.我的看法

OncollegeStudents5RentingHousesoffCampus

7.1.調(diào)查顯示，某大學(xué)61%的學(xué)生需要人際關(guān)系方面的心理幫助

2.出現(xiàn)這種情況的主要原因

3.我的建議

8.EvaluationbyStudents

1.不少大學(xué)讓學(xué)生參與任課老師教學(xué)情況的測評

2.對此改革措施校方、教師、學(xué)生的看法不一

3.學(xué)生測評教師的益處以及可能產(chǎn)生的問題

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledLeft-behindChildrenintheCountryside.Youshouldwriteatleast

150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.留守兒童的現(xiàn)象在農(nóng)村非常普遍

2.這種現(xiàn)象帶來的弊端

3.我診斷該如何時處理這些問題

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledMyViewonAutomobiles.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.汽車給人類帶來的益處；

2.汽車給人類帶來的副作用；

3.我的觀點。

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)

11.

AccordingtoAnnieStevens,manynewlyrecruitedmanagersfailinanew

jobbecausetheycannotgetalongwiththeircoworkers.

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12.HeartheMusic,AvoidtheMoshPit

ArtistsFindTheirAudienceOnline

MusicianSuzanneVegagotherstartintheNewYorkfolkscene,butnowthe

1980sstarhasfoundafollowingincyberspace.Withthehelpofsome

programmers,Vegacreateda3Danimatedimageofherself,calledanavatar

（化身），andsherecentlyperformedinsideaworldaccessibleonlythrougha

website,whereotherpeoplerepresentedbyavatarsattendedtheconcert,

streamedlivetocomputersallovertheglobe.

AsVegastrummed（彈奏）herguitarinsidearealstudio,about100luckyfans

satattheircomputersandguidedtheiravatarsintotheonlinesceneofan

outdooramphitheater,whereVega'savataryouthful-lookingwithshorthair

andbangs—appearedonstage.Whenthereal-worldartistplayedandsang,

heronlinealterego（另—我）didthesame-thoughtheavatar'slipsdidnot

move.Fansheardtheconcertontheircomputerspeakersandcommanded

theiravatarstosmileormovetothemusic.

Later,Vegaansweredaudiencequestions,sentasinstantmessagesvisibleto

everyoneinattendance.

TheAug.3event,organizedbyapublic:radioprogram,wasoneofthefirst

attemptsbyamajorartisttointeractwithfansinacompletelycomputer-

fabricatedworld.

"Theresponsewasterrific!!Iamstillhearingfrompeoplewhowereinthe'

room,'friendsoffriendsandpeopleallovertheworldwhowere'there,'"Vega

saidinane-mail,notingthatshetookanactiveroleinpickingoutthemaroon

blouse,blackcardiganandwhitetennisshoesheravatarwore.

Marketingandrecordlabelexecutivessaywebsitesthatputusersintovideo

-game-likevirtualworldsareauniquewaytoreachouttoaudiences,who

areincreasinglyspendingtheirtimeandmoneyonthecomputerinsteadofat

concertsandmusicstores.Althoughstillexperimental,suchsitesofferfans

morewaystointeractwithoneanotherandbandmembersdirectly.

The1980sbandDuranDuranhasreunitedandplanstoperform,aliveconcert

laterthismonthonSecondLife,theworldwhereVegaperformed,onitsown

virtualisland.Afewmonthsago,singerandpianistReginaSpektorbuiltfour

virtualManhattanloftswherefanscouldwalkaround,hangoutandlistento

streamingmusicfromhernewalbumamonthbeforeitwasreleased.Even

fansaretakingpart:AgroupoffriendscreatedavatarsofthebandU2andhas

putonseveralvirtualconcerts,usingmusicfromtheband'srealshowsand

mimickingeverydetail,downtoleadsingerBono'shairstyle,sunglassesand

clothing.

Other,lesser-knownbandsandmusicianswhotypicallyhaveusedsocial

networkingsiteMySpace,comtobuildafollowingarealsoturningupon

SecondLifeandothervirtualworlds,suchasThere,com,toshowcasetheir

music.

"AvirtualworldbringssomethingtothetablethataWebsitedoesn'tit's

buildingamoreimmersiveexperienceYoukindofloseyourselfinit,"

saidEthanKaplan,directoroftechnologyforWarnerBros.Records,whosaid

hehasplayedaroundwithSecondLifeforyears."Ifsreallycoolandalot

morefunandcreativethanjustputtingaMySpacepageup.

Musiciansareincreasinglyusingthevirtualworldtoholdliveconcerts,at

specifictimesanddates,orlisteningloungeswheretheirmusicplayswhen

anavatarpaysavisit.Thevirtualworldprovidesarichandcolorful

environmentsimilartocomputer-animatedfilmslike"ToyStory,"onlya

notchlesssophisticated.

Userscontroltheiravatarsbyclickingonarrowsormovingthemouse,but

themovementandappearanceseemabitslowattimes.Unliketherealworld,

though,avatarscanflyaroundorbeam（發(fā)射）themselvesinstantlyfrom

beachtourbanenvironm

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13.HowSledDogsWork

They'rephysicalwonders-abletoendureextremeconditionsforextensive

periodsoftimewhilerunningfastandpullingmorethantheirownweight.

Sled（雪橇）dogshavebeenaroundforgenerations,andtodaytheyremaina

largepartofadogdriver'slife.

InArctic（［匕極的）regions,some35000yearsago,Eskimos'dogsbredwith

wolvesandotherdogs.Theiroffspringwerewell-adaptedtothecoldand

snow.There'snosayingexactlywhensomeonethoughttohavedogspull

sleds,butitwaswellbefore1000B.C.thatdogsledsprovidedameansof

transportationandawaytohaulgoods.Inrecentyears,peoplelookingfor

uniqueoutingshavegoneonrecreationaltripswithsleddogs.Anumberof

companiesmarkettouristtreksviadogsledforadventuretravelers.

DogsledracinginAlaskaformallybeganin1908,whensleddogownersin

Nome,Alaska,heldthefirstAll-AlaskaSweepstakes,a408-mileracefrom

NometoCandleandback.Andin1973,theinauguralIditarodTrailSledDog

Racetookplaceonaroutecoveringmorethan1000milesinAlaska.There

aremorecompetitionsinmanyofthecontinentalUnitedStates,andsome

takeplaceondryland.Inadditiontoenduranceraces,sled-dogeventsinclude

sprintraces,weightpulls（inwhichdogstrytopullthemostweight）and

freightraces（inwhichdogstrytopullaweightedsledthefastest）.

Stamina（而寸力）andStrength

Manybreedsofdogsareusedtopullsleds,includingofficialAmerican

KennelClubbreedssuchastheSiberianhusky,MalamuteandSamoyed.

However,manysleddogsareofmixedbreedandarecalledAlaskahuskyor

Eskimodogs.WhilesomeSleddogsmayhavewolfbloodlines,it'sgenerally

notdesirabletohaveamixtureofbloodbetweenthetwo.

Sledclogsarebredfortheirspeedandenduranceaswellasleadership

qualities.Theyarebigdogswiththickcoatsandwide,flatfeet.Theysleep

withtheirtailscoveringtheirnosestokeepwarm.Dogsthatweigharound40

to45poundsaretheidealsizetopullsleds,butsomemayweighasmuchas

85pounds.

Youngdogsthatareenthusiasticrunners,easy-goingandmentallytoughare

goodchoicesforsleddogs.Adog'sgendermatterslittleandbothmaleand

femaledogsareconsideredequally.

Forracing,themostintelligentandfastestdogsarepickedtobeleaddogsand

runinthefrontofthepack.Behindthemrunswingdogs,whosejobisto

directtheteamaroundturnsandcurves.Atthebackofthedogteamarethe

wheeldogsorwheelers,whoarerightinfrontofthesledandareusuallythe

largestandstrongestoftheteam.Therestofthedogsareknownsimplyas

teamdogs.

Dogsaretypicallyfrom2to10yearsoldwhentheypullsleds.Afterthey

retire,theymightremainwiththeirowneratakennelorbeadoptedaspets

byothers.Rescuegroupsforsleddogstakeinunwanteddogsandcarefor

them,tryingtoplacetheminlovinghomes.

Whilesnowmobiles(alsocalledsnowmachines),helicoptersandairplanesare

nowoftenused!nPlaceofsleddogs,therearestilltimeswhendog

transportationispreferred.Harshweatherconditionscanmakeflying

hazardous,andcertainterraincanbemoredifficultforsnowmachinesto

crossthanfordogs.Dogscanbemorereliablethanman-mademachines,

they'regoodcompanionstohaveonlongtreksandtheycanbecheaperto

ownthanotherformsoftransportation.

BecomingaSledDog

Thenumberofsleddogsatatypicalkennel(養(yǎng)狗場)isaround75,though

somemighthouseasfewas20Orasmanyas150.Manykennelownersare

greedymushers(趕狗拉雪橇的人)andcompeteindogsledraces.Theyalso

trainothermushersandsellandleasedogs.Thetrainingforeachteamof

racingdogsvariesbymusher(orwhomeverispreparingthedogstorace).

Conditioningthedogstorunlongd

A.Becausetheyareraisedbywolves.

B.Becausetheycanstandmostsevereweather.

C.BecausetheyarefastestrunneramongArcticanimals.

D.Becausetheycanbeargoodslikehorsesdo.

14.

Besidespromotingtheconservationofwater,buildingawater-conserving

societymainly

15.

TherelationshipbetweenChadandtheSudanisnotandsotheborder

crossingisparticularlydifficult.

16.

Now,theforeignteachergetsnolessthan5,500yuanpermonthfora12hour

workweekplusalltheotherbenefitsbecausetheauthorityhasrealizedthat

thefirstofferwastoolow.

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17.

WhenweareapproachingtheREMstage,wemostprobablysee

A.vagueimages

B.familiarimages

C.animalimages

D.weirdimages

18.

Perhapsweuse"everybody","nobody","noone"tomakethingsseembetter

knownthantheyare.

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19.

Tohelpraisethepublic'sawarenessofthesuicideproblem,psychiatristTiller

appealedtothegovernmenttoorganize.

20.

Toeffectivelypromoterelationshipsbetweennegotiatorandhostage-taker,

mustappearascredibletothecaptor.

三、3.ListeningComprehension（10題）

21.SectionC

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhearapassagethreetimes.Whenthe

passageisreadforthefirsttime,youshouldlistencarefullyforitsgeneral

idea.Whenthepassageisreadforthesecondtime,youarerequiredtofillin

theblanksnumberedfrom36to43withtheexactwordsyouhavejustheard.

Forblanksnumberedfrom44to46youarerequiredtofillinthemissing

information.Fortheseblanks,youcaneitherusetheexactwordsyouhave

justheardorwritedownthe

Thegeneralpublic,however,likestheidea:[Bl]favoredwider

issuingofguns.Butthey,ofcourse,wouldnothavetocarrythemandmaybe

evenusethem.

[B2]myownexperienceshootingagunonthepractice[B3]

,Icertainlywouldnotwantthe[B4].Itiscleartoeveryone

thatthepoliceneedmore[B5]againstthegunandtheknife.They

alreadycarrylong[B6]toreplacetheoldones.Theyhaveaccessto

[B7]—coatsandgloves.

ThelikelynextstepisagreementfromtheGovernmenttotestpepperspray,

anorganic[B8]derivedfrompepperswhich[B9].Ifused

properly,[BIO]Provided[Bl1].Unpleasant,certainly,but

betterthanbeingshot.

[Bl]

22.(24)

A.Sunlight.B.Location.C.Soil.D.Drainage.

23.SectionB

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhear3shortpassages.Attheendofeach

passage,youwillhearsomequestions.Boththepassageandthequestions

willbespokenonlyonce.Afteryouhearaquestion,youmustchoosethebest

answerfromthefourchoicesmarkedA,B,CandD.

聽力原文：Biologistsinsistthatwehumansshareacommonancestrywith

allanimals,andthathumansaresimplyoneveryspecialanimalwhichhas

evolvedphysicalandculturalbehavior,thatmakeshumansunique'asthe

dominantanimalontheEarth.

Doyouknowthathumansandapeshaveageneticstructure,intheirDNA

hereditarymaterialwhichismorethan98%thesame?Thisshouldnotbe

misunderstoodasanegativecommentabouthumans,butasapositive

commentabouttheotheranimalswithwhichweshareourworld.Even

simpleranimalshavemanyofthesamegeneticsequencesofDNA,which

permitthemtocarryonmanyofthesamechemicalactivitiesintheirbody

cellsaswehumansdo.Theprocessofenergyproductioninhuman—

technicallycalledrespiration-isnearlyidenticaltothatoftigersandbirds!

Doanimalshaveaculture?Yes,evenscholarsinthesocialsciencesnowinsist

thatanimalsdohavecultures,eachtypeofanimalhavingitsuniquecultural

characteristics.

Aspartoftheirculture,wenowrecognizethatsomeanimalsmakeanduse

tools,someanimalscanclearlyshareknowledgewithoneanother,andsome

animalshavesomesortoflanguagewithwhichtheycancommunicate.While

theseanimalcultureshavetheirlimitation,itispossibletoshareourcultures

withoneanother,andthishasbeendoneformanycenturies.Fromthetime

thatprimitivemandomesticatedanimalswehavesharedcultureswiththese

animals.Sharingcommonresourcesaswellasinrelatedbehavior,manisnot

aloneinhisenvironment.

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A.Specialancestryandgeneticstructures

B.Physicalandculturalbehaviors

C.Mentalandphysicalmovements

D.Mentalbehaviorsandgeneticstructures

24.

[B6]

25.(26)

A.Someonewhoalwaystalksabouthimself.

B.Themostviolenttypeofco-workers.

C.Someonewhostabsyourback.

D.Themostcommonannoyingtypeofpeople.

26.[B3]

27.[Bll]

28.聽力原文：Asaresultofrisinguniversitycosts,manystudentsare

findingitnecessarytotakeonpart-timejobs.Tomakefindingthosejobs

easier,theplacementservicehasputtogetheralistingofwhatisavailable

locally.Forsomestudents,thesepart-timejobscouldleadtofull-timework

aftergraduation,astheymayofferexperienceintheirownfield,bethat

finance,marketingorevenmanagement.Forexample,NationalSavingsBank

offersworkonahalftimebasis.That's20hoursperweek.Retailstoresand

restaurantshavepositionsrequiringfewerhours.Evenlesstimeisexpected

ofthatprovidingchildcare.Wehaveanumberoffamiliesregisteredwithus

whoarelookingforbaby-sittersforasfewasfourhoursaweek.Forstudents

whopreferoutdoorwork,there'reseasonalpositionsrightoncampus,

workingwiththegardeningandlandscapingteams.Theseoftenrequirethe

mosttimeandtheyaretheleastflexibleintermsofscheduling.Toseea

completelistoftheseandotheravailablejobs,includingthesalaryoffered

andthehoursrequired,stopbyourofficeandbesuretobringar6sum6with

you.Whenyoufindsomethingthatinterestsyou,we'llputyouintouchwith

thepersonofferingit.Inaddition,ourcounselorswillgiveyouhintsabout

successfulinterviewing.

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A.Tointereststudentsinacareerincounseling.

B.Torecruitcounselorstoworkintheplacementoffice.

C.Toinform,studentsofauniversityprogram

D.ToconvincelocalmerchantstohirecollegeStudents.

29.(28)

A.Tohaveanintimatetalkwithyou.

B.Toknowyouasaperson.

C.Toconfirmyourqualifications.

D.Toknowmoreaboutyourfamilybackground.

30.

[B8]

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)

31.

Thepassageintendsto.

A.advocatetheuseofprivatecars

B.bantheuseofprivatecarsinsomeplaces

C.encouragepeopletomakethestreetsmoreaccessibletochildren

D上uildmorestreetsforchildrentouse

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Theculturalcommunicationproblemsarebecomingespeciallyurgentfor

A.Americanmanagers

B.multinationalcompanies

C.Japaneseemployees

D.consultingfirms

33.SectionB

Directions:Thereare2passagesinthissection.Eachpassageisfollowedby

somequestionsorunfinishedstatements.Foreachofthemtherearefour

choicesmarkedA,B,CandD.Youshoulddecideonthebestchoice.

Asawisemanoncesaid,weareallultimatelyalone.Butanincreasing

numberofEuropeansarechoosingtobesoataneverearlierage.Thisisn't

thestuffofgloomyphilosophicalcontemplations,hutafactofEurope'snew

economiclandscape,embracedbysociologists,real-estatedevelopersandad

executivesalike.Theshiftawayfromfamilylifetosololifestyle,observesa

Frenchsociologist,ispartofthe"irresistiblemomentumofindividualism"

overthelastcentury.Thecommunicationsrevolution,theshiftfroma

businesscultureofstabilitytooneofmobilityandthemassentryofwomen

intotheworkforcehavegreatlywreakedhavocon（擾舌L）Europeans'private

lives.

Europe'sneweconomicclimatehaslargelyfosteredthetrendtoward

independence.Thecurrentgenerationofhome-alonerscameofageduring

Europe'sshiftfromsocialdemocracytothesharper,moreindividualistic

climateofAmerican-style.capitalism.Raisedinaneraofprivatizationand

increasedconsumerchoice,today'stech-savvy（精通技術(shù)的）workershave

embracedafreemarketinloveaswellaseconomics.ModernEuropeansare

richenoughtoaffordtolivealone,andtemperamentallyindependentenough

towanttodoso.

Onceuponatime,peoplewholivedalonetendedtobethoseoneithersideof

marriage—twentysomethingprofessionalsorwidowedseniorcitizens.While

pensioners,particularlyelderlywomen,makeupalargeproportionofthose

livingalone,thenewestcropofsinglesarehighearnersintheir30sand40s

whoincreasinglyviewlivingaloneasalifestyle,choice.Livingalonewas

conceivedtobenegativedarkandcold,whilebeingtogethersuggested

warmthandlight.Butthencamealongtheideaofsingles.Theywereyoung,

beautiful,strong!Now,youngpeoplewanttolivealone.

Theboomingeconomymeanspeopleareworkingharderthanever.Andthat

doesn'tleavemuchroomforrelationships.PimpiArroyo,a35-year-old

composerwholivesaloneinahouseinParis,sayshehasn'tgottimetoget

lonelybecausehehastoomuchwork."Ihavedeadlineswhichwouldmake

lifewithsomeoneelsefairlydifficult."Onlyanidealwomanwouldmakehim

changehislifestyle,hesays.Kaufmann,authorofarecentbookcalled"The

SingleWomanandPrinceCharming,"thinksthisfiercenewindividualism

meansthatpeopleexpectmoreandmoreofmates,sorelationshipsdon'tlast

longiftheystartatall.EppendorfablondBerlinerwithadeeptan,teaches

gradeschoolinthemornings.Intheafternoonshesunbathesorsleeps,resting

upforgoingdancing.Justshyof50,shesaysshe'dneverhavewantedtodo

whathermotherdidgiveupacareertoraiseafamily.Instead,"I'vealways

donewhatIwantedtodo：liveaself-determinedlife."

MoreandmoreyoungEuropeansremainsinglebecause?

A.theyaredrivenbyanoverwhelmingsenseofindividualism

B.theyhaveenteredtheworkforceatamuchearlierage

C.theyhaveembracedabusinesscultureofstability

D.theyarepessimisticabouttheireconomicfuture

五、5.ErrorCorrection。題）

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六、6.ErrorCorrection。題）

37.[S5]

38.Todaywetakeforgrantedthatthemailwillhedelivereddailyatour

SI.______

door.Butmanyyearsagoitmighthavebeenplacedinatreetrunkand

S2.'_

underneatharock.Intheearlydaysofthemailnoonecouldbesureabout

whereorwhenitwillarrive.S3.

AtthesoutherntipofAfricatherewasonceapostofficeunderarock.

AttheolddaystheroutefromEnglandtoIndiawasaroundtheCapeof

S4.-

GoodHope.Thejourneywasstormyanddanger.Ittooksixlongmonths.

S5.'

Sailorsoftenwishedtosendmailhome,buttheyseldommetshipsbound

hacktoEngland.Soatthecapethesailorswouldgoonashore.Theyheaded

S6.______

foracertainlargestone.Onthestonescratchedthewords"Lookhereunder

S7.______

forletters."Theywouldleavetheirlettersthere,knowingthatthe

nexthomewardshipwouldstopandpickitup.S8.

TherewasanotherpostofficelikethisatthesoutherntipofSouthAmerica.

Duringthegoldenrushdays,boatssailedaroundGapeHorntoS9.

California.AtCapeHomwasakeg（燭桶）nailedtoapost.Boatscoming

fromtheeastcoastwouldsendsomesailorstothispostoffice.Theypicked

upanylettersinthekeg.Atthesametimetheymailedlettershomethat

boatssaileastcouldpickup.S10.

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參考答案

1.DeepenChina'sReformTheachievementsofChina'sreformhave

establishedafirmfoundationfordeepeningreform.PoliticallyChinahas

adoptedfileprincipleof"governingthecountryaccordingtolaw".China's

economyisviDeepenChina'sReform.TheachievementsofChina'sreform,

haveestablishedafirmfoundationfordeepeningreform.Politically,China

hasadoptedfileprincipleof"governingthecountryaccordingtolaw".

China'seconomyisvi

2.ThePurposeofCollegeEducation?Nowadayswiththepolicyofcollege

enrollmentexpansioninChinahighereducationisnolongertheprivilege

onlyenjoyedbyminorities.AnincreasingnumberofpeopleowncollegeThe

PurposeofCollegeEducation?Nowadays,withthepolicyofcollege

enrollmentexpansioninChina,highereducationisnolongertheprivilege

onlyenjoyedbyminorities.Anincreasingnumberofpeopleowncollege解

析：①審題及布局。這篇作文探討對我國高等教育目的的認識。高等教

育；的普及造成大學(xué)生失業(yè)人數(shù)增加，讀書無用論泛濫。本題要求在說

明現(xiàn)象的基礎(chǔ)上申明自己如何看待大學(xué)教育的目的。在布局上，根據(jù)題

干中給出的提綱展開即可。第一段介紹擁有大學(xué)文憑的人日益增多；第

二段承接上文，說明很多大學(xué)畢業(yè)生失業(yè)，有人持讀書無用論；第三段

說明本人對大學(xué)教育目的的認識。②語言。本文涉及現(xiàn)象的描述及個人

觀點的說明，語言要客觀、準確，富有表現(xiàn)力。注意要恰當使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞

銜接上下文，使行文連貫自然?？墒褂瞄L句或生動靈巧的句子結(jié)構(gòu)為文

章增色。

3.HowtoDealwithPersonalCrisisSincedifferentpersonmaycomeacross

differentcrisisitisdifficulttoanswerwhypersonalcrisiswillhappenand

whatleadstothesituation.Itdepends.Butthemainoriginsandcausescanbe

concludedinthefollowingthreeaspects:lackofstrongmindandpersonal

incompetencetoovercomedifficultydisadvantageoussurroundingsandbad

luck.Onlywhenonepersondoeswellinallthesethreeaspectscanheorshe

avoidpersonalcrisis.Butanywayallisnotlostthatisindanger.Everycloud

hasasilverlining.Onewillsurelycomeoutfromthecrisisifhemastersthe

fightmethods.Atfirstheshouldenvisagethecrisiswiththerighteye.And

thenheshouldbestrongly-mindedandbeperseverantallthetime.Thirdly

heshouldtryhisbesttoimproverelationwithhisbosscolleaguespartners

friendsandhisfamilymembersinordertogetabettersurrounding.Atlasthe

shouldtrytograspeverychancetomakeprogress.Inthiswaythecrisiscan

betransferredtosuccess.HowtoDealwithPersonalCrisisSincedifferent

personmaycomeacrossdifferentcrisis,itisdifficulttoanswerwhypersonal

crisiswillhappenandwhatleadstothesituation.Itdepends.Butthemain

originsandcausescanbeconcludedinthefollowingthreeaspects:lackof

strongmindandpersonalincompetencetoovercomedifficulty,

disadvantageoussurroundings,andbadluck.Onlywhenonepersondoeswell

inallthesethreeaspects,canheorsheavoidpersonalcrisis.Butanyway,all

isnotlostthatisindanger.Everycloudhasasilverlining.Onewillsurely

comeoutfromthecrisisifhemastersthefightmethods.Atfirst,heshould

envisagethecrisiswiththerighteye.Andthen,heshouldbestrongly-

mindedandbeperseverantallthetime.Thirdly,heshouldtryhisbestto

improverelationwithhisboss,colleagues,partners,friends,andhisfamily

membersinordertogetabettersurrounding.Atlast,heshouldtrytograsp

everychancetomakeprogress.Inthisway,thecrisiscanbetransferredto

success.解析：這是一篇限制性提綱作文。由于已經(jīng)給出了寫作主題和

段落模式，所以必須緊扣標題，嚴格遵守提綱，達到規(guī)定字數(shù)。構(gòu)思時

結(jié)構(gòu)一定要清晰，建議使用四段式，第一段綜述，第二、三段分述，第

四段做總結(jié)，二、三段是重點。可將提綱中的兩點作為第二段和第三段

的主題句，但不要逐字翻譯，然后再找2-3個與主題相關(guān)的素材展開說

明。另外還需注意：①寫好第一句話。這樣容易給閱卷者留下一個好印

象，最好能用上一個漂亮的復(fù)合句，里面再用上2—3個難的單詞或詞

組，但不能出錯。②在寫作時盡量多用長句，少用短句，適當加入幾個

結(jié)構(gòu)較復(fù)雜的句子。可多用連接性的詞組或單詞，如first,second,

moreover,foronething...foranother,ontheonehand...ontheotherhand

等等?？梢园阉鼈冎糜诙问谆蛭闹斜容^顯著的位置，這樣會使文章更具

條理性。③注意結(jié)尾的時候要點題，把自己的觀點明確說出來。文章不

要寫得太長，這樣容易引起閱卷者的反感，達到字數(shù)就可以了。④如有

可能，適當加上一兩句名言或是諺語，以顯示你的水平。最后要注意沒

有語法錯誤，并保持卷面干凈整潔。

本文可以這樣寫：首先第一段介紹在生活和工作節(jié)奏不斷加快的今天，

人們會碰到各種各樣的個人危機，如：工作事業(yè)上的，婚戀家庭上的，

人際關(guān)系上的等等；第二段則按照提綱中的第十點重點分析造成個人危

機的起因，主要有自身處理事物能力不足，外部環(huán)境較為不利，以及運

氣不佳等等；第三段則根據(jù)提綱中第二點提出應(yīng)對個人危機的方法，要

根據(jù)第二段中的起因來提應(yīng)對方法，可以寫需要個人有堅強的意志毅力

和不懈的努力奮斗，積極改善外部環(huán)境，善于抓住機遇；第四段可以適

當

發(fā)揮，進——步闡明自己的觀點，并提出希望。

當然，也可以按照提綱就寫兩段，只要說清問題即可。

4.MyViewonthepost-graduateCrazeMoreandmorecollegestudentsare

nowconsideringgaininganotherdegreeinsteadofstartingtheirwork-life

immediatelyaftertheirgraduation.Soeachyearmillionsofthegraduates

attendthepost-graduateentranceexaminationandkindsofremedialclasses

popup.Severalfactorsleadtothepost-graduatecraze.Moreandmore

studentshaveregardedthepursuingofamasterdegreeasanindispensable

partoftheireducation.Themainreasonliesinthefiercecompetitionforjobs

withalargerandlargernumberofgraduates.Onewaytogainsomeadvantage

overothersistohaveahigherdegree.Secondapost-graduatedegreecanbe

helpfultoamorepromisingcareer.Comparedwiththosewithoutamaster

degreemasterswillenjoymorepreferentialtreatmentforexamplebetter

salariesmoreopportunitiesforpromotionandtraining.Inmyopinionthe

post-graduatecrazecanhelptodelaythepressureofemploymentinour

country.Butontheotherhandthedemandofourtimeisfortalentsequipped

withthelatestknowledgeandskillsoitisalsoverynecessaryforustolearn

inourwork.(188wo