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中文InthetownofGreenfield,a

group

of

threeadventurousspirits—Jack,Simon,andLucas—haddiscoveredanancientmapinJack’sgrandfather’shouse.Themap,

yellowedwithage,

describedamysteriousislandthathadthelegendarySilverFalcon,astatuethatwassaidtoawarditsfinderenormous

wisdomandfortune.在Greenfield鎮(zhèn)，三個富有冒險精神的少年——Jack、Simon和Lucas——在杰克祖父的房子里發(fā)現(xiàn)了一張古老的地圖。這張泛黃的地圖描繪了一個神秘的島嶼，島上據(jù)說有傳說中的SilverFalcon雕像，能夠賦予發(fā)現(xiàn)者巨大的智慧和財富。Astypicaleighthgraderswiththeexcitementofdiscoveryanddreamsofgreatness,theydecidedtheywouldbetheonestodiscoverthishiddentreasure.Theyagreedtostartthissearchduringtheup-and-comingspringbreak,keepingtheirplansasecretfromtheadultswhowouldundoubtedlydiscouragesuchadangerousadventure.和其它初二學生一樣，他們仨開心極了，迫不及待想要去找到寶藏，發(fā)掘神秘的未知事物，完成他們的偉大夢想。他們決定在即將到來的春假期間開始這次探索，并對大人保密，因為大人們肯定會阻止這種危險的冒險。Thedaysthatfollowedwerefilledwithpreparation.They

readbooksonsurvival,

learnedabout

thestarsfornavigation,

and

testedtheircourage

insmallerwoods.Theboyswereunitedbytheirunshakableresolveandthepromiseofanadventurethatcouldchangetheirlivesforever.隨后的日子里，他們忙于準備。他們閱讀了關于生存的書籍，學習了用星辰導航，還在小樹林里測試了他們的勇氣。這群男孩懷抱著堅定的決心和因為這次可能永遠改變他們生活的冒險之旅而團結(jié)在了一起。Asspringbreakbegan,theysetoutjustasthesunpaintedtheskywithcolorsof

orangeandgold.Theyfeltamixtureofexcitementandslightnervousness.Theycarriedbackpacksfilled

withsupplies

andtheancientmapthattheyhoped

wouldleadthem

to

glory.春假開始的時候，他們在太陽將天空染成橙色和金色的時候出發(fā)了。他們感到既興奮又有些緊張。他們背著裝滿補給品的背包，以及他們希望能引導他們走向榮耀的古老地圖。Thebeginningoftheirjourneywasfulloflaughterandsongsaroundthecampfire,butasdayspassed,thetrip'srealitysetin.Thepathgrewmoredangerous,andthemapsguidedthemthroughthickwoodsandmuddywetlands.

Theylearnedtoworktogetherastheirfriendshipwastestedbyconstantchallenges.

Slowly,the

island

drewnearer.旅程開始時，營火周圍充滿了笑聲和歌聲，但隨著時間的推移，旅行的現(xiàn)實開始顯現(xiàn)。道路變得越來越危險，地圖引導他們穿過茂密的森林和泥濘的濕地。他們學會了團結(jié)合作，他們的友誼在不斷的挑戰(zhàn)中得到了考驗。慢慢地，島嶼越來越近了。Aconflictarose

whentheyreachedthefootofMountVeritas,thefinalbarrierbeforereachingtheisland.Lucastwistedhisankle,andtheslightestmovementsentsharppainsshootingthroughhisleg.Withtimerunningout,JackandSimonhadtomakeachoice:shouldtheypushonandriskLucas’well-beingorturnbackaftercomingsofar?續(xù)寫第一段：Atcrossroads,JackandSimonexchangedknowingglances.

續(xù)寫第二段：WhenreachingtheSilverFalcon,thethreeboysfoundnofortunethereatall.【所以兩人應是“協(xié)助”受傷的Lucas一起翻過了最后的障礙一起到達了雕像處】終于到了Mount

Veritas(真理)山腳，翻過這最后的障礙，他們就能到達島嶼。這時，沖突爆發(fā)了。Lucas扭傷了腳踝，任何輕微的移動都會讓他的腿劇烈疼痛。時間緊迫，Jack和Simon不得不做出選擇：是不管受傷的Lucas繼續(xù)前進，還是在走了這么遠之后選擇返回？在十字路口，杰克和西蒙會心地對彼此望了一眼。當?shù)竭_SilverFalcon的時候，三個男孩發(fā)現(xiàn)那里根本沒有任何財富。文本分析：Thiswritingisaproblem-solvingstylethatcandidatesarefamiliarwith.Afterreadingthetext,candidatesfirstneedtomakeajudgment:whethertocontinueorreturn.Fromthepromptsentenceinthesecondparagraphofthecontinuation,itcanbeseenthattheyhavechosentocontinuemovingforward.Ifthecandidatecontinuestomoveforward,theproblemtheyneedtosolveishowtobringtheinjuredLucastotheexplorationdestination.Atthispoint,itisnecessarytoechothelearningofsurvivalskillsmentionedearlier.Thefinalpromptsentenceindicatesthattheydidnotgetwhattheywanted,sowhattheygainedfromtheirexplorationjourneyshouldbethefinishingtouchofthecontinuation.續(xù)寫前要回答的問題：1）Glances會意的目光是什么？他們應該繼續(xù)前進。2）他們是如何到達銀隼的？運用生存技能和應急處理技能幫助Lucas緩解疼痛。用手背著他。3）當他們在那里沒有發(fā)現(xiàn)任何財富時，他們是什么感覺？失望但有收獲4）他們從這次冒險中得到了什么？通過不放棄和克服困難到達目的地，他們獲得的不僅僅是物質(zhì)財富，培養(yǎng)了寶貴的品質(zhì)，體驗了個人成長，并獲得了更深的成就感和自豪感。續(xù)寫情節(jié)發(fā)展：

獲得“藏寶圖”----精心準備----出發(fā)尋寶-----Lucas受傷-----另外倆伙伴協(xié)助-----三人一起找到“寶藏”-------意識到寶藏是友誼，是扶持，是不拋棄，是成長。

官方參考范文Atcrossroads,JackandSimonexchangedknowingglances.Theyrealizedtheycouldn’tleaveLucasbehindandthatthestatuecouldwait,buttheirfriendshipcouldnot.Withgreatdeterminationandstrengthenedbonds,theyconstructedamakeshiftstretcherandcarriedLucasthroughthelastlegoftheirjourney.Astheyreachedthetopofthelasthill,theislandrevealeditselfinallitsglory.Itwasmoreimpressivethantheycouldhaveeverimagined.TheSilverFalconstoodinthecenter,itswingsshininginthesunlight.WhenreachingtheSilverFalcon,thethreeboysfoundnofortunethereatall.Atthattime,theyrealizedthetruetreasureoftheirjourney.Itwasn'taboutthewisdomorfortunetheSilverFalconcouldbring—itwasaboutthememoriestheyhadcreatedtogetherandthelessonstheylearnedalongtheway.Inanunexpectedturn,theSilverFalconseemedtoacknowledgetheirgrowth.Astheystoodbeforeit,itseyesshonebrightly,andtheforestaroundthemcamealivewiththesongsofbirdsandrustlingleaves.Asoftvoicefilledtheclearing,congratulatingthemontheirbraveryandunity.下水文：Para1:

Atcrossroads,JackandSimonexchangedknowingglances.(1)他們的眼神中流露出共同的決心。他們一起踏上了這段旅程，他們決心作為一個團結(jié)的三人組克服最后的障礙。Theireyesreflectingashareddetermination.Theyhadembarkedonthisjourneytogether,andtheyweredeterminedtoovercomethefinalhurdleasaunitedtrio.(2)他們靈機一動，用自己的衣服、樹枝和為補給品帶來的繩索制作了一個臨時擔架。或者

帶著獨創(chuàng)性的火花，杰克和西蒙決定輪流背著盧卡斯。Withasparkoforiginality,theyfashionedamakeshiftstretcherusingtheirclothes,branches,andtheropestheyhadbroughtfortheirsupplies.

或

Withasparkoforiginality，JackandSimonwasresolvedtotaketurnscarryingLucasontheirbacks.(3)接下來的幾個小時見證了他們的集體決心。他們的進步不是以英里為單位來衡量的，而是以每一次艱苦的腳步所增長的毅力和團結(jié)來衡量的。Thenextfewhourswitnessedtheir

collectiveresolve.Theirprogresswasmeasurednotinmiles,butintheperseveranceandsolidaritythatgrewwitheverypainstakingfootfall.(4)隨著時間的推移，終于來到了真理山的頂峰。盡管筋疲力盡，他們還是發(fā)出了勝利的歡呼聲。Asthetimeprogressed,finallycamethetheverysummitof

MountVeritas.Exhaustedastheywere,theyletouttriumphantcheers.Para2:

WhenreachingtheSilverFalcon,thethreeboysfoundnofortunethereatall.(5)隨著太陽的落下，在孤立的雕像上投下了孤獨的陰影。一股前所未有的失望感涌上心頭，因為他們意識到他們夢寐以求的寶藏只不過是一個傳說。Thesundi