2021高考人教版英語二輪專題復(fù)習(xí)《統(tǒng)考版》35分寫作規(guī)范搶分練（四）

35分寫作規(guī)范搶分練(四)寫作(共兩節(jié)，滿分35分)第一節(jié)短文改錯(共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分)[2020·廣州高三調(diào)研]Lastweek,Iquarrelwithmyparentsaboutspendingtoomuchtimeinmycellphone.Ifeltexhaustingthatday,andbecameveryangryeventhoughtheytalkedtomeinafriendway.Inowfeelashamedandamwritingwiththisarticletoapologize.TherearepeopleintheworldIvalue,suchasteacherandfriends.Moreover,themostimportantpeopletomeismyparents.Itisthemwhoraisemeandgivemeahappylife.IwantthemtoknowthatI'mdeeplysorryandwilltrytobegoodpersonandmakethemproud.第二節(jié)書面表達(dá)(滿分25分)[2020·貴陽市高三適應(yīng)性考試(一)]據(jù)世界衛(wèi)生組織(WorldHealthOrganization)統(tǒng)計(jì)，全球81%的青少年缺乏鍛煉。假定你是李華，請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語準(zhǔn)備一篇發(fā)言稿，在一次國際學(xué)生交流活動中發(fā)言。1．青少年缺乏運(yùn)動的原因；2.運(yùn)動的好處；3.如何制定運(yùn)動計(jì)劃。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dearfellowstudents，AccordingtotheWorldHealthOrganization,81%ofteenagershavealackofexercising.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That'sall.Thankyou!35分寫作規(guī)范搶分練(四)第一節(jié)答案與解析：Lastweek,Ieq\o(quarrel,\s\do16(①quarreled))withmyparentsaboutspendingtoomuchtimeeq\o(in,\s\do16(②on))mycellphone.Ifelteq\o(exhausting,\s\do16(③exhausted))thatday,andbecameveryangryeventhoughtheytalkedtomeinaeq\o(friend,\s\do16(④friendly))way.Inowfeelashamedandamwritingeq\o(,\s\do16(⑤))thisarticletoapologize.TherearepeopleintheworldIvalue,suchaseq\o(teacher,\s\do16(⑥teachers))andfriends.eq\o(Moreover,\s\do16(⑦However))，themostimportantpeopletomeeq\o(is,\s\do16(⑧are))myparents.Itiseq\o(them,\s\do16(⑨t(yī)hey))whoraisemeandgivemeahappylife.IwantthemtoknowthatI'mdeeplysorryandwilltrytobeeq\o(∧,\s\do16(⑩a))goodpersonandmakethemproud.①quarrel改為quarreled。動詞時(shí)態(tài)誤用。根據(jù)該句的時(shí)間狀語“l(fā)astweek”可知，該句陳述的動作發(fā)生在過去，故用一般過去時(shí)。②in改為on。介詞誤用。spendtimeonsth.為固定搭配，意為“在……上花費(fèi)時(shí)間”。③exhausting改為exhausted。形容詞誤用。根據(jù)該句主語I可知，該處應(yīng)用形容詞exhausted，表示“筋疲力盡的”，形容人；exhausting表示“令人筋疲力盡的”，通常修飾物。④friend改為friendly。名詞和形容詞混用。形容詞修飾名詞，故該處應(yīng)用形容詞修飾名詞way，表示“友好的方式”，故可知答案。⑤刪除with。介詞多用。write為及物動詞，后面直接接賓語，故刪除介詞with。⑥teacher改為teachers。名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)誤用。根據(jù)該句中的“Thereare”和“friends”并結(jié)合語境可知，作者珍視的老師和朋友都不止一人，故用復(fù)數(shù)形式。⑦M(jìn)oreover改為However。副詞誤用。前一句是說，在這個(gè)世界上有我珍視的人，比如老師和朋友。該句是說，對我來說最重要的人是我的父母。根據(jù)前后句句意可知，前后句之間為邏輯上的轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故應(yīng)用副詞However。⑧is改為are。主謂不一致。該句主語為“themostimportantpeople”，為復(fù)數(shù)形式，故謂語動詞也應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。⑨t(yī)hem改為they。人稱代詞誤用。分析該句結(jié)構(gòu)可知，該句使用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句結(jié)構(gòu)，被強(qiáng)調(diào)的部分是主語，應(yīng)用代詞的主格，故用they。⑩good前加a。冠詞漏用。該處泛指“一個(gè)好人”，故用不定冠詞，且good的發(fā)音以輔音音素開頭，故用a。第二節(jié)參考范文：Dearfellowstudents，AccordingtotheWorldHealthOrganization,81%ofteenagershavealackofexercising.Anditwillleadtothehealthproblems.Inmyopinion,weshouldexerciseeveryday.Asweallknow,mostofusthinkexercisingisawasteoftime,forwearehavingmuchhomeworkinhighschool.Weprefersmartphonestosports.However,sportscanstrengthenourbodyandmakeusenergetic,whichisbeneficialtoourstudy.So,Iwantallofyoutomakeaplanfordailyexerciseafterhearingmyspeech.Youcanchooseasportyoulikeandmake