讀后續(xù)寫個人成長類-GiftsforJace講義高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

閱讀部分I'llneverforgetthedaythatoneofmyfifthgradestudents,Jace,shylyraisedhishandandsaidthathehadneverreceivedagiftduringreadingdiscussions.Jace'shonestysurprisedme.Whatwasevenmoreeyeopeningwasthefactthattheboyhadgonetenyearsandneverexperiencedthejoyandsurpriseofreceivingapresent.Itriedtosearchareasonthathemightbesayingthis.ThenIrememberedhisstory.Hismotherwasoutofthepictureandhelivedalonewithhisdad.Hisfatherhadahardtimeholdingdownajob,andetothinkofit,Ididn'tseehisfatheratenrollment(注冊)orparentteacherconferences.AcoupleofweeksafterJace'sment,hewasabsentfromschool.ThishappenedtobethedayIwassendinghometheannualnoteabouttheclassroomChristmasgiftexchange.Traditionally,eachboywastobringagiftforaboyinthethreedollarrangeandthesamewastrueforeachgirl.Aswewerediscussingthespecifics,agirlraisedherhandandsuggestedthatwedoawaywithourtraditionalpolicy,andeachbuyagiftforJaceinstead.TheenthusiasmgrewasthestudentsdiscussedthekindsofthingstheyknewJacewouldlike.Wetookaquickvoteandunanimously(意見一致地)agreedtogoaheadwiththiswonderfulidea.Withgreatexcitement,thegiftsbegantoein.Studentswithbrighteyeswouldeagerlytellmehowtheyfoundthe“perfectgift”andhowtheirparentsspentmorethanthreedollarsonJace'sgift!Asthegiftspouredin,Irememberbeingsoproudofmythoughtful,selflessstudentswhoweretrulyshowingthespiritofChristmas.Afterseveraldaysofabsences,youcanimagineourdisappointmentwhenwelearnedthatJace'sabsenceswereduetothefactthathehadmovedaway!Iwassureofonething.Icouldn'tletmystudentsorJacedown.Ifoundmyinformationsheetandcalledeverynumberlisted.Apparently,Jace'sfatherhadlosthisjob,causingthemtorelocate.Nooneknewwheretheywere,andthecellphonenumberIhadwouldringwithnoresponsedespitemycontinuousefforts.EvenintoourChristmasvacation,Iconstantlygavethephonenumberashot.P1：Finally,at9：30PMonChristmasEve,Idecidedtotryonelasttime.P2：AsIdrovedowntheroadtoJace'shouse,Isawtheporchlightofhisfather'strailer(拖車式房屋)signalingwhichhomewashis.閱讀主要信息時間：晚上地點(diǎn)：我的家；Jace家門外；Jace

家情緒：“我”失望，但又很期待；

Jace

失落事件背景：

Jace

未曾收到過禮物，“我”和同班同學(xué)制作了禮物，打算在圣誕節(jié)時送給Jace。但是在圣誕前夕，可能是因?yàn)镴ace爸爸的失業(yè)，全家搬走，無法聯(lián)系Jace具體事件：

圣誕前，我打算再打一次，做最后的嘗試P1：Finally,at9：30PMonChristmasEve,Idecidedtotryonelasttime.此段主要內(nèi)容：打通，獲悉地址，前往送禮物粗線條情節(jié)：1.

我打

（動作鏈）2.

被人接（情緒）3.

我介紹情況（情緒）4.

他告知地址

（心理活動）5.

我驅(qū)車前往

（情緒）添加細(xì)節(jié)，擴(kuò)展粗線條1.

ItookadeepbreathanddialedJace'sfather'snumberagain,hopingforadifferentoutethistime.2.

Thephonerang,andjustasIwasabouttoresignmyselftoanotherunsuccessfulattempt,atiredandslightlygruffvoiceanswered.“Hello?”3.

MyheartracedasIhurriedlyintroducedmyselfandexplainedthesituation,emphasizingthethoughtfulgestureofmystudentswhohadpreparedgiftsforJace.

4.

Therewasabriefsilenceontheotherend,andthenJace'sfatherexpressedamixtureofgratitudeandregret,providingmewiththeaddressoftheirtemporaryresidence5.

Delightedly,IgatheredthebeautifullywrappedgiftsanddrovetoJace'snewhomeP2:AsIdrovedowntheroadtoJace'shouse,Isawtheporchlightofhisfather'strailer(拖車式房屋)signalingwhichhomewashis.1.

我停車，敲門

（動作鏈）2.

（）迎接我3.

Jace收到禮物4.

告別5.

升華（扣題）成文Iparkedmycarnearbyandmademywaytothedoor,giftsinhand.Amomentlater,afterIknockedonthedoor,Mr.Johnsonopeneditwithatiredyetwelingsmile.Jacepeekedoutfrombehindastackofmovingboxes.Hiseyeswidenedwithsurpriseandcuriositywhenhesawthewrappedgifts.Heeagerlytoreopenthegifts,agenuinesmiletuggedatthecornersofhislips,growingwideruntilitstretchedacrosshisface.AsIsteppedoutofthetrailer,theporchlightcontinuedtoglow,whichseemedtotakeonanewsignificancethesimpleactofkindnessfromagroupoffifthgradershadbroughtwarmthandhopetoafamilyinneed.參考答案：Finally,

at9:30PMonChristmasEve,Idecidedtotryonelasttime.

By

then

Ireallydidn'tworryaboutcallingatalatehour.IwassousedtonoanswerthatIwasstartledtoheararesponse.Amazingly,

Jaceansweredthephone!IexplainedthestorytoJaceandtoldhimhowhisclassmatesreallywantedtodothisforhim.IspokewithhisfatherandthenextthingIknew,IwasdrivingtoJace'shome.AsIdrovedowntheroadtoJace'shouse,Isawtheporchlightofhisfather'strailer(拖車式房屋)signalingwhichhomewashis.IwasthrilledtoseeJace.

Ittookseveraltripsbackandforthtomycartogetallofthegiftsinside.Wefilledtheroomwithallofthecarefullywrappedgiftsthatwereespecially

forhim.Hewassosurprisedandgrateful.IwasgladthatIhadanunopenedboxofchocolatesthatIcouldgivetohisdad.

Jace'sjoyfulsmilethateveninglituptheskylikeastrandoftwinklelights.IwenttosleepthatnightthinkingaboutJaceandallofthefunhewasgoin