短文改錯考點(diǎn)解析(新編)

短文改錯考點(diǎn)解析

一、時態(tài)錯誤

1.WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.

2.Everytimemyfatherfindsmelisteningtorockmusic,healwaysshouled.

3.Beforeherleaving,Ipreparedagifttoshowmybestwishestoher.Shesaiditwasthebestgiftshehaseverhad.

4.Itisbadmannersintheclassroomtolookatwhatourneighbourhadwritten,ortrytoseewhatmarkhehas

receivedwithoutbeingpermitted.

5.IknewthattheywillbeworriedaboutmebecauseIwassofaraway.

6.IheardastorywhichhappenedduringthetimeofWorldWarII.OneeveningagirlnamedJoanhadmetan

officernamedDavid,whotoldherthathewouldleaveforthefront.

二、連詞錯誤

1.Iwaslateforclass,andIfelthappyforwhatIhaddone.

2.IboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybagfromthefloorandthenIrealizedthatsomeonehadstolen

it.

3.NowAigulieandIstudyatdifferentcollegesorwecanonlyseeeachotherduringthesummervacation.

4.Hisbosswantedtofirehimifhedidn'tstartcomingontime,buthewenttothedoctorforhelp.

5.I'mgoingtoattendmyfirstlessonthisafternoon,forI'vegotsomepreparationtomake.

6.Theteacherwasangrybecausewehadthesameanswersinthetest.Wewerewarnednottocheatagainsoshe

wouldneedtoseeourparents.

7.Atnoonwereachedthetopofthemountain.Thatsurprisedusmosttherewasthebeautyofthescenes.

8.InowthinkEnglishisfuntolearn.Igotalotfromyourencouragingwords.Iwillalwaysrememberthatyousaid.

9.Forawhilemyparentsboughtmenewtoys.Butbeforelongtheybegantoseewhichwashappening.

10.Afterlookingatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.

11.“Hehasruinedhishealth.Weareworriedabouthim.,,Thatiswhichotherteacherssay.

12.MynameisLiHua.IliveinBeijing,whereisthecapitalofChina.

13.Havingteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner,thatmightnotbeserveduntil8

o'clockatnight.

14.Agoodfriendiswillingtoofferthehelptowhichyouneed,orcanatleastgiveyousomeadvice.

15.Myschoolisorganizingabasketballteamandthere5sjustachancewhichIcanjoinit.

16.Mybrotherwassomuchfondofthemuseumstherethathebeggedmyparentstostayanothercoupleofdays.

17.Wespentthenightinahotelatthetopofthemountain.Thefoodwasexpensivebuttheservicewasgood.Iwas

tootiredthatIfellasleepthemomentmyheadtouchedthepillow.

三、名詞錯誤

1.ImeanttowriteAlongletterandtellyouallthethingsI'mdoingatschool,butthebellisringing,soIjusthaveto

stophere.

2.Whenever1thinkoftheolddays,Ifeelveryhappy.IstillrememberwhenIwasAchild,youalwaysheldmein

3.armsandtoldmestoriestillIfellasleep.

4.Unfortunately,Ihadanaccidentandhitanothercar,andIneededtostayinahospitalforatleasttwoweek.

5.QuietlyIsteppedintotheroom.Isawhimlyinginbed,lookingatsomeofthepicturewehadtakentogether.

6.Sometimeswetalktoeachotherverywellinclass,butafterclasswebecomestrangeratonce.

7.Ineedacellphonetokeepintouchwithmyfriendsandmyfamily,andalmostallinformationscanbegatheredon

theInternet.

8.UncleChenagreedtoreadmystoryandgivemesomeadvicesonhowtowritelikearealwriter.

9.Thetwomenthrewalltheirequipmentsintothewatertomaketheballoonlighter.

10.And1cametounderstandthatitwasnoteasytoearnmoney,andthatknowledgescouldchangemylife.

四、形容詞，副詞錯誤

1.UncleBenwillalsocomebackforChristmas.I'msurewe'Hhaveawonderfullytimetogether.

2.MybestfriendAigulieusedtoshareherNangwithme.NangisaspeciallykindofcakeinXinjiang.

3.Duringthesummerof2001,IstartedreadingbooksinEnglish,mostlystories.Iwouldlearnalotofnewwords

fromthesebooks,butIhadterriblyproblemsmemorizingthem.

4.Threemenwerefishingwhenanangelappearedintheboatwiththem.Thefirstmangotoverhisshockandpolite

saidtotheangel,"I'vesufferedfrombackpainforyears.

5.Ienjoyedsittingclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft-handsideoftheclass,Icouldeasysee

thefootballfield.

6.Whentheyfindfishcometothesurface,theyflydownimmediateandcatchthemwithoutdelay.

7.ComparedwithAmericanstudents,weChinesestudentshavetoworkhardthantheminordertoenteragood

university.

8.Thedoctorsaysheisrecoveringfastthanexpectedandwillbeoutofhospitalinafewweeks.

9.Mr.andMrs.Zhangbothworkinourschool.Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether.

10.ThestoryaboutGrowthismyfavoriteAmericanTVplaybecauseitisveryinterested.

11.Theassistantwasclearlyasembarrassingasmysister,butIjustthoughtitwasfunny!

12.Ifoundthefootballgameexcited,andmydadexplainedtherules.

13.Iwasreallydisappointingandabouttoleavewhenhewalkedoutofabuilding.

14.Assummervacationiscomingsoon,myclassmatesaretryingveryhardlytogettrainticketstogohome.

15.SinceyouhavevisitedGreeceseveraltimes,soIwouldliketoknowwhetheryouhaveseentheoldbuildingshere.

16.Infact,mygrandfatherevenscaredmyclassmalesawaywhentheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.

However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.

17.WhenIwasaveryyoungchild,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearslate.

五、代詞錯誤

1.Theactorwasrightthereinfrontofme!Icouldn'tbelievemyluck-notonlydidIhadmyphototakenwithhim,

butshesignedhisnameonmyshirt!

2.Iwashappywhenthetoysworked,butwhenthingswentwrong,Igotangryandbrokejt.

3.Thedoctorgavehimsomemedicineandtoldhimtotakethembeforehewenttobed.

4.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.

5.Weallenjoyedthispreciousdaygreatly,rememberingthetimewespenttogetherandthepeopletheywerefamiliar

with.

6.Thatnight,wesatdowntowhattheythoughtwouldbeapleasant,uninterruptedmeal.Butassoonaswebegan

dinner,thedoorbellrang.

7.Itseemswaterisbecominglessandless.Manycountriesintheworldfindwedon'thaveenoughwater.

8.I'mgladtosaythatanythinghasworkedoutfineinthedorm.

9.Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.

10.Unfortunately,bythetimeIgotback,theyhadfinishedthesceneandtheactorcouldn'tbeseeneverywhere.

11.Myteacheradvisedmetokeepadiary.SoonIbegantoenjoytalkingtomyselfonpaperasIwaslearningto

expressmeinsimpleEnglish.

12.OneeveningagirlnamedJoanhadmetanofficernamedDavid,whotoldherselfthathewouldleaveforthefront.

13.Finally,Ishouldbeabletotellvisitorsaboutourhistoryandcultureandshowthemlh>irgreatachievements.

14.Andeveryyearmoreandmorepeoplestartedastampcollectionofyourownanddiscoveraninterestwhichcan

evenlastalifetime.

六、冠詞錯誤

1.ImeanttowriteAlongletterandtellyouallthethingsI'mdoingatschool,butthebellisringing,soIjusthaveto

stophere.

2.MyfriendNicktoldmeAstoryabouthisexperiencebackintheUS,whichwasveryinteresting.

3.Onemorning,Davidboughtanewspaperonhiswaytoworkasusual.Whenhearrivedattheoffice,heputdowna

newspaperandwasreadytodrinkacupofcoffeebeforework.

4.Apassengerrealizedhecouldn'tfindhisticketandbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearch

ingfortheticket,whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfromtheowner.Thepersonwhofounda

ticketsmiledwithpleasureathissuccess.

5.OneofmyunforgettablememoriesofmyschoolinXinjiangwasAluncheswebroughtfromourhomes.

6.Duringthesummerof2001,IstartedreadingbooksinEnglish,mostlystories.Istartedwritingdownwordsfrom

AbooksthatIread.

7.I'mverygladtohearyouarecomingtovisitmethenextFriday.Unfortunately,Iwon'tbeabletomeetyouatan

airportbecauseIhaveclassesintheafternoon.

8.JustbeforeIturnedAcornerofParkStreet,Ihappenedtoseeanaccident.Alittlegirlwashurtandhermother

neededhelp.

9.Myhometownisaprettycity,andpeopletherearekindandpolite.WithAcomingofspring,grassandtreesturn

green,andflowersgrowinmanycolors.

10.OnThursdayIwillhavetodecidewhatIwanttodooveraweekend.IamthinkingofmakingatriptoLondon,and

visitingtheBritishMuseumandsomeparks.

11.EverykindoftheChinesefoodisworthtrying,becauseeachhasadelicioustasteandisgoodforhealth.

12.AnAmericanandaFrenchmandecidedtocrosstheseabetweenFranceandEnglandintheballoonin1784.

七、介詞錯誤

1.Therearethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Therefore,wehavemorelimewithafter-school

activities.

2.Havingteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner,whichmightnotbeserveduntil8

o'clockatnight.Thiscustomsoonbecameanothermealoftheday.Interestingly,ithadaconnectionbytheBritish

porcelain（瓷器）industry.

3.YourknowledgeofGreececanhelpthewholeclass.Couldyoushareyourexperiencesforus?

4.I'msorrythatIwasn'tabletoreturntoyourbikeontimeyesterday.

5.WhenIfinallyarrivedatmyfriend's,helenttomelotsofclothes.

6.OnerainydaywhileIwaswalkinghomewithoneofmyfriends,atruckcametoastopbesidesus.

八、非謂語動詞錯誤

1.Oneafternoon,Iwasthrowingstonesontotheroofofanoldlady'shouseforfun.Astoneslippedoutofmyhand,

breakawindow.IwassoafraidandIleftimmediately.

2.Weshouldfindwaystoreusethewaterusinginwashing.

3.IalsosharedwithmyfriendsmanyphotostakinginBeijing.

4.Aconcertcostssomuch.Imayjustlistentomusic.Ihavesomerecordsgivingtomeasbirthdaygifts.

5.Mysummertravelstartedterribly.IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuyaTickettoHangzhou.

6.LastSundaymorning,whenIwashavingawalkintheparknearmyhome,Icameacrossagroupofpeoplemake

anewfilmwithoneofmyfavoriteactors.

7.Felthungry,webuiltafirebythelakeandbarbecuedthefish.Itwasdelicious.

九、主謂一致

1.NowmyfriendAnn,togetherwithme,aregoingtodofieldstudyandthefindingswillbeusedasmaterialsfor

ourresearch.

2.Finally,therewereasuddenpullatthepole（魚竿）anda