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試題呈現(xiàn)：第一節(jié)

(滿分15分)假定你是李華，在外教課期末考試中發(fā)現(xiàn)有人作弊，你認(rèn)為這會(huì)影響考試公平。請(qǐng)你給外教John寫(xiě)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.情況描述；2.你的看法；3.你的請(qǐng)求。注意：1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearJohn,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua分析：本篇也是與校園生活密切相關(guān)的一個(gè)場(chǎng)景——考試，李華寫(xiě)信反饋考試作弊的問(wèn)題，可將要點(diǎn)視為問(wèn)題描述、問(wèn)題后果、建議。It'slikeasuggestionletterindisguise.

戰(zhàn)略——方向：人與自我（校園話題——熱點(diǎn)：學(xué)生作弊現(xiàn)象）戰(zhàn)術(shù)——內(nèi)容：1.情況描述（題設(shè)漢譯英）；2.個(gè)人看法（不建議過(guò)度展開(kāi)，從道德層面入手）；3.表示請(qǐng)求（作為收尾最佳）寫(xiě)這封郵件時(shí)，需要注意以下幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：1.清晰的情況描述：確保對(duì)作弊的情況進(jìn)行了明確且具體的描述。避免含糊其辭或提供不準(zhǔn)確的信息，這可能導(dǎo)致外教無(wú)法準(zhǔn)確理解發(fā)生的事情。2.表達(dá)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：在表達(dá)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，要確保語(yǔ)氣恰當(dāng)、有禮貌，同時(shí)要避免過(guò)于情緒化。要點(diǎn)明確，但也要注意不要給外教留下指責(zé)或教育他的印象。3.合理的請(qǐng)求或建議：提出的請(qǐng)求或建議應(yīng)該是實(shí)際可行的，與你所描述的問(wèn)題直接相關(guān)。避免提出過(guò)分苛刻或不切實(shí)際的要求，這可能會(huì)使對(duì)方感到不舒服或無(wú)法采取行動(dòng)。教師行文：DearJohn,Iam

LiHua,oneofyourstudents.Iamwritingthise-mail

totellyouadisappointingnewsthatthereweresomestudentscheatingduringthefinalexamination.

Someofthem

lookedupnewwordsstealthily/secretly

byusing

electronicdevices.

Butothers

evencopiedtheanswersopenly/inpublic.

Frommy

perspective,cheatingisadishonest/shamefulbehavior,

whichwill

notonly

break

the

fairness

oftheexam,

butalso

exertanegativeimpactonshaping

students’

values.

Therefore,I

morethansincerely

hopeyoucan

takenecessaryactions

tochangethesituation.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.（7句）Yours,LiHua錦言妙語(yǔ)總結(jié)：1.自我介紹與同位語(yǔ)——LiHua,oneofyourstudents2.同位語(yǔ)從句與背景信息介紹——adisappointingnewsthatthereweresomestudentscheatingduringthefinalexamination3.平行結(jié)構(gòu)與事例具象化——Someofthem

...

Butothers

...4.觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)——Frommy

perspective,5.非限定性定語(yǔ)從句與并列句組合進(jìn)行二級(jí)延展——,

whichwill

notonly

break

the

fairness

oftheexam,

butalso

exertanegativeimpactonshaping

students’

values6.影響句式——exertanimpacton7.價(jià)值觀塑造——shapeone’svalues8.非?！猰orethan9.采取行動(dòng)——takeactions點(diǎn)評(píng)：本次2024年T8（八校聯(lián)考）的英語(yǔ)小作文命題，從主題的選擇角度很貼切現(xiàn)實(shí)的校園生活，命題非常符合新課標(biāo)的要求。同時(shí)通過(guò)“考試作弊”現(xiàn)象為背景，不但可以考生考生的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)與組織能力，同時(shí)還巧妙地把“人與自我”主題與價(jià)值觀進(jìn)行了完美的組合，但從命題思維層面就值得考生體會(huì)。下水文1：DearJohn,Ihopethise-mailfindsyouwell.I'mLiHua,oneofyourstudents.Iamwritingtoreflectthedishonestyintheexam.Thefinalexamissupposedtobesoseriousthatnostudentshouldn’t

takeitseriously.

Tomyregret,Inoticedthatsomestudentssecretlyexchangedanswerswitheachother,ortookcheatsheetswiththemduringtheexam,which

definitely

ruinedthefairnessoftheexamaswellasthe

promising

futureforthosewhohadcheated.Asaresult,

itishighlyexpectedthat

thedishonestbehaviorshouldbeinvestigatedandthatthecheatersshouldpayfortheirdishonesty.Ihopeyoucan

take

myrequest

intoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyour

favorable

reply.(121words)Yours,LiHua下水文2：DearJohn,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.IamwritingtoinformyouofaconcerningsituationIobservedduringourrecentfinalexam.Unfortunately,Inoticedsomestudentsengagingincheating,whichIbelieve

compromises/affects/threatensthefairnessoftheexam.Thisdeeplyconcernsmebecauseitnotonlyaffectstheintegrityofouracademicenvironmentbutalsounderminestheeffortsofstudentswhohaveworkedhardandstudiedhonestly.Inmyopinion,academichonestyisfundamentaltoourlearningprocess,andallowingsuchbehaviorcanseta

detrimentalprecedent/anegativeexample.Therefore,Ikindlyrequestyourattentiontothismatter.Perhapsareviewoftheexam

protocols/guidelines/policies/regulations

oradiscussionwiththeclassabouttheimportanceofacademicintegritycouldbebeneficial.Itrustin