四六級(jí)實(shí)時(shí)作文

2010年英語四六級(jí)新話題新范文TheWorldExpoin2010（世博會(huì)）英文作文

TheWorldExpoin2010(2010年世博會(huì))

TheWorldExpoin2010

Shanghaiwillhostthe2010WorldExpo.TheWorldExpohasalonghistorybutithasneverbeenheldinAsia.Sothe2010WorldExpoisanhonorforalloftheAsians.()urgovernment

haspromisedthatitwillbethebestone.AndShanghai,asahostcity,willhavemorechancestodevelopquickly.AsastudentinShanghai,IshouldlearnEnglishwellsothatIcanbeavolunteerintheExpotohelpforeignersknowmoreaboutShanghai.

HowToBeALovelyCitizen(如何成為一個(gè)可愛的上海人)

GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinShanghaiandmoreandmorepeoplethroughouttheworldarefocusingtheirattentiononShanghainow.AsacitizenofShanghai,IfeelImustsparenoeffortstodomybit.First,Idecidetohelpplantmoretreestomakeourcitymorebeautiful.Second,Ishouldobeysevennosandbegoodatlearningfromothers.Third,IshouldstudyhardsothatIcandosomethingbetterformycityinthefuture.

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicCertificateCrazeOnCampus.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:

1)近幾年大學(xué)校園內(nèi)出現(xiàn)“考證熱”

2)產(chǎn)生這一現(xiàn)象的原因

3)你的看法

CertificateCrazeOnCampus

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行文思路

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劇拔摇睂?duì)該現(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。

根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述近幾年大學(xué)校園內(nèi)的“考證熱”;分析越來越多的大學(xué)生熱衷考取各種證書的主要原因;闡述“我”對(duì)大學(xué)生“考證熱”的看法。

高分范文

CertificateCrazeOnCampus

Inrecentyears,gettingacertificatehasbecomeanewcrazeamongcollegestudents.[1]Justrandomlyaskastudentoncampuswhatheorsheisbusydoing,[2]quitepossibly,youmaygettheanswer[3]thatheorsheispreparingforacertificate[2]ofsomekind.[4]Whydoesthiscrazeappear?

[4]Therearemainlytworeasonsbehindthisphenomenon.First,[5]itistheemploymentpressurethatforcescollegestudentstogetmorecertificates.Withtheadmissionexpansionofcolleges,alotmoregraduateshavetofacethefiercecompetitioninthejobmarket.Howcanonemakehimselfmorecompetitive?Morecertificatesathand,maybe.Second,diplomaandcertificatesarestillimportantstandards[6]bywhichmanyemployersmeasureaperson’sability.Inordertoincreasethequalificationsforajob,thestudentscompelthemselvestorunfromoneexamtoanother.

[7]Frommypointofview,weshouldbemorerational[8]whenitcomestocertificates,[9]sincecertificates[2]donotnecessarilyproveone’sability.Beingcrazyingettingcertificationsblindlyis[10]nothingbutwastingtime.Toconclude,weshouldfocusonimprovingourability[10]butnotgettingacertificateofnopracticalvalue.

【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】

[1]祈使句使用恰當(dāng)。randomly意為“隨意地，隨機(jī)地”。

[2]限定詞使用恰當(dāng)，使文章表達(dá)更嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，增強(qiáng)了說服力。

[3]that引導(dǎo)同位語從句，修飾theidea。

[4]設(shè)問句引出原因，容易引起注意。

[5]強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)主語。

[6]which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，充當(dāng)介詞賓語。

[7]用于引出“我”的觀點(diǎn)。

[8]“當(dāng)談到或提及…時(shí)”。

[9]since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，表示既定的原因，常譯為“既然”。

[10]“只是，僅僅”?！岸皇恰薄?/p>

佳句臨摩

1.佳句：Youmaygettheanswerthatheorsheispreparingforacertificateofsomekind.

臨摩：離婚率上升盡管令人難過，但卻是不爭(zhēng)的事實(shí)。

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2.佳句：Diplomaandcertificatesarestillimportantstandardsbywhichmanyemployersmeasureaperson’sability.

臨摩：在過去的三十年，發(fā)展中國(guó)家在許多方面都取得了很大的進(jìn)步，其中包括健康水平的提高。

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3.佳句：Frommypointofvi