讀寫結(jié)合增分寫作 第六組

eq\a\vs4\al(讀寫結(jié)合·增分寫作\b\lc\|\rc\(\a\vs4\al\co1(,,,))第六組)自主練評——試試自己能力如何(先自主構(gòu)思并寫作)一、應(yīng)用文寫作(常考體裁：感謝信)假定你是李華，近期你校舉辦了“成人禮”儀式。在儀式上，你和同學(xué)們都收到了父母的祝賀信。信里有父母的道賀、鼓勵及期望……請給父母寫一封回信，表示你最真誠的感謝。內(nèi)容包括：1．感謝父母的照顧和引導(dǎo)；2．不負(fù)期望，真誠祝愿。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2．請按如下格式作答。DearMomandDad，HavingheardfromyouattheComing-of-AgeCeremony，Yours，LiHua二、讀后續(xù)寫(?？荚掝}：愛心助人)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ManyyearsagoIparkedmycarinthetowncenteronmywaytothepostofficetopostmyNewYearcards.ItwasthelastdaytopostNewYearcardsiftheyweretobereceivedbeforetheNewYear.AsIcameoutofthecarpark,Isawayoungboyabout12yearsofageontheothersideoftheroad.Hewasaloneandashewaswalkinghewassobbing.Ithoughtsomebiggerboyshadperhapsbulliedhimandthathewasinpain.IhadtogotohisaidandseeifIcouldhelpwithhisdistress(痛苦)．Theboylookedatmeupanddownandseemednottotrustmeatfirst.ButthenhetoldmethathisbigsisterwhowasanursehadboughthimamobilephoneashisbirthdayandNewYearpresent.Itwashisfirstmobilephone.Hehadonlyuseditforafewdayswhenhedroppeditandcrackedthescreenbyaccidentonhiswayhome!Thelittleguywassosad,tearsrollingdownhisfaceashetoldallthistome.Myheartachedforhim.Itwasclearhevaluedhispresentandknewthatitcosthissisteralotofmoney.Hehadbeentoaphoneshopandtheclerktoldhimitwouldbe￡80togetanewscreen.Ihadtohelp.However,theproblemwasthatitwasveryclosetotheendoftheyearandmybusinesswasbrokenandthatIwasgoingtopaymynextbill.Irememberedsomeofmyfriendsinthemobilephonerepairshop.SoItookthelittleboythere.Iknewtheguyswouldhelpmeoutandgetthescreenonthephonefixed.Iwouldpayforitthefollowingweek.Iknewtheywouldtrustmeonthis.Ibroughthimtotheshopbutitwasclosed!WhatshouldIdonext?注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請按如下格式作答。IbroughthimtoanATMmachineandwithdrewallthemoneyfromtheaccount—￡20.Igavehimmyonly￡20andmadeupanexcuseforonlygivinghimsolittle.自悟賦能——看看他人高在何處(再晨讀背誦學(xué)亮點)一、背“應(yīng)用文”范文——學(xué)范式、學(xué)亮點DearMomandDad，HavingheardfromyouattheComing-of-AgeCeremony,Iamwritingtoconveymysinceregratitudetoyouforallyouhavedoneforme.(第一段：表達(dá)感謝)Thelast17yearshaswitnessedmyamazinggrowingup,whichisduetoyourgreatestcareofmydailylife(定語從句).Besides,youalwayshavesparednoefforttoinspiremetoadoptapositiveattitudetowardslife，enablingmetoembracelifeactively.Withoutyourselflessdevotiontome,Icouldn'thavesuchabrightlifenow(虛擬語氣).(第二段：具體描述父母的辛勞付出與我的成長，并表示感恩。注意使用多種句型表達(dá)，讓句式靈活多變，增強表達(dá)效果)Mydearmomanddad,mytrueappreciationisbeyondwordsnow.WhatIcandonow(主語從句)isjusttoworkhardertorewardyourlove,andgenuinelywishyouallthebest.(第三段：再次表達(dá)感恩，并承諾回報父母的愛)Yours，LiHua二、悟“讀后續(xù)寫”范文——學(xué)構(gòu)思、學(xué)表達(dá)[范文一]IbroughthimtoanATMmachineandwithdrewallthemoneyfromtheaccount—￡20.Fromthebottomofmyheart,IhadthestrongurgetocomfortthetearfulguybydoingwhatIcould(賓語從句).Iknewthatthissumofmoneywasn'tenoughtogethismobilephonefixed.ButIsincerelyhopedthatmyoffercouldmakehimgetthemessagethattherearemanykindpeopleintheworld(定語從句)．Igavehimmyonly￡20andmadeupanexcuseforonlygivinghimsolittle.Astheboyreceivedthemoney(時間狀語從句),Icouldseehimsmilethroughtears.“Thankyouforwhatyouhavedoneforme，”saidtheboy.“Itisyourofferthatthrowslightonthetruth(強調(diào)句型)thatthereisalwayssomeonewhowecantrustwhenintrouble.”IcouldnotfullypayforhisphonetoberepairedbutIreallyhopedthekindnesshereceivedfromastrangerwassomethingthatstayedwithhim.[范文二]IbroughthimtoanATMmachineandwithdrewallthemoneyfromtheaccount—￡20.Solittlefor￡80!IwasdisappointedthatIwasunabletogivehimenoughmoney(賓語從句)torepairhismobilephonescreenFullofshameandregret,Istilldesiredtomaketheguyfeelinagoodmood(mak