讀后續(xù)寫微技能之情感描寫-課件-2023屆高三英語寫作專項(xiàng)

讀后續(xù)寫微技能訓(xùn)練——情感描寫Howdoyoufeelwhenyouseethesnake?Whenseeingthesnake,I...scared

frightened

terrified

讀后續(xù)寫微技能訓(xùn)練——情感描寫之“恐懼”Donot“tell”me,but“show”meyourfeelingoffear.心理描寫:Iwas

afraid/frightened/panicked/scared/terrifiedoutofwits.

Iwasthrowninto/beseizedwithfright/fear/panic/terror/horror.

Aburstof

fright/fear/panic/terror/horrorheldmeentirelyinitspower.Panic/terror/horrorwashedover/floodedover/pouredthroughmybody.

神態(tài)描寫：Eyeswidened;Mouthopened;Throattightened;Faceturnedpale肢體動(dòng)作描寫:Iwas

rootedtothespot/ground;Icouldnotmoveaninch;Iwasfrozenwithfear;Iburiedmyfaceinhands;Mylegstrumbled/shook;Mypalmssweated;Myheartpounded/beat/racedviolently2020年7月高考浙江卷：遇熊脫險(xiǎn)Glancethegivenpassage,findoutthesentences

describingthefeelingoffearandlearnfromthem.Howtoshowyourfeelingoffearvividly(生動(dòng)地)?Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Aburstofhorrorheldmeentirelyinitspower,makingmeunabletomoveaninch.Extremelyfrightened,Ifeltmylegstremblingandmypalmssweating.Atthesightofthepolarbear’sbloodymouth,shewasrootedtotheground,withherfacepalewithfright.Thefurrycreaturelaunchedanattackonthefence,instantlyleavinganarrowopeningonit.Terrifiedandscared,weletoutacryofhorrorwithtearsstreamingdown,hopingsomeonewouldcometoourrescue.ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.1.

Aburstofhorrorheldmeentirelyinitspower,makingmeunabletomoveaninch.

(一陣恐懼襲來,將我緊緊包圍,我已經(jīng)無法動(dòng)彈)

2.Extremelyfrightened,Ifeltmylegstremblingandmypalmssweating.（我驚恐不已，感覺兩腿發(fā)抖，手心冒汗。）3.Atthesightofthepolarbear’sbloodymouth,shewasrootedtotheground,withherfacepalewithfright.(一看到熊的血嘴，她一動(dòng)也不動(dòng)，嚇的面無血色)4.Terrifiedandscared,weletoutacryofhorrorwithtearsstreamingdown,hopingsomeonewouldcometoourrescue.(感到恐懼害怕，我們發(fā)出了一聲驚叫，期待有人來救我們）心理+肢體動(dòng)作描寫with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)心理+肢體動(dòng)作描寫心理+肢體/動(dòng)作+神態(tài)描寫肢體動(dòng)作+神態(tài)描寫形容詞，主句形容詞，主句+with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)+非謂語動(dòng)詞主句,非謂語動(dòng)詞肢體/動(dòng)作描寫神態(tài)表情描寫心理描寫Asisdescribedinthegivenpassage,therearemanyvividwaystoshowthefeelingoffear.vividwaystoshowfeelings……細(xì)節(jié)描寫句式形容詞做狀語非謂語動(dòng)詞with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)/獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)詞組、句子

thedogjumpoutatme,

Iwasfrozen

withterror,withmyheart

violently

.看到那條狗突然跳出來沖向我，我嚇呆了，心跳的很快。

sentences公式1：Doing...,sbfelt...with...Seeingbeating站在它面前，我嚇得不敢動(dòng)，雙腿顫抖手心出汗。Standing

infrontofit,Iwastooscaredtomoveaninchwithmylegstremblingandpalmssweating.

Extremely

，Janeturnedpale,

.

驚恐萬分，簡臉色變得蒼白,眼淚從臉頰流淌下來Panicked,sheletoutacryofhorror,withhereyeswidening.

她十分恐慌。發(fā)出了一聲驚叫，瞳孔放大（眼睛）withtearsstreamingdownhercheeksfrightened公式2：Adj(feelings),sbdid...with...Howdoyoufeelwhenyouseethesnake?scared

frightened

terrified

Oneday,youwereaskedtoteacher’sofficefornotfinishingthehomework.(你因未完成作業(yè)被叫到老師辦公室)Feelingingreattrouble,Iwasseizedbyhorrorwithtears