讀后續(xù)寫個(gè)人友情類-朋友們?yōu)镾ally準(zhǔn)備的生日驚喜派對(duì)講義 高三英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫原試題呈現(xiàn)：Sally’sbirthdaywasapproaching,and

theexcitementthatusuallyfilledherheartwasnowreplacedwithdisappointmentandstress.

Turningelevenwasabigdeal,andshehadalwayscelebrateditwithagrandpartysurroundedbyherfriends.However,thisyearwasdifferent.Theburdenofexcessivehomeworkand

herparents’

strugglingbusinessweighedheavilyonher,forcingSallytomakethedifficultdecisionofnothavingabirthdayparty,eventhoughitwasaneventsheenjoyeddearlyeveryyear.Oneday,duringbreak,herbestfriend,Jane,withacuriouslookinhereyes,approached.

"Areyougoingtohaveabirthdaypartythisyear?"Janeasked,sensingSally’ssadness."No,"Sallysighedandrepliedsadly,

"There’sjusttoomuchgoingonandmyparentsare

goingthroughfinancialdifficulties."

Shesmiledweakly,tryingtoconcealherimmensedisappointmentandstress,butJanesawthroughherpretence(假裝)

easily.Janenoddedthoughtfullyanddidnotsayanything.Afterthebreak,Sallysawhertalkingtooneoftheirclassmates,Sarah,secretively.Curious,Sallywentovertothem,butassoonasJanesawher,shequicklywalkedaway.SallywasstartledbyJane’sstrangeactionsandturnedtowardsSarah."Whatdidshesay?"Sallyasked.

However,SarahsimplyshruggedandwalkedawaywithJane,leavingSallystandingthere,

feelingleftoutandanxious.“Whatishappening?”

Sallywonderedanxiously,“Aretheykeepingsomethingfromme?”

AsSally’sbirthdaydrewnearer,Janewasoftenfoundchattingsoftlywithherotherclassmates.WheneverSallywentovertothem,theywouldjustwalkawayortellherthattheyweretalkingaboutasecretwhichSallywasnotallowedtoknow.“Janehasneverkeptsecretsfrommebefore.”

Sallythought.Herheartsank.Evenherfriendsweredistancingthemselvesfromher!She

swungbetweenconfusionandsadnesswitheachpassingmoment,desperatelytryingtofigureoutwhatwashappening.Whywereherfriendsdistancingthemselvesfromher?Andwhatweretheyhiding?注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。OnthedayofSally’sbirthday,shewenttoschoolandfoundherclassroomintotaldarkness.TearssprangfromSally’seyesand

herfacebrokeintoaradiantsmile.Solutionideas:DeterminetowhatextenteachparagraphhasdevelopedbasedonthefirstsentenceandmaincontradictiongiveninthetitleP1:SallywaspleasantlysurprisedtoseeherfriendscarefullypreparingherbirthdaypartyP2:Theconflictsatthematterlevelhavebeenresolvedinthefirstparagraph.Inordertohighlightthecentraltheme,thesecondparagraphcanfocusondescribingtheinteractionbetweenSallyandthespecificJaneorSarahdescribedinthetext,andfinallyintroduceinsightsintofriendshipMainissues/contradictionsinthisarticle:1.Shallowlayer:Whetherthebirthdaypartyisheld;Whydofriendsbehaveinthoseways?Dotheyalienateme2Deeplayers:Reflectionsonfriendship.PlotofthecontinuationwritingP1:Describingobjects-Sally,friendsandclassmatesSally:Curiousandconfused,walkedintotheclassroomandtriedtoturnonthelightClassmates:Turnonthelights,cheer,jumpoutofthecornertoexpressblessings,claphands,sing,andwalkintoSallywiththecakeEnvironment:ClassroommeticulouslyarrangedbirthdaycakeonthetableSally:IunderstandeverythingP2:Describingobjects-Sally,JaneSally:ExcitedandSurprisedJane:WalkintoEmbraceandSpeak(specificlanguagecontentshouldbesetinconjunctionwitharticleclues,preferablyhighlightingthecentralthemeofthearticle)Sally:Touched;Expressinggratitudethroughlanguageandactions(bowing,etc.)Perception:PerceptionoffriendshipRemember:1.Advancedsentencestructuresmustbewritten:Nonpredicate,independentnominative,definitesubordinate,nounsubordinate,inversion,emphasis2.Findmorecluesfromtheoriginaltext,userelevantvocabulary,andimprovethefitwiththeoriginaltext參考文章1

OnthedayofSally’sbirthday,shewenttoschoolandfoundherclassroomintotaldarkness.Confusedaboutwhethertherewasapowerfailureorsomethingelse,shefeltherwaytowardsthelightswitch.Butbeforeshecouldreachtheswitch,achorusofsweet“Happybirthday!”

enteredherearsfromeverycorneroftheclassroom.Andoutofnowhereappearedallherclassmates,whogatheredaroundherandmadeSallythecentreandstar.ThelightswereturnedonandSallycouldhardlybelievehereyes.Decoratedwithfloatingballoonsandstreamers,theclassroomnowwasaabirthdayparty.Ontheteacher’sdesksatanelegantbirthdaycakeandonstudents’

deskswerewell-preparedbirthdaygiftsforSally.Immediately,Sallycametounderstandallthestrangebehaviorsherfriendsandclassmateshadpreviouslyconducted.

TearssprangfromSally’seyesandherfacebrokeintoaradiantsmile.

Nevercouldshehaveimaginedthatherclassmateshadpreparedsuchasurpriseforher!Thepreviousdisappointmentandstresswerenowreplacedbythegratitudeandecstasytohavesuchaluxury.ShedancedtoJaneandbowed,

“Thankyouformakingmyeleventhbirthdaysodifferentandmemorable.”

Accompaniedbythechorus

“Happybirthdaytoyou”,Sallymadeabirthdaywish,blewouttheelevenbirthdaycandlesandsharedthebirthdaycakewithherclassmates,completelyimmersedinthisheartwarmingatmosphere.Thoughherfamilywasstillstrugglingfinancially,Sallywasconvincedthatwithallherfriendsaround,thelifeaheadwassuretochangeforthebetter,andbetter.參考文章2OnthedayofSally'sbirthday,shewenttoschoolandfoundherclassroomintotaldarkness.

Awaveofconfusionwashedoverher

asshesteppedhesitantlyintotheroom,herheartpounding.Shereachedforthelightswitch,butbeforeherhandcouldfindit,achorusofvoices

brokethesilence."Surprise!",herclassmates,ledbyJane,jumpedoutfromallsortsofhidingplaces.Astheroomfloodedwithlight,Sally'seyeswidenedinsurpriseanddisbelief.Theclassroomwasdecoratedwithballoonsandstreamers,abeautifulcakesatontheteacher'sdesk,andinthecorner,apileof

presentswaitedtobeunwrapped.TearssprangfromSally'seyesandherfacebrokeintoaradiantsmile.SheturnedtowardsJane,whowasgrinningfromeartoear."Weknewyoucouldn'thaveapartythisyear,sowedecidedtobringthepartytoyou,"Janesaid,hereyes

twinklingwithmischief.

ThecloudofconfusionliftedfromSally’smind

assherealizedthatherfriendshadn’tbeendistancingthemselvesfromher,theywereplanningthissurpriseallalong.

Thesadnessthathadbeenloomingoverherbirthdaydisappeared,replacedwithjoyandgratitude.Asshecutthecakeandopenedherpresents,Sallyrealizedthatthiswasindeedagrandbirthdayparty,justliketheonessheusedtohave.參考范文三Paragraph1:

OnthedayofSally'sbirthday,shewenttoschoolandfoundherclassroomintotaldarkness.

Astrongsenseofpuzzleoverwhelmedherwhenshesteppedintotheclassroom.Withcaution,shefeltherwaytowardstheswitch,herheartracing.Butbeforeherhandcouldreachforit,achorusofthe"HappyBirthday"songemerged.Suddenly,thelightswereswitchedon,andherclassmates,togetherwithJane,showedupoutofnowhere.Sallystoodrootedtothespot,withhereyeswideindisbelief.Likemagic,theclassroomwasfloodedwithcolorfulballoonsandstreamers,andontheteacher'sdeskwasafancyandattractivebirthdaycake.Herclassmateswouldorganizea