讀后續(xù)寫續(xù)寫點(diǎn)3講義 高考英語作文復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

采用續(xù)寫點(diǎn)的思路來訓(xùn)練讀后續(xù)寫，一個(gè)好處是，每個(gè)點(diǎn)都可以拆分，將繁重的寫作任務(wù)化為輕量化的小練習(xí)。在練習(xí)的初期，不用全文寫完一篇，還可用很多篇嘗試一個(gè)續(xù)寫點(diǎn)。這就是Practice。今天具體講一下第一個(gè)續(xù)寫點(diǎn)：如何銜接段首句必修3第3單元的Come

and

Eat

HereThe

next

morning,

Wang

Peng

opened

his

restaurant

earlier

and

put

the

above

sign

outdoors.(1)采用流程式的句子：段首句：Thenextmorning,WangPengopenedhisrestaurantearlierandputtheabove

sign

outdoors.①Withadiscountand

thenewsign,hewonsomecustomersbackfromYongHui'sslimmingrestaurant.②Notsurprisingly,withadiscountand

thenewsign,mostpeopleintheimmediatearea

cametohisrestaurant.③Thenewsign

drovemanynewcustomersinside.Becauseof

thenewsign,manypeople

walkedintohisrestaurant.(2)采用矩陣式的句子：段首句：Thenextmorning,

WangPeng

openedhisrestaurantearlierandputtheabove

sign

outdoors.①He

smiledwhenhethoughtofhisrestauranthavingplentyofcustomers.Heeven

imaginedthatcustomersmightpraisehisfoodandpromisethattheywouldcometohisrestaurantnexttime.②He

preparedhismenuofmutton,pork,beefandfriedricehopefullyandconfidently.③WangPeng

sawanumberofcustomersenterhisrestaurant,feelingrelieved.④He

wasconfidentofhavingmorecustomersthanYongHui.(3)采用流程式+矩陣式的句子：段首句：Thenextmorning,WangPeng

openedhisrestaurantearlierandputtheabove

sign

outdoors.Staringat

thisnewsign,

he

picturedthathisrestaurantwasfullofcustomersagain.在和學(xué)生的實(shí)際操練中，有的段落硬采用以上方式有點(diǎn)怪怪的。我的解釋是，即使用不上，能想到這些連接點(diǎn)，就很到位了。再強(qiáng)調(diào)一下：1.第一段所給首句，與你緊接著寫的一句的連接點(diǎn)；2.你寫的第一段最后一句和第二段所給首句之間的連接點(diǎn)；3.第二段所給首句，與你緊接著寫的一句的連接點(diǎn)。續(xù)寫點(diǎn)入手還要強(qiáng)調(diào)一件事：關(guān)鍵情節(jié)，關(guān)鍵詞和點(diǎn)題等，都是在原文中找的！找原文，既是讀后續(xù)寫的根本，也是你的破題口。Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonanewtriptotheWildWest.

WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.Wereached

Albuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad'sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairport

anddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifecookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.My

dadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsand

water

rollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohave

breakfast.

"Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,"

hesaid.Afterbreakfast,Iwenttohelp

AuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepoutto

graze(吃草).

IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreally

cool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslong

asmydadwentwithme.Iwasn'tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydad

andIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthe

mountains."Don'tbelateforsupper,”

UnclePaulcried,

"and

keeptothetracksothatyou

don'tgetlost!"

"OK!"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewere

outofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreen

pipetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautiful

woven(編織的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Model：Suddenly

alittlerabbit

jumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

It

wassocute,

likeaspiritintheforest,thatIcannothelpchasingit.Dadfollowedmeclose.Myheartwas

swelledwithexcitementwhenIapproachedtherabbit,

closerandcloser.Butweneglectedthat

we'dalreadyleftawayfromthetrack.What'sworse,therabbitdisappeared,allofasudden.

Whenwerealizedthatwecouldn't

gobacktothefarmhouseforsupper,everythingwastoo

late.We

hadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

I

sobbed,"Dad,whatshall

wedonow?"Hesmiledbitterly,

"UnclePaulwouldtrytofindus."Timepassedlikealeaking

tap.Hungryandtired,Ihadaterrible

desireforasteamingcupofteaandapieceofpizza.

ThenDadsaid,

"Doyouheartherivernearby?Wecangobackalongit."

Luckily,wereached

thefarmhousesafeandsound.Howwisemydadwas!Keepcalmnomatterwhathappened

andthenyouc