基礎(chǔ)寫作常用10種表達手段

Dearfriends，Asweallknow,wearewhatweeat.Therefore,it’simportantforustodevelophealthyeatinghabits.However,somestudentshaveformedvariousbadhabits,suchasbeingparticularaboutfood,eatinganddrinkingtoomuchandsoon,whichwillsurelydoharmtous.

Tokeepfit,weshouldkeephealthyeatinghabits

.

Notonlyshouldwehavevarioushealthydiets,likefish,meat,vegetables,fruitsandrice,noodles,butalsoweshouldeatregularlyandproperly.Personally,Ithinkitsignificanttokeephealthyeatinghabits

,whichbuildsupastrongbody.Onlyinthiswaycanwehaveenoughenergytostudybetter.Dearfriends，Asweallknow,wearewhatweeat.

Therefore,it’simportantforustodevelophealthyeatinghabits

However,somestudentshaveformedvariousbadhabits,suchas

beingparticularaboutfood,eatinganddrinkingtoomuchandsoon,

which

willsurelydoharmtous.

Tokeepfit,weshould

keephealthyeatinghabits

.

Notonlyshouldwehavevarioushealthydiets,likefish,meat,vegetables,fruitsandrice,noodles,butalsoweshouldeatregularlyandproperly.Personally,Ithinkitsignificantto

keephealthyeatinghabits

,which

buildsupastrongbody.Onlyinthisway

canwe

haveenoughenergytostudybetter.基礎(chǔ)寫作中常用10種表達手段寫作的目的是考查考生整合信息和信息表達,并用適當短語、句型等語言手段產(chǎn)生出連貫語篇的能力?，F(xiàn)介紹10種常用的語言表達手段，這些語言手段在近年的廣東高考題中和各地模擬寫作題中出現(xiàn)的頻率非常高,掌握這些語言手段對提高寫作能力一定幫助很大。◆一、同位語手段同位語主要用于介紹人物、事物、地點、產(chǎn)品、書名等。[典型例題]信息點：書名：BattleHymnoftheTigerMother作者：AmyChua,美籍華人,耶魯大學(xué)教授中文版：2011年初開始在中國銷售(2011年廣東高考)信息表達：Abook,____________________________,writtenbyAmyChua,__________________,hasbeensoldinChinasincethebeginningof2011.(BattleHymnoftheTigerMother作abook的同位語,anAmerican-Chinese作AmyChua的同位語)BattleHymnoftheTigerMotheranAmerican-Chinese1.用同位語完成句子。(1)去年,我被邀請參加一個為“待援助的孩子”(TuesdayChild)舉辦的一個狂歡節(jié)(carnival),“待援助的孩子”是一個幫助艾滋患兒的組織。Lastyear,IwasinvitedtoparticipateinacarnivalforTuesday’sChild,___________________________________________.[課堂練習(xí)]anorganizationthathelpschildrenwithAIDS(2)離2012年還有一個月時間,但《孤星指南》(theLonelyPlanet)等不及宣布來年十大旅游城市排行榜,《孤星指南》是世界最暢銷旅游指南雜志之一。Thereisstillmorethanonemonthtogobefore2012.ButtheLonelyPlanet,____________________________________,can’twaittoannounceitstop10citiestotraveltointhecomingyear.oneoftheworld’sbest-sellingtravelguides2.信息點：姓名：SteveJobs別名：蘋果教父(godfather)出生地：美國加州三藩市(SanFrancisco)出生日期：1955年2月24日逝世日期：2011年10月5日信息表達：2.SteveJobs,__________________,wasborninSanFrancisco,________,

_______onFebruary24th,1955andpassedawayonOctober5th,2011.thegodfatherofAppleCaliforniatheUSA◆二、觀點的呈現(xiàn)手段可用短語如accordingtosb.(根據(jù)某人的看法)，inmyopinion/inmyview(在我看來，我認為)，fromone’spointofview(在某人看來)，asfarasI’mconcerned(對我而言),asfor(至于……，就……而言)等,句型有sbbelieves/thinks/claims，sbtoldusthat...，sbpointedoutthat...(某人指出)等。專家解讀(王教授)：學(xué)生近視(1)發(fā)生率：略高于50％(2)人數(shù)：世界第一(2009廣東)信息表達：___________ProfessorWang,slightlymorethanhalfoftheschoolchildreninourcountryareshort-sighted,rankingthefirstintheworld.[典型例題]信息點：Accordingto1.翻譯：我的看法是我們應(yīng)保護自然資源,減少環(huán)境污染。1._______________,weshouldtrytoprotectnaturalresourcesanddecreaseenvironmentpollution.2.翻譯：依我看,合作需要有效的交流,沒有它人們會盲目地做事情。2._______________________,cooperationcallsforeffectivecommunication,withoutwhichpeoplewilldothingsblindly.

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InmyopinionFrommypointofview3.要點組合：你的觀點：微博(microblog)提供大量信息,應(yīng)根據(jù)個人情況謹慎使用信息表達：_______________________,microblogprovidesuswithlargequantitiesofinformation,soweshouldbecautiouswhileusingitaccordingtoourpersonalsituation.AsfarasIamconcerned◆三、比例的表達手段1.百分比的表達。如：(1)70%of...(2)seventypercentof...(3)70percentofthe...(注意：)2.其它一些比例的表達手段。如：(1)一半：halfofthe...=fiftypercentofthe...(2)四分之一(25%)：aquarterof=25percentofthe...考生最易漏用of(3)四分之三(75%)：________________=75percentofthe...3.分數(shù)表達法：分子是基數(shù)詞,分母是序數(shù)詞。如：1/4：2/3：7/8：五個當中有三個：onefourthtwothirdsseveneighthsthreeoutoffive，threeinfivethreequartersof[典型例題]信息點：相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù):(1)(目前中國)吸煙人數(shù):約3,5億(2)分布：男性75％,女性：25％(2010廣東)信息表達：CurrentlyChinahasabout350millionsmokers,among________75%aremenand25%arewomen.whom1.Thesurveyshowsthat______________(50%的學(xué)生)gainhappinessfromtheloveoftheirparentsorrelativesandfromthewarmthoffamilies.[課堂練習(xí)]

50%ofthestudents2.Inthestudy,_________________________(800個……的青少年中,大約有40%)whohavebeenexposedtosecondhandsmokehaddetectablehearingproblems.the800teensaround40%of小學(xué)、初中、高中學(xué)校每天提供體育鍛煉的分布情況：小學(xué)：50%初中：30%高中：20%不提供鍛煉的學(xué)校：十分之一信息表達:_______primaryschools,____juniormiddleschoolsand20%ofseniorhighschoolsprovidephysicaleducationeachschooldaywhile___________schoolsdidnotrequirephysicaleducationatall.one-tenthof50%of30%of3.信息點：◆四、排位的表達手段表“排位”要用到的詞語有：rank+(the+)序數(shù)詞,be+the+序數(shù)詞,be+inthe+序數(shù)詞+place或getthe+序數(shù)詞+place等;也可以用“isthe+形容詞最高級+范圍”來表達。[典型例題]信息點：基本信息：(1)發(fā)生率：略高于50％(2)人數(shù)：世界第一(2009廣東高考)信息表達：AccordingtoProfessorWang，alittlemorethan50%oftheschoolchildreninourcountryareshort-sighted,ranking

thefirstintheworld.[課堂練習(xí)]1.翻譯：江蘇衛(wèi)視的《非誠勿擾》(YouaretheOne)這個相親節(jié)目的收視率排第一。TheratingsofJiangsuTV’sYouaretheOne______________amongalltheprograms.ranks(the)first2.翻譯：東京大學(xué)(Todai)在所有的日本大學(xué)排行榜中名列第一,因為她的畢業(yè)生在大公司擔(dān)任重要位置的數(shù)量很多。Todai______________amongJapaneseuniversitiesforthenumberofgraduateswhoholdimportantpositionsinbigcompanies.ranksthefirst李娜的主要成績：(1)目前世界排名第四;(2)2011年1月澳大利亞網(wǎng)球公開賽(TheAustralianOpen)亞軍;(3)2011年6月法國網(wǎng)球公開賽(TheFrenchOpen)冠軍。信息表達：Theyear2011hasseenherachievegreatsuccess:she__________________intheAustralianOpeninJanuaryandwonthechampionshipintheFrenchOpeninJune,and_________________inwomentennisplayersintheworld.3.信息點：isnowrankedNo.4gotthesecondplace◆五、建議的表達手段短語：________________(勸某人做某事)從句：(1)Sbsuggeststhat...(2)Sbgivessba__________that...(3)Itissuggestedthat...(4)givesbsome____________on...advisesbtodo...suggestionadvice[典型例題]信息點：專家解讀：建議：(中小學(xué)生)不要過度用眼;多參加戶外活動(2009廣東高考)信息表達：_________________schoolchildrenavoidoveruseoftheireyesanddomoreoutdooractivities.或______________________________schoolchildrenshouldavoidoverusingtheireyesandtakemoreoutdooractivities.HesuggestedthatHegaveusasuggestionthat或Schoolchildrenareadvisednottooverusetheireyesbuttotakemoreoutdooractivities.[課堂練習(xí)]1.翻譯：你對班上同學(xué)的建議：學(xué)習(xí)時尤其是聽課時要充分利用眼、腦、口、耳、手等器官共同參與,這樣學(xué)習(xí)才更有效。_____________________whenstudying,especiallyinclassstudentsshouldmakefulluseofthebrain,eyes,ears,hands,andotherorgansforjointparticipation,whichwillmaketheirstudymoreefficient.Itismysuggestionthat2.翻譯：因此我強烈地建議那些同學(xué)不要沉迷于這些網(wǎng)絡(luò)活動而把更多的時間花到有意義的活動中去,如鍛煉身體。Therefore,Istrongly________________________getaddictedtotheseonlineactivitiesandspendmoresparetimeonmeaningfulactivities,suchastakingexercise.advisethoseclassmatesnotto你給Jack的建議：(1)制定學(xué)習(xí)計劃,盡力把心思放到學(xué)習(xí)上；(2)多和同學(xué)交流學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗,以提高學(xué)習(xí)成績。信息表達：Toimproveyourstudy,Ithinkitisveryimportantforyoutomakeagoodplanforyoustudyandputyourheartintostudy.Besides,_____________youcommunicatewithyourclassmatessothatyoucanlearntheirexperienceandimproveyourownstudy.3.信息點：Isuggestthat◆六、提醒的表達手段表示提示或提醒的表達有：___________________________(某人提醒我們……)_________________________________(某人提醒我們做/不要做某事)Sbreminds/warnsusthat...Sbreminds/warnsus(not)todosth[典型例題]信息點：專家解讀：(4)特別提示：如何握筆也和近視有關(guān)(2009廣東高考)信息表達：______________________________howtoholdapenisalsorelatedtoshort-sightedness.Heparticularlyremindedusthat[課堂練習(xí)]1.翻譯：提醒大家不要輕易在網(wǎng)上透露個人信息和不要隨意打開不認識的人發(fā)來的文檔。_______________tokeepsecretourpersonalinformation,includingourrealname,phonenumber,emailaddressandsoon,andnottoopenanyfilesfromastranger.Youarereminded2.翻譯：Alex提醒我們不同國家的各種領(lǐng)域的時事新聞不僅豐富我們的知識,同時幫助我們明智地思考我們的人生。___________________newsandcurrentaffairsonvariousfieldsfromdifferentcountriesnotonlyenrichourknowledgebutalsohelpusthinkwiselyaboutourlife.Alexremindsusthat3.信息點：溫馨提醒：有效期：一個半月;過期后果自負。信息表達:________________________thatyouhavetoun