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2/37圖表類作文1.圖表作文基本形式2.范文分析3.詞匯練習(xí)4.12月四級(jí)作文5.課后練習(xí)3/37

圖表在顯示統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)字、數(shù)據(jù)時(shí)含有簡(jiǎn)捷而清楚特點(diǎn),越來(lái)越被講求高效率社會(huì)所接收,并在自然科學(xué)、社會(huì)科學(xué)及日常生活中廣泛采取。在這一背景下,我國(guó)大學(xué)英語(yǔ)各級(jí)考試中寫作部分,也先后出現(xiàn)了要求考生依據(jù)圖表所提供信息進(jìn)行寫作題型。4/37

1.圖表作文基本形式

圖表可分為圖和表兩大類

表即表格(table)

圖又可細(xì)分為:餅狀圖(piechart)

線狀圖(linegraph)

條狀圖(bargraph)5/37表格(tables)Top10countriessendingmostvisitorstoChinain1997and19966/37餅狀圖(piechart)

MajorCausesofRoadAccidentsinChina7/37線狀圖(linegraph)

OilProductionAtZumaField8/37條狀圖(bargraph)

China’stradewiththeU.S9/372.范文分析

圖表類作文考查學(xué)生從非文字材料中獲取信息、分析問(wèn)題并處理問(wèn)題綜合能力。不過(guò)對(duì)大多數(shù)考生來(lái)說(shuō)，寫好圖表類作文并非易事。本部分選取了一些真實(shí)圖表作為講評(píng)和訓(xùn)練教材。圖表(一)和圖表(四)就均選自ChinaDaily。依據(jù)前面圖表(一)編寫范文，以幫助同學(xué)們從宏觀角度了解三個(gè)自然段在內(nèi)容上是怎樣分工。10/37范文首先找出圖表類作文在布局上規(guī)律,即三個(gè)自然段內(nèi)容關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)分別為:1)用文字描述該圖表中數(shù)字信息2)分析圖表中數(shù)據(jù)改變反應(yīng)了什么問(wèn)題3)對(duì)數(shù)據(jù)改變進(jìn)行評(píng)論或得出應(yīng)有結(jié)論11/37Top10countriessendingmostvisitorstoChinain1997and199612/37Accordingtothefiguresgiveninthetable,therewasanobviousgrowthinthenumberofforeignersenteringChinabetween1996and1997.TakeoneofChina‘sneighboringcountriesforexample:Japanese,whotoppedthelisttwice,wentupsteadilyfrom1.548millionin1996to1.582millionin1997.PeoplefromgeographicallyremotecountrieslikeAmericaalsoincreasedwithinthesetwoyears.Comparedwith1996,thenumberofAmericansrosedramaticallyby40,000bytheendof1997.ForeignershaveavarietyofpurposesforcomingtoChina.Sincethereformandopening-updriveinthelate1970s,Chinahasgrownintoalandofopportunities.TomeetChina'sboomingtrade,manybusinesspeoplefromabroadwastenotimeindoingbusinesswithChinesepartners.AnothermajorreasonisduetoChina'smanytouristattractions.AmazedbyChineseancientcivilization,sometravelersevenneverhesitatetorepeattheirsweetmemoriesbackinChina.13/37InordertomakeChinamoreappealingtoforeigners,westillhavetremendoustaskstoaccomplish.TofurtherexpandSino-foreigneconomiccooperation,Chinashouldcontinuetoimproveitsinvestmentclimatebyspeedinguptheconstructionofinfrastructuresuchashighwaysandtelecommunications.Agoodinvestmentclimatealsoincludesflexiblegovernmentpolicies,morecomprehensiveservicestoforeigninvestors,andquickerresponsetotheirdifficulties.Next,majorcitiesinChinashouldimprovebankcardsystemssothatoverseasvisitorswillfinditmucheasiertoshopordrawcashwiththeircreditcards.14/373.詞匯練習(xí)起始段落首先,我們要注意以上范文是怎樣起筆,并從中找出寫第一自然段中第一句話慣用套語(yǔ),如：Accordingtothefiguresgiveninthetable,+主題句Thetable(piechart,linegraph,bargraph)shows(orindicatesormakesitclear)that+主題句Itcanbeseenfrom(orItisclearfrom,Itisevidentfrom)thetable(piechart,bargraph)that+主題句15/37圖表類作文練習(xí)

下面一個(gè)練習(xí)能夠幫助擴(kuò)大用英語(yǔ)表示數(shù)據(jù)詞匯量步驟一,請(qǐng)依據(jù)以下自然段中所提供文字信息,在對(duì)應(yīng)網(wǎng)格上畫出線狀圖來(lái)。步驟二,請(qǐng)重新閱讀這一自然段,并在表示開始、上升、下降和水平向前發(fā)展動(dòng)詞、名詞下面劃?rùn)M線;在表示程度改變副詞下面劃波浪線;將表示時(shí)間短語(yǔ)用括號(hào)括起來(lái)。全部這些畫出表示法,都是圖表類作文中使用頻率很高詞語(yǔ)。步驟三,重讀答案中線狀圖,并將圖中數(shù)字信息轉(zhuǎn)換成文字信息。16/37Ifwestartwith1975,wecanseethatatthebeginningoftheyear,inflationstoodat5%.Itincreasedsteadilyoverthenext12monthsto8%.Atthebeginningof1976,inflationleveledoffforasixmonthperiod,andthendecreasedgraduallyby2%duringtherestoftheyear.Unfortunately,overthenextsixmonths,inflationroseslightlyandreached9%bythemiddleof1977.Theninflationwentupdramaticallyto17%duringthenext12months.Afteradropof3%overthe2ndhalfof78,inflationincreasedrapidlyuntilitreachedapeakof24%inmid-79.Itthenfellto20%bytheendof79andsubsequentlyleveledoffuntilthemiddleof1980.17/37參考答案18/374.12月四級(jí)作文12月四級(jí)作文考查是“教育投資和其帶來(lái)回報(bào)”問(wèn)題。表格中數(shù)字代表不一樣教育水平對(duì)應(yīng)失業(yè)率和周薪，一套代表是失業(yè)率百分比，另一套代表是周薪。19/3720/37范文.Fromthebarchartgivenabove,wecanobservethatitreflectsthestatisticsofincomeamongpeopleofdifferenteducationalbackground.Thosewhopossessadoctoraldegreeearn1,551dollarsmedianweekly,rankingfirstamongpeopleofothereducationlevel.Themedianweeklyearningsofpeoplewithassociatedegreeandbelowcannotreachtheaverageof797dollars,rankingfrom768dollarsto451dollars.Asfortheunemploymentrate,2.5%ofpeoplewithdoctoraldegreewillsufferformunemployment.However,theunemploymentrateofpeoplewithsomecollege,nodegreeandlowerdegreesurpassthemeanvalueof7.6%，rankingfrom8.7%to14.1%。21/37ThebarchartofEducationPaysrevealsaphenomenonthatthereexitssomedifferenceinincomesandunemploymentrateamongpeoplewithdifferenteducationallevel.Quiteafewreasonscanaccountforthisphenomenon:foronething,withtheadvancementoftechnologyandtheadjustmentofindustrialstructure,quiteafewhigh-techindustriesemergeovernight,whichleadstoasoardemandofworkforceswithhigheducationaldegree,thus,itisnaturalthatgraduateswithbachelor’andhigherdegreegetahighpay-packetandenjoyastablejob.Additionally,thosewitheducationalbackgroundunderassociatedegreeareeasilydismissedandpaidbylowsalary.Theycanbereplacedanytimeduetothefactthattheirjobsareeasyandcanbefinishedbyaveragepeople.Definitely,thehighereducationdegreeyouget,themorelikelyyouaretoenjoyacompetitiveedgeintheemploymentmarket.Thus,theauthoritiesshouldenforcesomepoliciestoensuretheequityofeducation.Onlyinthiswaycanmorepeopleleadastableandcomfortablelife.22/375.Exercise

最近對(duì)班上同學(xué)進(jìn)行了題為“影響你選擇音樂原因是什么”調(diào)查，其結(jié)果以下?，F(xiàn)在請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一份簡(jiǎn)單調(diào)查結(jié)果說(shuō)明，并針對(duì)圖表中任何一個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)所反應(yīng)情況談?wù)勀憧捶ā?3/3724/37Samplewriting

RecentlyIhavecarriedoutasurveyamongthestudentsofourclass.Thesurveywasconductedtofindoutwhatinfluencesthemusicwelistento.Accordingtothesurvey,TVandfilmshavethestrongesteffectonteenagers’choiceofmusic,50percentofthestudentssharingtheopinion.About30percentofthestudentssaytheyareinfluencedbyfriendswhendecidingwhattolistento.Radiocomesthird,with20percentofthestudentschoosingit.Parentsseemtohaveverylittleinfluence.Only10percentofthestudentssaytheylistentowhattheirparentsrecommend.25/37Inmyopinion,oneofthemajorreasonswhyTVandfilmsinfluenceourchoiceofmusicsomuchisthatthemusicinthefilmusuallygoeswithbeautifulpictures,orexpressescertainfeelingsofheroes.Goodfilmmusic,asisoftenthecase,canaccompanyaperson’sentirelife.Honestlyspeaking,I’mprettyamazedathowminorthepartparentsplayinguidingstudentstowardsfindingalifelonginterestinmusic.Forme,Iamforeverwillingtohearmymom’sopiniononthekindofmusicIlistento,forIbelieve,withbroadenedhorizons,parentsareteachersofusineveryaspectoflifeandtheiradviceisalwaysworthconsidering.26/37圖畫類作文圖畫作文通常包含三部分：描述圖畫段闡釋寓意段處理問(wèn)題段/發(fā)揚(yáng)展望段/舉例段27/37圖畫描述段

描述圖畫段基本寫法：三句寫出圖畫，一句點(diǎn)出中心思想。第一句，指出話題，說(shuō)是什么事情第二句，描寫圖畫第三句，描寫圖畫第四句，點(diǎn)明中心思想慣用結(jié)構(gòu)：Asisshown/…，wecanseeclearlythat…/，Thepurposeofthepictures/thedraweristoreveal/exposetousacommonandseriousprobleminChina/inoursociallife.28/37闡釋寓意段般說(shuō)來(lái)，寫9句，約100個(gè)字。這一段主要結(jié)構(gòu)是寓意闡發(fā)，而后多是原因分析和后果分析。慣用結(jié)構(gòu)：

Thesetofdrawings/Thiscartoonisreallythought-provoking.Thisthought-provokingcartoontells/warnsusthat…29/37

處理問(wèn)題段

這種段落比很好寫，經(jīng)典套路就是國(guó)家或者政府應(yīng)該怎么樣，社會(huì)應(yīng)該怎么樣，我們應(yīng)該怎么樣，然后只有這么，就會(huì)怎么樣，最終是戰(zhàn)勝克服困難，明天會(huì)更加好。大約寫5句，50個(gè)字左右。30/37舉例段

首先注意舉例數(shù)量，一個(gè)例子能夠，多個(gè)例子也能夠；例子多樣性、多側(cè)面；一定要適當(dāng)，切題，31/37發(fā)揚(yáng)展望段

普通結(jié)構(gòu)是：表明正面態(tài)度＋進(jìn)行好處列舉＋展望美好未來(lái)。32/37

總而言之，圖畫作文包含這五種段落，寫作時(shí)，注意審題，看指令讓你寫是哪三段組合，然后進(jìn)行拼接組圖.33/37Directions:

1)describethesetofdrawings,Interpretitsmeaning,and2)pointoutitsimplicationsinourlife.34/37SamplewritingTheabovetwopictureshaveshapedcontrasttoeachother.Asisshowninthefirstdrawing,theflowerisplacedinacozygreenhousewhichsheltersitfromtheseverewindandstorm.Withpropertemperatureandothergoodconditions,theflowerisgrowinginfullbloom.Incontrast,whenremovedfromthegreenhouseandexposedtothewindandstorm,theflowerimmediatelyfadesandwithers,withmostofitspetalscastaboutontheground.Thetwopicturesshowusthattheflowergrowinginthegreenhousecannotwithstandtheordeal