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1meteachotherandfellinlovegotmarriedandhadbabiestheGoddessgotangryforcedtoleaveeachothercrosstheMilkyWaytomeetonlyonceayearTheStoryofTheHerdBoyandTheWeavingGirl王母很生氣，后果很嚴(yán)重！meteachotherandfellinlov2Ifthestorydoesn'tendhere,imagine...Ifthestorydoesn'tendhere,3auctioneer拍賣人__________________bidder出價人___________________lot拍賣物____________________________________________________________forappreciationandforsalefinepiecesofartistryandcraftsmanshipFocusonthebackgroundAnauctionconducttheauctionmakeabidforthelotauctioneer拍賣人________________4Focusonthemainplots（情節(jié)）Who:

What:Para1Iwastakentoan______atthe___________downtownwhereeverythingwasfor______.Para2.3.4Sincenothing______myeye,Iclimbedupstairsandatesome_____while______(lean)ontherailing(欄桿).AsIpulledapackofmintsfrommy______togetridofonion_______,I_________pulloutmykeychain,whichdroppedinsideanexpensive_____.Irandownstairstostagea_______butunfortunatelymyhandwas______.Ifelt__________Para5.6.7What'sworse,Iheardthe_________begantheauctionwiththevase.Everyonewaswalkingtowardme,includingmy________.auctionartgallerycaughtsnacksleaningaccidentallyvaserescuestuckembarrassedauctioneertheauthor;hisparents;auctioneersalepocketbreathparentsFocusonthemainplots（情節(jié)）Who5Focusonthestyle&structurePara(2.3.4)Para(8)Para(1)Para(5.6.7)A.DevelopmentB.Climax(高潮)C.BeginningD.EndACBDWhat'sthestyleofthepassage?A.Narration(記敘)

B.Exposition(說明)C.Argumentation(議論)Focusonthestyle&structure6Theunderlinedkeywords:auction

parents

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parentsauctioneerauctionvasekeychaindroppedmyhandstuckrescueFocusontheunderlinedkeywords？Theunderlinedkeywords:7FocusontheconnectionofthetwogivensentencesParagraph7:Everyonewaswalkingtowardme,includingmyparents.Paragraph8:Mydadleanedincloseandwhisperedintheauctioneer’sear.

Itwasmydadwhogotmeoutoftrouble.introublemydadwisdom/ideagetmeoutoftroubleFocusontheconnectionInPara7,ItoldmydadthatIwasintrouble.InPara8,mydadcameupwithanideatogetmeoutof...Focusontheconnectionofthe8Paragraph7:Everyonewaswalkingtowardme,includingmyparents.Q1:What'stheirfeelingwhenseeingmeholdingavase?embarrassed/nervousQ2:HowwouldIfeel?surprisedQ3:Whatwouldmyparentsdo?askedforwhathadhappenedFocusonpara7Paragraph7:Q1:What'stheirf9Paragraph7:Everyonewaswalkingtowardme,includingmyparents.1.Theywereverysurprised.2.Ifeltveryembarrassedandnervous.3.Mydadaskedmewhathadhappened.4.Itoldthefacttomydad.Theunderlinedkeywords:auction

parents

snacksanddrinks

keychain

vase

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auctioneerMyhandwasstuckinthevase.addsomedetailsUseadvancedwords,phrases&sentencesUsetransitionalwords（過渡語）Paragraph7:Theunderlinedkey10Paragraph7:Everyonewaswalkingtowardsme,includingmyparents.Theywereverysurprised.Ifeltveryembarrassedandnervous.Mydadaskedmewhathadhappened.Itoldthefacttomydad.

Withtheentireroomstaringatme,theywerewhisperinginsurprisewhyIwasholdingthevase.Asaresult,Iloweredmyheadwithembarrassment,standingtherelikeafool.Meanwhile,Iwassonervousthatmyheartwasbeatingveryfast.

Thenmydadmadehiswaytomeandasked,“Whatareyoudoing?”Nothingwasgoingtosoundmoreunbelievablethanthetruth.“Myhandisstuck,”Isaidinalowvoice.“Oh,Mark,”mymomcried.Paragraph7:Withtheentirero11Paragraph7:Everyonewaswalkingtowardsme,includingmyparents.Withtheentireroomstaringatme,theywerewhisperinginsurprisewhyIwasholdingthevase.Asaresult,Iloweredmyheadwithembarrassment,standingtherelikeafool.Meanwhile,Iwassonervousthatmyheartwasbeatingveryfast.

Thenmydadmadehiswaytomeandasked,“Whatareyoudoing?”Nothingwasgoingtosoundmoreunbelievablethanthetruth.“Myhandisstuck,”Isaidinalowvoice.“Oh,Mark,”mymomcried.addsomedetailsUseadvancedwords,phrases&sentencesPropertransitionParagraph7:addsomedetailsUs12Paragraph8:Mydadleanedinclose&whisperedintheauctioneer’sear.

Q1:Whatwouldmydadwhispertotheauctioneer?Yes.Q2:Didtheyagreeornot?toldmytroubleandaskedifhecouldbuythevaseQ3:Howdidmydadgetmyhandoutofthevase?usedvegetableoil/soapywatertoslidemyhandoutFocusonpara8Paragraph8:Q1:Whatwouldmy13Paragraph8:Mydadleanedincloseandwhisperedintheauctioneer’sear.1.Mydadtoldthefacttohimanddecidedtobuythevase.2.Theauctioneeraskedforagreement.3.Nobodyopposedandmyparentstookmehomewiththevase.4.Mydadusedoiltogetmyhandouttogetherwiththekeychain.Theunderlinedkeywords:auction

parents

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auctioneerThewaytogetmeoutofthevaseTip1Solution[positive/creative]Paragraph8:Theunderlinedkey14Paragraph8:Mydadleanedincloseandwhisperedintheauctioneer’sear.Theauctioneernoddedandspoke,“Ladiesandgentlemen,sinceitappearsthisvasealsocomeswithared-facedyoungman,arethereanyobjectionstolettinghisparentspurchasethepieceatareasonableprice?”Iheardsomelaughsattheideaofabiddingwarbreakingoutforavasewithmeattached,butluckilynoonedid.“Soldtotheparentsofthe,uh,luckyyoungman!”Theauctioneerannounced.WhenwegothomeandIwasmorerelaxed,mydaddippedinsomevegetableoilandIwasabletoslidemyhandout,withmykeychainofcourse.Tip2Language:[formal/informal]Tip3Comment(感想):

[Itdependsonyou.]Paragraph8:Tip2Language:[fo15Focusonthetone(口吻)Ihopedtheauctioneerwouldstartwiththepaintings.Theauctionchosethevaseasthefirstpieceforsale.Itrieddesperatelytogetthekeychainout.Myhandwasstuck.Ileanedontherailingwhileenjoyingmysnacks.Istoodinthemiddleofanartgallerywithmyhandstuckinthevase.Ipulledapackofmintsfrommypocket.Ipulledoutmykeychainaswell,whichdroppedinsideavase.An_________DayUnluckyUnluckily,Unluckily,Unluckily,Unluckily,Focusonthetone(口吻)Ihopedt16anunluckydayaluckyyoungmanThebigcontrast(對比)inthestoryachievesatoneof____________________humor/fun/amusementFocusonthetone(口吻)anunluckydayaluckyyoungm17WritingtipsSolution（解決）:positive/creativeComment（感想）:Itdepends.language（語言）:formal/informaltone（口吻）:humorous/funnyWritingtipsSolution（解決）:Comme18

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