中考英語(yǔ)寫作公開(kāi)課(25張)課件

ALessonofWritingALessonofWriting1假如你叫肖鵬，是英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)小組組長(zhǎng)。英語(yǔ)課上老師要求展開(kāi)小組調(diào)查，內(nèi)容包括愛(ài)好、理想職業(yè)及原因，然后由各組組長(zhǎng)在班內(nèi)匯報(bào)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容提示，介紹本組成員及自己的情況，寫一篇80詞左右的調(diào)查匯報(bào)。SurveyNamesHobbiesDreamJobsReasonsYiKewritingwriterBringherpleasureandsuccessLiRuitrave11ingguideExperience1ifeand1earnaboutdifferentcu1turesWuFan1ookingafteranima1sWWFworkerhe1panima1s1iveinpeaceI(XiaoPeng)

假如你叫肖鵬，是英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)小組組長(zhǎng)。英語(yǔ)課上老師要求展開(kāi)小組2Howtowriteacomposition.Howtowriteacomposition.3認(rèn)真審題，明確寫作主題、體裁、人稱、字?jǐn)?shù)、結(jié)構(gòu)、時(shí)態(tài)、提示要點(diǎn)和補(bǔ)充信息。寫作第一步審寫作第一步審4假如你叫肖鵬，是英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)小組組長(zhǎng)。英語(yǔ)課上老師要求展開(kāi)小組調(diào)查，內(nèi)容包括愛(ài)好、理想職業(yè)及原因，然后由各組組長(zhǎng)在班內(nèi)匯報(bào)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容提示，介紹本組成員及自己的情況，寫一篇80詞左右的調(diào)查匯報(bào)。SurveyNamesHobbiesDreamJobsReasonsYiKewritingwriterBringherpleasureandsuccessLiRuitrave11ingguideExperience1ifeand1earnaboutdifferentcu1turesWuFan1ookingafteranima1sWWFworkerhe1panima1s1iveinpeaceI(XiaoPeng)

主題字?jǐn)?shù)人稱體裁提示要點(diǎn)補(bǔ)充信息一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)假如你叫肖鵬，是英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)小組組長(zhǎng)。英語(yǔ)課上老師要求展開(kāi)小組5用簡(jiǎn)單的句子或短語(yǔ)列出文章要點(diǎn)。列寫作第二步用簡(jiǎn)單的句子或短語(yǔ)列出文章要點(diǎn)。列寫作第二步6YiKe'shobbyiswriting.Shewantstobeawriter.Shethinkswritingmakesherrelaxedanditbringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikestravellingbest.Hewantstobeaguide.Hecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFan'shobbyislookingafteranimals.HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.Mydreamistoworkatschool.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.BecauseIlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.YiKe'shobbyiswriting.7加加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。可以采取總分總結(jié)構(gòu)或者總分結(jié)構(gòu)，開(kāi)頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡(jiǎn)潔，漂亮。寫作第三步：加加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。寫作第三步：8YiKe'shobbyiswriting.Shewantstobeawriter.Writingbringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikestravellingbest.Hewantstobeaguide.Hecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFan'shobbyislookingafteranimals.HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.IlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.Boysandgirls，Everyonehashobbiesanddreams.Nowletmeshareourswithyou.Ihopeweenjoyourhobbiesandourdreamscancometrue.aniceheadanicetailanicebodyYiKe'shobbyiswriting.She9連恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個(gè)部分銜接自然。寫作第四步：連恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個(gè)部分銜接自然。寫作10英語(yǔ)寫作時(shí)常用的過(guò)渡語(yǔ):

表并列或遞進(jìn)：and,besides,both…and，notonly…butalso，what’smore,…表轉(zhuǎn)折：but,yet,however,though，although…表因果關(guān)系：because,so,therefore,asaresult…表先后順序：First,Second,Third,Next,Then,Finally…表時(shí)間關(guān)系：when,while,after,before,then,…表列舉說(shuō)明：forexample,forinstance,suchas…發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)：inmyopinion,tomyunderstanding,frommypointofview,…表總結(jié)陳詞：ingeneral,allinall,inaword,generallyspeaking…英語(yǔ)寫作時(shí)常用的過(guò)渡語(yǔ):

表并列或遞進(jìn)：and,besid11

Boysandgirls，Everyonehashobbiesanddreams.Nowletmeshareourswithyou.YiKe'shobbyiswriting.Shewantstobeawriter.Shethinkswritingmakesherrelaxedanditbringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikestravellingbest.Hewantstobeaguide.hecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFan'shobbyislookingafteranimals.HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.IlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.Ihopeweenjoyourhobbiesandourdreamscancometrue.alsoInthiswayBecauseBoysandgirls，alsoInthiswa12美選好詞句，美化文章。在有把握的情況下展示自己的語(yǔ)言功底。寫作第五步：美選好詞句，美化文章。在有把握的情況下展示自己的語(yǔ)言功底。寫13Boysandgirls，Everyonehashobbiesanddreams.Nowletmeshareourswithyou.YiKe'shobbyiswriting.Soshethinkswritingmakesherrelaxedanditalsobringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikestravellingbest.Inthiswayhecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFan'shobbyislookingafteranimals.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.BecauseIlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.Ihopeweenjoyourhobbiesandourdreamscancometrue.Shewantstobeawriter.Shewantstobeasuccessfulwriterinthefuture,justlikeMoYan.

Hewantstobeaguide.

Heislookingforwardtotravellingabroadsohewantstobeaguideinforeigncountries.

HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.

Whenshegrowsup,shewantstobeaWWFworkertosavetheanimalsindangerandhelpanimalsliveinpeace.Boysandgirls，Shewantstobe14適當(dāng)運(yùn)用名言或俗語(yǔ)Timeismoney.一寸光陰一寸金Timewaitsfornoman.歲月不待人Knowledgeispower.知識(shí)就是力量Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者，事竟成Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧Itsnevertoooldtolearn.活到老，學(xué)到老……適當(dāng)運(yùn)用名言或俗語(yǔ)Timeismoney.一寸光陰一寸15SkillOneMakeyoursentencescorrectGoodgoodstudy,daydayup.Weshoulddosportsaweekonce.WatchTVtoomuchisbadforyoureyes.Thereisgoingtohaveameetingtoday.IhopeIcancometruemydream.onceaweekWatchingbeachieveSkillOneMakeyoursentences16SkillTwoExpressindifferentways

Whenhespoke,hegotmoreexcited.

Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhegot.

WeshouldlearnEnglishgrammar.

It’simportanttolearnEnglishgrammar.SkillTwoExpressindiffere17

他們?cè)诤┥下?tīng)音樂(lè)。ATheylistenedtothemusiconthebeach.BTheyenjoyedthemusiconthebeach.他們?cè)诤┥下?tīng)音樂(lè)。ATheylistene18

她還小，搬不動(dòng)這么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung.Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarrythe…DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…她還小，搬不動(dòng)這么重的箱子。ASheisv19書面表達(dá)寫作技巧審列加連美書面表達(dá)寫作技巧審列加連美20中考作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第五檔（很好）（25-21分）完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，涵蓋了所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，或在發(fā)揮時(shí)內(nèi)容有新意或亮點(diǎn)；語(yǔ)言基本無(wú)誤，行文連貫，表達(dá)清楚。第四檔（好）（20-16分）完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，涵蓋了基本內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；語(yǔ)言有少量錯(cuò)誤，行文基本連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚。第三檔（一般）（15-11分）基本完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，寫出了一些內(nèi)容；語(yǔ)言有一些錯(cuò)誤，行文不夠連貫。第二檔（較差）（10-6分）未能恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，只能寫出個(gè)別要點(diǎn)；語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多，未能清楚傳達(dá)信息。第一檔（差）（5-0分）

未能完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，只能寫出與內(nèi)容有關(guān)的一些單詞；語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多，未能清楚傳達(dá)信息。中考作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第五檔（很好）（25-21分）21Romeisnotbuiltinaday.Tips:1.卷面工整。2.規(guī)范寫作過(guò)程。3.多背誦美文，積累素材。Romeisnotbuiltinaday.Tip22HaveaTry!HaveaTry!23書面表達(dá)以“Ihaveadream”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文。Sentencepatternsforreference(以下句型供參考）Mydreamistobe…/todo…/togo…Ienjoy/like