雅思寫作需連貫性及一致性

雅思寫作需連貫性及一致性在備考雅思寫作過程中，考生們要留意參考雅思寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，不要盲目練習(xí)，許多考生會忽視寫作內(nèi)容連貫性及全都性的問題，今日我給大家?guī)砹搜潘紝懽餍柽B貫性及全都性,盼望能夠關(guān)心到大家，一起來學(xué)習(xí)吧。

雅思寫作需連貫性及全都性

貫性包括意連和形連兩個方面，前者指的是內(nèi)涵的規(guī)律性，后者指的是運用變換詞語。當(dāng)然這兩者經(jīng)常是不行分割的。只有形連而沒有意連，語句之間就沒有內(nèi)涵的有機的聯(lián)絡(luò);反之，只有意連而沒有形連，有時行文就不流暢。

階段中語句的擺放應(yīng)遵循必定的挨次，不能想到什么就寫什么。假如在著筆之前沒有構(gòu)思，邊寫邊想，寫寫停停，那就寫不出一氣呵成的好文章來。

下面介紹幾種雅思寫作內(nèi)容常見的方式。

A.按時刻先后(chronologicalarrangement)

Wehadanumberofclosecallsthatday.Whenwerose,itwasobviouslylateandwehadtohurrysoasnottomissbreakfast;weknewthediningroomstaffwasstrictaboutclosingatnineoclock.Then,whenwehadbeendrivinginthedesertfornearlytwohours-----itmusthavebeenclosetonoon----theheatnearlyhidusin;theradiatorboiledoverandwehadtousemostofourdrinkingwatertocoolitdown.Bythetimewereachedthemountain,itwasfouroclockandwewereexhausted.Here,judgementranoutofusandwestartedthetoughclimbtothesummit,notrealizingthatdarknesscamesuddenlyinthedesert.Sureenough,bysixwewerestrugglingandAndrewverynearlywentdownasteepcliff,draggingMohammedandmealongwithhim.Bynine,whenthewindhowledacrosstheflatledgeofthesummit,weknewasweshiveredtogetherforwarmththatithadnotbeenourluckyday.

本段從rose(起床)寫起，然后是吃早餐(nottomissbreakfast,closingatnineoclock)，然后是closetonoon，始終寫到這一天完畢(Bynine--)。

B.按方位遠近(spatialarrangement)

Fromadistance,itlookedlikeaskinnytube,butaswegotcloser,wecouldseeitfleshoutbeforeoureyes.Itwastubular,allright,butfatterthanwecouldseefromfaraway.Furthermore,wewerealsoastonishedtonoticethatthebuildingwasreallyintwoparts:apagodasittingontopofatubularone-storystructure.Standingtenfeetaway,wecouldmarvelathowmuchofthepagodawasmadeupofglasswindows.AlmosteverythingunderthewonderfulChineseroofwasmadeofglass,unlikethetubethatitwassittingon,whichonlyhadfour.Inside,thetubewasgloomy,becauseofthelackoflight.Thenasteep,narrowstaircasetookusupinsidethepagodaandthelightchangeddramatically.Allthosewindowsletinafloodofsunshineandwecouldseeoutformilesacrosstheflatland.

本段的寫法是由遠及近，從遠處(fromadistance)寫起，然后getcloser，再到(tenfeetaway)，最終是insidethepagoda……當(dāng)然，按方位遠近來寫不等于都是由遠及近。依據(jù)需要，也能夠由近及遠，由外至內(nèi)等等。

C.按規(guī)律關(guān)系(logicalarrangement)

Ifyouworkasasodajerker,youwill,ofcourse,notneedmuchskillinexpressingyourselftobeeffective.Ifyouworkonamachine,yourabilitytoexpressyourselfwillbeoflittleimportance.Butassoonasyoumoveonestepupfromthebottom,youreffectivenessdependsonyourabilitytoreachothersthroughthespokenorthewrittenword.Andthefurtherawayyourjobisfrommanualwork,thelargertheorganizationofwhichyouareanemployee,themoreimportantitwillbethatyouknowhowtoconveyyourthoughtsinwritingorspeaking.Intheverylargebusinessorganization,whetheritisthegovernment,thelargecorporation,ortheArmy,thisabilitytoexpressoneselfisperhapsthemostimportantofalltheskillsamancanpossess.

這一段談的是表達力量，它的重要性與工作，身份有關(guān)，從notneedmuchskill或oflittleimportance到moreimportant，最終是mostimportant。

行文的規(guī)律性經(jīng)常要靠恰當(dāng)?shù)淖儞Q詞語及其他手法來完成。

Waltersgoalinlifewastobeeasuccessfulsurgeon.First,though,hehadtogetthroughhighschool,soheconcentratedallhiseffortsonhisstudies---inparticular,biology,chemistry,andmath.Becauseheworkedconstantlyonthesesubjects,Walterbecameproficientinthem;however,Walterforgotthatheneededtomasterothersubjectsbesidesthosehehadchosen.Asaresult,duringhisjunioryearofhighschool,WalterfailedbothEnglishandLatin.Consequently,hehadtorepeatthesesubjectsandhewasalmostunabletograduateonschedule.Finally,onJune6,Walterachievedthefirststeptowardrealizinghisgoal.

本文中起承上啟下的詞語有兩種，一種是變換詞語(transitionalwordsorphrases)，另一種是起變換效果的其他連接手法(linkingdevices)。前者依次有：first,though,so,inparticular,and,because,however,besides,asaresult,both…and,consequently,and,finally.后者依次是：he,he,his,his,he,these,them,he,those,his,he,these,his.本段有詞匯105個，所運用的變換詞語及其他連接用語共26個詞，約占該段總詞匯量的四分之一。由此可見，把握好transitions不僅對行文的流暢有利，并且關(guān)于同學(xué)在規(guī)章時刻內(nèi)寫足所要求的字數(shù)也是不無優(yōu)點的。

雅思寫作內(nèi)容中常常消失的幾種錯誤：

1)不必要的改動時態(tài)，比方：

Inthemovie,RobertRedfordwasaspy.Hegoestohisofficewherehefoundeverybodydead.Otherspieswantedtokillhim,sohetakesrefugewithJulieChristie.Atherhouse,hehadwaitedfortheheattodiedown,buttheyeafterhimanyway.

2)不必要的改動單復(fù)數(shù)，比方：

Everybodylooksforsatisfactioninhislife.Theywanttobehappy.Butifheseeksonlypleasureintheshortrun,thepersonwillsoonrunoutofpleasureandlifewillcatchuptohim.Theyneedtopursuethedeeperpleasureofsatisfactioninworkandinrelationships.

3)不必要的改動人稱，比方：

Nowmorethanever,parentsneedtobeintouchwiththeirchildrensactivitiesbecausemodernlifehasthetendencytocausecleavagesinthefamily.Youneedtoarrangefamilylikeitsothatfamilymemberswilldothingstogetherandknowoneanother.Youneedtogiveupisolatedpleasuresofyourownandrealizethatparentshaveasetofobligationstosponsortogethernessandthereforesponsorknowledge.

因而寫作中，必定要留意時態(tài)，人稱以及數(shù)的轉(zhuǎn)變是否正確，要留意保持全都。

雅思寫作Task2社會類考官范文

Therisinglevelsofcongestionandairpollutionfoundinmostoftheworldscitiescanbeattributeddirectlytotherapidlyincreasingnumberofprivatecarsinuse.Inordertoreversethisdeclineinthequalityoflifeincities,attemptsmustbemadetoencouragepeopletousetheircarslessandpublictransportmore.

Discusspossiblewaystoencouragetheuseofpublictransport.

ModelAnswer:

Anyonewholivesinacityisawareoftheincreasingnumberofcarsontheroadandthekindsofproblemsthiscreates:trafficjams,airpollutionandlongermutingperiods.Aseconomiesgrowandaccesstocarsspreadstoincreasingnumbersofpeople,thistrendislikelytoworsen.Thesolution,itwouldseem,isforgovernrnmenttoencouragetheuseofpublictransportinurbanareas,thusdecreasingdependenceonthecar.

Onewaytostimulatepublictransportuseistomakeprivatecarusemoreexpensiveandinconvenient.Theintroductionoftollsalongurbanmotorwayshasbeensuccessfullyemployedinmanycities.Othersuchmeasuresarehigh-pricedpermitsforparkinginurbanareasandtherestrictionofparkingtoalimitednumberofcars.Facedwithhighcostsornoplacetopark,muterswouldperhapsbemorewillingtoabandontheircarsinfavourofbusesortrains.

Therearealsolesspunishingwaysofspurringpublictransportuse.Theconstructionoffreecarparksatsuburbantrainstationshasprovensuccessfulinquiteanumberofcountries.Thisallowsmuterstodrivepartoftheway,buttakepublictransportintothecentral,mostcongested,urbanareas.

Indeed,makingpublictransportmorefortableandconvenientshouldworktoattractmoremutersanddecreasetrafficcongestion.Publictransportthatisconvenientandfortableretainsitspassengers,muchlikeanybusinessthatsatisfiesitscustomers.Themoremutersmittedtotakingpublictransport,thelesscongestiononcitystreets.

雅思寫作Task2社會類考官范文

Fatherhoodoughttobeemphasisedasmuchasmotherhood.Theideathatwomenaresolelyresponsiblefordecidingwhetherornottohavebabiesleadsontotheideathattheyarealsoresponsibleforbringingthechildrenup.

Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

ModelAnswer:

Ibelievethatchild-rearingshouldbetheresponsibilityofbothparentsandthat,whilsttheroleswithinthatpartnershipmaybedifferent,theyareneverthelessequalinimportance.Insomesocieties,ithasbeenmadeeasierovertheyearsforsingleparentstoraisechildrenontheirown.However,thisdoesnotmeanthatthetraditionalfamily,withbothparentsprovidingemotionalsupportandrole-modelsfortheirchildren,isnotthemostsatisfactorywayofbringingupchildren.

Ofcrucialimportance,inmyopinion,ishowwedefineresponsibleforbringingthechildrenup.Atitssimplest,itcouldmeangivingthefinancialsupportnecessarytoprovideahome,foodandclothesandmakingsurethechildissafeandreceivesanadequateeducation.Thiswou