人教版高中英語(yǔ)選擇性Unit4JourneyAcrossaVastLandWriting

JourneyAcrossaVastLandUnit4

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Writing—Anemailaboutajourney寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練弄清文絡(luò)寫(xiě)作妙筆生花技法點(diǎn)撥文體分析把握寫(xiě)作動(dòng)脈內(nèi)容索引

本單元的寫(xiě)作目標(biāo)是寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于旅行的郵件，也就是對(duì)一次出行、游覽、參觀等的記錄。這類(lèi)文章一般分為三部分：第一部分介紹自己游覽或參觀的地點(diǎn)。第二部分寫(xiě)自己的游覽經(jīng)歷，也是文章的重點(diǎn)。第三部分往往以向朋友發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)來(lái)結(jié)束全文。在介紹游覽經(jīng)歷時(shí)，一般按游覽的先后順序?qū)?，由先而后依次記述游覽過(guò)程中所見(jiàn)到的景物。另外要選取自己印象最深刻的或最有特色的景物，作較為詳細(xì)的描寫(xiě)。最后可以加上自己的感受，做到既有所見(jiàn)所聞，又有所思所感，深化寫(xiě)作主題。技法點(diǎn)撥文體分析把握寫(xiě)作動(dòng)脈寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)1.I’dliketoshareoneofthemostfascinatingexperienceswithyou.2.I’mgladtoshareatrulyunforgettabletravelexperiencethatIhadduringmylastsummerholidaywithyou.3.Lastweek/month/year，Ipaidavisitto...，whichisfamousfor...4.Itlies/islocated/situatedin...5.Thesceneryissobeautifulthatittakesthetourists’breathaway.6.Whereveryougo，thereareplentyofactivitiestochoosefrom.7.Ithasbecomeoneofthemostpopulartouristattractionsintheworld.8.Wewerealltired，butourtripto...wasreallyunforgettable.常用表達(dá)返回

假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Tom寫(xiě)信詢(xún)問(wèn)你的一次難忘的旅游經(jīng)歷。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他回一封郵件，要點(diǎn)包括：1.旅游過(guò)程；2.你的感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：大佛

theGiantStoneBuddha寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練弄清文絡(luò)寫(xiě)作妙筆生花DearTom，I’mgladtoshareatrulyfascinatingtravelexperiencethatIhadduringmylastsummerholidaywithyou.

Yours，LiHua審題1.確定文體：這是一篇電子郵件，向朋友介紹一次難忘的旅游經(jīng)歷。2.主體時(shí)態(tài)：以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主。景物描寫(xiě)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。3.主體人稱(chēng)：人稱(chēng)應(yīng)該以第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)為主。謀篇第一段：開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，介紹本次旅行的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人員及交通方式等。第二段：自己的游覽經(jīng)歷，注意詳略得當(dāng)。第三段：總結(jié)全文，發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)。審題謀篇核心詞匯1.景色

_______2.讓人驚嘆

______________________3.在黃昏

_______4.返回

____________________5.一定會(huì)

___________6.參觀，拜訪

___________scenerytakesb.’sbreathawayatduskmakeone’swayback遣詞造句beboundtopayavisitto連詞成句1.七月七日，我和父母乘車(chē)去了四川樂(lè)山，一個(gè)以大佛聞名的地方。OnJuly7，myparentsandItookabustoLeshan，SichuanProvince.Leshan

.2.當(dāng)我抬頭看到巨大的佛頭，低頭看到巨大的佛腳時(shí)，我感到自己是多么的渺小。

anddownatthelargefeet，IfeltIwassosmall.3.第二天，我們登上了峨眉山，那里的美景讓我們驚嘆。Thenextday，weclimbedMountEmei.Thebeautifulsceneryonthemountain

.4.如果我有時(shí)間，一定會(huì)再來(lái)游覽樂(lè)山。IfIhavetime，I

Leshanagain.isfamousfortheGiantStoneBuddhaWhenIlookedupatthelargeheadtookourbreathawayamboundtopayavisitto句式升級(jí)1.用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句改寫(xiě)句1。________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)改寫(xiě)句2。______________________________________________________________________3.把句3改成以關(guān)系副詞引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。_______________________________________________________________________________OnJuly7，myparentsandItookabustoLeshan，SichuanProvince，whichisfamousfortheGiantStoneBuddha.Lookingupatthelargeheadanddownatthelargefeet，IfeltIwassosmall.Thenextday，weclimbedMountEmei，wherethebeautifulscenerytookourbreathaway.

用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯(lián)想內(nèi)容，組成一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。參考范文DearTom，I’mgladtoshareatrulyfascinatingtravelexperiencethatIhadduringmylastsummerholidaywithyou.組句成篇________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua返回OnJuly7，myparentsandItookabustoLeshan，SichuanProvince，whichisfamousfortheGiantStoneBuddha.TheBuddhaisliterallybig.Lookingupatthelargeheadanddownatthelargefeet，IfeltIwassosmall.Thenextday，weclimbedMountEmei，wherethebeautifulscenerytookourbreathaway.Therearemanyoldtemplesandwildmonkeys.Atdusk，wemad