讀后續(xù)寫微技能訓(xùn)練-修辭手法(Simile明喻)課件

讀后續(xù)寫微技能訓(xùn)練修辭手法——明喻(Simile)Figureofspeech(修辭手法)修辭手法(figureofspeech)是根據(jù)表達(dá)需要，運(yùn)用有效的語言手段來提高語言的表達(dá)效果，使語言表達(dá)具有準(zhǔn)確性、鮮明性和生動性的語言運(yùn)用方式。恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眯揶o手段，可以使文章更加生動，更具有表現(xiàn)力，蘊(yùn)意豐富，引人入勝。常用的修辭手法有：夸張(Exaggeration)、明喻(Simile)、暗喻(Metaphor)、擬人(Personification)、平行法(Parallelism)、頭韻(Alliteration)、對比(Contrast)、矛盾修辭法(Oxymoron)、雙關(guān)(Pun)、移情(Empathy)等。Simile—afigureofspeechcomparingtwounlikethings,oftenintroducedwiththewords“l(fā)ike”or“as”.Hersmileisasbrightasthesun.Hersmileisbrightlikethesun.Simile(明喻)ForrestGump阿甘正傳Mymommaalwayssaid,“Lifeislikeaboxofchocolaes.Youneverknowwhatyou'regonnaget.”Aroomwithoutbooksisabodywithoutasoul.like沒有書的房間，如同沒有靈魂的軀體。We'reliketwopeasinapod.我們就像豆莢里的兩顆豌豆。Examplesofsimilefromthetextbooks1.Itseemedasiftheworldwasatanend.(M1U4）2.Ourlegsweresoheavyandcoldthattheyfeltlikeblocksofice.(M1U3)3.Thelakesshonelikeglassinthesettingsunandlookedwonderful.(M1U3)4.Brickscoveredthegroundlikeredautumnleaves.(M1U4)5.Thecountry,coveredwithcherrytreeflowers,looksasthoughitiscoveredwithpinksnow.(M3U1)6.Why,lookathim.Heeatslikeawolf.(M3U3)7.LongagoDrYuanhadadreamaboutriceplantsastallassorghum.Eachearofricewasasbigasanearofcornandeachgrainofricewasashugeasapeanut.(M4U2)Comparison①微風(fēng)吹來，樹葉搖動，燈光閃爍。Thewindblew,theleavesshookandthelightsflashed.Alightbreezeblew,swayingthetreebranchesandmakingtheraysoflightglimmeranddanceasiftherewasafairtaleworldhiddendeepwithin.②清清的泉水潺潺地流著。Theclearspringisflowing.Rippingcrystalsstreamsstretchedawayintothedistancefromthetoweringbluffs(懸崖)likethebeautifulstreamers(飄帶)ofafairymaid.Theappilicationofsimile常見的比喻詞：like,基本構(gòu)成：本體+比喻詞+喻體as,asif(though),Ais1.Myloveislikearedrose.similetoBwhatCistoD2.Myloveisasbeautifulashislove.3.Thebabyislikehisfather.4.Thepenistoawriterwhatthegunistoafighter.simile5.Themanisastallasagiraffe.simile6.Heappearsasifhehadknownthetruth.7.Heranasfastaspossible.8.Everytimeyoufeellikesmoking,don'treachforacigarret.9.Icouldn'tmovemylegs.Itwasasiftheywerestucktothefloor.simileSomepatternsofsimile①“as”pattern?Sheisastimidasamouse.她膽小如鼠。?Hetreatshiskidastheappleoftheeye.他把他的孩子當(dāng)掌上明珠。?Thesnowwasasthickasablanket.雪厚得像毯子。?Afatherrushedtohisson'sschool,onlytodiscoverthebuildingwasasflatasapancake.一位父親沖進(jìn)他兒子的學(xué)校，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)那幢樓像一個薄餅一樣平。Somepatternsofsimile②“what”pattern?Readingistothemindwhatfoodistothebody.讀書與思想的關(guān)系就好比食物與健康的關(guān)系。?Honestyistobusinessmanwhatwateristofish.誠實(shí)對商人就像水對魚一樣重要。?Dreamsaretopeoplewhatwingsaretobirds.夢之于人，猶如翅膀之于鳥。?Railwayistotransportationwhatbloodistoman'sbody.鐵路對交通的重要性就如血液對人的重要性。Somepatternsofsimile③“asif”pattern?Hepicksoutthelaceoftheshoeandeatsitasifitwerespaghetti.他挑出鞋帶，像吃意大利面一樣吃。?Hetriescuttingandchewingthebottomoftheshoeasifitweretehfineststeak.他試著割咬鞋底，好像這是最好的牛排。?ThewomanmadehimfetchandcarryjustasifhewasagreatNewfoundlanddog.這個女人叫他做這做那，簡直把他當(dāng)作一條紐芬蘭的大狗。Somepatternsofsimile④“l(fā)ike”pattern?Mymindgoesroundandroundliketheearth.我的心像地球一樣轉(zhuǎn)來轉(zhuǎn)去?Hewaslikeacatonhotbricksbeforehisdrivingtest.他在駕照考試前就像熱鍋上的螞蟻。?JennyandIwerelikepeasandcarrots.我和珍妮形影不離。?Loveislikethewind,whichyoucan'tseebutcanfeel.愛就像風(fēng)，你看不見卻能感覺到。?Shehungherheadlikeadyingflower.“l(fā)ike”pattern????Livingwithoutanaimislike____________________.sailingwithoutacompassThestarsinthenightskysparkledlike___________.diamondsThewindhowledlike_____________.anangrylionabeanHelayunderthequiltinalongshapelike________,turningonhissidetofacethedoor.?Searchingforonemaninthisbigcityislikelookingforaneedleinahaystack_____________________________.請用明喻改寫下列句子1.月亮一會鉆進(jìn)云里，一會兒又從云里鉆出來。Themoongotintothecloudsforawhile,andthengotoutoftheclouds.Themoonwaslikeanaughtychild,nowintotheclouds,andthenoutoftheclouds.2.比賽馬上就要開始了，小力的心情非常緊張。Thegamewasabouttostart.Xiaoliwasverynervous.Asthegamewasabouttostart,Xiaoli'sheartwaslikeabowonastrin