2014中考書面表達(dá)

2014年廣東省英語中考書面表達(dá)真題訓(xùn)練2014年廣東省英語中考書面表達(dá)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作。廣東正在創(chuàng)建教育強(qiáng)省，學(xué)校需要改善辦學(xué)條件。你所在的學(xué)校正在就如何改善學(xué)?，F(xiàn)有的設(shè)施設(shè)備條件征求學(xué)生的意見。請你在學(xué)校的官方微博上留言，內(nèi)容包括：1．你喜歡學(xué)校哪個場所的設(shè)施設(shè)備以及喜歡的原因；2．選取學(xué)?，F(xiàn)有的兩個場所談?wù)勗O(shè)施設(shè)備的不足：①這兩個場所里還缺少哪些設(shè)施設(shè)備或物品；②這些設(shè)施設(shè)備或物品的缺乏所帶來的負(fù)面影響；③如何改善。作文要求：

1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。2.語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Inmyopinion,somefacilities(設(shè)施)andequipment(設(shè)備)inourschoolarequitegood._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiMing

【思路點(diǎn)撥】第一步：審題 體裁:__________________人稱:__________________時態(tài):__________________應(yīng)用文第一人稱一般現(xiàn)在時第二步：列提綱第一部分：開篇點(diǎn)題，說明學(xué)校的一些設(shè)施設(shè)備是很好的。（文章開頭已給出）第二部分：列舉自己認(rèn)為好的設(shè)施設(shè)備，并說明喜歡的原因。參考句型：1.Forexample,thereisa____in_____.Ilike_____verymuchbecause________.2.Forinstance,Ilike___in______because______.第三部分：選取學(xué)?，F(xiàn)有的兩個場所談?wù)勗O(shè)施設(shè)備的不足：①某個場所缺啥②產(chǎn)生的負(fù)面影響③改善建議參考句型：1.Ithink_______notenoughin_____,so____.Tosolvethisproblem,wehadbetter_______.2.Therearenot______for_______in______.Asaresult,_____.Whynot_______?3.Ithinkwecan….第三步：列出相關(guān)的單詞、詞組、句型詞匯：教學(xué)樓_______實(shí)驗樓______電腦室________圖書館________飯?zhí)胈____________操場________足球場_______游泳池________投影儀____________空調(diào)_______________使……生動有趣_________________

感到不舒服__________________________過時___________上課遲到____________做閱讀___________玩得開心___________例如___________除此之外__________2）句型：Whynot….?第四步：運(yùn)用and,but,so,however,besides,inaddition,because,forexample等連詞將以上要點(diǎn)連成文章，并注意句型多樣化。第五步：小試牛刀

Inmyopinion,somefacilities(設(shè)施)andequipment(設(shè)備)inourschoolarequitegood.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiMing第六步：認(rèn)真復(fù)查一遍，如有錯漏，加以改正。復(fù)查應(yīng)注意1、看字?jǐn)?shù)是否達(dá)到要求，看有無遺漏要點(diǎn)，2、看文體格式是否正確規(guī)范，3、看詞語使用是否正確規(guī)范，4、看單詞拼寫、字母大小寫是否有錯，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號是否有遺漏或用錯，5、注意時態(tài)、人稱是否上下文一致。第七步：重寫Inmyopinion,somefacilities(設(shè)施)andequipment(設(shè)備)inourschoolarequitegood.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiMing范文1Inmyopinion,somefacilitiesandequipmentinourschoolarequitegood.

Forexample,thereisasmartwhiteboardineachclassroomnow.Ilikeitbecauseitmakesourclassesmorelivelyandinteresting.

However,weonlyhavetwoelectricfaninthedininghall,sowefeeluncomfortabletohavemealsthereinsummer.Ithinkmoreelectricfans

shouldbefixed.Besides,therearenotenoughtoiletsforgirlsintheteachingbuilding.Asaresult,manygirlsareoftenlateforclasswaitingalongtimeinthetoiletduringthebreaks.Whynotbuildmoretoiletsforgirlstudents?LiMing文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，段落層次分明恰當(dāng)使用高級詞匯和豐富的句式，為文章增色運(yùn)用連接詞，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,連貫范文2Inmyopinion,somefacilitiesandequipmentinourschoolarequitegood.Forexample,therearethreeminibook-barsintheschoolcampus.It’sveryconvenientforustoborrowbooksanytimewithoutgoingtothelibrary.

However,weonlyhaveafewelectricfansinthedininghall,sowefeelhotanduncomfortabletohavemealsthereinsummer.Ithinktheair

conditionersshouldbefixedinthedininghall.Inaddition,theoverheadprojectorsareoutofdateandsomeareevenbroken.Asaresult,t