熱點05 課后延時服務(wù)（解析版）-備考2023年中考英語寫作壓軸預(yù)測猜題

熱點05課后延時服務(wù)備考2023年中考英語寫作壓軸預(yù)測猜題（全國通用）【壓軸預(yù)測】為深入貫徹落實中共中央辦公廳、國務(wù)院辦公廳《關(guān)于進一步減輕義務(wù)教育階段學(xué)生作業(yè)負擔(dān)和校外培訓(xùn)負擔(dān)的意見》、教育部辦公廳《關(guān)于進一步做好義務(wù)教育課后服務(wù)工作的通知》要求，進一步提升課后延時服務(wù)工作水平，現(xiàn)就做好2021-2022學(xué)年課后延時服務(wù)工作，結(jié)合實際制定本意見。

1.服務(wù)時間

正常上課日的下午放學(xué)后至家長接走學(xué)生為止，結(jié)束時間原則上晚于當?shù)卣Ｏ掳鄷r間半個小時以上；集中安排課后服務(wù)約1-2課時，各學(xué)校、幼兒園根據(jù)學(xué)生、家長課后服務(wù)時長的意向組織實施，錯峰離校，與家長下班時間有效銜接，對有特殊需要的學(xué)生，學(xué)校提供延時托管服務(wù)。

2.服務(wù)內(nèi)容

中小學(xué)課后服務(wù)秉承提升學(xué)生核心素養(yǎng)、關(guān)鍵能力的原則，注重德育、體育、藝術(shù)、實踐、科技創(chuàng)新、綜合探究等活動項目的開發(fā)，強化學(xué)生的品德修養(yǎng)、身心健康、審美情趣、創(chuàng)新意識、實踐能力，進一步激發(fā)興趣，培養(yǎng)個性特長。各學(xué)校課后延時服務(wù)要做到“三不三有”，即不教授新課、不布置新作業(yè)、不加重學(xué)生負擔(dān)，有自主作業(yè)時間安排、有戶外體育和游戲活動安排、有因材施教個性化發(fā)展安排。要創(chuàng)造條件，優(yōu)化特色個性學(xué)習(xí)服務(wù)，為學(xué)生提供全方位社團活動平臺，為學(xué)有余力的學(xué)生拓展學(xué)習(xí)空間，最大限度滿足學(xué)生的個性化成長需求?！镜湫屠}】（2022春·江西吉安·九年級校聯(lián)考期中）為了解決家長接送難的問題，切實辦好人民滿意的教育，2021年教育部提出了中小學(xué)課后延時服務(wù)政策。請你根據(jù)下列提示和要求，并結(jié)合自己參加課后服務(wù)的體驗，說說自己對課后服務(wù)（after-classservice）的感受與看法。課后服務(wù)前放學(xué)后家長忙于工作，學(xué)生在家既不做作業(yè)也不讀書，他們要么看電視，要么玩游戲，浪費時間。課后服務(wù)后作業(yè)能及時完成，有問題可以和同學(xué)討論以及向老師請教，還有時間和同學(xué)們進行鍛煉。你的看法和感受……要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括提示中所有的寫作要點，條理清楚，行文連貫，可可適當發(fā)揮；2.短文中不能也出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；3.詞數(shù)不少于80，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。In2021,after-classservicewascarriedoutinChineseprimaryandmiddleschools.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinthelivesofbothparentsandstudents._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】In2021,after-classservicewascarriedoutinChineseprimaryandmiddleschools.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinthelivesofbothparentsandstudents.Beforetheservice,parentswerebusywiththeirworkwhilethestudentswerealoneathome.Thechildrenneitherdidtheirhomeworknorreadbooks.TheyeitherwatchedTVorplayedcomputergamesuntiltheirparentscameback.Nowthestudentscanfinishtheirhomeworkintimeatschool.Iftheymeetsomethingdifficult,theycoulddiscusswiththeirclassmatesorasktheteachersforhelp.What’smore,thereisalwayssomefreetimeforthemtoexercisewithclassmates.Inmyopinion,after-classserviceisnotonlygoodforourstudy,butalsocanhelpusdevelopsomeskills.Whenwediscusstheproblemswithothers,welearntocommunicateandgettheknowledgeaswell.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”和“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏表格中給出的要點信息，結(jié)合自己參加課后服務(wù)的體驗，說說自己對課后服務(wù)的感受與看法。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點題，說明課后服務(wù)帶來了很多變化；第二步，介紹課后服務(wù)前后的具體變化；第三步，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ê透惺堋亮點詞匯]①bebusywithsth.忙于某事②either...or...要么……要么……③intime及時④inone’sopinion在某人看來[高分句型]①Beforetheservice,parentswerebusywiththeirworkwhilethestudentswerealoneathome.（while連接并列句）②TheyeitherwatchedTVorplayedcomputergamesuntiltheirparentscameback.（until引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句）③Iftheymeetsomethingdifficult,theycoulddiscusswiththeirclassmatesorasktheteachersforhelp.（if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句）【壓軸猜題】1．（2022·甘肅武威·校聯(lián)考模擬預(yù)測）自教育部出臺“新政”后，義務(wù)教育階段的各學(xué)校都在嚴格落實校內(nèi)課后服務(wù)。請以“OurAfter-schoolServices”為題寫一篇英語短文，介紹一下你校開展的校內(nèi)課后服務(wù)情況，并談一談你的感悟。要求：1.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于80個。2.文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計算。3.請將短文寫在答題卡上，寫在本試題卷上無效。OurAfter-schoolServicesWearegladthatourschoolwillhavemoreextendedcourseswhichcanbehelpfultoarouseourinterestinstudyandmakeourschoollifecolorful.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】OurAfter-schoolServicesWearegladthatourschoolwillhavemoreextendedcourseswhichcanbehelpfultoarouseourinterestinstudyandmakeourschoollifecolorful.Firstofall,wehavetherighttodecidewhetherornottotakepartintheservices.Next,theschoolsetsupmanyclubsforus,suchasthebasketballclub,themusicclubandsoon.Afterschooleveryday,wecanchooseourfavoriteclubstojoin.Ialsojointhemusicclub.Inmyopinion,after-schoolservicesareverygoodforus.Theynotonlymakeourschoollifecolorfulbutalsohelpraiseourinterestindifferentfields.So,ifyouwanttoraiseyourinterest,pleasetakepartinyourafter-schoolservices.【詳解】題干解讀：該題目是記述文寫作，介紹學(xué)校開展的校內(nèi)課后服務(wù)情況，并談?wù)勛约旱母形颍m當發(fā)揮。寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，寫作時要適當使用副詞和連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系，符合邏輯關(guān)系，敘述完整，保證條理通順、單詞拼寫和語法使用正確。2．（2022·遼寧葫蘆島·統(tǒng)考一模）根據(jù)要求完成大作文。（80~100詞）為響應(yīng)黨中央、國務(wù)院“雙減”政策，學(xué)校開設(shè)了許多特色課程供學(xué)生課后選擇。請你為學(xué)校公眾號寫一篇英語推文，介紹這些特色課程，以及你建議新增的課程及理由。參考詞匯：gardening(園藝),teamwork(團隊合作),passon(傳承)要求：①中心突出，語意連貫，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范。②文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名和地名。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Afterthe“DoubleReduction”policy,studentsinourschoolarefreetochoosesomespecialcoursesaccordingtotheirinterests.Therearemanycoursesforthemtochoose,suchassoccer,papercuttingandgardening.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Afterthe“DoubleReduction”policy,studentsinourschoolarefreetochoosesomespecialcoursesaccordingtotheirinterests.Therearemanycoursesforthemtochoose,suchassoccer,papercuttingandgardening.Ifyou’reasportsfan,takethesoccercourse.Itisgoodforyourphysicalhealth.Besides,youcanlearnmoreaboutteamwork.Ifyou’reinterestedintraditionalfolkarts,youcantakethepapercuttingcourse.You’llbecomeinterestedinitandpassonChineseculture.Whataboutgardening?You’llbeclosertothenaturewhilelearningtogrowvegetables.Formypart,apaintingcoursecanbeadded,becausemanystudentslikedrawingalot.Ihopethesecourseswouldbehelpfulandeachstudentwouldenjoyabrightandcolorfulschoollifehere!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：要求針對“雙減”政策，結(jié)合提示材料進行寫作，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹學(xué)校的特色課程；第二步，介紹各種特色課程的優(yōu)點；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達希望享受豐富多彩的校園生活。[亮點詞匯]①begoodfor對……有好處②learnmoreabout學(xué)習(xí)更多關(guān)于③beinterestedin對……感興趣④passon傳承[高分句型]①Ifyou’reinterestedintraditionalfolkarts,youcantakethepapercuttingcourse.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）②Ihopethesecourseswouldbehelpfulandeachstudentwouldenjoyabrightandcolorfulschoollifehere!（省略that的賓語從句）3．（2021秋·重慶萬州·九年級重慶市萬州高級中學(xué)?？计谥校榕浜稀半p減”政策的實施，自上學(xué)期起，全國中小學(xué)將開展課后延時服務(wù)工作。服務(wù)時間是周一到周五下午行課結(jié)束后至18:00。以下是人們對課后延時服務(wù)的不同看法。請你根據(jù)下表提示寫一篇短文，并闡述自己的看法及理由。要點提示：人們的看法優(yōu)點

1、家長可以下班后去接孩子

2、……缺點

1、久坐不利于學(xué)生身體健康

2、……我的看法和理由要求:1.100詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總字數(shù)；2.文章需要包含所有要點；3.文章中不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)生本人、班級、老師、朋友和學(xué)校的真實姓名及個人信息；4.卷面整潔，書寫工整。參考詞匯：課后延時服務(wù)afterschoolservice優(yōu)點advantage缺點disadvantageStartingfromlastterm,primaryschoolsandjuniormiddleschoolsprovidedstudentswithafterschoolserviceeveryday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Startingfromlastterm,primaryschoolsandjuniormiddleschoolsprovidedstudentswithafterschoolserviceeveryday.Itdoesalotofgoodtostudents,butitalsohasnegativeviewwhichwecannotignored.Mostparentsworkasdoctors,shopassistancescan’tpickuptheirchildrenwhenschoolisover.Iftheirchildrenstayatschool,theywillfeelmorereassured.Theycanpickthemupafterwork.Ontheotherhand,someparentswithloweducationcan’thelptheirchildrenwiththeirstudywhentheyhaveproblems.Ifstudentsdotheirhomeworkafterclassatschool,teacherscanofferhelpatanytime.However,therearetwosidesinonething.It’snotsogoodforstudentstospendsomuchtimeatschool.Sittingforalongtimeisbadforstudents’health.Theyneedtimetorelaxandexercise.Aswintercomes,itgetsdarkearlier.Itisnotsafeforstudentsontheirwayhome.Allinall,Ithinkafterclassservicemayforcethestudentstoattendadditionalclassesandlengthenthetimetheyspendonstudying.Thismaymakethemfeeltiredofstudying.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇議論文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：本文陳述對學(xué)校開展課后服務(wù)的觀點，要求短文要包含表中提示的信息，有贊同有反對，要闡述自己的觀點，書寫時可適當發(fā)揮，語言連貫，邏輯清晰。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹了課后延時服務(wù)，然后提出各有利弊；第二步，具體介紹課后服務(wù)好的方面和不好的方面；第三步，介紹自己的觀點和理由。[亮點詞匯]pickup接某人atanytime任何時間begoodfor對……好ontheotherhand另一方面[高分句型]Ifstudentsdotheirhomeworkafterclassatschool,teacherscanofferhelpatanytime.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）Allinall,Ithinkafterclassservicemayforcethestudentstoattendadditionalclassesandlengthenthetimetheyspendonstudying.（賓語從句）4．（2022·湖北黃岡·九年級一模）為了貫徹“雙減”政策，陽光中學(xué)在課后服務(wù)時間開展了豐富多彩的社團活動。假如你是校學(xué)生會成員李飛，請你向全校同學(xué)介紹部分社團及活動內(nèi)容，并向同學(xué)們闡述參加社團的好處。社團名稱活動內(nèi)容好處閱讀社團閱讀不同類型的書籍，討論閱讀內(nèi)容放松自我，開闊視野籃球社團學(xué)習(xí)籃球技巧，參與校隊比賽強身健體，學(xué)習(xí)團隊精神其他社團……(至少一個)……(至少一點)注意事項：1.表達清楚，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范；2.必須包含表格中所有要點，并適當發(fā)揮；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名、人名等信息；4.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Goodmorning,everyone.MynameisLiFei.IamamemberoftheschoolStudents’Union.Letmeintroducesomeafter-classclubstoyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopetheseclubswillbeofgreathelpandallofuscanenjoyourschoollife.【答案】Goodmorning,everyone.MynameisLiFei.IamamemberoftheschoolStudents’Union.Letmeintroducesomeafter-classclubstoyou.Ifyou’reinterestedinreading,youcanjointheReadingClub.Thememberswillreaddifferenttypesofbookstogetheranddiscusswhattoread.Itcannotonlyrelaxyourselfbutalsoopenupawholenewworldtoyou.Ifyoulikeplayingbasketball,IthinktheBasketballClubisaperfectchoice.Thecoachescanteachyousomebasketballskillsandyoucanhaveachancetotakepartintheschoolbasketballcompetition.Afterahardday’sstudy,playingbasketballisagoodwaytomakeyoustrongerandmoreenergetic.Youcanalsolearnteamspiritfromit.IfyouarenotgoodatspokenEnglish,youcanjointheEnglishCorner.HereyoucanpractiseyourspokenEnglishwithforeignersandwatchsomeEnglishvideos.Also,youcanmakenewfriendsandimproveyourEnglishquickly.Ihopetheseclubswillbeofgreathelpandallofuscanenjoyourschoollife.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)所給表格提示，向全校同學(xué)介紹部分社團及活動內(nèi)容，并向同學(xué)們闡述參加社團的好處。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時；人稱采用第二人稱為主，其他人稱為輔。敘述時，至少需要包含三個社團，除了所給的閱讀和籃球社團，自己再加一個。行文要注意語意連貫，表達清晰，做到無單詞語法錯誤。5．（2022·貴州六盤水·統(tǒng)考中考真題）豐富多彩的“課后服務(wù)”活動讓我們的校園生活更加充實，促進我們成長。請以“ColorfulActivitiesatSchool”為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的短文。要求如下：1.短文應(yīng)包含思維導(dǎo)圖的所有信息，可適當發(fā)揮；2.主要寫“課后服務(wù)”期間參加的活動，如作業(yè)輔導(dǎo)、社團活動等；3.摘抄試卷內(nèi)容不得分，文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實姓名、學(xué)校校名。ColorfulActivitiesatSchool____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ColorfulActivitiesatSchoolSincetheimplementationofthe“doublereduction”policy,avarietyof“after-schoolservice”activitieshaveenrichedourcampuslife.Letmeintroducesomeofmyownactivities.First,afterschool,Iusuallyplaybasketballontheplaygroundforhalfanhour.Anditwillmakememoreenergetic.ThenIfinishmyhomeworkatschool.SoIdon’thavetodomyhomeworkwhenIgohome.Finally,Iwilltakedrawingclasses.BecauseIlikedrawingthingsonpaperbest.Ithinkit’sveryrelaxingforme.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。以“ColorfulActivitiesatSchool”為題，根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖內(nèi)容，介紹下自己在學(xué)校的豐富活動。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主；人稱以第一人稱為主。寫作時按照思維導(dǎo)圖給出的提示展開敘述，不要遺漏，可運用短語句型使文章更連貫。針對細節(jié)可適當發(fā)揮，最后行文確保語句通順，無單詞語法錯誤。6．（2022·湖北咸寧·統(tǒng)考二模）“雙減”來了，學(xué)校的作業(yè)少了、課外輔導(dǎo)班叫停了、學(xué)生有了更多可自由支配的時間。作為政策的受益者，你的學(xué)習(xí)與生活發(fā)生了哪些明顯的變化？你是如何看待這一政策的？請以此為話題寫一篇不少于80詞的英語作文。

提示詞：assignment(s)作業(yè)

carryout執(zhí)行after-classserviceactivities課后服務(wù)活動offer提供

join...club加入……俱樂部

off-campustutoringclasses校外輔導(dǎo)課要求：1.字跡工整，段落清晰，表達清楚，語法正確，行文連貫；2.短文必須包括所有要點，并請適當發(fā)揮；3.80詞左右，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。你的學(xué)習(xí)、生活發(fā)生了什么變化(作業(yè)減少、校內(nèi)完成、不用參加課外輔導(dǎo)班、更多的睡眠和鍛煉……)學(xué)校(提供多種課后服務(wù)活動)雙減后你能做的事情……你的感受……Sincethe“doublereduction”policywascarriedout,ourschoolandourstudents’liveshavechangedgreatly.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Sincethe“doublereduction”policywascarriedout,ourschoolandourstudents’liveshavechangedgreatly.Thankstothepolicy,wehavelesshomeworkthanbefore.Andwearerequiredtofinishitallatschool,whichmeanstherearenomoreschoolassignmentsathome.ThemostexcitingthingisthatIdon’tneedtotakeoff-campustutoringclassesanymore.SoIcanhaveenoughsleepeveryday.AndIcanspendmoretimeonphysicalexercise.Ithinkit’sbetterforourhealth.Eventhoughparentsareworryingaboutourgrades,westudentsseemtobehappy.Ourschooloffersmanyafter-schoolactivities.Ijoinedsomesportsclubs.Ilovetoplaybasketballandsoftballwithmyfriends.Iusedtodomyhomeworkafterdinneruntil10:00pm.CanyouimaginethatnowIgetfreetimetoreadnovelsatnight?Ilove“doublereduction”policy.【詳解】1.題干解讀；本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞“雙減后的生活”寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第一人稱為主。本文分為三段式：第一段開頭已給出；第二段介紹雙減后學(xué)習(xí)和生活都發(fā)生了什么變化，自己能做的事情；最后一段表達自己的感受。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標點錯誤。7．（2022·廣西柳州·統(tǒng)考三模）假如你是李華，外教Mr.White想了解你的學(xué)校推行的“課后服務(wù)”情況，請你根據(jù)以下表格信息回一封郵件。時間內(nèi)容體會星期一至五自己做作業(yè)，老師來輔導(dǎo)在校完成作業(yè)，放學(xué)后做自己喜歡的事情課外閱讀和各種社團活動有利于發(fā)展興趣特長體育鍛煉增強體質(zhì)，身體越來越好……要求：1.詞數(shù)70詞左右，文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.短文需包含要點提示中的所有信息（不要逐字翻譯），并在此基礎(chǔ)上適當發(fā)揮。3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名與校名。參考詞匯：輔導(dǎo)helpsb.withsth.

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增強體質(zhì)makesb.strongerandhealthierDearMr.White,Theafter-schoolactivities（課后輔導(dǎo)）arewelllikedinourschool._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Haveaniceday!Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMr.White,Theafter-schoolactivitiesarewelllikedinourschool.WecanhavekindsofactivitiesfromMondaytoFriday.First,wearesupposedtodothehomeworkbyourselvesandtheteacherswillhelpuswithit.Afterfinishinghomeworkatschool,weareabletodowhatwelikedoing.Second,furtherreadingandavarietyofclubsarealsoofferedinourschool.Inthisway,wecandeveloptheinterestsandhobbies.Finally,itisgoodforustodosportsbecauseitmakesusstrongerandhealthier.Allinall,theafter-schoolactivitiesarepopularinourschoolandIbelievewewillhaveamoremeaningfulandcolourfulschoollife.Haveaniceday!Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇電子郵件。根據(jù)表格信息，寫一篇作文介紹自己的“課后服務(wù)”情況。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時；人稱以第一人稱為主。寫作時需包含課后服務(wù)的具體內(nèi)容和自己的體會。可適當發(fā)揮使行文連貫。行文確保語句通順，無單詞語法錯誤。8．（2022·貴州貴陽·統(tǒng)考二模）“課后服務(wù)”的推行讓我們既可以在老師或同學(xué)的幫助下及時完成作業(yè)，又可以有更多的時間鍛煉身體、發(fā)展愛好，等等。假如你是育才中學(xué)的李華，你的筆友Mike想了解你們學(xué)校的“課后服務(wù)”情況，請根據(jù)以下提示，用英文寫一封信，告訴Mike你參加課后延時服務(wù)前后的變化及感受。要求如下：1.包含思維導(dǎo)圖的所有信息；2.重點談?wù)勀愕母惺芎徒ㄗh；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實的個人信息；4.詞數(shù)不少于80詞。（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。）參考詞匯：課后延時服務(wù)after-schoolserviceDearMike,Ourschoolhasofferedafter-schoolservicerecently.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMike,Ourschoolhasofferedafter-schoolservicerecently.Iusedtogohomeafterschoolatthreetodomyhomework.Weusedtohavealotofhomeworkaswellasalotofpapers.Iusedtoplaycomputergamesforalongtime.Nowbecauseoftheafter-schoolservice,mylifeisrichandcolorful.Ourhomeworkisreduced.AndIcanfinishitsoon.ThenIcanjoinsomeschoolclubs,suchassportsclubs.Iamgoodatplayingbasketball.Iplaybasketballwithmyclassmatesafterschool.Ihopetherewillbemorecompetitionsatschool,suchasbasketballcompetitionsandwritingcompetitions.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書信作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”及“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點，并注意適當添加細節(jié)，突出寫作要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹“課后服務(wù)”實施之前自己課后的活動；第二步，介紹“課后服務(wù)”實施之后自己的改變；第三步，表達自己對“課后服務(wù)”的看法及建議。[亮點詞匯]①usedto過去常常②sportsclubs運動俱樂部[高分句型]①Ihopetherewillbemorecompetitionsatschool,suchasbasketballcompetitionsandwritingcompetitions.（省略“that”的賓語從句）9．（2021秋·山東濟南·九年級統(tǒng)考期末）假如你是李華，你的美國筆友Michael寫信詢問你學(xué)校本學(xué)期開展課后延時服務(wù)活動的情況。請根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫一封回信。要點如下：(1)活動內(nèi)容（如：教師指導(dǎo)作業(yè)、同學(xué)交流、進行閱讀、參加藝術(shù)活動等）；(2)你最喜歡的活動及原因；(3)你的收獲或感受。提示詞：after-classservices（課后延時服務(wù)）注意：(1)詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；(2)可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名、地名等信息。DearMichael,Thankyouforyourletter.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMichael,Thankyouforyourletter.Asyouknow,wehaveafter-classservicesonschooldaysthisterm.Therearemanydifferentkindsofactivitiesforus.Wecannotonlyfinishourhomeworkwiththehelpofteachers,butalsojointheclubswe’reinterestedin,suchassports,artandEnglishclubs.Sometimesclassmatescancommunicatewitheachotherwhenstudying.Wecanreadwhateverwelikeintheschoollibrary.Myfavoriteactivityisplayingvolleyballbecauseitmakesmehealthierandmoreconfident.NowIhavebettervolleyballskillsandunderstandmoreaboutteamwork.Ourafter-classactivitiesarereallygoodchancesforustodevelopourinterestandrelaxourselves.Thankyouforlistening!Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封書信，屬于材料作文寫作；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：文章開頭以及要點已經(jīng)給出，按照提示的要點逐點闡述，可以適當增加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接書信開頭，引出話題，說明本學(xué)期學(xué)校開展課后延時服務(wù)；第二步，先介紹課后延時服務(wù)活動，包括教師指導(dǎo)作業(yè)、同學(xué)交流、進行閱讀、參加藝術(shù)活動等，接著說明自己最喜歡的活動及原因，可列舉具體的事例；第三步，抒發(fā)收獲或感受并書寫結(jié)語。[亮點詞匯]①withthehelpof在……的幫助下②beinterestedin對……感興趣③communicatewitheachother相互交流④notonly…butalso…不僅……而且……[高分句型]①Wecannotonlyfinishourhomeworkwiththehelpofteachers,butalsojointheclubswe’reinterestedin,suchassports,artandEnglishclubs.（notonly…butalso…連接兩個并列分句，第二個并列分句中含有省略引導(dǎo)詞that的定語從句）②Myfavoriteactivityisplayingvolleyballbecauseitmakesmehealthierandmoreconfident.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句）③Wecanreadwhateverwelikeintheschoollibrary.（whatever引導(dǎo)賓語從句）10．（2022·陜西西安·統(tǒng)考二模）假如你是李華，上學(xué)期你們學(xué)校開展了豐富多彩的課后活動。恰逢你們學(xué)校英語廣播站有征稿活動。請你根據(jù)提示問題，給學(xué)校英語廣播站編輯寫一封信，介紹上學(xué)期你參加課后服務(wù)活動的情況和感受。提示問題：1.Whatactivitiesdidyouhaveatschoollastterm?2.Whatactivity/activitiesdidyoutakepartin?3.Whenandwheredidyoujoininitthem?4....DearEditor,Ourschoollifehaschangedalotsincewehadallkindsofcolorfulactivitieslastterm.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ienjoyedmyschoollifesomuch.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearEditor,

Ourschoollifehaschangedalotsincewehadallkindsofcolorfulactivitieslastterm.Lasttermourschoolsucceededinhavingafter-classserviceactivities.Theactivitiestookplaceontheplaygroundandintheschoolhallfrom4:50p.m.—5:30p.m.onweekdays.Therewerethreemainkindsofactivities.Somestudentstookpartinsportsactivities,likeplayingfootball.Somejoinedinlanguageactivities.TheyrecitedpoemsorpracticedspokenEnglishtogether.Otherstudentschosetheartactivities,suchassinging,dancing,andpaperfolding.Fromtheafter-classactivities,wenotonlyrelaxedourselvesbutalsoenjoyedourselves.Evenmore,wecouldlearnalotfromthem.

Ienjoyedmyschoollifesomuch.

Yours,

LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文。根據(jù)所給提示問題，介紹下上學(xué)期你參加課后服務(wù)活動的情況和感受。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時態(tài)采用一般過去時；人稱以第三人稱和第一人稱為主。寫作時內(nèi)容需包括上學(xué)期有的活動、你參加的活動、何時何地參加的活動，可適當發(fā)揮，使行文連貫，最后確保行文通順，無單詞語法錯誤。11．（2022·福建南平·統(tǒng)考模擬預(yù)測）假如你是李華，你的朋友Amy想了解學(xué)校提供了課后延時服務(wù)（afterschoolservice）情況，請根據(jù)以下表格信息寫一封80詞左右的回信，談?wù)勓訒r服務(wù)的好處及你的感受。延時服務(wù)前學(xué)生在家既不做作業(yè)也不讀書，他們或者看電視，或者玩游戲，直到家長回來。延時服務(wù)后學(xué)生在學(xué)校能夠及時完成作業(yè)，有問題時可以問老師；學(xué)生有更多時間從事自己的愛好和鍛煉身體。延時服務(wù)受到家長和學(xué)生的歡迎。要求：1.短文必須包括表中所有信息；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書書工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；4.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearAmy,Ourschoolhasofferedafter-schoolservicerecently.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearAmy,Recently,oursc