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（環(huán)保、本話題涉及語言知七上)foodU6必會(huì)級(jí)名詞，pears,chicken,fries,cream動(dòng)詞動(dòng)詞詞組形容詞副詞句式Forbreakfast,likes…Forlunch,shelike…Fordinner,shehasFordessert,…（七下）必會(huì)級(jí)名詞Koala,tiger,elephant,dolphin,panda,penguin,zoo,animal,grass,leaf,bird,weather,winter,water,動(dòng)詞snow,動(dòng)詞詞組形容詞Cute,windy,hot,cold,副詞句式---Whydoyoulikepandas?ofinteresting.---’stheweather?It’sraining.（八上）Unit2,

選用級(jí)選用級(jí)必會(huì)級(jí)

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選用級(jí)porridge,cough,sneeze選用級(jí)名詞Africanelephants;kangaroos;bears;habitat;swamp;動(dòng)詞recycle;動(dòng)詞詞組Takeof;Carefor;形容詞Noisy;shy;fast;besuitablefor…;

gentle;furry;enormous;playful;aggressive;endangered;副詞句式

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Zoosaregoodplacesforto（一）文審題節(jié)約資源保護(hù)環(huán)境從我們身邊的小事做起，假設(shè)你是一個(gè)注“碳”生活的中學(xué)生請(qǐng)以“MyLowcarbonLife”為題，寫一篇短文，簡(jiǎn)單描述自己的“低碳生活”。提示:每天步行上學(xué);離開教室時(shí)，關(guān)燈、電扇、電視等3)不用水時(shí)記住關(guān)水龍頭，循環(huán)使用水4)充分使用紙張不使用塑料袋。參考詞匯：onfoot,turntap,reuse,makefulluseof,要求：①詞數(shù)：80個(gè)單詞左右。①不得真實(shí)的實(shí)的考生姓名，學(xué)校等信息。②文章內(nèi)容可涉及到所給提示，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但請(qǐng)不要逐條翻譯。人稱：我---第一人稱時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)內(nèi)容：5要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮（二）腦風(fēng)暴fortunately,save,onfoot,waterdrivethecar,taps,reused,reduce,duty,sidesthepaper.plasticbags,carbon,improve,meaningful,2

（三）句翻譯造句成文1、保護(hù)環(huán)是我們的責(zé)任。2、現(xiàn)在的境越來越來糟糕。3、我們應(yīng)做點(diǎn)什么保護(hù)環(huán)境。

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我們應(yīng)該每天步行上班____________________________________________________5、我應(yīng)該節(jié)約水和電6我們應(yīng)該循環(huán)使用水

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________7我們應(yīng)該兩面使用紙。

_______________________________________________8、記住上店使用自己的袋子_______________________________________________9

我們的生活會(huì)變得越來越好______________________________________________10讓我們開始行動(dòng)吧！____________________________________________________11.我們應(yīng)告訴父母走著上班，而不是開車上班。12購物用籃子而不用塑料袋是值得提倡的。13我過去常常開車上班，但是現(xiàn)在我發(fā)現(xiàn)坐公交車也很方便。14如果我們做了這件事，你可以想象我們的生活將多么美好。（四）句成篇asso,because,for,but,however,while,although,inorderto,sothat,by,asfor,firstofall,then,next,besides,what’smore,only…butalso,afterall,finally,butnotleast,foron,ononehand,onforforininall,inaword,atpresent,ininsteadof,toIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.environmentisbecomingand_________,mustdofromtheenvironment.-_______weshouldgoonourtowalktowork._________shouldelectricity_______turningofftheTVsetsandlights_____wedon’tneedthem._______usebothof________remembertogoshoppingwithIbelieve______ourlifewill3

becomebetterbetter.carbon,happierlife.Let’stakeactions.（五）升亮點(diǎn)1.詞組turnoff,remembertomakeuseof,,it’sourdutytodo,prevent….from,protecttheenvironment,thereducedo，cutdownlivelowlife,wasteformthegoodofdoing…,raisepeople’senvironmentalawareness,2.句型從句without,sothat,hadbetterdo,It’sbadfor,make+adj,it’stimeto,notonly…butalso,themore,themore,begladthat,thereasonwhy…isthat,generallyspeaking,though/although,Ithinkthat…/Ibelievethat…3.非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)：’s+adj.sb.todo,doingsthis…e.g.ItgoodmakefullofWegoonfootandtellourtowalktoworkinsteadofthecar.Bydoingthis,wesavemanyRemembertoshoppingbasketratherthanplasticbags.Iusedtodrivetobutitconvenienttothebus（六）題升華IbelievelifewillifcanIt’stimeforustoraisepeople’senvironmentalawarenessandPollutionisthemostseriousenvironmentalintheTheyoudo,lessjunkyouthehealthierwillbecome.（七）踐練筆65(June是世界環(huán)境保護(hù)日，我們周圍的環(huán)境變得越來越糟糕，污染越來越嚴(yán)重……。假如你是學(xué)生Jone.，你校要進(jìn)行如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境”專題演講比賽。要求：1舉例說明環(huán)境存在的問題13方面;2、如何保護(hù)好我們的環(huán)境，采取怎樣的措施，舉—方面進(jìn)行說明，字?jǐn)?shù)_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearI’mveryproudthatIhavechosentospeakyoualltoday,’mabit(=alittle)nervousasI’venevermadeaspeechtosomanypeople,sopleaseforgivemeifitshows.allknow,aroundusisworseandworse.Inplaceswecan’tseefishswimmingtheriverortreesonthehills.SomepeopleevennocleanwatertoSoIwetotheenvironment.whatcanHowtoenvironment?Forexample,canonbybike.WeusebasketsnotbagswhenweweusebothsidesofwhenweInaword,ifeveryonepaysmoreattentiontoourenvironment,therewillbepollutionandwillbe“ThereonlyoneearthIhopeeveryonewillprotectourenvironmentwell.（八）價(jià)修改簡(jiǎn)單評(píng)價(jià)表內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)(

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否連貫？乎邏輯？是否準(zhǔn)確？前松緊？前緊后松？）開闊文章思路；關(guān)注典型錯(cuò)誤；詞句取長補(bǔ)短5

例文三近來由于極端天氣，我國長江中下游發(fā)生了特大旱情，致使小河斷流，湖泊干涸，魚類死亡，湖底成了牧場(chǎng)。請(qǐng)結(jié)合下面的提示詞，以“Let’sDoSomethingtoSaveOurEnvironment為題寫一篇80左右的短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括從干旱引出的環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀環(huán)保意識(shí)到節(jié)水，節(jié)能，控制污染等環(huán)保措施方面的描述。首句已給出，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。提示詞：weather,bottom（底部）,river,lake,grassland,savewater,tap（水龍頭）,energy,turn/off,眼淚)Let’sDoSomethingSaveOurEnvironmentItrecentlyhavedriedinChina..Alotofdied.Theoftherivershavebecomeland.TheislesslessofSoeveryoneshoulddosaveourshouldeveryofwater,turningoffafterusingitrecyclingtheForexample,canplantscleantherestroomwithusedshouldsavesuchlesstheofflightswhenweleave；domorewalking,bicyclinglessdrivingsoshouldasktopollutionfromtheLet’sactnowfromeverythingsaveourenvironment.’tletourtearsbethelastofwaterintheworld!例文四你聽說過這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)嗎？今年的你中如何度過的？請(qǐng)你寫一篇題為“MyEarthHour的短文。內(nèi)容包括：1.你今年參加EarthHour這個(gè)活動(dòng)了嗎？請(qǐng)表達(dá)你參加或者不有參加的心情。2.請(qǐng)描述你當(dāng)時(shí)在哪里，與誰一起度過，做了什么事。3.請(qǐng)列舉兩件以上你在日常生活中經(jīng)常做的有利于環(huán)保的事。4.號(hào)召大家加入到明年的活動(dòng)中來。MyEarthHour2011Thewasfromto9:30onSaturday,Marchthis______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ibelievethatcanearthabetterlivein.MyEarthHour2011Thefrom8:309:30pmSaturday,March26ththisItwasthemyfriendsandIforWeplayedhomewithallweretointheHour.Asastudent,Idoneoftotheenvironment.ForIwhileBesides,Iridetoinsteadofcar.Ithinkwecareforthebyso.Let'stakepartintheEarthHournextIbelievethatcanearthabetterlivein.(90words)6

例文五為配合我市開展“創(chuàng)建文明城市(buildacivilizedcity)”活動(dòng)，學(xué)校舉辦以“HowtoBehaveWell為主題的英語征文比賽。現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇參賽短文。提示：1.衣著整潔；2.保持環(huán)境衛(wèi)生；3.待人有禮，樂于助人；4.遵守交通規(guī)則；HowBehaveWell?Inordertobuildacivilizedcity,shouldtowellactivities.ahabittoourclothestidy.cityshouldeveryday.Don'tlitterorabout.It'sgoodtosay"Thankyou"and"Please"andon.WesaydirtyBefriendlytothepeopleinForweonbus,weshouldgiveseatstooldandthewomenwithbabies.Weobeyrules.thetrafficarered,shouldAndwe'dnotlaughloudlyinpublic.Ifeveryonebehaveswell,ourcitywillbemoremore例文六目前，我們的家鄉(xiāng)正在實(shí)施“城鄉(xiāng)清潔工程”(cleaningproject).請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息，給某英文報(bào)寫一篇短文，就清潔衛(wèi)生和食品安全兩個(gè)方面談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh。提示詞：不安全的危害rubbish垃圾桶Presently,acleaningisoutinItisnecessaryforustolivingbec