讀后續(xù)寫：愛與善良-面冷心熱的老婦人 講義-高考英語作文備考

一．原文SandyandJanecametoseethejobotreeonthehilltopagain.Jobosweretheirfavoritefruit,butthetreebelongedtoaladywholivedinthehousebythehill.Theyheardshewasdifficult,butthatsometimesshewouldgivefruitinreturnforanerrand（差使）.Thegirlsfinallygatheredtheircouragetoknockonherdoor.Anelderlywomanwithafiercelookanswered,staringdownatthegirls.“Weheard....,”saidSandy,hervoiceshaky,“thatyou

givejobosinpaymentforrunninganerrand.”Theladyraisedoneeyebrow,thenwentintothekitchenandtooktwobaskets.

Shepushedthemintothegirls'hands.“Gofillthesewithjobos,andcomerightback.”Thegirlsracedupthehilltothetreeandfilledthebasketswiththeripestjobos.Backatthehouse,theladyfilledabagwithriceandhandedittoSandy.“TakethisbagandonebasketofjobostotheBrownfamily.Andaskthemforthepayment,”theladyaddedwithatightsmile.“Ifyoureturnwithoutthepayment,youwon'tgetthefruit.”Thegirlsstruggledallthewaywiththebagandthebasket.Whentheywerethere,Mrs.Brownansweredthedoor.Insideonthefloorwerethreelittlechildren,eachpaintingsomethingonpapers.Mr.Brownwaslyingsickinbed.Timeswerehard.Thegirlshandedherthefood.“Thisisfromtheladywiththejobotree,”saidSandy.“Sheaskedforthepayment,too.”Janesaidawkwardly.“Thepayment!Thepayment!”Thechildrenrepeated,wavingthepaperintheirhandshappily.SandyandJanelookedateachotherstrangely.Withasmile,Mrs.BrownhandedSandyalargesealed（密封的）envelopesofullthatitwasalmoststartingtobreakopen.Thegirlssaidgoodbyeandleftquickly.“Iwonder,”Sandymurmured,“whetherMrs.Browncanaffordtopayforthatfood.”Para1:Worried,thetwogirlsdiscussedwhatwasintheenvelopeastheywalkedback.Para2:Theladyopenedtheenvelope,tookoutapileofpapers,andsmiled.二、1.從第二三四段中找出描寫老太太動作和神態(tài)的句子。第一段的“difficult”怎么理解?Para2:Anelderlywomanwithafiercelookanswered,staringdownatthegirls.Para3:Theladyraisedoneeyebrow;Shepushedthemintothegirls'hands.Para4:theladyaddedwithatightsmile.+威脅noteasytoplease難以討好的;難以取悅的原文中有幾個basket?2個，老婦人讓2個小女孩把2個籃子的jobo裝滿，一個送給Brown一家人，一個后面給了小女孩們3.payment到底是什么?小孩畫的畫4，兩個人為何會“l(fā)ookedateachotherstrangely”?小孩聽到payment很開心與他們一家的困窘處境很矛盾，覺得他們是付不起錢的三、微情節(jié)設計Paral:Worried,thetwogirlsdiscussedwhatwasintheenvelopeastheywalkedback(1)不解1(2)不解2(3)想打開，忍住了(4)繼續(xù)往老太太家里走Para2:Theladyopenedtheenvelope,tookoutapileofpapers,andsmiled.(1)揭曉信封里到底是啥(2)老太太解釋(3)小女孩們明白了一切，被老太太的善良感動了(4)老太太遞給小女孩們一籃子jobo作為報酬四、下水文短語(1)不能做某事beincapableof(2)支付，付款makethepayment(3)用一種困惑的語氣inatoneofbewilderment(4)提出某人對·.·..·的疑惑raiseone'sconfusionover..(5)表現(xiàn)出興奮projectexcitement(6)當提到......whenitcametosth...(7)陷入......descendinto...(8)好奇地看著......castcuriouslooksat...(9)抑制住某人做某事的沖動restrainone'surgetodosth(10)打開信封unwraptheenvelope(l1)加快腳步走向·.....hastenone'spacetoward.(12)努力做某事inanattempttodosth(13)讓某人萬分驚訝的是toone'sastonishment(14)幫助某人做某事aidsbindoingsth(15)度過困難時期weatherthedifficultphase(16)達成協(xié)議strikeadeal(17)以一貫的冷酷語氣intheusualunkindtone(18)遞給某人某物handsthtosb(19)蹦跳跳bounceupanddown(20)咬一口.....·biteinto...(21)潑酒，濺落splash(22)對....··的看法perceptionof...五、連詞成篇Paral:Worried,thetwogirlsdiscussedwhatwasintheenvelopeastheywalkedback.(1)“看來布朗家沒有能力付款。信封里真的是錢嗎?”簡疑惑地問道?！癐tseemsthattheBrownsareincapableofmakingthepayment,Coulditreallybemoneyintheenvelope?"saidJaneinatoneofbewilderment桑迪搖了搖頭，提出了她的困惑，那就是為什么提到報酬時三個小孩會表現(xiàn)得很興奮Sandyshookherhead,raisingherconfusionoverwhythethreelittlechildrenprojectedexcitementwhenitcametothepayment.他們陷入沉默，好奇地看著那個神秘的信封，但作為差使的責任抑制了他們打開信封的沖動。Descendingintosilcence,theycastcuriouslooksatthemysteriousenvelope,buttheresponsibilityaserrandsrestrainedtheirurgetounwraptheenvelope.(4)然后他們加快了腳步向那位女士的家走去，試圖找到答案。Thentheyhastenedtheirpacetowardthelady'shomeinanattempttofindouttheanswer.Para2:Theladyopenedtheenvelope,tookoutapileofpapers,andsmiled.(1)令他們?nèi)f分驚訝的是，信封里裝的是孩子們畫的彩色畫。Totheirunboundedastonishment,insidetheenvelopewerethecolorfulpaintingsthechildrenhaddrawn意識到他們的困惑，這位女士解釋說，為了幫助布朗一家度過困難時期，他們已經(jīng)達成了一項協(xié)議一用孩子們的畫“支付”食物和水果。Sensingtheirpuzzlement,theladyexplainedthattoaidtheBrownsinweatheringthedifficultphase,theyhadstruckaidea...“paidthefoodandfruitwithkids’paintings.一股暖流在她們的心中涌動，兩個女孩被這個有著金子般的心卻有著冷酷面孔的老太太深深打動了Withwarmcurrentsurgingthroughtheirhearts,thetwogirlsweredeeplytouchedbytheoldladywhohadaheartofgoldyetacoldface.(4)“這是你們的報酬，”她以一貫的冷酷語氣說道，把另一籃子Jobos遞給了姑娘們?！癆ndhere'syourpayment,theladysaidintheusualunkindtone,handingtheotherbasketofjobostothegirls.(5)兩個女孩在回家的路上蹦蹦跳跳，大口大口地嚼著jobos，果汁濺得到處都是，不僅讓她們神清氣爽，也讓她們對老太太的認知煥然一新。Bouncingupanddownontheirwayhome,thetwogirlsbitintojobos,withjuicesplashingeverywhere,whichrefreshedhemselvesaswellastheirperceptionoftheoldlady.六、最終自測Para1:Worried,thetwogirlsdiscussedwhatwasintheenvelopeastheywalkedback.(1)“看來布朗家沒有能力付款。信封里真的是錢嗎?”簡疑惑地問道。(2)桑迪搖了搖頭，提出了她的困惑，那就是為什么提到報酬時三個小孩會表現(xiàn)得很興奮。(3)他們陷入沉默，好奇地看著那個神秘的信封，但作為差使的責任抑制了他們打開信封的沖動。(4)然后他們加快了腳步，小跑著向那位女士的家走去，試圖找到答案。Para2:Theladyopenedtheenvelope,too