綿陽暑期培訓(xùn)學(xué)校培訓(xùn)材料：書面表達(dá)2

靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)表達(dá)方式提高高考英語書面表達(dá)得分近年來，高考英語書面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)規(guī)定。考生必須使用比較高級(jí)的表達(dá)方式方能獲取高分，而不少考生只會(huì)用結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)單的句子來表達(dá)文意，寫出來的文章得分就低。因此，同學(xué)們應(yīng)在平時(shí)的書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練中多練習(xí)使用高級(jí)表達(dá)方式，才能在高考英語書面表達(dá)中獲得高分。一、什么是高級(jí)表達(dá)方式一般說來，如果一篇書面表達(dá)通篇都是單一的主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)的簡(jiǎn)單句，表達(dá)效果就比較差。各種復(fù)合句、特殊句式(倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、感嘆句、suchas列舉句型等)和帶過渡性插入語的句子通常難度大、語境邏輯強(qiáng)、表達(dá)效果好，是普遍認(rèn)可的高級(jí)表達(dá)方式，也是高考英語書面表達(dá)是否能獲取高分的重要依據(jù)同學(xué)們?cè)趯懹⒄Z書面表達(dá)時(shí)應(yīng)根據(jù)表達(dá)需要有選擇地使用這些高級(jí)表達(dá)方式。二、掌握簡(jiǎn)單表達(dá)方式轉(zhuǎn)化高級(jí)表達(dá)方式的方法簡(jiǎn)單表達(dá)方式可以轉(zhuǎn)化成高級(jí)表達(dá)方式，而且轉(zhuǎn)換難度也不是很大，因?yàn)楦呒?jí)表達(dá)方式也是在簡(jiǎn)單表達(dá)方式的基礎(chǔ)上構(gòu)成的。下面介紹幾種將簡(jiǎn)單表達(dá)方式轉(zhuǎn)化為高級(jí)表達(dá)方式的方法。1．將兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句合并為一個(gè)由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句。which在非限制性定語從句中代表主句內(nèi)容，從句可由兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句之一改造而成。例1：最近許多中學(xué)生亂花錢，關(guān)于這一點(diǎn)不同的人有不同的看法。簡(jiǎn)單句：Recentlymanymiddleschoolstudentsspendtheirmoneyonunnecessarythings.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutit.高級(jí)表達(dá)方式：例2：許多男孩學(xué)抽煙，這對(duì)身體有危害。簡(jiǎn)單句：Manyboyslearntosmoke.Itdoesharmtotheirhealth.高級(jí)表達(dá)方式：2．在表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的陳述句前加過渡性插入語。一些表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的陳述句前加上inmyopinion,frommypointofview,personallyspeaking,asfarasIknow,asfarasI'mconcerned,asweallknow,asisknowntoall等插入語之后往往使句式更豐滿，邏輯更嚴(yán)密，說理更充分，從而增強(qiáng)了文章的表達(dá)效果。例1：簡(jiǎn)單句：WeshouldnotspendtoomuchtimeinsurfingtheInternet.我們不應(yīng)該花太多時(shí)間上網(wǎng)。高級(jí)表達(dá)方式：Inmyopinion,weshouldnotspendtoomuchtimeinsurfingtheInternet.我認(rèn)為我們不應(yīng)該花太多時(shí)間上網(wǎng)。例2：簡(jiǎn)單句：Takingexercisedoesgoodtoourhealth.鍛煉對(duì)健康有好處。高級(jí)表達(dá)方式：Asweallknow／Asisknowntoall,takingexercisedoesgoodtoourhealth.眾所周知，鍛煉對(duì)健康有好處。例3：簡(jiǎn)單句：Maryisanhonestandkindgirl.瑪麗是一個(gè)誠(chéng)實(shí)善良的女孩。高級(jí)表達(dá)方式：AsfarasIknow,Maryisanhonestandkindgirl.就我所知，瑪麗是一個(gè)誠(chéng)實(shí)善良的女孩。3．在兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句之間加上過渡性詞匯。為使兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句之間邏輯更嚴(yán)密，過渡更自然，可在其間加上過渡性詞匯。例1：雨下得很大，我們只好呆在旅館里。簡(jiǎn)單句：Itrainedheavily.Wehadtostayatthehotel.高級(jí)表達(dá)方式：Itrainedheavily;asaresult,wehadtostayatthehotel.例2：我買了一些時(shí)裝，又去看了一個(gè)精彩的演出。簡(jiǎn)單句：Iboughtsomefashionableclothes.Iwenttoseeawonderfulperformance.高級(jí)表達(dá)方式：Iboughtsomefashionableclothes;,Iwenttoseeawonderfulperformance.例3：我在火車站迷了路，天也漸漸地暗了。簡(jiǎn)單句：Iwaslostatthestation.Itwasgettingdark.高級(jí)表達(dá)方式：Iwaslostatthestation;，itwasgettingdark.4．將兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句合并為并列句。兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句分別表達(dá)會(huì)令句子讀起來缺乏連貫性和邏輯性，而加上并列連詞改造成并列句后邏輯嚴(yán)密得多，句式也高級(jí)得多。例1：這道題太難了，我解不出來。簡(jiǎn)單句：Thisproblemistoodifficult.Ican’tworkitout.高級(jí)表達(dá)方式：例2：我想買這輛自行車，卻沒有足夠的錢。簡(jiǎn)單句：Iwanttobuythisbike.Idon’thaveenoughmoney.高級(jí)表達(dá)方式：Iwanttobuythisbike,butIdon'thaveenoughmoney.5．將兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句合并為復(fù)合句。兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句加上從屬連詞可合并成主從復(fù)合句，這是增強(qiáng)語境邏輯、提升表達(dá)檔次的好方法。例1：我沒有帶錢。沒能看成那場(chǎng)電影。簡(jiǎn)單句：Ididn’ttakeanymoney.Icouldn’tseethatfilm.高級(jí)表達(dá)方式：BecauseIdidn’ttakeanymoney,Icouldn’tseethefilm.例2：你不早點(diǎn)出發(fā)就不能及時(shí)到達(dá)。簡(jiǎn)單句：Youdon’tstartearly.Youcan’tgetthereintime.高級(jí)表達(dá)方式：Ifyoudon’tstartearly,youcan’tgetthereintime.6．將陳述句改為感嘆句。陳述句結(jié)構(gòu)平凡、語調(diào)平緩，而轉(zhuǎn)換為感嘆句后句式變新穎，語氣變強(qiáng)烈，表達(dá)檔次明顯得到提升。例1：陳述句：Topreventthepollutionisveryimportant．防止污染很重要。高級(jí)表達(dá)方式：防止污染多重要啊!例2：陳述句：Sheisaclevergirl．她是一個(gè)聰明的女孩。高級(jí)表達(dá)方式：她是一個(gè)多么聰明的女孩啊!7．將陳述句改為倒裝句。陳述句改成倒裝句后結(jié)構(gòu)新穎、情感濃烈，表達(dá)效果明顯增強(qiáng)。例1：直到太陽落山我們才離開那個(gè)村莊。陳述句：Wedidn’tleavethevillageuntilthesunset.高級(jí)表達(dá)方式：例2：那時(shí)我?guī)缀醪欢⒄Z的重要性。陳述句：IcouldhardlyunderstandtheimportanceofEnglishatthattime.高級(jí)表達(dá)方式：8．將簡(jiǎn)單句改為強(qiáng)調(diào)句。簡(jiǎn)單句改為強(qiáng)調(diào)句后語氣更強(qiáng)烈、感情更充沛，是不可多得的高級(jí)表達(dá)方式。例l：抽煙對(duì)他的身體造成了傷害。簡(jiǎn)單句：Smokingdidgreatharmtohishealth.高級(jí)表達(dá)方式：例2：我們的錢是父母辛苦掙來的。簡(jiǎn)單句：Ourmoneyisearnedthroughhardworkbyourparents.高級(jí)表達(dá)方式：9．將一般性列舉句子改為suchas列舉句型。一般性列舉句子只起到羅列事實(shí)的作用，而suchas列舉句型除具有列舉功能之外，其對(duì)稱的結(jié)構(gòu)也能增強(qiáng)表達(dá)效果。例1：晚會(huì)上將有唱歌、跳舞、做游戲等節(jié)目。一般性列舉句子：Thepartywillincludesinging,dancingandplayinggames.高級(jí)表達(dá)方式：Therewillbeafewprogramsattheparty,suchassinging,dancingandplayinggames.例2：我們將參觀長(zhǎng)城、頤和園、紫禁城等名勝古跡。一般性列舉句子：TheplacesofinterestwewillvisitaretheGreatWall,theSummerPalaceandtheForbiddenCity,etc。高級(jí)表達(dá)方式：Wewillvisitseveralplacesofinterest,suchastheGreatWall,theSummerPalaceandtheForbiddenCity.三、增強(qiáng)使用高級(jí)表達(dá)方式的意識(shí)掌握了簡(jiǎn)單表達(dá)方式轉(zhuǎn)化高級(jí)表達(dá)方式的方法，并不意味著在寫作時(shí)一定能用上，只有增強(qiáng)使用高級(jí)表達(dá)方式的意識(shí)，養(yǎng)成使用高級(jí)表達(dá)方式的習(xí)慣，才能確保在寫作時(shí)自然貼切地用上。經(jīng)典句式模板1．Itgoeswitoutsayingthat(不言而喻).2.Whatreallycountisnot…but…真正重要的不是…而是…仿寫：03Whatreallycountisnothowfashionableyouarebutwhetheryoupossessagreatamountofknowledge,anoblecharacterandawarmheart.仿寫：05Whatreallycountisnothowtalentedyouare,buthowperseveringyouare.仿寫：06Whatreallycountisnottheconditionitprovides,butthereputationtheuniversitygets.3.Greateffortsshouldbemadeto….Onlyby…canweenableourcountrytotakethestrongpositionamongthepoweroftheworld.仿寫：03ThusIsuggetthatgreateffortsshouldbemadetobethepersonthesocietyneeds,.Onlybydoingsocanyoudefinitelyenableyourselftobecomeashappyasyouusedtobe.仿寫：05AsfarasIamconcerned,greateffortsshouldbemadetobuildyourconfidenceandperseveranc.Onlybydoingsocanyoudefinitelyenableourselvetotakethestrongpositioninourlife.仿寫：06SinceImadeupmymind,greateffortsshouldbemadetorealizemydream.AndonlybyworkinghardcanIdefinitelyenablemyselftotakethestrongpositionamongmypeers.高考書面表達(dá)常用的高級(jí)句式1.Therebe(exist,live,lie,stand…)sb./sth.2.sb.have(has/had)sth.3.sb.find/think/feel+it+n./adj.+(forsb.)todosth.Wethinkitourdutytoworkhard.Shefindsitnecessarytotakedownnoteswhilelistening.Theyfeelitimportanttohavesomeworkingexperience.4.~themost+形容詞+名詞+(that)+主詞+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/read…HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen.Mr.ChangisthekindestteacherthatIhaveeverhad.5、Nothingis+more+形容詞+thanto+VNothingismoreimportantthantoreceiveeducation.沒有比接受教育更重要的事。6、~cannotemphasizetheimportanceof~toomuch.（再怎么強(qiáng)調(diào)...的重要性也不為過Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyestoomuch.7、Thereisnodenyingthat+S+V...（不可否認(rèn)的...）Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourlivinghavegonefrombadtoworse.Thereisnotdenyingthatsuccessfulbusinessliesinahealthybodyandmind.8、Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat+句子~~（全世界都知道...）Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattreesareindispensabletous.9、Thereisnodoubtthat+句子~~（毫無疑問的...）Thereisnodoubtthatoureducationalsystemleavessomethingtobedesired.毫無疑問的我們的教育制度令人不滿意。10、Anadvantageof~isthat+句子（...的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是...）Anadvantageofusingthesolarenergyisthatitwon‘tcreate(produce)anypollution.11、Thereasonwhy+句子~~~isthat+句子（...的原因是...）Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycanprovideuswithfreshair.Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycansupplyfreshairforus.12、So+形容詞+be+主詞+that+句子（如此...以致于...）Sopreciousistimethatwecan’taffordtowasteit.13、Adj/n.+as+Subject（主詞）+be,S+V~~~（雖然...）Richasourcountryis,thequalitiesofourlivingarebynomeanssatisfactory.{bynomeans=innoway=onnoaccount一點(diǎn)也不}雖然我們的國(guó)家富有，我們的生活品質(zhì)絕對(duì)令人不滿意。Childassheis,shepaysmuchattentiontoherbehavior.14、The+~er+S+V,~~~the+~er+S+V~~~The+more+Adj+S+V,~~~the+more+Adj+S+V~~~（愈...愈...）Theharderyouwork,themoreprogressyoumake.Themorebooksweread,themorelearnedwebecome.15、By+doingsth.,sb.candosth.（借著...，..能夠..）Bytakingexercise,wecanalwaysstayhealthy.借著做運(yùn)動(dòng)我們能夠始終保持健康。16、Itissaid/reported/known/thought/believed(that)Itisbelieved(that)readingincreasesourknowledgeandbroadensourmind.17、Onnoaccountcanwe+V~~~（我們絕對(duì)不能...）Onnoaccountcanweignorethevalueofknowledge.我們絕對(duì)不能忽略知識(shí)的價(jià)值。18、Itistime+S+過去式（該是...的時(shí)候了）Itistimetheauthoritiesconcernedtookproperstepstosolvethetrafficproblems.19、根據(jù)我個(gè)人經(jīng)驗(yàn)?…Accordingtomypersonalexperience,…=Basedonmypersonalexperience,…Accordingtomypersonalexperience,smilehasdonemealotofgood.20、Thereisnoonebut~~~（沒有人不...）Thereisnoonebutlongstogotocollege.沒有人不渴望上大學(xué)。21、Itis+n/adj+that/todo…Itisamustthateverybodyshouldknowhowtousecomputers.Itisconvenientforustobeabletousecomputers22、Thatisthereasonwhy~~~（那就是...的原因）Summerissultry.ThatisthereasonwhyIdon‘tlikeit.23.Forthepast+時(shí)間，S+現(xiàn)在完成式...（過去...年來，...一直...）Forthepasttwoyears,Ihavebeenbusypreparingfortheexamination.24、Since+S+過去式，S+現(xiàn)在完成式。Sincehewenttoseniorhighschool,hehasworkedveryhard.25、Itpaysto+V~~~（...是值得的。）Itpaystohelpothers.幫助別人是值得的。26、Itisnouse(good)doing…It’snogoodtalkingwithoutthinkingcarefully.27.Itisnecessary/important/essentialthat+sb.(should)+dosth.Itisimportantthatwe(should)keepthepublicplacesclean.28、Whata+Adj+N+S+V!=How+Adj+a+N+V!（多么...！）Whatanimportantthingitistokeepourpromise!Howimportantathingitistokeepourpromise!遵守諾言是多么重要的事！29、notonly…butalsoInjustthreeyears,shehadnotonlyfinishedallthelessons,butalsoreceivedherDoctor’sdegree.Forestscannotonlyfreshtheairbutalsoreducenoise.30、Dueto/Owingto/Thanksto+N/Ving,~~~（因?yàn)?..）Thankstohisencouragement,Ifinallyrealizedmydream.31、Iamgreatlyconvinced(that)=Iamgreatlyassured(that)我深信…Iamgreatlyconvincedthatpreventionisbetterthancure.我深信預(yù)防是于治療32、not…untilIdidn’tknowthetruthuntilshetoldmewhathappened.YesterdayIdidn’tgotosleepuntilmidnight.Step1．仔細(xì)審題Step2.理清要點(diǎn)Step3.譯寫單句Step4.連句成篇Step5.檢查潤(rùn)色Step1．仔細(xì)審題Step2.理清要點(diǎn)Step3.譯寫單句Step4.連句成篇Step5.檢查潤(rùn)色Step6.定稿抄寫范例：題目：根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇介紹香港的短文，字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右。香港位于中國(guó)的東南部，面積1045平方公里，人口600多萬，被稱為“東方明珠”。1842年鴉片戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)后，當(dāng)時(shí)的中國(guó)政府被迫將香港割讓給英國(guó)。1997年她已回到祖國(guó)的懷抱，其前景會(huì)更美好。參考詞匯：明珠pearl[p?:l]，鴉片opium[?upi?m]第一步：仔細(xì)審題本文屬說明性文章。第二步：理清要點(diǎn)1、香港的地理位置、面積和人口。2、鴉片戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)后香港的處境。3、1997年她回到祖國(guó)的懷抱。4、其前景會(huì)更美好。第三步：譯寫單句香港位于中國(guó)的東南部，面積1045平方公里，人口600多萬，被稱為“東方明珠”HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.Herareais1,045k㎡.Herpopulationismorethan6million.Sheiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.1842年鴉片戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)后，當(dāng)時(shí)的中國(guó)政府被迫將香港割讓給英國(guó)。ShewasgivenuptoBritainafterthe1842OpiumWar.1997年她已回到祖國(guó)的懷抱，其前景會(huì)更美好。In1997,shereturnedtomotherland.Herfutureisverybeautiful.第四步：連句成篇HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.Herareais1,045k㎡and(←.Her)populationismorethan6million.Sheiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.ShewasgivenuptoBritainafterthe1842OpiumWar.In1997,shereturnedtomotherlandand(←.Her)futureisverybeautiful.第五步：檢查潤(rùn)色1HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof(←Herareais)1,045k㎡and(←.Her)hasapopulationofmorethan6million(←populationismorethan6million).Sheiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,ShewasgivenuptoBritainbythethenChinesegovernmentafterthe1842OpiumWar,andthepeopleinHongKonglivedahardlife.In1997,shereturnedtomotherlandandthepeopleofHongKongareandwillbeworkinghardtomakehermorebeautiful.(←.Herfutureisverybeautiful.)第五步：檢查潤(rùn)色2HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof1,045k㎡andhasapopulationofmorethan6millionand(←.She)iswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,thethenChinesegovernmentwasforcedtogiveupHongKongtoBritain(←ShewasgivenuptoBritainbythethenChinesegovernment)aftertheOpiumWar,andthepeopleinHongKongsufferedalot(←livedahardlife).AfterthereturnofHongKongtoChinain1997(←In1997,shereturnedtomotherlandandthepeopleofHongKongareand),thepeopleofHong