【課件】高三英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)（奶奶和壞人勇斗）課件-2023屆高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)

高三英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)（奶奶和壞人勇斗）1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目再現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Ireceivedanurgentcallfrommyaunt."TurnontheTV.Granny'sontheChannel10news."ItturnedoutthatGrannyhadmadeasandwichrunforherofficeandwasstoppedataredlightdowntown.Shehadthewindowrolleddowntoenjoythebreezewhenamanrusheduptothedriver'ssidewindow,intendingtocarjack（劫車）her.Now,whatthewould-becarjackercouldn'thaveknownwasthatthiswomansimplywasn't"agranny".ThiswasNancyJohnson—thesamewomanwhoownedandlivedonaTexascattlefarm,droveherowntractors,anddugherownpostholestolayfence.Theweekbefore,shehadshotarattlesnakeandchoppedoffitsheadwithashovel.Shewastheproudownerofthenewminivan（小型貨車）shewasdriving.Inotherwords,shewasnotyournormalkindofgranny.4續(xù)寫原文Thecarjackerleanedintotheopenwindow,onehandstuffedinhispocket,andsaid,"Getoutofthiscar.Ihaveagun,andIwillshootyou.”Astatementlikethatwouldhaveterrifiedanyoneelse.Instead,Grannysawitasachallenge."Ifyoureallyhadaguninyourpocket,youwould'vepulleditoutandledwiththatfirst,"sheshoutedathim,apparentlyunworried.Shewasright.Thecriminaldidn'thaveagun.Heinsteadreachedintothewindow,grabbedher,andtriedtopullheroutofthevan.Hepulledopenthedoor,wildlycatchingGranny'sarms.Grannyleanedhershoulderinsidetopressthehorn（喇叭)andstartedyellingtomakepeoplearoundnoticewhatwashappening.Withthedoornowopen,sheheldtightthesteeringwheelwithonearmandstartedkickingthemananywhereherfootcouldmakecontact.Thistallwomanhadquiteareach.56Part2題目分析7已知短文內(nèi)容通過閱讀所給文章可知，作者的奶奶開車上街。在停車等紅綠燈的時候遇到了攔路搶劫犯。作者的奶奶沒有被嚇到，反而在路上和搶劫犯做斗爭。抓住了搶劫犯，并因此上了電視。8點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫建議第一段：在踢了一腳后，這名男子被擊倒，并試圖放開她并逃跑……，所以這一段應(yīng)該寫歹徒試圖逃跑而奶奶伙同其他人制服歹徒，并因此上了電視。要詳細(xì)寫奶奶是如何抓住那個歹徒的。第二段：后來，我們問:“奶奶，難道你沒有意識到你會被人盯上嗎?”本段應(yīng)該寫奶奶不畏懼任何壞人。并且通過奶奶的事跡，教會了我們一些人身哲理：我們要無所畏懼。10Part3范文呈現(xiàn)11范文呈現(xiàn)Afterawell-placedkick,themanwasdone,andattemptedtoreleaseherandrun.ButGrannywouldn’tstandforthat.Itwasnowherturntograbontohim,herhandsmadestrongfromhoursandhoursoffarmwork.Thatpoorfooldidn’thaveachance.Sheshoutedforhelptobystanders,andtheyrushedtoheraid.WithGrannyleadingthecharge,agroupofstrangerscametogetherandpinnedthemantothesidewalk,holdinghimthereuntilthepolicecame.Asilver-hairedwomanhadjustmadeacitizen’sarrest.12范文呈現(xiàn)Later,weasked“Granny,don’tyourealizeyoucouldhavegotyourselfhilled?”Granny’sanswerwassurprisinglyamusingandsimple:“Iwasn’tscaredofthatlittleidiot.I’dhadmybrand-newvanforlessthantwodaysandapackofgoodsandwichesformyoffice.Andtherewasnowayhewasgoingtogeteitherofthose!”Butwealllearnedanimportantlessonfromherthatday——thesamelessonthathadbeenbuildingthroughtheyears.Sheencouragedustopushboundariesandexpectations.Butevenmores