專題38書面表達(dá)之讀寫任務(wù)及概要寫作-2023年高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí) 精講與精練資料（教師版）

專題38書面表達(dá)之讀寫任務(wù)及概要寫作《考點(diǎn)?題型?技巧》第1步讀懂原文，明確篇章結(jié)構(gòu)寫概要之前，一定要先通讀原文，確定文章的體裁和主題。在正確把握文章主旨和段落大意后，明確原文的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。根據(jù)意義劃分文中的自然段，意義段的數(shù)量對(duì)應(yīng)的就是要點(diǎn)的數(shù)量。[提醒]一個(gè)自然段不一定是一個(gè)要點(diǎn)，有時(shí)幾個(gè)自然段說(shuō)明一個(gè)要點(diǎn)，有時(shí)一個(gè)自然段包含數(shù)個(gè)要點(diǎn)。第2步去次留精，提煉關(guān)鍵信息·明確全文的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)后，就要處理原文的內(nèi)容，目的是保留主要內(nèi)容，刪除次要內(nèi)容?！は日页鲋黝}句，同時(shí)標(biāo)注與主題相關(guān)的關(guān)鍵詞，最后歸納的要點(diǎn)往往是這些詞句的同義轉(zhuǎn)述?！ぴ拿枋鲂缘恼Z(yǔ)言、細(xì)節(jié)性的信息如列舉數(shù)字和列舉的事例等無(wú)須在概要中一一列出。第3步歸納要點(diǎn)合理轉(zhuǎn)換表達(dá)明確每個(gè)意義段的關(guān)鍵信息后，接下來(lái)應(yīng)用自己的語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)各意義段的要點(diǎn)。為避免和原文的句子重復(fù)，可利用同義轉(zhuǎn)述和句式轉(zhuǎn)換這兩種形式歸納要點(diǎn)。各要點(diǎn)的詞數(shù)應(yīng)根據(jù)文中對(duì)應(yīng)內(nèi)容的篇幅來(lái)定，分清主次。轉(zhuǎn)換表達(dá)注意遵循2個(gè)原則①不增不減不曲：客觀精準(zhǔn)地表述原文要點(diǎn)，不增添不屬于原材料的信息或刪減原材料關(guān)鍵信息或改變?cè)牧纤磉_(dá)的意思。②不繁：在正確理解原文的前提下，用簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)與所給材料一致的信息。第4步句式多樣注意過(guò)渡銜接在概要中合理使用非謂語(yǔ)、從句和特殊句式等使句式豐富多樣，但句子結(jié)構(gòu)不可過(guò)長(zhǎng)，也不要用太復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)。同時(shí)選用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡銜接詞銜接上下文，保證概要部分內(nèi)容的連貫性?！绢}型分析】1、請(qǐng)閱讀下面有關(guān)中國(guó)題材紀(jì)錄片(documentary)的對(duì)話，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇150個(gè)詞左右的文章。SuHua:Hi,LiJiang!DidyouseetheBBCdocumentaryonCCTV9lastweek?LiJiang:YoumeanDuFu:China’sGreatestPoet?Yes,Idid.Fantastic!SuHua:JustthinkanEnglishactorrecitesChinesepoems.LiJiang:Idon’treallyunderstandeverylineherecites,butIbelievehetrulylovesthepoemshimself.SuHua:Right.ItisreportedthatthefilmiswellreceivedoutsideChina.LiJiang:Yeah,It’smyfirsttimetohearChinesestoriestoldbyanEnglishspeaker.SuHua:Infact,documentariesaboutourcountryareplentifulbothathomeandabroad.Thesefilmscanhelpforeignfriendsbetterunderstandthisland-Chineseliterature,geographyhistory,food...LiJiang:Icouldn’tagreemore.（寫作內(nèi)容）1.用約30個(gè)詞概括上述對(duì)話的主要內(nèi)容；2.談?wù)勚袊?guó)題材紀(jì)錄片受到外國(guó)朋友歡迎的原因(至少兩點(diǎn))。（寫作要求）1.寫作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.不必寫標(biāo)題。（評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)）內(nèi)容完整語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】CCTV9broadcastDuFu:China’sGreatestPoet,adocumentaryproducedbyBBC.Thiswell-madefilmprovidesforeignaudienceswithafreshwayofbetterknowingChina’spastandpresent.DocumentariesaboutChina,producedeitherinChinaorinothercountries,arebecomingincreasinglypopularamongforeigners.Foronething,theoveralldevelopmentoverthepastdecadeshasbeensostrikingthattheyfeeleagertofamiliarizethemselveswithwhatisgoingoninChina.Foranother,Chinaenjoysalonghistoryandrichculture.IthasalwaysbeenanattractionforthosewhoarekeenonanythingthatisChinese.ThesedocumentariespresentasplendidpictureofChinainfrontoftheiraudiences-ithistory,landscape,art,food,oreventraditionalChinesemedicine.Becauseofthesefilms,someforeignershavebeguntothinkofcomingtoChina.Inthisway,theycanformatruepictureofChinathemselves.【解析】【分析】這是一篇讀寫任務(wù)?！驹斀狻康谝徊?審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過(guò)審題我們可以確定幾個(gè)方面的信息。要求閱讀中國(guó)題材紀(jì)錄片的對(duì)話，寫一篇150個(gè)詞文章。包括兩部分。(一)、用30詞概括對(duì)話內(nèi)容。(二)、談?wù)勚袊?guó)題材紀(jì)錄片受到外國(guó)朋友歡迎的原因。要求至少兩點(diǎn)原因。第二步:布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為四段。第一段，概括對(duì)話內(nèi)容。第二段和第三段，中國(guó)題材紀(jì)錄片受到外國(guó)朋友歡迎的原因。第四段，總結(jié)因?yàn)殡娪拔鈬?guó)人想來(lái)到中國(guó)。第三步:確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語(yǔ):producedby,provide…with,either…or,bekeenon,present,becauseof,inthisway,theoveralldevelopment，sostrikingthat，feeleagertofamiliarizethemselveswith.第四步:確定較為高級(jí)的句子:非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)adocumentaryproducedbyBBC；定語(yǔ)從句的運(yùn)用:IthasalwaysbeenanattractionforthosewhoarekeenonanythingthatisChinese.第五步:連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行過(guò)渡銜接:foronething,foranother.第六步:注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。【點(diǎn)睛】文章思路清晰，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，段落整齊，語(yǔ)篇連貫，層次清晰。使用了較為高級(jí)的句式:非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)adocumentaryproducedbyBBC；定語(yǔ)從句的運(yùn)用:IthasalwaysbeenanattractionforthosewhoarekeenonanythingthatisChinese.狀語(yǔ)從句和賓語(yǔ)從句的運(yùn)用theoveralldevelopmentoverthepastdecadeshasbeensostrikingthattheyfeeleagertofamiliarizethemselveswithwhatisgoingoninChina.這些高級(jí)句式的應(yīng)用提升了寫作的檔次，整個(gè)短文顯示出了作者高水平的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)能力2、閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Parentseverywherepraisetheirkids.JennBerman,authorofTheAtoZGuidetoRaisingHappyandConfidentKids,says,“We’vegonetotheoppositeextremeofafewdecadesagowhenparentstendedtobemorestrict.”Bygivingkidsalotofpraise,parentsthinkthey’rebuildingtheirchildren’sconfidence,when,infact,itmaybejusttheopposite.Toomuchpraisecanbackfireand,whengiveninawaythat’sinsincere,makekidsafraidtotrynewthingsortakeariskforfearofnotbeingabletostayontopwheretheirparents’praisehasputthem.Still,don’tgotoofarintheotherdirection.Notgivingenoughpraisecanbejustasdamagingasgivingtoomuch.Kidswillfeellikethey’renotgoodenoughorthatyoudon’tcareand,asaresult,mayseenopointintryinghardfortheiraccomplishments.Sowhatistherightamountofpraise?Expertssaythatthequalityofpraiseismoreimportantthanthequantity.Ifpraiseissincereandfocusedontheeffortnottheoutcome,youcangiveitasoftenasyourchilddoessomethingthatdeservesaverbalreward.“Weshouldespeciallyrecognizeourchildren’seffortstopushthemselvesandworkhardtoachieveagoal,”saysDonahue,authorofParentingWithoutFear:LettingGoofWorryandFocusingonWhatReallyMatters.“Onethingtorememberisthatit’stheprocessnottheendproductthatmatters.”Yoursonmaynotbethebestbasketballplayeronhisteam.Butifhe’soutthereeverydayandplayinghard,youshouldpraisehiseffortregardlessofwhetherhisteamwinsorloses.Praisingtheeffortandnottheoutcomecanalsomeanrecognizingyourchildwhenshehasworkedhardtocleantheyard,cookdinner,orfinishabookreport.Butwhateveritis,praiseshouldbegivenonacase-by-casebasisandbeproportionate(相稱的)totheamountofeffortyourchildhasputintoit.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Parentstendtogotoextremeswhenitcomestopraisingtheirkids.(要點(diǎn)一)Yet,bothtoomuchandtoolittlepraisecanbeequallydamaging.(要點(diǎn)二)Whengivingpraise,parentsshouldbesincereandconcentrateontheprocessinsteadoftheresult.(要點(diǎn)三)Similarly,theyoughttogivepraiseforhowmuchefforttheirkidshaveinvestedintheworkthey’reinvolvedin.(要點(diǎn)四)【解析】本次浙江高考書面表達(dá)采用了概要寫作題型。概要寫作是閱讀理解和書面表達(dá)的溝通橋梁，考查的是學(xué)生在實(shí)現(xiàn)自由的思維表達(dá)之前，對(duì)他人的信息在理解的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行概括表達(dá)的能力。選材上，提供一篇350詞以內(nèi)的短文，題材不限，要求考生寫出一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要?！驹斀狻客瓿梢黄乓獙懽鳎枰?jīng)過(guò)三個(gè)步驟，1.讀懂原文，抓住段落主題句。在閱讀過(guò)程中，需要準(zhǔn)確把握文章的段落大意，學(xué)會(huì)剔除非重要信息，弄清楚不同體裁的文章的內(nèi)部邏輯關(guān)系以及文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。2.組織語(yǔ)言，轉(zhuǎn)換表達(dá)。在找到主題句明確全文中心的基礎(chǔ)上，組織好語(yǔ)言，注重語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的獨(dú)立性和準(zhǔn)確性以及高級(jí)性，不全盤照抄原文句子，盡量用自己的語(yǔ)言轉(zhuǎn)換表達(dá)，同時(shí)要注意篇幅的比例安排，用較多的文字去表達(dá)重要的內(nèi)容。3.通讀全文，邏輯連貫。要牢記各段落要點(diǎn)之間的邏輯關(guān)系和自然銜接，用恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞去連貫全文。檢測(cè)訓(xùn)練檢測(cè)訓(xùn)練1、請(qǐng)閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇150詞左右的文章。LiJiang:Haveyouheardthis?AgroupofexchangestudentsfromtheUKarevisitingourschoolnextmonth.SuHua:Yes,Ihave.SomearealreadyrecommendingthetraditionalChinesedressforthewelcomeceremony.LiJiang:Butitseemspeoplehavedifferentopinions.SuHua:Whatdoyouthink?LiJiang:Ithinkit’sagoodidea.It’sanopportunitytomaketheChineseculturebetterknowntointernationalstudents.SuHua:Iagree.Butwedon’thavetodressthatway.That’snotourdailystyle.Besides,it’snotveryconvenient.LiJiang:Yousee,it’stheChineseculturethattheBritishfriendsarecomingfor.Justtherightoccasion.SuHua:Iprefertheschooluniform.It’snice.It’salsoabetterdisplayofourschoolculture.（寫作內(nèi)容）1.用約30個(gè)詞概括上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；2.在上述場(chǎng)合，你是否傾向于穿中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)服裝？請(qǐng)說(shuō)明理由(不少于兩點(diǎn))。（寫作要求）1.寫作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.不必寫標(biāo)題。（評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)）內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Possibleversionone:LiJiangandSuHuaarediscussingwhattowearwhenreceivingtheBritishstudentsnextmonth.LirecommendsthetraditionalChinesedresswhileSupreferstheschooluniform.IwouldbehappytoweartraditionalChineseclothesatthewelcomeceremony.Firstly,thisispreciselywhattheBritishvisitorsareexpecting.TheycometolearnaboutChineseculturewiththeirowneyes.TheirChinesepeersinthetypicalChinesedresswouldbehighlyimpressive.Theschooluniformsarefine,butnotspecialenoughtogiveauniqueChineseflavour.Secondly,theinconvenienceisnotaproblemifourpurposeistoshareChineseculture.Itisjusttheso-calledinconveniencethatdisplaystherichness,delicacyandgreatfascinationofChineseculturewithahistoryofthousandsofyears.ThetraditionalChineseclothes,itseemstome,willmaketheoccasionveryChineseandinvitingtotheBritishguests.Possibleversiontwo:LiJiangandSuHuadon'tagreeonwhattowearwhengreetingtheBritishstudents.LisuggeststraditionalChineseclotheswhileSuthinkstheschooluniformsaremoresuitable.IprefertheschooluniformtothetraditionalChinesedressatthewelcomeceremonynextmonth.AlthoughthetraditionalChinesedressmaylookmorebeautifulandstylish,itisalittlebitstrangetowalkaroundinit.Wefeelateaseinourschooluniformseveryday.What'smore,thetraditionalChinesedresscan'treflecttheuniquecultureofourschool.Fromthedesignandcolourofouruniforms,theBritishfriendswilllearnmoreaboutourschool.Besides,thechoiceofthetraditionalChinesedressmeansextramoney,andextratime,forwehavetochangeitbackaftertheevent.SotheschooluniformsareabetterchoicethanthetraditionalChinesedressforsuchanoccasion.【解析】【分析】本文是讀寫任務(wù)，今年的話題是關(guān)于中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)服裝的。【詳解】讀寫任務(wù)首先要寫好概括。概括短文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)實(shí)為客觀簡(jiǎn)要地轉(zhuǎn)述作者的觀點(diǎn)、論據(jù)和結(jié)論，概括包括兩個(gè)部分：主題句和支撐句。概括注意要抓住要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言精練，不能添加自己的見解，但是要用自己的語(yǔ)言概括。第二段用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡語(yǔ)引出自己的觀點(diǎn)（反對(duì)或贊成）。過(guò)渡語(yǔ)起承上啟下的作用，要顯自然、連貫。提出自己的觀點(diǎn)后要具體論證自己的觀點(diǎn)。最后一段要總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)，提出具體做法或號(hào)召，升華文章的主題。2、閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。It’sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanallstarttolookandsoundthesame.Nothingwillgiveyouthesenseofwhatitwillactuallybeliketoliveonacollegecampus(校園)likevisitingandseeingforyourselfthedorms,classroomsandathleticequipmentand,ofcourse,thestudents.Itseemsalittlecrazyoncesenioryearhitstofindthetimetovisitcollegecampuses,anditcanalsobepriceyiftheschoolsyouareapplyingtohappentobemorethanacarrideaway.Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomakesureyouaremakingtherightone.There’snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Infact,alotofcollegeapplicationsevenaskifyouhavevisitedcampus,andobviously,ifyouliveacrossthecountrythatwon’tbeasmuchofapossibility,butifyoulivenearby,gocheckitout!Ifcampusvisitsaren’tgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyou’dliketoattend.Itcansaveyoualotofheartacheifyouruleoutnowthethingsthatyoudon’tlikeaboutcertaincampuses,thingsthatyouwouldn’tknowunlessyouactuallyvisit.Now,iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLive.It’sachancetochatonlinewithadmissionsofficers,students,andcollegecounselors(顧問(wèn)),anditwon’tcostyouapenny!Youcanregisterforitsonlinecollegefairat.Whilevisitinganonlinecollegefaircan’ttaketheplaceofanactualcampusvisit,itcanbeaveryusefultoolthatalongwithallyourotherresearchwillhelpyoumakeaninformeddecisionaboutwhichcollegesoruniversitiesyou’dliketoattend._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’sreallyworthwhiletopayavisittotheirdesiredcollegespersonallybeforeapplying.Undoubtedly,studentsshouldvisittheirlocalcolleges,whichmaybeincludedinapplications.Atleast,theyshouldvisittheschoolandfigureoutitsrealconditionsinadvance.Forstudentswhoareshortofmoneyandtime,registeringfortheonlinecollegefairisagoodalternativetohelpthembetterunderstandschools.【解析】本文要求閱讀短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要，即用盡可能少的詞匯集中展現(xiàn)原材料的主要思想和觀點(diǎn)。這主要是考查學(xué)生把握文章主旨大意和段落大意的能力以及總結(jié)概括能力，熟練掌握從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等語(yǔ)法知識(shí)和遣詞造句的能力?！驹斀狻?.要先讀懂、讀透原作。這是準(zhǔn)確再現(xiàn)原文、寫好概要的前提。動(dòng)筆前多讀兩遍原文，直至弄懂讀透。2.抓住文中的關(guān)鍵句，確定寫作主題。開頭It'sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapply點(diǎn)明了本文主題；Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomakesureyouaremakingtherightone.There’snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.說(shuō)明了去大學(xué)看看的必要性和可行性；Ifcampusvisitsaren’tgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyou’dliketoattend.在時(shí)間上提供了更多選擇；iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLive.為不能親自去大學(xué)看的學(xué)生提供了另外一種方法。3.擬好提綱。有了提綱，寫概要時(shí)就會(huì)有章法，也不會(huì)遺漏原作中的要點(diǎn)。4.快速成文，反復(fù)推敲。按照文章要求和擬好的提綱一氣呵成，寫完初稿。5.對(duì)照修改潤(rùn)色，再讀原文，查看是否漏掉了重要信息或主要內(nèi)容。用詞是否恰當(dāng)，可有可無(wú)的刪掉。注意詞類、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的適當(dāng)調(diào)整。【點(diǎn)睛】范文觀點(diǎn)明確，重點(diǎn)突出，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式，如定語(yǔ)從句whichmaybeincludedinapplications.和whoareshortofmoneyandtime.動(dòng)名詞registeringonline作主語(yǔ)，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。3、請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面有關(guān)我國(guó)電影票房收入（box-officeincome）的柱狀圖及相關(guān)文字，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇150詞左右的文章。OneDayin2016.AtHome.Son:Mum,shallwegoandseeafilmtonight?Mother:Whybother?Wecanstayathomeandwatchfilmsonline.It’sconvenientwithournewandfasternetworkSon:Butitfeelsgoodinacinema.Mother:Andtheprice…Wehavetopay50yuanaticket.Son:Only10yuanmorethanlastyear.Mother:Butstillwecannotgetthemoney’sworth.Somefilmsarejustboring…【寫作內(nèi)容】1.用約30個(gè)單詞概述柱狀圖信息的主要內(nèi)容；2.我國(guó)電影票房收入變化的原因有哪些，簡(jiǎn)要談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎㄉ鲜鰧?duì)話僅供參考，原因不少于兩點(diǎn)）；3.談?wù)勀銓?duì)我國(guó)電影票房收入走向的看法，并簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明理由。【寫作要求】1.寫作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.不必寫標(biāo)題。【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】?jī)?nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)?！敬鸢浮縋ossibleversionone:Thebox-officeincomeofChinesemovieswitnessedaconstantincreasefromabout17billionyuanin2012toover40billionin2015.However,thatincreasesloweddownin2016.Thereasonsbehindthisarevarious.Thefasteconomicdevelopmentbefore2016wasprobablythemostpowerfulenginedrivingtheconstantgrowthinthebox-officeincome.Theapplicationofnewtechnologiesandthewideappealofmoviestarscouldalsoaccountfortheincrease.However,Chinasawadeclineinitseconomicgrowthratelastyear.Andtheinternetincreasedoptionsformovielovers.Consequently,someviewersbegantoturnawayfromcinemas,leadingtoaslowergrowth.China’seconomyisexpectedtogrowatamediumspeedinthecomingyears,soanincreaseispossibleintheinvestmentinthemovieindustryandthenumberofqualitymovies.Therefore,itsbox-officeincomewillprobablyenjoyaslightincrease.(150words)Possibleversiontwo:Asisindicatedinthegraph,thebox-officeincomeofChinesefilmsincreasedconstantlyfrom2012to2015,butitsgrowth,foronereasonoranother,sloweddownin2016.Theincreaseinthebox-officeincomecanbeattributedtoanumberoffactors.Thequalityoflifehasimprovedandwatchingfilmsisregardedasagoodmeansofentertainment.Besides,filmingtechnologyhasadvancedandmorequalityfilmsareonoffer.Moreover,theinternetplaysanimportantpart.Ontheinternet,peoplecanseekinformationabouttheirfavoritestarsandbuyticketsatadiscountaswell,whichisbothtime-savingandeconomical.However,thefilmmarketmaywitnessaslowdowninthenearfuture.Cinemashavegraduallygivenwaytotheriseoftheinternetandcellphones,andtheticketpriceisontheincrease.Therefore,thefilmindustryshouldmakegreatereffortstoattractmoreviewers.(150words)【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)要求考生根據(jù)英語(yǔ)短文寫一篇文章，總結(jié)短文大意，闡述對(duì)電影票房的看法，并說(shuō)明理由。文章為任務(wù)型讀寫，屬于議論文，主要使用第三人稱為主，第一人稱為輔。一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，一般過(guò)去時(shí)為輔?？忌紫葢?yīng)當(dāng)仔細(xì)閱讀短文，明確文章主旨；接著指出電影票房收入變化的原因，以及將來(lái)的走向；再在此基礎(chǔ)上合理安排好文章結(jié)構(gòu)。本文可用三段寫作：第一段用約30詞概括短文大意，提出文章主題；第二段闡述電影票房收入變化的原因；第三段論述電影票房將來(lái)的走向。在遣詞造句上，應(yīng)當(dāng)注意合理使用連接成分，以提高文章的邏輯性，如在列舉理由時(shí)可以用tobeginwith,what'smore,lastbutnotleast等；還應(yīng)盡量使用較復(fù)雜句型，如在總結(jié)全文大意時(shí)可以用定語(yǔ)從句、分詞結(jié)構(gòu)；在其他地方可以用主語(yǔ)從句、倒裝語(yǔ)序等。4、閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Althoughbeingfamousmightsoundlikeadreamcometrue,today’sstars,feelinglikezooanimals,facepressuresthatfewofuscanimagine.Theyareatthecenterofmuchoftheworld'sattention.Paparazzi(狗仔隊(duì))campoutsidetheirhomes,camerasready.Tabloids(小報(bào))publishthrillingstoriesabouttheirpersonallives.Justimaginenotbeingabletodoanythingwithoutbeingphotographedorinterruptedforasignature.Accordingtothepsychologists,celebrities(名人)worryconstantlyabouttheirpublicappearance.Eventually,theystarttolosetrackofwhotheyreallyare,seeingthemselvesthewayfansimaginethem,notasthepeopletheywerebeforeeveryoneknewtheirnames.Overtime,theyfeelseparatedandalone.Thephenomenonoftrackingcelebritieshasbeenaroundforages.Inthe4thcenturyBC,paintersfollowedAlexandertheGreatintobattle,hopingtopicturehisvictoriesforhisadmirers.WhenCharlesDickensvisitedAmericainthe19thcentury,hissold-outreadingsattractedthousandsoffans,leadinghimtocomplainabouthislackofprivacy.Tabloidsofthe1920sand1930sranarticlesaboutfilm-starsinmuchthesamewaythatmoderntabloidsandwebsitesdo.Beingapublicfiguretoday,however,isalotmoredifficultthanitusedtobe.Superstarscannotmoveaboutwithoutworryingaboutphotographerswithmoderncameras.Whentheysaysomethingsillyordosomethingridiculous,thereisalwaystheInternettospreadthenewsinminutesandkeeptheir"story"aliveforever.Iffameissotroublesome,whyaren'tallcelebritiesrunningawayfromit?Theansweristherearestillwaystodealwithit.Somestarsstaycalmbysurroundingthemselveswithtrustedfriendsandfamilyorbyescapingtoremoteplacesawayfrombigcities.Theyfocusnotonhowfamoustheyarebutonwhattheylovetodoorwhatevermadethemfamousinthefirstplace.Withtheseeffectiveapproaches,somecelebritiesrelievethestressandremainpopularwithfans.Consequently,thoughbeingfamousisdrivingsomestarscrazy,somewiseonesenjoywhatreputationbringsthem.【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文為說(shuō)明文。文章告訴我們，雖然成名聽起來(lái)像是夢(mèng)想成真，但今天的明星們，感覺(jué)自己就像動(dòng)物園里的動(dòng)物，面臨著我們很少人能想象的壓力，因?yàn)樗麄兪鞘澜珀P(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。名人經(jīng)常擔(dān)心他們的公開露面，隨著時(shí)間的推移，他們感到分離和孤獨(dú)。追蹤名人的現(xiàn)象由來(lái)已久，然而如今成為公眾人物比過(guò)去困難得多。超級(jí)明星的一舉一動(dòng)都離不開現(xiàn)代相機(jī)攝影師的關(guān)注。如果名聲是如此的麻煩，為什么不是所有的名人都在逃避它呢?答案是，仍然有辦法解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題。因此，雖然成名會(huì)讓一些明星發(fā)瘋，但一些明智的人卻享受聲譽(yù)帶給他們的東西。文章中的主題詞（句）依次為：第一段：facepressures/atthecenterofmuchoftheworld'sattention.第二段：worryconstantlyabouttheirpublicappearance/feelseparatedandalone第三段：Thephenomenonoftrackingcelebritieshasbeenaroundforages/thesamewaythatmoderntabloidsandwebsitesdo第四段：Beingapublicfiguretoday,however,isalotmoredifficultthanitusedtobe.第五段：therearestillwaystodealwithit/somewiseonesenjoywhatreputationbringsthem【參考范文】Livinginthepublicgaze,starssufferfromgreatpressure.（要點(diǎn)1）What’sworse,anxietyovertheirpublicappearancerobsthemoftheobjectiveself-image,whichleadstothefeelingofisolationinthelongterm.（要點(diǎn)2）Thoughbeingtrackedhasbeenaheadachetocelebritiesforcenturies,moderncamerasandtheInternetmakeithardertobefamousnowadays.（要點(diǎn)3、4）However,bydealingwiththestresswisely,starsstillcanstaypopularandhappy.（要點(diǎn)5）(77words)【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】范文通過(guò)詞匯與句法關(guān)系的轉(zhuǎn)換等手段，將各段的主題詞及要點(diǎn)巧妙第整合在一起，突出了文章的主題與目的。范文銜接詞的使用得當(dāng)，確保了文章意義的連貫。范文有如下亮點(diǎn)：1.同義詞替換。例如，要點(diǎn)1用“sufferfromgreatpressure”替換了原文中的“facepressure”。2.各類從句讓句子關(guān)系更加流暢。例如，要點(diǎn)2使用了定語(yǔ)從句，要點(diǎn)3、4使用了讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，這些從句讓各個(gè)要點(diǎn)表述的中心更加突出。3.銜接詞確保了概要的意義連貫。范文使用了What’sworse,Though,However等銜接方式，讓概要語(yǔ)篇結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，表述更加連貫。5、請(qǐng)閱讀下面文字及圖表,并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇150詞左右的文章.[寫作內(nèi)容]1.用約30個(gè)單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容;2.結(jié)合上述信息,簡(jiǎn)要分析導(dǎo)致交通問(wèn)題的主要原因;3.根據(jù)你的分析,從社會(huì)規(guī)范(rulesandregulations)和個(gè)人行為兩方面談?wù)勀愕玫降膯⑹?不少于兩點(diǎn))。[寫作要求]1.寫作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句;2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;3.不必寫標(biāo)題。[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]內(nèi)容完整,語(yǔ)言規(guī)范,語(yǔ)篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當(dāng)?！敬鸢浮縏hetrafficissueisahardnuttocrack.Itnotonlyaffectsoureverydaylife,butmayalsothreatenpeople’slives.Thethreeselectionspresentedabovearetypicalexamples.Quiteafewthingsgiverisetothetrafficproblem.Inspiteofthelarge-scaleconstructionofroadsandhighways,thereisstillmuchroomforimprovement,becauseoftheeverincreasingnumberofcarstheseyears.What’sworse,somedrivers,cyclistsandpedestriansdonotthinkitvitaltoobeytrafficrules.Infact,trafficrulesarepartoftherulesandregulationscloselyrelatedtopublicorder.Withoutthem,peoplecouldnotenjoyharmonyorthecountrywouldbeinchaos.Butrulesalonedon’tsecureanorderlysociety.Itisthepeoplewhoobeytherulesthatmatter.Itiseverybody’sdutytoobservethemtokeepoursocietyinorderandgoingontherighttrack.(150words)【解析】試題分析：今年江蘇高考英語(yǔ)采用了“材料類+圖形+提綱類”形式，綜合考查考生閱讀材料，識(shí)圖和寫作能力，較往年有所創(chuàng)新，也增加了難度。材料分為三部分：第一部分講述了一位老奶奶阻止車輛停放引發(fā)的爭(zhēng)議。第二部分講述了行人和自行車不遵守紅綠燈，導(dǎo)致交通事故發(fā)生的現(xiàn)象。第三部分是圖表和文字，反映近幾年車輛的數(shù)量激增現(xiàn)象。要求第一段用30個(gè)單詞概括材料內(nèi)容；第二段分析導(dǎo)致交通問(wèn)題的原因；第三段從社會(huì)規(guī)則和個(gè)人行為談?wù)剢⑹荆ú簧儆趦牲c(diǎn)）?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文嚴(yán)格按照“三步走”的格局，第一段用短短26字（不含標(biāo)點(diǎn)）概括了所給材料，得益于使用了“notonly…butalso…”這一經(jīng)典句型；第二段分析了導(dǎo)致交通問(wèn)題的原因，使用了“giveriseto,large-scaleconstructionof,theincreasingnumberof,(be)vitalto”等高級(jí)詞匯，同時(shí)“what’sworse”銜接詞的恰當(dāng)使用使該段條理清晰。第三段句型多樣，變換使用了“Without虛擬語(yǔ)氣，itis…who…強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，itisone’sdutytodosth.”等句型，為文章增色不少。6、閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Itisimportantthatyouteachyourbabytoreadatanearlyage.Why?Obviously,beingabletoreadisthebasisforanysuccessfuleducation,sotheearliertheystart,thebetter.Alltoooften,parentsleaveeducatingtheirchildrenuptoschools,whichprobablyexplainswhytheUnitedStatesiscurrentlyranked18thinitsrateofreadingandwriting.Teachingyourbabytoreadprovidesbrainexerciseandithasalsobeenshowntoincreasethebaby’sIQbecausethereissimplynobettertimeinaperson’slifeforlearningthanwhentheyarebabies.Duringthistime,theirbrainsaredevelopingrapidly.Thesoonertheybegintoread,thesoonertheycanbegintolearnothersubjects.Thisway,bythetimeyourchildrenbeginschool,theywillalreadyknowwhat’sbeingtaught,andwillbeputonthefasttrack.Maybetheywillevenskipagradedowntheroad.Oneofthecaseswas17-month-oldElizabethBarrettwhodrewpublic’sattention.Shewasgivenaseriesofwordsandevensentencesthatshecouldreadquitewell.Herparentshadbeenreadingtohersinceshewasbornandhadprovidedherwithaveryearlyeducation.Readingisthemostimportantthingtoteachbabiesatayoungage.Itdoesn’thavetobestressfulordifficultforyourchild.Learningcanbefunatsuchanearlyage,anditcanbeaccomplishedsoeasilythattheywon’thavetostruggleinordertolearn.Ifyou’reinterestedinteachingyourbabytoread，thebestwaytostartisbyspendingjustafewminuteseveryday.Flashcardsareahelpfultool.Simplyshowyourbabymatchingpictureontheoppositeside.Therearealsovideosthathelptoteachbabiestoread.Thereisnobettertimetoteachyourbabytoreadthanthepresent.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Teachingyourbabytoreadasyoungaspossibleiscrucialowingtothenecessityofobtaininggoodeducation.(要點(diǎn)一)Itneedsstartingassoonaspossiblebecausebabies’intelligencewillbeimprovedwhentheirbrainsdevelopfast.(要點(diǎn)二)Importantasitis,relaxationandeasinesscouldbebroughtintothelearningprocess.(要點(diǎn)三)Therefore,forpeoplekeenonteachingbabiestoread,itishightimetobeginwithsparingsometimeregularlywitheffectiveteachingmaterials.(要點(diǎn)四)【寫作分析】本文是一篇說(shuō)明文。文章介紹說(shuō)，為了獲得良好的教育，讓你的孩子從小就學(xué)會(huì)閱讀是非常重要的。這需要盡快開始，因?yàn)閶雰旱闹橇?huì)隨著大腦的快速發(fā)展而提高。重要的是，放松和輕松可以被帶入學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程。因此，對(duì)于那些熱衷于教寶寶閱讀的人來(lái)說(shuō)，現(xiàn)在應(yīng)該從定期抽出一些時(shí)間來(lái)閱讀有效的教材開始。1.要點(diǎn)摘錄①Itisimportantthatyouteachyourbabytoreadatanearlyage.Why?Obviously,beingabletoreadisthebasisforanysuccessfuleducation,sotheearliertheystart,thebetter.②Teachingyourbabytoreadprovidesbrainexerciseandithasalsobeenshowntoincreasethebaby’sIQbecausethereissimplynobettertimeinaperson’slifeforlearningthanwhentheyarebabies.③Learningcanbefunatsuchanearlyage,anditcanbeaccomplishedsoeasilythattheywon’thavetostruggleinordertolearn.④Ifyou’reinterestedinteachingyourbabytoread，thebestwaytostartisbyspendingjustafewminuteseveryday.⑤Thereisnobettertimetoteachyourbabytoreadthanthepresent.2.縝密構(gòu)思要點(diǎn)二和要點(diǎn)三之間形成因果關(guān)系，整合四、五要點(diǎn)3.遣詞造句①Teachingyourbabytoreadasyoungaspossibleiscrucialowingtothenecessityofobtaininggoodeducation.②Itneedsstartingassoonaspossiblebecausebabies’intelligencewillbeimprovedwhentheirbrainsdevelopfast.③Importantasitis,relaxationandeasinesscouldbebroughtintothelearningprocess.④Therefore,forpeoplekeenonteachingbabiestoread,itishightimetobeginwithsparingsometimeregularlywitheffectiveteachingmaterials.【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】[高分句型1]Teachingyourbabytoreadasyoungaspossibleiscrucialowingtothenecessityofobtaininggoodeducation.（teaching為動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)，用一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句總結(jié)了原文第一段的內(nèi)容）[高分句型2]Importantasitis,relaxationandeasinesscouldbebroughtintothelearningprocess.（用as引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，總結(jié)文章第三段的內(nèi)容）7、閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Themantarayisoneofthelargestfishesintheworld,reachingupto29feetinwidth.Andmantaraysaresomeofthefriendliestcreatures.Theyallowdiverstoswimrightuptothem.Unfortunately,thesegentleanimalsareinbigtrouble.Since2011,mantarayshavebeenlistedasathreatenedspeciesworldwide.Overfishingisconsideredthebiggestthreattogiantmantanumbers,bothintentionalandaccidental.Peoplecatchmantaraysfortheirgillplates—thepartsthroughwhichtheyfiltertheirfoodfromseawater—aresoldinChinaformedicalpurposes.Drivenbythehugedemand,fishermenhavehuntedthemmercilessly.From201