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書(shū)面表達(dá)高分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1.

寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容：

要點(diǎn)全，能根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.

語(yǔ)言表達(dá)：

句式豐富且靈活，錯(cuò)誤極少；能運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~表示順序和邏輯關(guān)系。3.

邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)：

三段式，首尾點(diǎn)題，事例典型。語(yǔ)言流暢，意思清楚、連貫。4.

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高分寫(xiě)作秘笈常考文體分類(lèi)指導(dǎo)考情概述

分析安徽中考的書(shū)面表達(dá)可知寫(xiě)作主要考查記敘文和說(shuō)明文。考生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要依據(jù)不同的文體特點(diǎn)，搭建寫(xiě)作框架。技巧點(diǎn)撥三六三寫(xiě)作方法（總—分—總）1.

開(kāi)頭三句：一句翻譯提示（題目中已給出）；一句點(diǎn)題（對(duì)應(yīng)題目）；一句解釋觀點(diǎn)。2.

主體六句：記敘文：事情的起因兩句、經(jīng)過(guò)兩句、結(jié)果兩句；說(shuō)明文：描述事物或解釋原因的三個(gè)方面，用上順序詞First/Next/Finally等；議論文：論點(diǎn)1

First

of

all,

兩句；

論點(diǎn)2

What’s

more,

兩句；

論點(diǎn)3

In

the

end,

兩句。3.

結(jié)尾三句：一句諺語(yǔ)；一句再點(diǎn)題；一句喊口號(hào)。記敘文

記敘文要求考生描述個(gè)人經(jīng)歷及感受。常見(jiàn)的寫(xiě)作模式為三段式。具體如下：第一段：點(diǎn)明主題（引出要介紹的人或事）①I(mǎi)’ll

never

forget…②The

person

I

love

most

is…③I

still

remember

the

day

when…④…

is

one

of

my

best

friends,

and

we

share

happiness

and

sadness

together.⑤Looking

back

to

the

past

three

years,

I

have

made

great

progress

in

my

study.⑥There

were

lots

of

unforgettable

experiences

in

my

memory

when

I

was

in

junior

high

school.第二段：描述事件（起因、經(jīng)過(guò)和結(jié)果）起因：

I

found

it

hard/difficult

for

me

to

do

sth.It

was

hard/difficult

for

me

to

do

sth.I

had

some

trouble/difficulty

（in）

doing

sth.I

felt

hopeless

at

sth.I

felt

disappointed

at

sth.經(jīng)過(guò)：

find

it/sth.+adj.+to

do

sth.take

part

in…take

one’s

advicespend

time/money

（in）

doing

sth.have

a

good

talk

with

sb.sb.

advised/asked/helped/encouraged/taught

me

to

do

sth.結(jié)果：

With

one’s

help,

I

have

made

great

progress

in…Thanks

to

sb.,

I

worked

out

the

problem

successfully.Finally/At

last/In

the

end,

I

came

up

with

good

ideas/ways

to

solve

the

problem

of…第三段：表達(dá)感受（感情升華）

I’m

thankful

to…

and

I’ll

learn

from…

I’m

proud

of

myself

because…I’ve

learned

a

lesson

from……

sets

a

good

example

for

me.It

was

such

an

interesting

trip

that

I’ll

never

forget

it.說(shuō)明文

說(shuō)明文通常考查做法建議、計(jì)劃安排和事物介紹。類(lèi)別1

做法建議第一段：點(diǎn)明主題（具體的事情）

①I(mǎi)t’s

important

for

us

to…,

but

how…

Here

are

some

suggestions.

②It’s

necessary

to…

in

our

life/study.

Here

are

some

ways

to

do

sth.

③There

are

some

things

we

need/should/must

do

in

order

to

do

sth.

④How

can

we

protect

the

environment/keep

healthy/…?

Here

are

my

suggestions.第二段：分點(diǎn)陳述

①Firstly/To

begin

with,

we

can/should/had

better

do

sth.

②Secondly/What’s

more/Besides,

it’s

our

duty

to

do

sth.

③Finally/Last

but

not

least,

it’s

a

good

idea

to

do

sth.第三段：再次點(diǎn)題（表達(dá)期待）

①I(mǎi)f

you

follow

my

advice

above,

you’ll

do

sth.

②I

hope

the

advice

above

will

be

helpful/useful

to

you.

③Only

in

these

ways

can

we

live

a

better

and

healthier

life.

④In

a

word,

as

long

as

we…,

we

will

do

sth.

⑤If

we

keep

doing

these

small

things,

I

believe

the

environment

will

be

better

and

better.

Let’s

take

action

from

now

on.類(lèi)別2

計(jì)劃安排第一段：點(diǎn)明具體活動(dòng)

①As

the

summer

vacation

is

coming,

I’ve

made

a

plan

for

it.

②Why

not

come

to

sp.?

I

have

a

good

plan.

③We’re

going

on

a

trip

to…

this

Sunday.

Here

is

my

trip

plan.第二段：具體活動(dòng)安排

①I(mǎi)t/The

activity

will/is

going

to

be

held

in/on+時(shí)間/地點(diǎn)

②Our

school

will

have/hold…

on/at+時(shí)間/地點(diǎn)

③We

will/are

going

to

have

a

lot

of

activities,

such

as+活動(dòng)

④On

the

first/second/…

day,

we

are

going

to

do

sth.第三段：表達(dá)希望

①I(mǎi)’m

sure

I’ll

have

a

meaningful

summer

holiday.

②In

a

word,

I

hope

all

of

us

could

enjoy

a

happy

and

meaningful

holiday/weekend.

③I’m

looking

forward

to

the

trip/summer

vacation/…類(lèi)別3

事物介紹第一段：說(shuō)明要介紹的事物（地點(diǎn)）是什么

①I(mǎi)’d

like

to

tell

you

something

about…

②As

we

all

know,

…

is

necessary

in

our

daily

life.

③Among

these…,

I

think

the…

is

the

most

important…

④I’d

like

to

share

my

favorite…

with

you.

⑤With

a

history

of

thousands

of

years,

…

is

a

beautiful

city.

⑥My

favorite

place

is…

and

it

is…第二段：介紹該事物（地點(diǎn)）的特點(diǎn)和背后的意義

①I(mǎi)t

always

reminds

me

of

my

happy

childhood

and

my

grandparents’

love

for

me.

②I

am

so

amazed

at…

because

it

makes

my

life

more

enjoyable

and

convenient.

③It’s

a

birthday

present

from

my

mother,

and

I

love

it

very

much.

④This

city

is

popular

with

tourists

not

only

for

its

pleasant

weather

but

also

for

its

places

of

interest.第三段：重申主題

①I(mǎi)t

will

be

exciting/necessary/helpful

to

have

a…!

②What

a

useful…!

③In

a

word,

…

is

really

of

great

importance

to

me.

It

makes

my

life

more

meaningful

and

colorful.議論文

議論文通常要求考生表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，并能運(yùn)用簡(jiǎn)單的論據(jù)支撐觀點(diǎn)，最后強(qiáng)化個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。常見(jiàn)的寫(xiě)作框架如下：第一段：提出觀點(diǎn)（通常由某個(gè)現(xiàn)象引出）

①I(mǎi)n

my

opinion,

it’s

important/necessary/helpful

to

do

sth.

②As

far

as

I’m

concerned,

students

should

be

allowed

to

have

pocket

money.

It’s

good

for

their

growth.

③…

plays

an

important

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