考博英語寫作一課件

Lecture1考博英語寫作概述

注意事項(xiàng)之一——字?jǐn)?shù)

注意事項(xiàng)之二——字跡

注意事項(xiàng)之三——考試做題的順序

注意事項(xiàng)之四——三段式結(jié)構(gòu)

注意事項(xiàng)之五——閱卷人的工作程序

注意事項(xiàng)之六——對(duì)自己有明確定位

注意事項(xiàng)之七——考前背誦模板，進(jìn)行填充練習(xí)

困境一、滔滔不絕“意識(shí)流”

對(duì)策：嚴(yán)格按照三點(diǎn)提綱來寫

困境二、無話可說真難受

對(duì)策：由具體細(xì)小的、瑣碎的、微不足道的事物所 引發(fā)思考

困境三、真情流露沒必要

對(duì)策：關(guān)注書面表達(dá)能力

困境四、英語表達(dá)憋得慌

對(duì)策：要先學(xué)人家怎么表達(dá),再學(xué)會(huì)自己表達(dá)

困境五、處于被動(dòng)危害大

對(duì)策：主動(dòng)把握,不能讓自己陷人被動(dòng)考研英語短文寫作格式錯(cuò)誤及糾錯(cuò)分析

題目的寫法文章的格式大小寫方面的錯(cuò)誤標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤及分析句子語法形式上的錯(cuò)誤1、漢語式句子誤：MyEnglishspokenisnotgood.

正：IamnotgoodatspokenEnglish.OrMyspoken Englishisnotgood.2、主謂不一致

誤：Oneofthesehousesneedrepairing.

正：Oneofthesehousesneedsrepairing.3、平行結(jié)構(gòu)誤用

(1)名詞(短語)平行結(jié)構(gòu)誤：Thespeakercalledattentiontothebeginningandhowit ended.

正：Thespeakercalledattentiontothebeginningandendof themovement

(2)形容詞平行結(jié)構(gòu)誤：Hewassympathetic,tolerant,andpeoplerespectedhim.

正：Hewassympathetic,tolerant,andrespectedbypeople.

(3)分詞平行結(jié)構(gòu)誤：Theboyswererunning,shoutingandtolaugh.

正：Theboyswererunning,shoutingandlaughing.4、斷裂句誤:Ispentalmostthreehoursonthephoneyesterday, Tryingtofindagaragetorepairmycar.正:Ispentalmostthreehoursonthephoneyesterday, tryingtofindagaragetorepairmycar.5、懸垂修飾語誤：Mytermpaperwasfinishedaftersittinguphalfthe night.

正：Aftersittinguphalfthenight,Ifinishedmyterm paper.主要存在問題：(1)不會(huì)審題，偏離主題。(2)用漢語思維，逐字翻譯。(3)用詞搭配不當(dāng)。(4)詞匯量小，表達(dá)困難，拼寫錯(cuò)誤。(5)句子邏輯關(guān)系混亂。例如：OurEnglishclassoftentoldstories.應(yīng)改為：WeoftentoldstoriesinourEnglishclass.

(6)不會(huì)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞轉(zhuǎn)承上下句子和段落。例：PeoplelearnEnglishtouseit,somelearnittostudyorworkabroad.OtherlearnittoreadbooksandmagazinesinEnglishorhavesomethingtodowithEnglish-speakingforeigners.采用適當(dāng)關(guān)聯(lián)詞，改進(jìn)為：PeoplelearnEnglishforpracticalpurpose:somelearnittostudyorworkabroad,whileotherslearnittoreadorcommunicateinEnglish.應(yīng)用文寫作WritingExercise1(P12) Youliveinaroomincollegewhichyousharewithanotherstudent.Youfinditverydifficulttoworktherebecauseyourroommatealwayshasfriendsvisiting.WritealettertotheAccommodationOfficeratthecollegeto 1) askforanewroomnextterm 2)

explainyourreasons,and 3)wantasingleroom.WritingExercise2Directions:Youtraveledbyplanelastweekandyoursuitcasewaslost.Youhavestillheardnothingfromtheairlinecompany.Writealettertotheairlineto 1)

explainwhathappened, 2)

describeyoursuitcase,and 3)

findoutwhattheyaregoingtodoaboutit.Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use“LiMing”instead.Youdonotneedtowritetheaddress.(10points)WritingExercise3

Directions:Yousawanadvertisementseekingtourguidesforalocaltravelagency.Writealettertothepersonneldepartmenttostate 1)

yourinterestinthejob 2)

whyyouarequalified, 3)

whenyoucanstartthejob.Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use“LiMing”instead.Youdonotneedtowritetheaddress.(10points)一、選詞1．

多用近義詞：Ithink/believe/argue/maintain/insist/deem/holdthat…,AsIseeit,…Inmyopinion,…Frommystandpoint,…solve/copewith/dealwith/putanendto/tackle…theproblemisimportant/isoftheutmostimportancetakepridein/beproudofThisproductenjoysagoodmarketinthatmarket.(Thisproductsellswellinthatmarket.)寫作準(zhǔn)備(P20—26)2．區(qū)分具體與抽象的詞抽象

具體good

kind,honest,generous,warm-hearted,selfless, friendlylaugh

smile,chuckle,sniggerscientist

physicist,biologist,chemistfish

shark,salmon,perch,eeltree

shrub,bush,pollard,oak,plane,pine,willow3．善于使用代詞Ascientistdrawsconclusionsbystudyingthefactshecollects.Suchsymbolsasareusedtorepresentchemicalelementsshouldbefirmlykeptinmind.

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英文句子的特性 1）完整：Englishisalanguage,languageissomethingusedtocommunicatewithotherpeople. 2）統(tǒng)一：MytroubleisthatIcannotspeakEnglishfluentlyandIlikeEnglishverymuch. 3）多樣：Shefeltnervousandfrightened.Shetookoutthekeyandunlockedthedoor. 4）簡(jiǎn)潔：Afterfivemonthsofhardwork,shefinallyreturnedbacktoherhome. 5）有效：Itisveryinterestingbecauseitbringsmepeace,loveandbeauty.(Itislikeamagicparadisefilledwithpeace,loveandbeauty.)三、段落

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段落的特性

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單一：Pollutionhasbecomeaseriousproblemaboutwhichweworry.Whereverweturnwefindpollution:pollutedair,pollutedwater,pollutedfoodandpollutedenvironment.Asweknow,thisisthreateningtheverysurvivalofthehumanrace.2）

連貫：Inordertoknowwhattheweatherwillbe,specialpeoplearehiredtoprovidethisinformation.Thesepeoplearecalledweathermen.Theyworkinaweatherstationeveryday.Someofthemobservetheweather;theothersanalyzeweatherinformation;andstillothersmakeforecastabouttheweather.Itisknownthattheirworkcansavethousandsoflivesandmillionsofdollarsinpropertydamage.2．

段落的構(gòu)成1）開頭段（1）開頭段的表達(dá)方法①

主題句法（useoftopicsentence）

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使用引語（useaquotation）③

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