戴云托福寫(xiě)作

WHOAMI男,可以檢驗(yàn),有官方證明。Englishname:Tom人生態(tài)度:快樂(lè)\寬容\進(jìn)取2000年加盟新東方。WHOAMI教授過(guò)下列課程:

寫(xiě)作\閱讀\語(yǔ)法\口語(yǔ)\聽(tīng)力\翻譯

OR高考\四六級(jí)\考研\(zhòng)實(shí)用英語(yǔ)\雅思\托福WHATCANIDOFORYOU新托福考試相關(guān)知識(shí)寫(xiě)作基本知識(shí)\訓(xùn)練方法\應(yīng)試技巧英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方法\建議\參考書(shū)推薦參考書(shū)俞敏洪

《托福詞匯詞根+聯(lián)想記憶法》張道真《實(shí)用英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法》戴云《托福語(yǔ)法滿(mǎn)分精要》WHATCANIDOFORYOU留學(xué)申請(qǐng)相關(guān)知識(shí)如何奠定你留學(xué)申請(qǐng)的優(yōu)勢(shì)1.TOEFL和GRE，SAT，GMAT，

LSAT成績(jī)2.學(xué)校各門(mén)功課的考試成績(jī)（GPA）和排名3.個(gè)人陳述，讀書(shū)計(jì)劃和三封推薦信

4.發(fā)表的文章和著作5.獲得的獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)和榮譽(yù)(教學(xué)科目，體育，文學(xué)，藝術(shù)等）6.領(lǐng)導(dǎo)和參加的學(xué)術(shù)研究和社會(huì)實(shí)踐項(xiàng)目（發(fā)明和專(zhuān)利，論文）7.學(xué)生會(huì)工作和社團(tuán)工作成績(jī)8.國(guó)外學(xué)習(xí)生活和旅游經(jīng)歷9.令人震撼的人生經(jīng)歷和特質(zhì)參加出國(guó)考試,你能得到什么ScholarshipCertificateofEnglishproficiencyExperienceofchallengingyourlimitExperienceofovercominghardshipsFatalmeetingofyourlove\friendsWHATCANIDOFORYOU我的人生經(jīng)驗(yàn)和教訓(xùn)(主要是教訓(xùn))社會(huì)科學(xué)和人文知識(shí)的極淺顯介紹我們的目標(biāo)是:

沒(méi)有蛀牙!WHOAREYOU你來(lái)自哪里?你想去哪里?為什么?你的目標(biāo)可以實(shí)現(xiàn)嗎?---我的諾貝爾夢(mèng)想WHOAREYOU你有何準(zhǔn)備?你的優(yōu)點(diǎn)?你的缺點(diǎn)?你有信心嗎?

AllroadsleadtoRome?

Hardworkleadstosuccess?

Wherethereisawill,thereisaway?

你知道嗎?有一位偉大的科學(xué)家曾經(jīng)說(shuō)過(guò)…理想與人生價(jià)值科學(xué)家------愛(ài)因斯坦文學(xué)------莎士比亞雜交水稻------袁隆平新東方------俞敏洪托福------戴云???-------親愛(ài)的你ToshowortoshowoffBethebestofall;orBethebestofthecrowd;orBethebestofyourselfToshowortoshowoffBethebestinonefield;orBethebestinonepoint;orBethebestofyourself磚頭的用途1---3種:建房子,墊腳,砸人4---10種10---20種21---560種ExploreandactivateyourpotentialBethebestofyourselfBeststructureBestsentences

Bestwords

Longestpossible——“黃金規(guī)則一”基本要求練習(xí)句型變換和擴(kuò)充，每周兩個(gè)練習(xí)寫(xiě)?yīng)毩⒆魑?每周兩篇。加強(qiáng)閱讀和聽(tīng)力訓(xùn)練。

基本要求閱讀完教材:OFFICIALGUIDE

LONGMANPREPARATIONCOURSE

自編講義,尤其是范文，句型集及作文題庫(kù)

GeneralIntroductionto

iBTTOEFLReading:60---100minsListening:60---90minsBreak:10minsSpeaking:20minsWriting:55minsGeneralIntroductionto

iBTTOEFLTotaltime:4hoursTotalscore:120StartingTime:September,2006GeneralIntroductionto

iBTTOEFLWritingContent:integratedwritingandindependentwritingScore:rawscore:0~5scaledscore:0~30Time:Integratedwriting:20minutesReading：3mins\230—300wordsListening:2mins\230—300wordsindependentwriting:30minutesWordrange:Integratedwriting:150---225wordsindependentwriting:300words以上新舊托福分?jǐn)?shù)對(duì)照表請(qǐng)看:重要分?jǐn)?shù)的位置120---100115---99.5110---96.8105---93.6100---89.095---8590---79.785---73.180---66.275---59原始分?jǐn)?shù)和最終分?jǐn)?shù)換算表5303.5224.75293.25214.5283204.25272.75184252.5173.75242.2515重要分?jǐn)?shù)的位置30---97.929---95.928---93.427---90.525---87.224---82.923---82.922---77.421---72.420---66.9學(xué)習(xí)新托福寫(xiě)作須知美式英語(yǔ)或英式英語(yǔ)?詞匯課或語(yǔ)法課或?qū)懽髡n?字?jǐn)?shù)重要嗎?結(jié)構(gòu)重要嗎?拼寫(xiě)重要嗎?

學(xué)習(xí)新托福寫(xiě)作須知(續(xù))

------書(shū)面語(yǔ)或口語(yǔ)?

PhotographTelevisionLaboratorydormitoryMathematics

學(xué)習(xí)新托福寫(xiě)作須知(續(xù))

------書(shū)面語(yǔ)或口語(yǔ)?

&Eg.∵∴KidCan’t

學(xué)習(xí)新托福寫(xiě)作須知(續(xù))

------語(yǔ)法重要嗎?

Peopleworkinginbigcompanyaresupposedtobeabletousecomputer.Thereisanevidencethatadvertisingprofoundlyaffectshumanbeingtheworldover.Apersonwithbroadandprofoundknowledgecanhaveabetterlifethanthepersonwhodoesnot?Themanbittenbythehomelessdoghasdied.Judgmentsmadeinmostofthebookarebelievable.ThemajorityofChinesearefondofwatchingTV.Alargeamountofpeoplegoabroadtolearnadvancedknowledge.Dinosaurshaveextincted.學(xué)習(xí)新托福寫(xiě)作須知(續(xù))

------句子是文章的最基本單位句子訓(xùn)練方法三種句子訓(xùn)練方法(一)1.用多種方法表達(dá)同一句意.

例如:A對(duì)B很重要.1）AisimportanttoB.2）Aplaysanimportantrole\partinB.3）AisofimportancetoB.4）Bcannotlive\develop\grow\survivewithoutA.5）AistoBwhatthefoundationistoaskyscraper\wateristofish.6）Aisessential/significant/crucial/critical/vitaltoB.7）TheimportanceofAtoBcanneverbeexaggerated\denied\ignored.2.擴(kuò)充句子.

將一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句進(jìn)行擴(kuò)充,增加至15字,25字,35字,盡量使用不同的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu),如同位語(yǔ),插入語(yǔ),非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu),各種從句,并列結(jié)構(gòu)等。（教主要求：文章里多于25字的句子至少有3句。）句子訓(xùn)練方法(二)句子訓(xùn)練方法(三)3.對(duì)句式進(jìn)行各種變化。句子的變化句子的分類(lèi)五大句型特殊句型（倒裝句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句，修辭問(wèn)句，并列結(jié)構(gòu)，各種從句，插入語(yǔ)，同位語(yǔ)，等等）句子的變化方式句子的分類(lèi)陳述句,疑問(wèn)句,感嘆句和祈使句簡(jiǎn)單句,復(fù)合句,復(fù)雜句和復(fù)合復(fù)雜句主動(dòng)句和被動(dòng)句五大句型S+ViS+Vt+OS+Vt+Oi+OdS+Vlink+CS+Vt+O+C句子的變化方式開(kāi)頭的變化(名詞,不定式,介詞詞組,分詞…)結(jié)尾的變化長(zhǎng)短句的變化主被動(dòng)的變化各種句式的變化開(kāi)頭的變化范例Cheatingontestsrepeatedlyinvitesself-defeat.Repeatedcheatingontestsinvitesself-defeat.Tocheatontestsrepeatedlyistoinviteself-defeat.Thefactthatyoucheatontestsrepeatedlyinvitesself-defeat.Foranyonetocheatontestsrepeatedlyistoinviteself-defeat.Whoevercheatsontestsrepeatedlyistoinviteself-defeat.Leadto＼resultin\inviteResultfromBecauseof\dueto\thanksto\owingto\byreasonof\onaccountof\Because\for\since\as因果關(guān)系的表達(dá)Asaresult\outcome\consequenceofInconsequence\intheend\consequentlyThe\effect\influence\impact…Affect\influenceSotherefore\thereby\hence\thus段落的實(shí)現(xiàn)比較對(duì)照法（整體\分項(xiàng)比較）整體比較：A：a1,b1,c1B：a2,b2,c2分項(xiàng)比較：a1,b1a2,b2a3,b3段落的實(shí)現(xiàn)分類(lèi)法定義法例如：Parentsarethebestteachers.Playingagameisfunonlywhenyouwin.銜接手段使用連接詞和短語(yǔ)(表并列\(zhòng)轉(zhuǎn)折\遞進(jìn)\因果\比較\對(duì)照\(chéng)舉例)使用代詞使用語(yǔ)意的粘連精彩句型1Thelecturediscusses…whichdiffersfromthemainideainthereadingthat…精彩句型2

Theprofessormadethepointthat…Thereading,incontrast,heldadifferentview.Anotherimportantpointshowedinthelisteningmaterialisthat…butthereadingpresentsaconflictingideathat…Finally,theprofessorstatedthat...whichchallengesthestandpointmadebythewriterwhosaidthat...Ingeneral,theprofessordiscussedtheproblemof…thatthereadingviewedinacontrary\opposing\differentangle.精彩句型3

Accordingtothelecture…ontheotherhand\whilethereadingstatedthat…

精彩句型4Theprofessormadethepointthat…onthecontrary\incontrast\however,thewriterdemonstratedanideathat…

精彩句型5Thelecturesupports\illustratestheideathat…Thelecturecontradicts\refutes\iscontraryto\istheoppositeoftheideathat…

精彩句型6Contrarytothebeliefinthepassagethat…theprofessorsaysthat…Theprofessorrefutestheviewpointshowedinthepassagethat…bysayingthat…對(duì)材料的指稱(chēng)Thespeaker\lecturer\professor\listeningmaterial\lecture\talkThewriter\author\readingmaterial\writing\passage時(shí)態(tài)的運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)or一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)注意框架部分時(shí)態(tài)的一致性and學(xué)術(shù)內(nèi)容的時(shí)態(tài)要根據(jù)上下文來(lái)確定重要人名舉例WilliamShakespeareGeorgeWashingtonThomasJeffersonFranklinRooseveltAbrahamLincolnBillGatesChristopherColumbusWinstonChurchillNeilArmstrong（astronomer）LouisArmstrong(singer）DwightD.EisenhowerMargaretMitchellMarilynMonroe

O.HenryPearlS.BuckJohnF.KennedyMarkTwainTheodoreRooseveltAlbertGore,Jr.ThomasEdisonAlexanderFlemingErnestHemingwayHenryFord

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WaltDisney重要專(zhuān)用名詞舉例TheStatueofLibertyTheBostonTeaPartyTheYangtzeRiverTheMississippiRiverThePulitzerPrizeMountRushmoreNationalMemorialTheRockyMountainsMcDonald’sHarvard\Princeton\YaleUniversityshockingly\unusually\notably\noticeably\overwhelmingly\strikingly\awfully\exceedingly\dramatically\highlyimpressively\strongly插入語(yǔ)Anewfactorywouldcontaminatethelivingspaceofmostofourtown’sinhabitantstosomedegree.Anewfactorywould,tosomedegree,contaminatethelivingspaceofmostofourtown’sinhabitants.常用作插入語(yǔ)的副詞

indeed，surely，nonetheless，however，nevertheless，notwithstanding,admittedly,obviously，besides,furthermore,briefly,similarly,

honestly\frankly\generally(speaking)，

naturally，luckily\fortunately，astonishingly,conversely,undeniably,undoubtedly常見(jiàn)的作插入語(yǔ)的形容詞或短語(yǔ)

strangetosay，needlesstosay，mostimportantofall，worstofallinsum\short\summary，inotherwords，inasense，ingeneral，inmyview\opinion\judgment，

inconclusion，inthefirstplace，

inconsequence,inadditionOnthecontrary,incontrast常用作插入語(yǔ)的介詞短語(yǔ)

tomyjoy\delight\satisfaction\surprise\astonishment\amazement\regret\disappointment，

ofcourse,forinstance\example,infact,asamatteroffact常用作插入語(yǔ)的不定式短語(yǔ)

tobesure，tosumup，totellthetruth,tostartwith，插入句

Iamsure，

Ibelieve\wonder\suppose，itseems，asIseeit，whatisimportant(serious)，I’mafraid，itissaid明喻

1.使用明喻需要具備的條件：本體和喻體不能是同一類(lèi)事物，并且是本質(zhì)不同的；本體和喻體必須有相似點(diǎn)（即可比性）；二者的相似點(diǎn)要能夠引起比喻聯(lián)系；喻體是形象的，具體的，人們熟悉的和常用的。2.明喻使用的特征詞匯3.喻體的選擇：注意中西方文化的差異使用明喻的標(biāo)志性詞匯as:Beautyisassummerfruit,whichiseasytocorruptandcannotlast…seem:Thegateofthebuildingseemstobetheentrancetoavasthiveofsixorsevenfloors.like:Lifewaslikeaboxofchocolate…asif/asthough:Itrainedasiftheflood-gatesofHeavenwereopened,pare/liken…to…:Shakespearecompared/likenedtheworldtoastage.as…as…:Hedrinksasmuchasafish.theway(inwhich):Ishouldsmellitthewayacatsmellsamouse.mightaswell…as:Youmightaswellthrowyourmoneyintotheditchasgiveittohim.nomore…than/notanymore…than:Scienceisbuiltwith…AistoBwhatCistoD/WhatCistoD,thatAistoB/AsCistoD,AistoB:Thegovernmentistoacountrywhattheheartistoaperson.中西方文化寓意相同的：ascoldasice（像冰一樣冷），asfatasapig（胖得像豬），ascunningasafox（像狐貍一樣狡猾），asstillasdeath（死一般沉寂），asgracefulasaswan（像天鵝一樣美麗），aschasteasice（冰清玉潔），asgreedyasawolf（像狼一樣貪婪），asloyalasadog（像狗一樣忠誠(chéng)），ashandsomeaspaint（美麗如畫(huà)）中西方文化寓意不同的：toeatlikeahorse（像馬一樣能吃），todrinklikeafish（像魚(yú)一樣能喝），likeadrownedrat（落湯鼠一樣），likeapeacockamongsparrows（像孔雀站在麻雀里），likeahenonahotgirdle（像熱烤盤(pán)上的母雞），asdrunkasarat（爛醉如泥），asmerryasacricket（像蟋蟀一樣快樂(lè)），aspoorasachurchmouse（窮得像教堂里的耗子），asthinaslath（骨瘦如柴），ascloseasanoyster（像牡蠣一樣閉嘴），asstupidasagoose（愚蠢得跟鵝一樣）暗喻通常直接用喻體做句子的賓語(yǔ)或者定語(yǔ)等成分來(lái)實(shí)現(xiàn)比喻。常見(jiàn)的習(xí)慣用語(yǔ)：teachafishtoswim（教魚(yú)游泳——班門(mén)弄斧）featherone’snest（往自己的巢里弄羽毛——中飽私囊）beardthelioninhisden（在獅子的洞口拔它的胡須——虎口拔牙）addinsulttoinjury（給受傷的人以侮辱——雪上加霜）castpearlsbeforeswine（把珍珠放在豬面前——對(duì)牛彈琴）holdthecandletothedevil（為惡魔打火把——助紂為虐）cryupwineandsellvinegar（吆喝酒卻賣(mài)醋——表里不一）fishintheair（在空氣中釣魚(yú)——水中撈月）lockthestabledoorafterthehorseisstolen（馬被偷了后上鎖——亡羊補(bǔ)牢）killtwobirdswithonestone（一石二鳥(niǎo)）setafoxtokeepone’sgeese（讓狐貍看管鵝群——引狼入室）letsleepingdogslie（讓睡覺(jué)的狗躺著吧——不要打草驚蛇）kickagainstthepricks（朝刺上踢腿——以卵擊石）letthecatoutofthebag（讓貓爬出袋子——露出馬腳）holdawolfbytheears/takethebullbythehorns（抓住狼的耳朵/公牛的角——騎虎難下）aflashinthepan（火藥池的火光——曇花一現(xiàn)）sitontwochairs/standontwoboats/ridetwohorsesatthesametime（腳睬兩只船修辭問(wèn)句

1.勿須回答2.起強(qiáng)調(diào)作用

修辭問(wèn)句

舉例:Willanybodywhoisconcernedwiththeecologicalprotectionagreewiththeplantograbthealreadylimitedlandforthosepoorandenchantingendangeredspecies?頭韻Practicemakesperfect.Loveme,lovemydogs.Timeandtidewaitfornoman.Moneymakesthemarego.Cleanandclear;CocaColaAllroadsleadtoRome.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway