四級(jí)作文1引言

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15%106.5Forwhom?評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)滿分15分分為2，5，8，11，14五檔1-3分：條理不清，思維混亂，語言支離破碎，大部分句子有錯(cuò)誤，且多為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤4-6分：基本切題，表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差，有較多嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤7-9分：基本切題，有些地方表達(dá)不清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫，語言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一#些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。10-12分：切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤。13-15分：切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫，基本無語言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。（不多于3個(gè)）分?jǐn)?shù)對(duì)應(yīng)15--106.514--100.513--94.512--9011--85.510--819--76.58--727--67.56--635--344--55.53--52.52--49.51--46.5思考：如何炮制出一篇閱卷老師喜聞樂見的文章？40秒定生死三眼內(nèi)容不重要，語言才重要框架明晰，邏輯合理語言準(zhǔn)確，搭配地道評(píng)判原則主題句層次性多樣性準(zhǔn)確性對(duì)策層次感最好用短語或副詞來表達(dá)首先：atthefirstplace,firstofall,firstthingsfirst,firstandforemost,tobeginwith,tostartwith,foronething,ononehand,forastart其次：inaddition,additionally,plus,moreover,what’smore,furthermore,moreimportantly,moresignificantly,foranother,ontheotherhand,still最后：atlast,lastly,finally,generally,intheend,attheend,lastbutnotleast文章時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)一般過去時(shí)一般將來時(shí)現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)主+謂主+謂+賓主+謂+間賓+直賓主+謂+賓+賓補(bǔ)主+系+表基本句型并列句兩個(gè)意義相近，結(jié)構(gòu)相似的簡(jiǎn)單句and表示順承while表示對(duì)比but/yet表示轉(zhuǎn)折for/so表示因果or/either

…or表示選擇then表示時(shí)間and/so/neither/nor表示并列notonly...butalso表示遞進(jìn)兩個(gè)以上有主次之分的簡(jiǎn)單句。（其實(shí)就是讓句子充當(dāng)一個(gè)單詞的成分）名詞性從句：主語、賓語、表語、同位語定語從句：相當(dāng)于一個(gè)形容詞狀語從句：相當(dāng)于一個(gè)副詞復(fù)合句常見技巧插入倒裝代替省略分詞強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)修辭同義替換Show–indicate,unfold,display,depict,demonstrate,illustrateDeep–profoundPopular–prevalentSee–witnessPeople–individualObvious–apparentAdvantage–merit,virtueDisadvantage–demerit,drawback,defectGreatly–tremendously,drastically,dramaticallyThing–affair,business,matter,issue,phenomenonStop–restrainGet–attain,obtainSupport–upholdRapiddevelopment–boomAllkindsof–agreatvarietyofSuccessful–makeremarkableachievementsKeepabalancebetweenAandB–strikeabalancebetweenAandBTryone’sbestto–commitoneselftosth俗套的表達(dá)——中槍了嗎？Thinkover–takeintoconsiderationFindout–comeupwithBeunwillingto–bereluctanttoAccordingto–inaccordancewithInotherwords–putitinanotherwayNomatterwhat…--byallmeansMoreandmore–increasing,growingAttractone’sattention–arouseone’sawarenessBefacedwith–beconfrontedwithAlotof–anumberof,manya,plentyofSupport–infavorofEverycoinhastwosides–nogardenhasnoweedsGetmanybenefits–reaphugefruitLearningknowledgeisournumberonetask.Acquiringknowledgeisournumberonetask.Yesterdaythereisabigsnow.Yesterdaytherewasaheavysnow.Solvethisproblemiseasy.Tosolvethisproblemiseasy.Itiseasytosolvethisproblem.Xi’anisworthvisiting.Xi’anisveryworthvisiting.Xi’anisveryworthyofourvisitingXi’anisworthtovisitXi’anisworthavisitVisitingXi’aniswellworth正文：總分總introduction--body--conclusionintrodu