【法律類(lèi)】大作文教材

雅思大作文高級(jí)教材一一法律類(lèi)一、話題簡(jiǎn)介法律類(lèi)鯉思寫(xiě)作話題是所有話題類(lèi)型中考生們普遍反映最怵的，感覺(jué)最無(wú)從下手的題目當(dāng)屬法律與犯罪類(lèi)型的題目。由于這部分內(nèi)容可能比較脫離考生的實(shí)際生活，所以寫(xiě)起來(lái)不如環(huán)境類(lèi)、教育類(lèi)話題那么的得心應(yīng)手。雖然說(shuō)這類(lèi)題目出題的頻率相對(duì)來(lái)說(shuō)并不是非常的頻繁，但是如果學(xué)生在備考中沒(méi)有對(duì)此類(lèi)話題具有針對(duì)性的總結(jié)和復(fù)習(xí)的話，相信很難在寫(xiě)作中取得什么理想的分?jǐn)?shù)。最常見(jiàn)的話題類(lèi)型有兩種：.犯罪分子處罰方式即"如何去處理犯罪分子"的問(wèn)題；具體包括延長(zhǎng)監(jiān)禁時(shí)間是最好的處罰方式；應(yīng)該讓罪犯?jìng)兘邮苈殬I(yè)教育；勞動(dòng)體罰是不是最有效的處罰方式；應(yīng)該加強(qiáng)刑法力度來(lái)減少犯罪；是否應(yīng)該保留死刑等.特殊人群犯罪情況即"什么人犯罪的問(wèn)題”的問(wèn)題；具體包括青少年日益上升的犯罪率，女性犯罪或者老年人犯罪等特殊群體犯罪情況等二、法律類(lèi)話題分類(lèi)及思路柘展方法.犯罪分子處罰方式：例題：Puttingcriminalsintoprisonisnoteffectiveindealingwiththeproblem.Educationandjobtrainingshouldbeofferedtothem.Doyouagreeordisagree?犯罪問(wèn)題，是直接關(guān)進(jìn)監(jiān)獄還是進(jìn)行教育，你是同意還是不同意呢？思路分析：主體分析法、分類(lèi)法、反正法主體：Criminals;government;victims;thegeneralpublicArgumentsforprison:1）監(jiān)獄同教育或就業(yè)培訓(xùn)相比有很強(qiáng)的阻嚇作用，這樣可以有效的抑制犯罪率的上升，讓人們不敢犯罪。Comparedwitheducationorjobtraining,prisonsmayhavemoreeffectsonstoppingpotentialcriminalsfromcommittingcrimes.Therefore,itcansharplydecreasethecrimerate.Instarkcontrasttoplacingcriminalsoneducationalcoursesoremploymentretraining,prisonsappearmoreeffectiveindeterringpotential,would-bewrongdoersfromcommittingcrimes,thusdrasticallydecreasingthelikelihoodofrisingcrimerate.Detersbfromdoingsth）監(jiān)獄更多的對(duì)罪犯來(lái)說(shuō)是一種懲罰，因此能夠避免再犯。Imprisonmentisalsoawaytopunishpeoplewhohavecommittedcrimes.Asaresult,theyareinthefearofsettingfootintojailseveragainandmaynotcommitacrimeagain.Beinglockedupbehindthebarsisapunitivemeasureimposedoncriminalswhoarehighlyunlikelytoturnintoarecidivistinconsiderationoftheirfearofsettingfootintojailseveragain.Argumentsforeducationandjobretraining1）罪犯在監(jiān)獄里所被包圍的是一群囚犯，這對(duì)罪犯的改造不是好的，反而是不好的影響。接受教育可以讓罪犯在一個(gè)積極的環(huán)境里，真正的意識(shí)到對(duì)與錯(cuò)。Imprisonmenthasthedestructive,ratherthanconstructiveimpactoncriminalswhoarelockedupinprison,surroundedbypeoplewhoprobablyhavecommittedevenmoreseriouscharges.Educationservestocorrectanymisconceptionoreliminatetwistedthoughtstheyhavebyimmersingtheminapositiveenvironment.2）大多數(shù)罪犯往往是沒(méi)有什么文化知識(shí)和生存技能，出獄后通常很難找到工作。教育和就業(yè)培訓(xùn)能夠讓他們?cè)谌蘸蟮纳钪锌孔约荷嫦氯?，而不至于因?yàn)闆](méi)有收入來(lái)源而再次誤入歧途。Asignificantproportionofcriminalsaresadlyilliteratewithoutadequatefundamentalknowledgeandsurvivalskillsanditwouldn,tbeeasyforthemtofindadecentjobafterbeingreleasedfromthejail.Withconvenientaccesstoeducationandjobretraining,theyareabletosurvivebythemselves,greatlyreducingthechanceofbecomingarecidivistintimeswhentheyarefinanciallychallenged.anincreasingnumberofpeopleanincreasinglypopularissue練習(xí)：Nowadays,wearefacingthtncreasinglyseriouscrimesituation.Cancapitalpunishment（deathpenalty）everbejustified合理的Moreandmore+adj.Itcanbeprovedtobejustifiedthat....Whethersthisjustifiedhastriggere（弓|發(fā)）aheateddebate.現(xiàn)在我們面臨日益嚴(yán)重的犯罪情況，是否應(yīng)該有死刑？思路分析：主體分析法和分類(lèi)法Argumentsagainstcapitalpunishment1）死刑只是對(duì)罪犯的一種處罰，而并不能夠?qū)⒎缸镄袨橹惺芎φ呱旎?，或者賠償其所遭受的傷害Capitalpunishment,whicheventhoughmanagestobringthecriminalstojustice,couldbynomeanscompensateforphysical,andmentalsufferingsinflictedonvictims,orinsomeextremecases,bringbacktheirlives.）無(wú)論一個(gè)人犯多大的錯(cuò)誤，其他人都無(wú)權(quán)剝奪其生命。（人權(quán)）deprivesbofsthItisentirelyunjustifiedtodepriveoneofhis/herrightstoliveregardlessofhowinsanelysevereandcrueltheoffenseshe/shehascommittedare.（Thissubjectmatterhasboiledtothecontroversialissueofhumanrights））死刑犯的尸體的處理（是否可以用于器官移植等等）將是一個(gè)非常具有爭(zhēng)議的道德問(wèn)題。Howthebodyofthedeceasedcriminalisgoingtobedisposedof（usedfororgantransplant,forinstance）willbeboundtoraisegravebothethicalandsocialimplications.Argumentsforcapitalpunishment1）如果死刑犯沒(méi)有受到最為嚴(yán)厲的懲罰，那么這對(duì)受害者是不公平的。Itwouldbeonlyfairforthevictimsifthecriminalsaresubjecttothegreatestfearofall---death.2）如果死刑取消的話，那么很多潛在的罪犯就不會(huì)顧忌做出一些極為可怕的犯罪行為。Ifcapitalpunishmentisevertobedoneawaywith,thepotentialwrongdoerswouldn,tbedeterredfromcommittingstaggeringlyseriousoffensesamongwhichserialmurderprovesparticularlyappalling.2.特殊人群犯罪情況：例題：【2010.08.05]Inmanypartsoftheworlchildrenandteenagerarecommittingmorecrimes.Whyisthiscasehappening?Howshouldchildrenorteenagersbepunished?2015年6月16H雅思寫(xiě)作范文Insomecountries?ahighproportionofcriminalact,sarecuididittedbyteenagerSrWhyhasthishappened?Whatcanbedonetodealwiththis?原因：.離婚率很高，單親家庭--父母沒(méi)有時(shí)間管教，關(guān)心不夠parentsaresobusythattheydon,thavetoomuchtimetogiveparentingtotheirchildren..Notmatureenough,cannotdistinguishrightfromwrong;theylackforself-control本身叛逆期.媒體暴力Solutions」措施具體化，寫(xiě)出具體可以怎么辦）e.g公司或政府可以規(guī)定一些親子假 employeesshouldbeprovidedsomeholidaysordayofftobeencouragedtospendmoretimewithkids.Eg.Governmentsortherelevantorganizationsaresupposedtodesignsomebooksorbookletsaboutparentingeducation,whichservetoinstructparentstobettereducatetheirkids.Eg.LimitthemediaaboutunhealthycontentsorprogramsbyimposingseriouscensorshipGovernmentsShouldImposeseriouscensorship/hightaxes/higherpenalties開(kāi)U罰/highfines onprograms/products/criminals思路分析：主體分析法和分類(lèi)法青少年走上犯罪的道路(embarkonthecriminalroad)的原因是多種多樣的(manifold/various):1)家庭原因：在單親家庭(singleparentfamily)，缺乏家庭的關(guān)愛(ài)及正確的引導(dǎo)(lackofconnectednessandlackofparentalcare)，甚至是有些家庭存在著家庭暴力(domesticviolence/familyviolence)，不要給孩子貼上消極意義的標(biāo)簽(label)2)社會(huì)原因:(beledastrayinthecomplicatedsociety)復(fù)雜的社會(huì)背景科技原因：互聯(lián)網(wǎng)和手機(jī)為犯罪提供了新的渠道(anewavenueforcommittingcrimes)withtheadvanceoftheinternetandtechnology,teenagersareexposedtotoomanyunhealthycontents,includingsmoking,onlinegames,drugs,violence,sexandsoon3)學(xué)校原因：學(xué)生承受的同伴帶來(lái)的壓力及學(xué)業(yè)壓力、競(jìng)爭(zhēng)壓力(peerpressureandstudypressure,theheatedcompetition)4)思想原因媒體上包括電視、電影、廣告等上面的暴力和血腥的場(chǎng)面(theviolentscenesonthemedia,pornographicorvulgarformsofmedia)5)心理原因：青少年犯罪心理(psychologyofjuveniledelinquency)練習(xí)：Peopleinallmodernsocietiesusedrugs,buttodayyouthareexperimentingwithbothlegalandillegaldrugs,andatanincreasinglyearlyage.Discussthecausesandsomeeffectsofwidespreaddrugusebyyoungpeople.Makeanyrecommendationsyoufeelarenecessarytohelpfightyouthdrugabuse.思路分析：主體分析法和分類(lèi)法闡述青少年吸毒的根源。1）其中最重要的原因在于許多年輕人由于不思進(jìn)取而產(chǎn)生的精神空虛。2）其他一些因素也起了推波助瀾的作用，比如說(shuō)，對(duì)毒品的無(wú)知和好奇，缺乏父母的適當(dāng)引導(dǎo)等。3）毒品本身的令人上癮的本質(zhì)也是不容忽視的。三、常用詞匯thought-provoking弓|人深思的far-reaching深遠(yuǎn)的drawback弊端undertakethedueobligations承擔(dān)責(zé)任break/violate/flout/disobeythelaw觸犯法律commitacrime犯罪Offenses/crimes/criminalacts罪行criminal/offender/culprit才日人/perpetrator罪才犯lawbreakerwrongdoeraccomplice/accessory（noun）從犯（后者指幫助犯罪單未直接參與的人）resentsociety/holdagrudgeagainstsociety憎恨社會(huì)inmate/convicts囚犯victim受害者trauma心理創(chuàng)傷cell牢房細(xì)胞ceiling天花板imprison/incarceratesomeone監(jiān)禁bebroughttojustice被繩之以法lenient寬容的reform/rehabilitatecriminals改造罪犯lawenforcementagencies執(zhí)法部門(mén)heinouscrime/flagitiouscrime/felony重罪pettycrime/misdemeanor輕罪first-timeoffender初犯的人hardenedcriminals/repeatcriminals慣犯reverttocrime再次犯罪law-abidingcitizens守法的公民abideby/complywiththelaw遵守法律disregard無(wú)視...traumatizesomeone給某人造成心理創(chuàng)傷trackdown/huntdown/capture抓捕criminaltendency犯罪傾向高分句型Manyoftheproblemsyoungpeoplenowexperience,suchasjuveniledelinquency,arisefromthefactthatmanymarriedwomennowworkandarenotathometocarefortheirchildren.現(xiàn)在年輕人面臨的像青少年犯罪等問(wèn)題，是源自于許多已婚女性走進(jìn)職場(chǎng)，無(wú)法在家照看孩子。Oncethejuvenilesreachmaturation,theirsociallyunacceptablebehaviorhasgrownintoalifestyleandtheydevelopintocareercriminals.一旦青年人長(zhǎng)大后，對(duì)社會(huì)叛逆的行為就變成了他們的生活方式，進(jìn)而發(fā)展成為職業(yè)犯罪。Theinabilitytocompleteassignmentsandgettingbadgradesmaycreateself-esteemproblems,feelingsofalienationorworthlessness.完不成作業(yè)、學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)不好就會(huì)導(dǎo)致自尊心問(wèn)題，感覺(jué)被疏遠(yuǎn)或是自己毫無(wú)價(jià)值。Accordingtothelabelingtheory,onceapersonislabeled,hewillbecomesuchakindofpersonasthelabeldescribes.標(biāo)簽理論認(rèn)為，人一旦被貼上某種標(biāo)簽，就會(huì)成為標(biāo)簽所標(biāo)定的那種人。Therootcausesofcrimearemanyanddiverse.Anyhopeofaddressingthosecausessuccessfullyrequiresmulti-facetedstrategies,whichcanbeimplementedbyneighborhoods,communitiesandvariouslevelsofgovernment.犯罪的根本原因是多重的。成功解決問(wèn)題的希望在于采取多種策略，需要社區(qū)、及各級(jí)政府的共同努力。Mostparentsworryaboutthattheirchildrenarevulnerabletotheharmfulimpactinsociety.家長(zhǎng)最擔(dān)心的就是孩子容易受到社會(huì)的不良影響。Thesejuvenileoffendersareinneedoftreatmentbecausetheyhaveanegativedispositionandhighpropensitytocontinuecommittingcrime.少年犯需要救治，因?yàn)樗麄冃郧橄麡O，有極大可能繼續(xù)犯罪。Foryoungpeoplewhoareaddictedtothecomputergames,itisratherdifficulttodistinguishbetweenfantasyandreality.Grossly/fairly對(duì)于沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的年輕人來(lái)說(shuō)，很難明辨虛幻與現(xiàn)實(shí)。Juvenilecrimeratehasarousedgreatconcerninthesociety.青少年違法犯罪率問(wèn)題已經(jīng)成為社會(huì)關(guān)注程度最高的問(wèn)題之一。Prisonerscanbeputtoworkincommunityserviceprojects,whichcanprovidetheprisonerswithvaluabletraining,developthesenseofsocialresponsibility.可以讓囚犯進(jìn)行社區(qū)服務(wù)，這樣可以對(duì)他們進(jìn)行有意義的培訓(xùn)，培養(yǎng)他們的社會(huì)責(zé)任感。五、課堂實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練題目：Peopleinallmodernsocietiesusedrugs,buttodayyouthareexperimentingwithbothlegalandillegaldrugs,andatanincreasinglyearlyage,somesociologistsclaimthatparentsandothermembersofthesocietyoftensetabadexample.Discussthecausesandsomeeffectsofwidespreaddrugusebyyoungpeopleinourmodernsociety.Makeanyrecommendationsyoufeelarenecessarytohelpfightyouthdrugabuse..開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾和主體部分中文思路這是一篇探討青少年吸毒的議論文。題目中的論述指出，當(dāng)今的青少年濫用毒品的現(xiàn)象十分普遍，并且其年齡正日趨年輕化。某些社會(huì)學(xué)家聲稱(chēng)父母和其他社會(huì)成員給這些吸毒的青少年樹(shù)立了一個(gè)壞榜樣。題目的要求有三方面：一是討論當(dāng)今社會(huì)青少年吸毒成風(fēng)的根源所在，二是談一談青少年吸毒的不良影響，三是提出一些建議來(lái)與這種惡劣傾向作斗爭(zhēng)。由此可見(jiàn)，這是一個(gè)典型的問(wèn)題解決型題目，即在主體段中有三個(gè)小段落，分別講述產(chǎn)生的原因，弓I起的后果和解決的辦法。1）闡述青少年吸毒的根源。指出其中最重要的原因在于許多年輕人由于不思進(jìn)取而產(chǎn)生的精神空虛。其他一些因素也起了推波助瀾的作用，比如說(shuō)，對(duì)毒品的無(wú)知和好奇，缺乏父母的適當(dāng)引導(dǎo)等。另外，毒品本身的令人上癮的本質(zhì)也是不容忽視的。2）闡述青少年吸毒所造成的惡劣影響。而其中最嚴(yán)重的是青少年犯罪率的激增，然后，家庭的破裂不可避免地導(dǎo)致社會(huì)的不安定。對(duì)于吸毒者本身來(lái)說(shuō)，這種行為恰好是對(duì)他們身心的嚴(yán)重摧殘，會(huì)對(duì)他們自身產(chǎn)生非常消極的影響。3）闡述一些切實(shí)可行的解決辦法。其中最行之有效的方法就是提升公眾對(duì)毒品的意識(shí)使他們充分認(rèn)識(shí)到毒品的巨大破壞力。執(zhí)法部門(mén)也應(yīng)加強(qiáng)打擊力度，對(duì)毒品犯罪判以重刑。而對(duì)于青少年癮君子來(lái)說(shuō)，首要任務(wù)是讓他們盡快恢復(fù)健康，然后可以現(xiàn)身說(shuō)法式地來(lái)告誡公眾。.范文Peopleinallmodernsocietiesusedrugs,buttodaysyouthareexperimentingwithbothlegalandillegaldrugs,andatanincreasinglyearlyage.Ithasarousedfiercecontroversyastothereasonwhyyoungpeoplechoosetousedrugs.Themostimportantreasonwhyyouthdrugabuseissoprevalentintoday’ssocietyisthespiritualemptinessonthepartofmanyyoungsters.Theyoftenfeelreluctanttostudyor［以…做試驗(yàn)］【句式，……引起了激烈的爭(zhēng)論辯論】【藥物濫用，濫用藥物】【精神空虛】【adj.不情愿的，勉強(qiáng)的；

workhard,sotheyarequiteincapabletodosomethingmeaningfulandtheonlywaytoreleasetheirexcessiveenergyistodosomethingmeaningless.Othercausesofwidespreadyouthdrugabusealsomustbetakenintoaccount.Theseincludeignoranceandcuriosityaboutillegaldrugs,lackofknowledgeandguidancefromadults,andeasyaccesstoandavailabilityofdrugs.Finally,peopleshouldnotignorethefactthatmostillegaldrugsareaddictiveandtheseimmatureteenagerscanhardlyresistthetremendoustemptationoffeelingecstaticundertheinfluenceofthedrugs.頑抗的】【釋修精力】【納入考慮】【對(duì)違法藥品的無(wú)知和好奇心】【同位語(yǔ)從句】【adj.不成熟的】【抵抗巨大的誘惑】【adj.狂喜的；入迷的，出神的】頑抗的】【釋修精力】【納入考慮】【對(duì)違法藥品的無(wú)知和好奇心】【同位語(yǔ)從句】【adj.不成