讀后續(xù)寫與概要寫作微技能五-情緒與情感描寫課件

在讀后續(xù)寫中，描寫人物的情緒與情感是常用的描寫方法，恰當?shù)那榫w與情感描寫能夠表現(xiàn)文中人物的性格，推動事件的發(fā)展。在描述人物情緒與情感時要突出文章的中心，與人物的性格吻合，符合事件發(fā)展的邏輯。要選用恰當?shù)脑~句通過情緒與情感描寫精確地刻畫人物的內(nèi)心世界。微技能五情緒與情感描寫在讀后續(xù)寫中，描寫人物的情緒與情感是常用的描寫方法，恰當?shù)那檎Z言輸入——素材積累，為續(xù)寫奠基Ⅰ.詞匯積累1．happyadj.愉快的，高興的；美滿的2．cheerfuladj.快樂的3．excitedadj.興奮的4．joyfuladj.歡樂的5．pleasedadj.欣喜的，高興的，滿意的語言輸入——素材積累，為續(xù)寫奠基Ⅰ.詞匯積累1．happy6．enjoyvt.喜愛7．brightenvt.使快活8．delightn.歡喜，愉快，高興vt.使快樂，使喜歡9．pleasuren.愉快10．passionn.熱情，激情11．befondofmusic愛好音樂12．a(chǎn)satisfiedlook滿意的表情

13．brightenone’sheart使某人心情愉快6．enjoyvt.喜愛14．yellwithdelight樂得大叫15．setone’sheartatrest使某人安心16．bewildwithdelight欣喜若狂17．beinhighspirits精神高漲18．beexcitedwithjoyatthesuccess為成功而欣喜19．beonthetopoftheworld心滿意足，非常幸福20．a(chǎn)mixtureofexcitementandhappiness既興奮又開心14．yellwithdelight樂得大叫Ⅱ.佳句背誦1．Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.

她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光。2．Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.

她激動得滿臉通紅。

3．TearsofhappinesspoureddownSusan’scheeks.

幸福的淚水順著蘇珊的臉頰流下來。4．Hercheerfulspiritsandheartylaughterinfectedthewholeclass.

她那歡樂的情緒和爽朗的笑聲感染了全班同學。5．Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.

她臉上帶著燦爛的笑容。Ⅱ.佳句背誦1．ThesmileonherfaceⅠ.詞匯積累1．tearn．

[常用復(fù)]眼淚，淚珠2．sobv.啜泣，抽噎3．sorrown.悲痛；

憂傷4．desperateadj.絕望的；無望的5．sadnessn.悲傷，

憂愁6．painn.痛苦7．releasevt.釋放8．griefn.悲痛Ⅰ.詞匯積累1．tearn．[常用復(fù)]眼淚，淚珠9．a(chǎn)brokenspirit意志消沉10．cryone’sheartout悲痛欲絕11．withaheavyheart懷著沉重的心情12．withasinkingheart心情沉重地13．withasorrowfulheart懷著憂郁的心情14．beseizedwithpanic驚慌失措15．puthimintoasentimentalmood讓他很傷感9．a(chǎn)brokenspirit意志消沉16．fallintodespair陷入絕望17．a(chǎn)strongsenseofloss強烈的失落感18．makeone’sheartbleed使某人悲痛19．bedowninspirits情緒低落20．loseone’sspirit垂頭喪氣16．fallintodespair陷入絕望Ⅱ.佳句背誦1．Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.

他靜靜地站著，眼淚順著面頰流了下來。2．Inthosedayshewasinlowspirits.

那些日子里他情緒低落。3．Herhandswereshakingandshewasonthepointofcrying.

她的手在顫抖，快要哭出來了。4．Theywereimmersedinsorrow.

他們沉浸在悲痛之中。5．Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine.

聽到這個消息，他絕望地把悲傷淹沒在酒里。Ⅱ.佳句背誦1．Hestoodsilently,teaⅠ.詞匯積累1．displeasuren．不高興2．glarev.對……怒目而視3．frustratedadj.失意的；失望的4．a(chǎn)nnoyedadj.惱怒的，氣惱的5．ragen.憤怒6．crossadj.生氣的，不高興的7．complainconstantly不斷地抱怨8．flamewithanger氣得滿臉通紅Ⅰ.詞匯積累1．displeasuren．不高興9．bedispleasedatone’sconduct對某人的行為感到不滿10．beeasilyannoyedattrifles易為瑣事而惱火11．getmad/crossatsb對某人勃然大怒12．haveaworriedlook愁眉苦臉13．ignoreacomplaint對抱怨不予理會14．express/voiceacomplaintabout對……表示不滿15．runoutoftheroominaburstofanger怒氣沖沖地跑出房間16．stampone’sfootinanger憤怒地跺腳17．feeldiscouraged感到泄氣的18．feelpuzzled/confused感到困惑的9．bedispleasedatone’sconduⅡ.佳句背誦1．Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.

他的聲音因憤怒而顫抖。2．Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.

他幾乎控制不住怒火。3．Theystoppedarguingandglaredateachother.

他們停止了爭論，相互怒視著對方。4．Hegavemealookofburninganger.

他憤怒地看了我一眼。5．Thisfailureleavesthechilddepressedandfrustrated.

這次失敗使這個小孩灰心喪氣。Ⅱ.佳句背誦1．HisvoicetrembledwitⅠ.詞匯積累1．seriousadj.嚴肅的，莊重的2．shamen.羞愧；恥辱3．yawnv.打呵欠4．forgivevt.原諒5．kindlyadj.仁慈的；

和藹的；

友好的，體貼的6．hopelessadj.沒有希望的，絕望的7．a(chǎn)nxietyn.焦慮Ⅰ.詞匯積累1．seriousadj.嚴肅的，莊重的8．find...highlystimulating覺得……非常刺激9．a(chǎn)forgivingspirit寬容的精神10．withakindlyspirit以和藹可親的態(tài)度11．notintheleastisheinterestedin...他對……一點也不感興趣12．mixedwiththeemotionofanxietyandhope混合著焦慮與希望的情緒13．setoffstrongfeelings引起強烈的情感14．behopelesslyaddictedto對……徹底上癮15．underthedominationoftheseemotions在這些情緒的控制下8．find...highlystimulating覺Ⅱ.佳句背誦1．Helowered/bent/bowedhisheadinshame.

他羞愧地低下了頭。2．Idecidedtogoforawalktoclearmyhead.

我決定去走走，清醒一下頭腦。3．Hefelthischeeksburningwithshame.

他因為羞愧而感到臉頰發(fā)燒。4．Shelookedatherfatherstraightintheeyeandansweredhisquestiontruthfully.

她直視父親的眼睛，誠實地回答了他的問題。5．MyheartwasinmymouthwhenIwalkedintoheroffice.

我走進她的辦公室時，緊張得心都到了喉嚨口。Ⅱ.佳句背誦1．Helowered/bent/bowedⅠ.基礎(chǔ)練習——補全句子1．Hersmile_____________________.

她的笑容照亮了整個房間。2．Thewoman__________________therecoveryofherstolenjewels.那位婦人對找回被盜的珠寶感到非常高興。litupthewholeroomwasdelightedat語言輸出——層級訓練，讓續(xù)寫添彩Ⅰ.基礎(chǔ)練習——補全句子1．Hersmile______3．Unforgettablewerehereyesthat___________________andlipsheld_______________.令人難忘的是她的眼睛像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光，嘴角保持著穩(wěn)定的微笑。4．She________________andranoutoftheroom.

她突然哭了起來，跑出了房間。5．Shesobbed，___________________________.

她掩面哭泣。shonelikediamondsinasteadysmileburstintotearshidingherfaceinherhands3．Unforgettablewerehereyes6．Hisattitude____________________________.

他的態(tài)度使我極為惱火。7．Don’t_________________．Ididitallforyourowngood.

別生我的氣，我這樣做完全是為了你好。8．Hisfacesuddenly____________________．

他的表情突然嚴肅起來。mademeextremelyannoyedgetmadatmegrewserious6．Hisattitude_______________Ⅱ.綜合演練——完成讀后續(xù)寫，注意情感描寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Aliandhisyoungersister,Zahra,livedwiththeirparentsinapoorneighborhood.Theirmotherwasverysickandtheirfatherwasstrugglingtofindajob,andtheyhadonlyalittlemoneywithwhichtobuyfood.Astheyhadnotpaidtherentforseveralmonths,thelandlordwasbreathingdowntheirnecks.Ⅱ.綜合演練——完成讀后續(xù)寫，注意情感描寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)Oneday,AlitookZahra’sshoestoashoerepairmantobefixed,buthelostthemonthewayhome.Itwasn’tuntilhegothomethatherealizedhehadlosttheshoes.Hewasafraidthathisparentswouldbeangryanddisappointed,sohebeggedhissistertokeepitsecret.ZahraagreedandthetwodecidedtoshareAli’srunningshoes．Zahra’sschoolhourswereinthemorning,soshewouldwearthemfirst.Afterschool,shewouldrushbackandgivethemtoAli.Hecouldthenruntohisschool,whichbeganintheafternoon.Althoughheranasfastashecould,Alioftenarrivedlateandwaswarnedbytheschool.Oneday,AlitookZahra’sshoeAliheardaboutalongdistanceracethatwasheldfortheboysinthecity.Whenhelearnedthatthethirdprizewasanewpairofshoes,hedecidedtotakepart.Heranhomeexcitedlyandpromisedhissisterthathewouldwinherthenewshoes.Thedayofracearrived.Alihadastrongstart,buthalfwaythroughtheracehebegantogettiredandhislegsbegantoache.GettingmoreandmoreexhaustedhethoughtonlyofZahraandhispromisetoher.Dreamingofthenewshoeshewouldwinforhissistergavehimstrength,andhestayedrightbehindthetwofastestrunners,determinedtofinishthird．Suddenly,asthefinishlinedrewnear,anotherrunnercollided(碰撞)withAlifrombehindandhecrashedtotheground.Aliheardaboutalongdistanc【根據(jù)提示完成范文】Paragraph1：Ali

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ahead.Refusingtogiveupatthispoint,hejumpedtohisfeetandranasfastashecould.Hedashedacrossthefinishlineandwonthefourthprize.Thinkinghewould①__________________(讓她妹妹失望)，Ali②______________________

(情不自禁哭了起來)．JustthenhesuddenlyheardtheannouncementfromthebroadcastthathewonthethirdprizeastherunnerwhocollidedwithAliwasdisqualifiedforbreakingtherule.Holdingtheshoesclosetohischestduringtheawardceremony,Ali③__________________________(感到非常高興，并如釋重負)

asheeventuallywontheshoesforhissister.lethersisterdowncouldn’thelpsobbingfeltoverjoyedandrelieved【根據(jù)提示完成范文】lethersisterdowncParagraph2：Filled

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quickly.Hecouldnotwaittoseehissisterandsharethethrillingnews.Onhisarrival,AlifoundZahrawaswaitingoutside.She④_____________(非常緊張)whetherherbrotherwouldbringherwhatshewasexpecting.“Zahra,seewhatIhavegotforyou.”hetooktheprizeoutofhisbagwithhistremblinghands.TheinstantZahrasawtheshoes,herface⑤_______(高興起來)．⑥___________________(她非常激動)thatshethrewherselfatAli.“Thankyou!Ali.”⑦_____________________________(高興的眼淚流了出來)asthebrotherandsisterhuggedtightlytogether.wasreallynervouslitupSothrilledwassheTearsofjoywelleduptheireyesParagraph2：wasreallynervous讀后續(xù)寫與概要寫作微技能五-情緒與情感描寫課件在讀后續(xù)寫中，描寫人物的情緒與情感是常用的描寫方法，恰當?shù)那榫w與情感描寫能夠表現(xiàn)文中人物的性格，推動事件的發(fā)展。在描述人物情緒與情感時要突出文章的中心，與人物的性格吻合，符合事件發(fā)展的邏輯。要選用恰當?shù)脑~句通過情緒與情感描寫精確地刻畫人物的內(nèi)心世界。微技能五情緒與情感描寫在讀后續(xù)寫中，描寫人物的情緒與情感是常用的描寫方法，恰當?shù)那檎Z言輸入——素材積累，為續(xù)寫奠基Ⅰ.詞匯積累1．happyadj.愉快的，高興的；美滿的2．cheerfuladj.快樂的3．excitedadj.興奮的4．joyfuladj.歡樂的5．pleasedadj.欣喜的，高興的，滿意的語言輸入——素材積累，為續(xù)寫奠基Ⅰ.詞匯積累1．happy6．enjoyvt.喜愛7．brightenvt.使快活8．delightn.歡喜，愉快，高興vt.使快樂，使喜歡9．pleasuren.愉快10．passionn.熱情，激情11．befondofmusic愛好音樂12．a(chǎn)satisfiedlook滿意的表情

13．brightenone’sheart使某人心情愉快6．enjoyvt.喜愛14．yellwithdelight樂得大叫15．setone’sheartatrest使某人安心16．bewildwithdelight欣喜若狂17．beinhighspirits精神高漲18．beexcitedwithjoyatthesuccess為成功而欣喜19．beonthetopoftheworld心滿意足，非常幸福20．a(chǎn)mixtureofexcitementandhappiness既興奮又開心14．yellwithdelight樂得大叫Ⅱ.佳句背誦1．Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.

她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光。2．Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.

她激動得滿臉通紅。

3．TearsofhappinesspoureddownSusan’scheeks.

幸福的淚水順著蘇珊的臉頰流下來。4．Hercheerfulspiritsandheartylaughterinfectedthewholeclass.

她那歡樂的情緒和爽朗的笑聲感染了全班同學。5．Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.

她臉上帶著燦爛的笑容。Ⅱ.佳句背誦1．ThesmileonherfaceⅠ.詞匯積累1．tearn．

[常用復(fù)]眼淚，淚珠2．sobv.啜泣，抽噎3．sorrown.悲痛；

憂傷4．desperateadj.絕望的；無望的5．sadnessn.悲傷，

憂愁6．painn.痛苦7．releasevt.釋放8．griefn.悲痛Ⅰ.詞匯積累1．tearn．[常用復(fù)]眼淚，淚珠9．a(chǎn)brokenspirit意志消沉10．cryone’sheartout悲痛欲絕11．withaheavyheart懷著沉重的心情12．withasinkingheart心情沉重地13．withasorrowfulheart懷著憂郁的心情14．beseizedwithpanic驚慌失措15．puthimintoasentimentalmood讓他很傷感9．a(chǎn)brokenspirit意志消沉16．fallintodespair陷入絕望17．a(chǎn)strongsenseofloss強烈的失落感18．makeone’sheartbleed使某人悲痛19．bedowninspirits情緒低落20．loseone’sspirit垂頭喪氣16．fallintodespair陷入絕望Ⅱ.佳句背誦1．Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.

他靜靜地站著，眼淚順著面頰流了下來。2．Inthosedayshewasinlowspirits.

那些日子里他情緒低落。3．Herhandswereshakingandshewasonthepointofcrying.

她的手在顫抖，快要哭出來了。4．Theywereimmersedinsorrow.

他們沉浸在悲痛之中。5．Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine.

聽到這個消息，他絕望地把悲傷淹沒在酒里。Ⅱ.佳句背誦1．Hestoodsilently,teaⅠ.詞匯積累1．displeasuren．不高興2．glarev.對……怒目而視3．frustratedadj.失意的；失望的4．a(chǎn)nnoyedadj.惱怒的，氣惱的5．ragen.憤怒6．crossadj.生氣的，不高興的7．complainconstantly不斷地抱怨8．flamewithanger氣得滿臉通紅Ⅰ.詞匯積累1．displeasuren．不高興9．bedispleasedatone’sconduct對某人的行為感到不滿10．beeasilyannoyedattrifles易為瑣事而惱火11．getmad/crossatsb對某人勃然大怒12．haveaworriedlook愁眉苦臉13．ignoreacomplaint對抱怨不予理會14．express/voiceacomplaintabout對……表示不滿15．runoutoftheroominaburstofanger怒氣沖沖地跑出房間16．stampone’sfootinanger憤怒地跺腳17．feeldiscouraged感到泄氣的18．feelpuzzled/confused感到困惑的9．bedispleasedatone’sconduⅡ.佳句背誦1．Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.

他的聲音因憤怒而顫抖。2．Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.

他幾乎控制不住怒火。3．Theystoppedarguingandglaredateachother.

他們停止了爭論，相互怒視著對方。4．Hegavemealookofburninganger.

他憤怒地看了我一眼。5．Thisfailureleavesthechilddepressedandfrustrated.

這次失敗使這個小孩灰心喪氣。Ⅱ.佳句背誦1．HisvoicetrembledwitⅠ.詞匯積累1．seriousadj.嚴肅的，莊重的2．shamen.羞愧；恥辱3．yawnv.打呵欠4．forgivevt.原諒5．kindlyadj.仁慈的；

和藹的；

友好的，體貼的6．hopelessadj.沒有希望的，絕望的7．a(chǎn)nxietyn.焦慮Ⅰ.詞匯積累1．seriousadj.嚴肅的，莊重的8．find...highlystimulating覺得……非常刺激9．a(chǎn)forgivingspirit寬容的精神10．withakindlyspirit以和藹可親的態(tài)度11．notintheleastisheinterestedin...他對……一點也不感興趣12．mixedwiththeemotionofanxietyandhope混合著焦慮與希望的情緒13．setoffstrongfeelings引起強烈的情感14．behopelesslyaddictedto對……徹底上癮15．underthedominationoftheseemotions在這些情緒的控制下8．find...highlystimulating覺Ⅱ.佳句背誦1．Helowered/bent/bowedhisheadinshame.

他羞愧地低下了頭。2．Idecidedtogoforawalktoclearmyhead.

我決定去走走，清醒一下頭腦。3．Hefelthischeeksburningwithshame.

他因為羞愧而感到臉頰發(fā)燒。4．Shelookedatherfatherstraightintheeyeandansweredhisquestiontruthfully.

她直視父親的眼睛，誠實地回答了他的問題。5．MyheartwasinmymouthwhenIwalkedintoheroffice.

我走進她的辦公室時，緊張得心都到了喉嚨口。Ⅱ.佳句背誦1．Helowered/bent/bowedⅠ.基礎(chǔ)練習——補全句子1．Hersmile_____________________.

她的笑容照亮了整個房間。2．Thewoman__________________therecoveryofherstolenjewels.那位婦人對找回被盜的珠寶感到非常高興。litupthewholeroomwasdelightedat語言輸出——層級訓練，讓續(xù)寫添彩Ⅰ.基礎(chǔ)練習——補全句子1．Hersmile______3．Unforgettablewerehereyesthat___________________andlipsheld_______________.令人難忘的是她的眼睛像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光，嘴角保持著穩(wěn)定的微笑。4．She________________andranoutoftheroom.

她突然哭了起來，跑出了房間。5．Shesobbed，___________________________.

她掩面哭泣。shonelikediamondsinasteadysmileburstintotearshidingherfaceinherhands3．Unforgettablewerehereyes6．Hisattitude____________________________.

他的態(tài)度使我極為惱火。7．Don’t_________________．Ididitallforyourowngood.

別生我的氣，我這樣做完全是為了你好。8．Hisfacesuddenly____________________．

他的表情突然嚴肅起來。mademeextremelyannoyedgetmadatmegrewserious6．Hisattitude_______________Ⅱ.綜合演練——完成讀后續(xù)寫，注意情感描寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Aliandhisyoungersister,Zahra,livedwiththeirparentsinapoorneighborhood.Theirmotherwasverysickandtheirfatherwasstrugglingtofindajob,andtheyhadonlyalittlemoneywithwhichtobuyfood.Astheyhadnotpaidtherentforseveralmonths,thelandlordwasbreathingdowntheirnecks.Ⅱ.綜合演練——完成讀后續(xù)寫，注意情感描寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)Oneday,AlitookZahra’sshoestoashoerepairmantobefixed,buthelostthemonthewayhome.Itwasn’tuntilhegothomethatherealizedhehadlosttheshoes.Hewasafraidthathisparentswouldbeangryanddisappointed,sohebeggedhissistertokeepitsecret.ZahraagreedandthetwodecidedtoshareAli’srunningshoes．Zahra’sschoolhourswereinthemorning,soshewouldwearthemfirst.Afterschool,shewouldrushbackandgivethemtoAli.Hecouldthenruntohisschool,whichbeganintheafternoon.Althoughheranasfastashecould,Alioftenarrivedlateandwaswarnedbytheschool.Oneday,AlitookZahra’sshoeAliheardaboutalongdistanceracethatwasheldfortheboysinthecity.Whenhelearnedthatthethirdprizewasanewpairofshoes,hedecidedtotakepart.Heranhomeexcitedlyandpromisedhissisterthathewouldwinherthenewshoes.Thedayofracearrived.Alihadastrongstart,buthalfwaythroughtheracehebegantogettiredandhislegsbegantoache.GettingmoreandmoreexhaustedhethoughtonlyofZahraandhispromisetoher.Dreamingofthenewshoeshewouldwinforhissistergavehimstrengt