高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作提升課堂：如何寫(xiě)好旅游景點(diǎn)作文

高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作提升課堂：如何寫(xiě)好旅游景點(diǎn)作文景點(diǎn)作文介紹地方可以從多個(gè)方面著手，比如地位，位置，歷史，人，吃喝玩樂(lè)whattosee,eat,do,andhowyou'llfeel）。以下面的作文為例，談?wù)劷Y(jié)構(gòu)，角度，銜接等方面。題目為：介紹一個(gè)國(guó)內(nèi)你喜歡或去過(guò)的地方，三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，基本情況，特色如文化，景點(diǎn)等，印象和感受。假設(shè)你是第一中學(xué)的李明。我市為外國(guó)友人提供生活信息的某英文網(wǎng)站新增了《最美中華》欄目，請(qǐng)你給該欄目投稿，介紹國(guó)內(nèi)你喜歡或者去過(guò)的地方。內(nèi)容包括：.該地方的基本情況（如名稱(chēng)，地理位j.該地方的特色（如文化，景點(diǎn)等）.你對(duì)該地方的印象與感受。WheneveraskedwhichplaceIwouldchoosetostopby,IwoulddefinitelychooseYunnan.LocatedinthesouthofChina,Yunnan,apopulartouristdraw,boastsalonghistoryandisanidealchoicetohaveatasteofsights,smellsandsounds.Itscountrysideisagoodplacetostart,whichisatruefeastforeyesandears.It'saroutinethatyou'llwakeuptoanewquietmorninginthesongsofbirds.Especiallyamazingissweetscentsofcolorfulflowersfromhousesandstoresinuniqueethnicstyleineithersideofstreets,whichgivestheplaceanairofromanceandpeace.What'smoreimpressiveisyoumaycomeacrossancientwordslikepicturesonthedoorsofsomestores,showingasenseofmystery.Withallsensessatisfied,thememoryofthisoncejourneytothecitylivesuptothisdayasfreshasithappenedyesterday.Ican'twaittoembraceitagain.寫(xiě)作思路.選擇最簡(jiǎn)單的總分總結(jié)構(gòu)。首段的前部分可以作為引入，如談名稱(chēng),位置，地位，歷史等，但，一定要有一個(gè)中心句，放在明顯的位置，如首尾。在總分總結(jié)構(gòu)中，注意：首段與末段要有呼應(yīng)，即重復(fù)文章中心詞。開(kāi)頭：WheneveraskedwhichplaceIwouldchoosetostopby,IwoulddefinitelychooseYunnan.LocatedinthesouthofChina,Yunnan,apopulartouristdraw,boastsalonghistoryandisanidealchoicetohaveatasteofsights,smellsandsounds.解析:第一句話(huà)先回應(yīng)題目，接著簡(jiǎn)單介紹，引出中心句，下文就需從視覺(jué),嗅覺(jué)，聽(tīng)覺(jué)展開(kāi)結(jié)尾:Withallsensessatisfied,thememoryofthisoncejourneytothecitylivesuptothisdayasfreshasithappenedyesterday.Ican'twaittoembraceitagain.解析:詞或近義詞或上下義詞來(lái)達(dá)到重復(fù)中心詞的目的，如senses與具體的五官.中間每一個(gè)分點(diǎn)也需要有中心句，如：…isatruefeastfortheeyesandears.常見(jiàn)的中心句句型有：...isanidealchoicetoexploresights,smellsandsounds....isagoodplaceto......doesagreatjobof...3.只要談下一個(gè)角度，都需要過(guò)渡，如：(l)Especiallyamazingis…;(2)Whatismoreimpressive...;(3)Betteryet,...(4)lfyouarelucky,you'llbeableto+有時(shí)令或季節(jié)限制的活動(dòng)(5)lfyoukeepyoureyesopen,you/llbesurprisedto...再高級(jí)一點(diǎn)：Withallthesebeauty,itisnotsurprisingthatIrelandhasdevelopstrongtraditionsthatincludemusic,dancinganddinning.(承上啟下)ButperhapswhatmanytouristsandSanFranciscanstreasuremostaboutChinatownisitsfood.(借鑒：but啟下)iftheTajMahalisacelebration