專四寫作技巧之四邊便條寫作市公開課金獎市賽課一等獎?wù)n件

專四寫作便條寫作第1頁便條特點1.組成簡單時間、對方稱呼、正文、結(jié)尾套語和署名第2頁便條特點2.文體適中非正式化甚至口語化第3頁便條特點3.內(nèi)容凝練Forexample:第4頁TuesFeb.11DearProf.Richards,(1)Iamsorry(2)Icouldn’tmakeour4o’clockappointment.(3)Prof.Sterne’slecturelastedalotlongerthanIhadexpected.(4)Icouldmeetyouinthedepartmentofficetomorrowat3p.m.,ifthatisconvenientforyou.(5)Ifnot,pleaseleaveanoteinmymailbox,#529,tomorrowmorning.(6)Thankyou.

Sincerelyyours,Chen第5頁便條特點4.規(guī)矩細微第6頁請求便條組成要件:請求理由陳說請求行為請求可能實現(xiàn)方式致謝第7頁March13DearProfessorLiu,

Iamveryhappytohavehadattendedyourlectureon“LinguisticsandLanguageTeaching”lastFriday.Yourlectureisquiteinstructivetomypresentthesiswriting.Therefore,IhopeIcangetyourfurtherhelp.Iamwonderingifitispossibleforyoutogivemealistofreferencebooksonthistopictothefollowinge-mailaddress:yrita886@.Heartfeltthanks.Sincerelyyours,Rita第8頁語言表示模式Pleasegivemeafewmoredays.MayIhavealookatyour…?WouldyoumindifI…?IwonderifIcould….Woulditbepossibletohave…?第9頁語言表示模式Domeafavor,willyou?Wouldyoudomeafavor?Can/couldyou…?Wouldyoubesokindasto…?CouldItroubleyouto…?Iwonderifyouwould…?Ifitisnottootroublesome,could/wouldyou…?Ihopethisrequestwillnottroubleyoutoomuch.第10頁語言表示模式Let’sdo….Iwantto….Iwishyoucould….Iwouldliketoaskyouto….Youaremakingabignoise.Ifeelabithungrynow.whattimeisit?第11頁Exercise上海外國語大學(xué)著名教授鄒申上周來你校做講座，你遲到了，耽擱了二分之一講座，也沒拿到講座講稿。不過這個講座對你很有幫助。請你給這位教授寫張便條索要一份上次講座講稿。第12頁ReferenceMarch18DearProf.Zou,Iamveryhappytohavethechancetolistentoyourlectureon“AmericanLiterature”,butitisapitythatIwaslatethatdayduetoaminoraccidentonmywaytothelecture.Imissedthefirsthalfofthelectureandfailedtogetthehandout.YourlectureisreallyinstructiveformyEnglishstudy,soIamwonderingifitispossibleformetogetthehandout.Ifitispossible,wouldyoupleaseemailittotheaddress:zhang123@,orcallmeat////andIwillgotofetchit.Heartfeltthanks.第13頁邀請、約會便條組成要件第14頁Feb.11DearProfessorMa,

Wewouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldgiveusatalkon“TheSkillsforTEM-4Writing”

onthiscomingFriday,3p.m.to5p.m.Ifthissubjectdoesnotsuityouorthattimeisnotconvenientforyou,anyothersimilartopicandtimewouldalsobewelcome.Ifyouhaveanydecision,callmeatthecellphonenumber:….Thankyou.Respectfullyyours,MMChairmanofStudents’Union第15頁邀約便條附加組成要件邀約事由邀約行為約會可能方式及磋商邀約行為后續(xù)行為：致謝第16頁邀約便條語言表示特點Let’sgotothemovie.Shallwegotothemovieafterclass?Isitpossibleforustogotothemovieafterclass?Ifitdoesn’ttroubleyoumuch,shallwegotothemovieafterclass?第17頁Exercise你畢業(yè)論文碰到了很多專業(yè)問題，你去請教指導(dǎo)老師傅老師，但他不在辦公室，寫張便條和他預(yù)約一下。第18頁March25DearMr.Fu,ThesedaysIamverygloomybecauseImetmanytroublesinmythesiswriting.Idonotknowhowtodefinesomekeywordsofmystudy.SoIamwonderingwhetheryoucangivemesomeinstructions.Ifitdoesnottroubleyoutoomuch,shallwemeetatyourofficethisFridaymorningat9o’clock?Ifitisnotconvenientforyou,couldyoupleaseappointatimeandgivemeacallat…?Thankyou.Sincerelyyours,WangFang第19頁投訴、埋怨便條組成要件：投訴、埋怨行為投訴、埋怨內(nèi)容詳細描述要求填補或賠償對填補或賠償督促甚至威脅第20頁Mar.15DearManager,IamwritingtobringyourattentiontotheproblemIhavehadwithinformationavailabilitywithyourproduct.Ihavebeentryingtogetapersononthephone,butIfailedbytryingseveraldepartments.

Ihopeyouwilladdressthisproblemtomysatisfaction,

orIwillneverdobusinesswithyouagain.Iexpecttohearfromyousoon.MytelephonenumberiThankyou.Yours,JohnSmith第21頁投訴、埋怨便條慣用語言表示Iamwritingtoreporttheproblemswithyour…IamwritingtobringyourattentiontotheproblemsIhavehadwithyour…Iamwritingtocomplainabout…Iamsorry.Ican’tbear…anymore.第22頁投訴、埋怨便條慣用語言表示HereistheproblemIhavehad:Ihavebeentryingto…,but…第23頁投訴、埋怨便條慣用語言表示Ihopeyoucanaddressthisproblemsoon.Ihopeyouwilltakestepstorectifythissituationsoon.Wouldyouplease…?Itwouldbeverykindofyouto…第24頁投訴、埋怨便條慣用語言表示Frankly,Iamnotwillingtoputupwiththesituationanymore.Youmustrectifythesituation,orIwilltakeittothecourt.Ifyoucan’tgivemeasatisfactoryanswer,IwillcomplainittotheConsumerAssociation.第25頁Exercise昨天你去買鞋，店里服務(wù)員態(tài)度非常糟糕，請你給經(jīng)理寫一封投訴便條。第26頁March24DearSirorMadam,Iwenttoyourstoretobuyapairofshoesyesterday.WhenIsaidthepricewashigh,theNo.5salesgirlrepliedinasarcastictone,“Youcangoaheadandbuyacheaponefromotherstores.”Sheforgothowtotreataprospectivebuyer!Ihopeyoucanimproveyourservice,andgivemeaface-to-faceapology.Mytelephonenumberis159…Yours,JohnSmith第27頁道歉便條組成要件：道歉行為和內(nèi)容道歉詳細理由填補方法深入致歉第28頁March25DearProfessorChen,

IamsorryIcouldn’tmakeour2o’clockappointment.

ThereistobeanurgentconferenceinmydepartmentthisafternoonandIhavetomakesomepreparationforit.Shallwemeetat3o’clockonnextMondayafternoon?Ifthatisnotconvenientforyou,pleasegivemeanoteinmymailbox.Withmanyapologies.Sincerelyyours,PanPan第29頁道歉便條慣用語言表示Iamwritingtoshowmyapologyfor…Iwouldliketoexpressmyapologiesfornotbeingableto…IamsorryIcouldn’t…IamsorrytosaythatIhavenotfinished…,andhaveto…Excusemeformydelayingin….第30頁道歉便條慣用語言表示Ihadaminoraccident.Ihadaminoroperation.Somethingwaswrongwithmy…第31頁道歉便條慣用語言表示IamsureIcanmakeupthelossby…Ipromiseitwillneverhappenagain.Itwouldbeverykindofyoutogivemeanotherchanceto…第32頁道歉便條慣用語言表示Manyapologies.Dopleaseforgiveme.第33頁Exercise你和好朋友Mary約好，昨天下午放學(xué)后在大光明影城門口碰面，但因為出了點小交通事故，你沒能按時赴約。請給Mary寫一封道歉便條。第34頁March24DearMary,Iamterriblysorry!IfailedtomeetyouatthegateofDaGuangmingtheateryesterdayafternoon.Ihadaminoraccidentonmyway,andbythetimeIfinisheddealingwiththeaccidentandgottothetheater,youmusthavegivenuphopeandleft.Dopleaseforgiveme.Yours,Mary第35頁祝賀便條March20DearMary,

IamsopleasedtohearthatyouhavegotthescholarshiptotheUniversityofXianggang.

Congratulationsonyoursuccess.

Youreallydeserveitbecauseyouaresuchanintelligentandhardworkingstudent.Ihaveneverdoubtedyourabilitytoachievegreataims.Youwillhaveabrilliantfuture,andIwishyouallthebestinyourlifeandacademicstudiesthere.Yours,Daisy第36頁祝賀便條組成要件：祝賀事由和自己反應(yīng)祝賀行為對成功評價和對方欽佩美好祝福第37頁祝賀便條慣用語言表示Iamhappytolearnthatyouhavejust…Iamsopleasedtohearthatyouhave…第38頁祝賀便條慣用語言表示Congratulationsonyoursuccess.I’dliketoexpressmywarmestcongratulationsonit.Pleaseacceptmywarmestcongratulations.Congratulationsuponhaving…第39頁祝賀便條慣用語言表示Youreallydeserveitbecause…Thishasmeantyearsofyourhardwork,andit’sanachievementyoucanwellbeproudof.Ihavebeenappreciatingyourexcellentperformanceinstudyandabilityinyourwork.第40頁祝賀便條慣用語言表示Youwillhaveabrilliantfuture.Ibelieve…Ibelievethattheknowledgeyouhaveacquiredwillenableyoutobesuccessfulinwhicheveraspectoflife.第41頁Exercise你好朋友經(jīng)過努力，終于考上了西安外國語大學(xué)碩士碩士，寫個便條向她表示祝賀。第42頁March28DearLily,SoexcitedtolearnthatyouhavebeenadmittedbyXi’anInternationalStudiesUniversityasagraduate.Warmcongratulationsontherealizationofyourdream.Thishasmeantyearsofyourhardwork,andyoucanreallybeproudofit.YoursuccessisreallyanencouragementtomeandIwishwecanmeettherenextyear.Bestwishestoyou.Yours,Lucy第43頁致謝便條組成要件：致謝行為和致謝事情所謝事情詳細描述和自己感受回饋承諾再次致謝第44頁April10DearRita,

I’mwritingtoshowyouhowgratefulIamforyourhospitalityduringmyvisitinShanghai.Yourconsideratearrangementandpatientcompanionshipmademytripveryjoyful.IdidhaveawonderfultimeinShanghai.IwishyoucancometovisitXi’anifyouarefree.It’sareallybeautifulplace.Iwillbeagoodguidethen.Thankyouagain.Yours,Helen第45頁致謝便條慣用語言表示Iamwritingtotellyou…Ihopeyouunderstand…Iamwritingtoexpressmyappreciationforallthatyoudid…Thankyousomuchforyourassistance.Itwasmostkindofyoutoshare….Pleaseacceptourwarmestthanks.WithdeepestgratitudeIwriteyouhereafewlines.第46頁致謝便條慣用語言表示Everythingseemedperfectwithyourconsideration:…IamsoluckythatIhavesuchagenerousandcharmingfriend.第47頁致謝便條慣用語言表示Ishouldbehappytoreciprocateyourkindnessatanytime.IhopeIhavethechancetoreciprocateyourkindness.第48頁Exercise為了幫你經(jīng)過專業(yè)四級，張老師每星期抽兩個小時時間給你輔導(dǎo)?，F(xiàn)在你考試經(jīng)過了，想當面致謝，但他不在，給他寫份致謝便條。第49頁April15DearMr.Zhang,IamwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltappreciationforallthatyoudidformeinmyTEM-4preparation.Itisverykindofyoutohavesparedmetwohoursaweektoanswermyquestionspatiently.NowIamhappytolearnthatIhavepassedtheexam,which,Iunderstandclearly,shouldbeattributedtoyourgeneroushelp.Heartfeltthanksagain.Sincerelyyours,Hebe第50頁留言條組成要件第51頁Apr.15DearMr.Zhang,

AMr.LiuMinwhorecentlyarrivedfromBeijingcalledyouthismorningwhenyouwereout.Hesaidhewishedtoseeyou,forhehadsomethingimportanttoconsultwithyou.Youarerequestedtoringhimupatanytimethiseveningfrom8p.m.to10p.m.at….Yours,ZhangWei第52頁留言條組成要件：人物時間事件要求第53頁Exercise給你好朋友洋洋寫張便條，告訴她，她朋友張梅打電話要求和她見面。第54頁April7Yangyang,AMissZhangMeicalledyouthismorningbutyouwereout.ShewantedtomeetyouthiscomingSunday,9a.m.,attheuniversitygate.Ifthatisnotconvenientforyou,youarerequestedtoringherupatanytimethiseveningfrom8p.m.to12p.m.at….Yours,Lili第55頁通知、海報組成要件：通知事項通知事項舉行方或召集方詳細時間詳細地點參加人員呼吁參加第56頁NoticeMay10,Dearschoolmates,ToimproveourEnglish,anEnglisheveningisgoingtobeheldbyStudents’UnionofEnglishdepartmentattheStudents’Centerfrom7p.m.to9p.m.thisFriday.Youcanenjoyminiplays,Englishsongsandpoemsattheevening.Manyforeignfriendswillbeinvitedtotheeveningandtheywillofferuswonderfulperformance.AlltheteachersandstudentsarewelcometoattendtheEnglishevening.Comeandenjoytheevening.Students’Union第57頁FootballMatchEnglish0941vs.English0942Time:3p.m.,April15,Place:TheUniversityStadiumPleasecontactthePhysicalCultureandSportsCommissionTicketsarelimited.Fansshouldbequick.thePhysicalCultureandSportsCommissionApril10,第58頁Exercise著名作家亦舒來我校發(fā)表題為“文學(xué)與生活”演講，時間是4月20日早晨9點到11點，地點是教一201。以漢字系學(xué)生會名義寫個海報。第59頁Speechon“LiteratureandLife”Speaker:YiShu,famouswriterTime:9a.m.—11a.m.,April20,Place:201,TeachingBuildingOneArarechancetoknowaboutthefamouswriter!Ararechancetunderstandliteratureandlife!Literaturefanscan’taffordtomiss.Students’UnionofChineseDepartmentApril12,第60頁轉(zhuǎn)讓、求購便條組成要件：轉(zhuǎn)讓、求購原因轉(zhuǎn)讓、求購行為轉(zhuǎn)讓、求購物品詳細情況轉(zhuǎn)讓、求購價格約定第61頁ASecondhandCell-phoneforSaleApril5,Dearschoolmates,NowIhaveacell-phoneforsale.Ibroughtitonlyhalfayearago,anditisstillingoodcondition.Besidesmakingphonecalls,itcanbeusedtosendtextmessageandtakepictures.Ifyouareinterestedinit,cometomydormafter9p.m.inRoomD202toseewhetheritsatisfiesyou.Iwanttosellitforatleast500Yuan.Yours,\\\\第62頁OffertoBuy