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讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

When

Aiden

askedmetogowithhimona

camping

triptothemountains,Ithoughtitwouldmeanacottagewithawood-burningfireplaceandhotchocolate.Mycomfortableimageofcampingbecameanightmare(噩夢(mèng))whenAidenandhisolderbrother,

Lebron,showedupwithcampingsupplies-tents,rolled-upsleepingbags,andcanteens!Ididpackabackpack,asinstructed,butIhadnoideaweweregoingonsurvival

training!

Lebronhada

perfect

plan,andhehurriedmetogetinsowecouldleavethebusycitylifebehindus.Ahead,themountainsappearedbiggerthanIhadrememberedthem:thetreeswerelarger,andtheenvironmentwasmuchmoredangerous.Atleasttheweatherwas

amazing—cotton-candycloudsdottedthedeepbluesky.

Beforewebegan

hiking,LebronhadasleepingbagstuffedintomypackandtoldAidenandmeabouthikingrules.Thefirstpartoftheroadlookedeasy.Soon,thepathbecamenarrowerandrougher,forcingmetotalkless.Aswewenthigher,Icouldseetheroadzigzagging(蜿蜒)upthemountain.

“Itlookscloserthanitis,”Lebronsaid,readingmyfacialexpressions.“Thisisthemostdifficultpart…watchyourstep,nottheview.Looserocksandtreerootsmaketheroad

dangerous.”

Finally,wereachedthetop.Mylegsaching,Idroppedmypackandcomplained.“Notimetorest,”Lebronsaid,lookingupatthesky.Theweatherhadbeenwarmallday,anditfeltgoodtorelaxinthecoolwind.“The

weather

upherechangesquickly,andthatcoolairmeansastormisaroundthecorner.Weneedtosetupcamp.”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

IthoughtLebronwaskidding,butwithoutdelaytheyworkedexpertly.

Lebron,sensingthatIwasscared,reachedinhisbackpackforcandies.

試題分析文本分析：1.人物：①Aiden：askedmetogowithhimonacampingtriptothemountains②Lebron：Aiden’olderbrotherwithrichexperienceofhiking;hadaperfectplan,andhehurriedmetogetinsowecouldleavethebusycitylifebehindus③I：hadnoexperienceofhiking,thinkingitwouldmeanacottagewithawood-burningfireplaceandhotchocolate2.主要情節(jié)：好朋友Aiden約我跟他和他哥哥Lebron一起去大山里徒步。我以為會(huì)是很舒適的一次旅行，我僅僅帶了一個(gè)背包，哪里知道，這是一次極具挑戰(zhàn)的噩夢(mèng)般的徒步——不僅山高，而且大山里的天氣變化無(wú)常。好在，Aiden和Lebron很有戶外經(jīng)驗(yàn)，他們帶足了戶外徒步需要的物品，對(duì)戶外的天氣變化也很熟悉！登上山頂，我準(zhǔn)備歇一歇的時(shí)候，Lebron提醒說(shuō)，風(fēng)暴就要來(lái)了，我卻不信?！?.續(xù)寫可以寫些什么：段1：①我的想法和心態(tài)（注意與開(kāi)頭句的銜接）②在Aiden和Lebron的努力下，帳篷很快就搭好了③果然不出所料，storm真的過(guò)來(lái)了（可以適當(dāng)描寫風(fēng)暴來(lái)臨時(shí)的場(chǎng)景）段2：①Lebron邊遞給我糖果，邊盡力讓我的害怕的情緒平靜下來(lái)②storm更猛了，好在他們倆很有戶外活動(dòng)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。他們的冷靜讓我在這樣危險(xiǎn)的天氣中能保持鎮(zhèn)定③做任何事情，千萬(wàn)不能想當(dāng)然，要做足準(zhǔn)備（主題升華）下水作文

IthoughtLebronwaskidding,butwithoutdelaytheyworkedexpertly.Ididn’tcareaboutwhat

Legron

said,fortheblueskydottedbythecotton-candycloudsshowednosignsofawful

weather.IbeggedLebronand

Aidentoletmehavearest,enjoyingthecoolwind.Buttheywastednotimeandbegantosetupthe

camp.Soskilledweretheythatsoonalltheworkwasdonewiththeirgreatefforts.Hardlyhadtheyfinishedthe

perfect

workwhentherecamethestrongwindwiththeheavyrainpouringdown.(83words)

Lebron,sensingthatIwasscared,reachedinhisbackpackforcandies.Handingmethecandies,hecomfortedmeinacalmtune,saying

complainingbroughtnothingandthatprotectingourselveswasthebestchoice.Thefiercestormroaring,Icametokeepmyselfstillfromthat

dangerous

weather.Howchangeabletheweatherinthemountainswas!Thestormleftsoonandweexperienceda

survival

withnoonehurt.Itwasan

amazing

butscary

hiking,whichtaughtmenottotakeitforgrantedandtomakefullpreparationforthepossibledanger.(83words)參考范文

IthoughtLebronwaskidding,butwithoutdelaytheyworkedexpertly.Istoodaroundandpretendedtohelp,thunderrumblinginthedistance.Wehadjustfinishedputtingupthetentswhenithit.Thewind,thunder,andlightningwererelentless.

Lebron,sensingthatIwasscared,reachedinhisbackpackforcandies.Handingsomecandiestome,hestartedtoldussomestoriesabouthiscampingadventures.Buteachtimelightninglitupthetentandthethunderechoed,Ijumped.“Don’tworry.Summerstormspassquickly,”Leosaidtryingtocomfortme.“Andatleasttherainwillkeepthebearsaway,”hesaidwithateasingsmile,whichwaslesscomforting.Andasquicklyasthestormcameru