書面表達專項復(fù)習(xí)

1、書面表達專項復(fù)習(xí)歷年試題分析 年份題目題型題材體裁2008My plans for the Summer Holiday半開放(漢語提示)暑假生活安排記敘文2009介紹Phillips半開放(漢語提示)人物介紹記敘文2010郊游通知半開放(漢語提示)說明郊游的時間、地點、活動安排及注意事項應(yīng)用文2011發(fā)言稿半開放(漢語提示)談?wù)勀阍谙牧顮I的活動及收獲應(yīng)用文Writing skills書面表達六步法檢查譽寫修改成文造句 審題 書面表達一、審題 1. 確定體裁和格式 2. 確定主體時態(tài) 3. 確定中心人稱 4. 確定得分點 下周五將有考察團對我市進行考察（do some investigatin

2、g)。下面是考察的有關(guān)事項，請你向考察團的朋友寫一份書面的通知。 1. 乘車前往糖廠（the sugar factory)，半小時到達； 2. 集中時間：上午8：000； 3. 集中地點：市政府門前（the citys government)； 4. 在糖廠與工人們一起吃午飯； 5. 午飯后在廠會議室集中，下午2：00 離開。2011年柳州中考作文題 假設(shè)上個星期六你們?nèi)ス珗@植樹，在回家的路上你救了一只受傷的小鳥。請根據(jù)下表提供的中文提示，用英語寫一篇70個詞左右的短文，介紹事情的經(jīng)過。開頭已給出。時間上星期六地點 從公園回家的路上經(jīng)過 1.我在樹下發(fā)現(xiàn)了一只受傷的小鳥，它不能飛了2.我把它帶

3、回家，細心照顧它3.現(xiàn)在小鳥好多了，我打算 感想 動物是我們的好朋友，我們應(yīng)該愛護動物 Last Saturday ,our class went to plant trees in the park. _1. be friendly to.She is friendly to everyone in the factory.My dream came true.2. be bad forEating too much is bad for our health.二、遣詞造句步驟1. 抓主干，定時態(tài)；2. 套句型，連成句；二、遣詞造句6.buyforShe bought some presen

4、ts for her e true4. take sb. to hospitalWe took him to hospital. He was taken to hospital. 5. fly kitesThey will fly kites in the park next week.姓名 Phillips 年齡12 國家The USA 愛好游泳、畫畫、照顧動物. 周末活動幫助打掃動物園，為動物制作標(biāo)志牌. 1. Phillips 12歲了. Phillips is twelve years old. 2.他來自The USA. He comes from the USA. He is a

5、n American. 3.他喜歡游泳. He likes going swimming. 4.他也喜歡畫畫. He also likes drawing. 5.他還喜歡照顧動物，等等。 He likes taking care of the animals, and so on. 6.周末的時候他幫助打掃動物園。 He often helps to clean the zoo at the weekend. 7.他為動物制作標(biāo)志牌。 He usually makes some signal board for the animals at the weekends.姓名Phillips 年齡

6、12 國家The USA 愛好游泳、畫畫、照顧動物. 周末活動幫助打掃動物園，為動物制作標(biāo)志牌. Phillips and Animal Signs Many teenagers love animals . Phillips is one of them.Ethan Phillips is twelve years old. He is a student . He studies in a middle school .He comes from the USA. He is an American. He likes going swimming. He also likes drawi

7、ng. He likes taking care of the animals, and so on. He often helps to clean the zoo at the weekend. He usually makes some signal board for the animals at the weekends. 三、成文 創(chuàng)設(shè)好的開端,適當(dāng)使用一些關(guān)聯(lián)詞，把材料按一定的邏輯順序串聯(lián)起來，使之連貫,首尾要注意呼應(yīng),使文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整. Everyone should learn from Phillips, we should take care of the animals,

8、 the animals are our friends. Lets do it today.四.修改注意事項1. 時態(tài)是否正確;2. 主謂是否一致;3. 要點是否全面;4. 人稱是否正確;5. 語序問題;6. 是否符合語言習(xí)慣;7. 固定短語。1.Hes hobby is play basketball.3.He often by bike to school.his playing his playing His hobby is playing basketball.Though were were tired, we had a good time.He often goes to s

9、chool by bike. He often takes a bike to school4.My hometown in summer has many beautiful flowers.There are many beautiful flow ers in my hometown in summer.火眼金睛，洞察秋毫2.Though we were tired , but we had a good time.實戰(zhàn)演練實戰(zhàn)演練實戰(zhàn)演練實戰(zhàn)演練實戰(zhàn)演練 5. I very like making friends with you. I like making friends with

10、 you very much. 6. I watching TV now. I am watching TV now. 7. There will have a big party in the park tomorrow. 8. They were had a picnic in the park yesterday.There will be a big party in the park tomorrow. They had a picnic in the park yesterday.火眼金睛，洞察秋毫9.He without breakfast goes to work.He goe

11、s to work without breakfast.五、謄寫 書寫工整、卷面整潔會為高分奠定基礎(chǔ)。六、檢查 謄寫以后要檢查一遍，看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點符號、字母大小寫等錯誤。Writing skills書面表達六步法檢查譽寫修改成文造句 審題 書面表達實戰(zhàn)演練 現(xiàn)場直播 2010中考作文 假設(shè)你是李華。中考后 ，你們班將到陽光農(nóng)場郊游。請你通過e-mail將有關(guān)事項通知全班同學(xué)，要點如下： The trip to the Sunshine Farm When to start 6月28日早上8:00 Where to meet 學(xué)校操場 how to go 乘坐校車 What to do 野

12、餐、摘西紅柿、草莓. Safety tips 不要到河里游泳；不要單獨行動 參考詞匯：get close to the nature（親近大自然） strawberries（草莓）詞數(shù)60-80（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）,文中不能出現(xiàn)真人真名所給的要點必須用上，緊扣主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮Hello, everyone!Would you like to have fun after the exam? Well Welcome to join us! Yours, Li HuaHello, everyone ! Would you like to have fun after the exam?

13、 Well have an exciting trip to the Sunshine Farm on June 28th.On that day ,we will meet on the school playground at 8:00 in the morning .The school bus will take us there. We can get relaxed and get close to the nature .On the farm ,we will have a picnic .We can also pick vegetables and fruits such

14、as tomatoes and strawberries .But we mustnt swim in the lake .And we cant go off on our own. Im sure we will enjoy ourselves on the Sunshine Farm. Welcome to join us! Yours Li Hua短文欣賞根據(jù)提示和要求完成下面短文。 假如你(Li Lei)在去年夏令營認識的一個朋友Jim從英國給你寄來一件禮物一件紅色的襯衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你問好，他想知道你近來在忙些什么。請你給他寫一封回信(60-80個詞)表示感謝?；匦乓?/p>

15、括以下內(nèi)容：1向Jim問好并對他表示感謝。2禮物是你最喜歡的顏色，尺寸很合適，你非常喜歡。3告訴Jim你近來很好，上周剛過完生日，生日聚會 很熱鬧。詢問Jim的近況，并表示希望他能來中國。 Homework關(guān)于提高英語寫作的一些建議：1.記好單詞，背好詞組及句型2.鞏固語法知識，掌握各類詞的應(yīng)用。3.早晚讀多讀佳作范文，積累好詞好句。4.堅持每天口頭造句，每周練習(xí)至少一篇。5.注意練字，提高書寫。 Remember, nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it! 要靈活變通，避免硬譯式表達 1.漢語式英語我們發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)好英語是很困難的。

16、漢語式英語：We find that learn English well is diffi-cult. 地道表達：We find it difficult to learn English well. 呆在家里不能親身了解外界。 漢語式英語：Staying at home lonely can not know the outside of the world . 地道表達：They will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world when staying at home. 2.直譯類 1.21世紀報圖文并茂，廣為人知，深受

17、青睞。 直譯類：2lst Century has interesting articles and colorful pictures .It is widely known and deeply loved by people 轉(zhuǎn)換表達：The 21st Century has interesting articles with colorful pictures .It is a Well-known newspaper. which is very popular with students and English learners . 校園環(huán)境幽靜，綠樹成陰。 轉(zhuǎn)換表達：A. It i

18、s quiet in our school and there are a lot of trees in and around it. B. Our school is quiet with a lot of trees in and around it .2011年中考作文 假設(shè)你是李華，正在參加英語夏令營。請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀阍谙牧顮I的活動及收獲。開頭已給出。 寫作要點： 1. 擅長運動，參加籃球隊及比賽，學(xué)會與隊友合作 2. 喜歡英語，參加英語角，結(jié)交新朋友； 3. 用英語交流，提高英語水平。參考詞匯：與隊友合作 work with the teammates； 英語角 th

19、e English corner寫作要求：1. 詞數(shù)60-80個 2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名 3. 所給的要點必須用上，緊扣主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮 Hello, everyone! Im Li Hua . I have learnt a lot on the English summer camp.I think I have done a good job. Thank you.3.簡單羅列類： 業(yè)余愛好：游泳、溜冰、集郵、流行音樂。 羅列表達：Hobbits：swimming , skating,collecting stamps，pop music 機械表達：My hobbies are

20、swimming , skating, collecting stamps，pop music. 靈活變通表達：In my spare time I enjoy listing to pop mu-sic and collecting stamps. My favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter 內(nèi)容：白天，上課、做作業(yè)；晚上，做作業(yè)。 羅列重復(fù)式表達：In the daytime. We took lessons and had to do our homework. In the evening .we ha

21、d to do our homework. 靈活變通表達：We have to go to school even at week-ends and do much homework both in the day time and in the evening.It is fine last Sunday. I and my classmate by bike went to visit an old peoples home . We got to there is at 10:00. We used ours pocket money buy some fruit and flowers to the old people. They were look very happy when they seeing us. We some helped they cleaned the rooms. So