書(shū)面表達(dá)專(zhuān)項(xiàng)復(fù)習(xí)

1、書(shū)面表達(dá)專(zhuān)項(xiàng)復(fù)習(xí)歷年試題分析 年份題目題型題材體裁2008My plans for the Summer Holiday半開(kāi)放(漢語(yǔ)提示)暑假生活安排記敘文2009介紹Phillips半開(kāi)放(漢語(yǔ)提示)人物介紹記敘文2010郊游通知半開(kāi)放(漢語(yǔ)提示)說(shuō)明郊游的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng)安排及注意事項(xiàng)應(yīng)用文2011發(fā)言稿半開(kāi)放(漢語(yǔ)提示)談?wù)勀阍谙牧顮I(yíng)的活動(dòng)及收獲應(yīng)用文Writing skills書(shū)面表達(dá)六步法檢查譽(yù)寫(xiě)修改成文造句 審題 書(shū)面表達(dá)一、審題 1. 確定體裁和格式 2. 確定主體時(shí)態(tài) 3. 確定中心人稱(chēng) 4. 確定得分點(diǎn) 下周五將有考察團(tuán)對(duì)我市進(jìn)行考察（do some investigatin

2、g)。下面是考察的有關(guān)事項(xiàng)，請(qǐng)你向考察團(tuán)的朋友寫(xiě)一份書(shū)面的通知。 1. 乘車(chē)前往糖廠（the sugar factory)，半小時(shí)到達(dá)； 2. 集中時(shí)間：上午8：000； 3. 集中地點(diǎn)：市政府門(mén)前（the citys government)； 4. 在糖廠與工人們一起吃午飯； 5. 午飯后在廠會(huì)議室集中，下午2：00 離開(kāi)。2011年柳州中考作文題 假設(shè)上個(gè)星期六你們?nèi)ス珗@植樹(shù)，在回家的路上你救了一只受傷的小鳥(niǎo)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提供的中文提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇70個(gè)詞左右的短文，介紹事情的經(jīng)過(guò)。開(kāi)頭已給出。時(shí)間上星期六地點(diǎn) 從公園回家的路上經(jīng)過(guò) 1.我在樹(shù)下發(fā)現(xiàn)了一只受傷的小鳥(niǎo)，它不能飛了2.我把它帶

3、回家，細(xì)心照顧它3.現(xiàn)在小鳥(niǎo)好多了，我打算 感想 動(dòng)物是我們的好朋友，我們應(yīng)該愛(ài)護(hù)動(dòng)物 Last Saturday ,our class went to plant trees in the park. _1. be friendly to.She is friendly to everyone in the factory.My dream came true.2. be bad forEating too much is bad for our health.二、遣詞造句步驟1. 抓主干，定時(shí)態(tài)；2. 套句型，連成句；二、遣詞造句6.buyforShe bought some presen

4、ts for her e true4. take sb. to hospitalWe took him to hospital. He was taken to hospital. 5. fly kitesThey will fly kites in the park next week.姓名 Phillips 年齡12 國(guó)家The USA 愛(ài)好游泳、畫(huà)畫(huà)、照顧動(dòng)物. 周末活動(dòng)幫助打掃動(dòng)物園，為動(dòng)物制作標(biāo)志牌. 1. Phillips 12歲了. Phillips is twelve years old. 2.他來(lái)自The USA. He comes from the USA. He is a

5、n American. 3.他喜歡游泳. He likes going swimming. 4.他也喜歡畫(huà)畫(huà). He also likes drawing. 5.他還喜歡照顧動(dòng)物，等等。 He likes taking care of the animals, and so on. 6.周末的時(shí)候他幫助打掃動(dòng)物園。 He often helps to clean the zoo at the weekend. 7.他為動(dòng)物制作標(biāo)志牌。 He usually makes some signal board for the animals at the weekends.姓名Phillips 年齡

6、12 國(guó)家The USA 愛(ài)好游泳、畫(huà)畫(huà)、照顧動(dòng)物. 周末活動(dòng)幫助打掃動(dòng)物園，為動(dòng)物制作標(biāo)志牌. Phillips and Animal Signs Many teenagers love animals . Phillips is one of them.Ethan Phillips is twelve years old. He is a student . He studies in a middle school .He comes from the USA. He is an American. He likes going swimming. He also likes drawi

7、ng. He likes taking care of the animals, and so on. He often helps to clean the zoo at the weekend. He usually makes some signal board for the animals at the weekends. 三、成文 創(chuàng)設(shè)好的開(kāi)端,適當(dāng)使用一些關(guān)聯(lián)詞，把材料按一定的邏輯順序串聯(lián)起來(lái)，使之連貫,首尾要注意呼應(yīng),使文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整. Everyone should learn from Phillips, we should take care of the animals,

8、 the animals are our friends. Lets do it today.四.修改注意事項(xiàng)1. 時(shí)態(tài)是否正確;2. 主謂是否一致;3. 要點(diǎn)是否全面;4. 人稱(chēng)是否正確;5. 語(yǔ)序問(wèn)題;6. 是否符合語(yǔ)言習(xí)慣;7. 固定短語(yǔ)。1.Hes hobby is play basketball.3.He often by bike to school.his playing his playing His hobby is playing basketball.Though were were tired, we had a good time.He often goes to s

9、chool by bike. He often takes a bike to school4.My hometown in summer has many beautiful flowers.There are many beautiful flow ers in my hometown in summer.火眼金睛，洞察秋毫2.Though we were tired , but we had a good time.實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練 5. I very like making friends with you. I like making friends with

10、 you very much. 6. I watching TV now. I am watching TV now. 7. There will have a big party in the park tomorrow. 8. They were had a picnic in the park yesterday.There will be a big party in the park tomorrow. They had a picnic in the park yesterday.火眼金睛，洞察秋毫9.He without breakfast goes to work.He goe

11、s to work without breakfast.五、謄寫(xiě) 書(shū)寫(xiě)工整、卷面整潔會(huì)為高分奠定基礎(chǔ)。六、檢查 謄寫(xiě)以后要檢查一遍，看有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、字母大小寫(xiě)等錯(cuò)誤。Writing skills書(shū)面表達(dá)六步法檢查譽(yù)寫(xiě)修改成文造句 審題 書(shū)面表達(dá)實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練 現(xiàn)場(chǎng)直播 2010中考作文 假設(shè)你是李華。中考后 ，你們班將到陽(yáng)光農(nóng)場(chǎng)郊游。請(qǐng)你通過(guò)e-mail將有關(guān)事項(xiàng)通知全班同學(xué)，要點(diǎn)如下： The trip to the Sunshine Farm When to start 6月28日早上8:00 Where to meet 學(xué)校操場(chǎng) how to go 乘坐校車(chē) What to do 野

12、餐、摘西紅柿、草莓. Safety tips 不要到河里游泳；不要單獨(dú)行動(dòng) 參考詞匯：get close to the nature（親近大自然） strawberries（草莓）詞數(shù)60-80（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）,文中不能出現(xiàn)真人真名所給的要點(diǎn)必須用上，緊扣主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮Hello, everyone!Would you like to have fun after the exam? Well Welcome to join us! Yours, Li HuaHello, everyone ! Would you like to have fun after the exam?

13、 Well have an exciting trip to the Sunshine Farm on June 28th.On that day ,we will meet on the school playground at 8:00 in the morning .The school bus will take us there. We can get relaxed and get close to the nature .On the farm ,we will have a picnic .We can also pick vegetables and fruits such

14、as tomatoes and strawberries .But we mustnt swim in the lake .And we cant go off on our own. Im sure we will enjoy ourselves on the Sunshine Farm. Welcome to join us! Yours Li Hua短文欣賞根據(jù)提示和要求完成下面短文。 假如你(Li Lei)在去年夏令營(yíng)認(rèn)識(shí)的一個(gè)朋友Jim從英國(guó)給你寄來(lái)一件禮物一件紅色的襯衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你問(wèn)好，他想知道你近來(lái)在忙些什么。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封回信(60-80個(gè)詞)表示感謝。回信要包

15、括以下內(nèi)容：1向Jim問(wèn)好并對(duì)他表示感謝。2禮物是你最喜歡的顏色，尺寸很合適，你非常喜歡。3告訴Jim你近來(lái)很好，上周剛過(guò)完生日，生日聚會(huì) 很熱鬧。詢問(wèn)Jim的近況，并表示希望他能來(lái)中國(guó)。 Homework關(guān)于提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作的一些建議：1.記好單詞，背好詞組及句型2.鞏固語(yǔ)法知識(shí)，掌握各類(lèi)詞的應(yīng)用。3.早晚讀多讀佳作范文，積累好詞好句。4.堅(jiān)持每天口頭造句，每周練習(xí)至少一篇。5.注意練字，提高書(shū)寫(xiě)。 Remember, nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it! 要靈活變通，避免硬譯式表達(dá) 1.漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)我們發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)好英語(yǔ)是很困難的。

16、漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)：We find that learn English well is diffi-cult. 地道表達(dá)：We find it difficult to learn English well. 呆在家里不能親身了解外界。 漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)：Staying at home lonely can not know the outside of the world . 地道表達(dá)：They will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world when staying at home. 2.直譯類(lèi) 1.21世紀(jì)報(bào)圖文并茂，廣為人知，深受

17、青睞。 直譯類(lèi)：2lst Century has interesting articles and colorful pictures .It is widely known and deeply loved by people 轉(zhuǎn)換表達(dá)：The 21st Century has interesting articles with colorful pictures .It is a Well-known newspaper. which is very popular with students and English learners . 校園環(huán)境幽靜，綠樹(shù)成陰。 轉(zhuǎn)換表達(dá)：A. It i

18、s quiet in our school and there are a lot of trees in and around it. B. Our school is quiet with a lot of trees in and around it .2011年中考作文 假設(shè)你是李華，正在參加英語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀阍谙牧顮I(yíng)的活動(dòng)及收獲。開(kāi)頭已給出。 寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)： 1. 擅長(zhǎng)運(yùn)動(dòng)，參加籃球隊(duì)及比賽，學(xué)會(huì)與隊(duì)友合作 2. 喜歡英語(yǔ)，參加英語(yǔ)角，結(jié)交新朋友； 3. 用英語(yǔ)交流，提高英語(yǔ)水平。參考詞匯：與隊(duì)友合作 work with the teammates； 英語(yǔ)角 th

19、e English corner寫(xiě)作要求：1. 詞數(shù)60-80個(gè) 2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名 3. 所給的要點(diǎn)必須用上，緊扣主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮 Hello, everyone! Im Li Hua . I have learnt a lot on the English summer camp.I think I have done a good job. Thank you.3.簡(jiǎn)單羅列類(lèi)： 業(yè)余愛(ài)好：游泳、溜冰、集郵、流行音樂(lè)。 羅列表達(dá)：Hobbits：swimming , skating,collecting stamps，pop music 機(jī)械表達(dá)：My hobbies are

20、swimming , skating, collecting stamps，pop music. 靈活變通表達(dá)：In my spare time I enjoy listing to pop mu-sic and collecting stamps. My favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter 內(nèi)容：白天，上課、做作業(yè)；晚上，做作業(yè)。 羅列重復(fù)式表達(dá)：In the daytime. We took lessons and had to do our homework. In the evening .we ha

21、d to do our homework. 靈活變通表達(dá)：We have to go to school even at week-ends and do much homework both in the day time and in the evening.It is fine last Sunday. I and my classmate by bike went to visit an old peoples home . We got to there is at 10:00. We used ours pocket money buy some fruit and flowers to the old people. They were look very happy when they seeing us. We some helped they cleaned the rooms. So