中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作提升-說(shuō)明文課件

1、中考英語(yǔ)作文專題1中考英語(yǔ)作文專題1評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 第一檔（14-15分）符合題意要求，表達(dá)完整，條理清晰，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)言正確無(wú)誤，大小寫(xiě)及標(biāo)點(diǎn)運(yùn)用得當(dāng)。全文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)密、完整，語(yǔ)言流暢。 第二檔（10-13分）符合題意要求，表達(dá)基本完整，條理清晰，語(yǔ)句較通順，語(yǔ)言基本無(wú)誤。有語(yǔ)法或標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤，但句子較為順暢，文章思路清晰，邏輯推理正確，結(jié)構(gòu)完整。 第三檔（7-9分）基本符合題意要求，表達(dá)基本完整，條理較清晰，語(yǔ)句較通順。語(yǔ)法或標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤較多。文章結(jié)構(gòu)不嚴(yán)密，但表達(dá)疑似清楚。 第四檔（4-6分）基本符合題意要求，表達(dá)不清楚，語(yǔ)法或表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤過(guò)多，詞數(shù)不夠，語(yǔ)意表達(dá)不清晰，文章邏輯混亂。 第五檔（0-3分）能傳

2、達(dá)給讀者少許信息；內(nèi)容太少，無(wú)法評(píng)判；寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無(wú)關(guān)或所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容無(wú)法看清。2評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 第一檔符合題意要求，表達(dá)完整，條理清晰，語(yǔ)句寫(xiě)作小技巧寫(xiě)作小技巧學(xué)生例句更改例句1.用兩個(gè)詞而不用一個(gè)詞。My family and I had a good trip.My family and I had a good and relaxing trip.2.適當(dāng)添加副詞或者介詞短語(yǔ)。Students like chatting on the phone.Most students like chatting on the phone after school/in the free time.

3、 3. 同義替換，避免重復(fù)。I like reading books. I love reading.I enjoy reading.4.使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞表示文章的邏輯。I should talk with my good friend, and I should listen to music.I fail in the math. I am upset.First, I can talk with my good friend. Second, I can listen to music to relax myself.I fail in math so I am upset. 5. 學(xué)會(huì)使用簡(jiǎn)

4、單的句子， 避免過(guò)度重復(fù)。We should improve pronunciation as well by listening to the conversation in English movies.We should improve pronunciation by listening to the conversation from English movies.3寫(xiě)作小技巧寫(xiě)作小技巧學(xué)生例句更改例句1.用兩個(gè)詞而不用一個(gè)詞說(shuō)明文寫(xiě)前“2W”: what, why, 人稱、時(shí)態(tài)subject, tense頭腦風(fēng)暴:brainstorming列提綱: 搜集、提取信息寫(xiě)中組織信息添加內(nèi)

5、容選取信息（根據(jù)內(nèi)容而定）自我檢查寫(xiě)后檢查內(nèi)容（主要信息）檢查詞數(shù)檢查語(yǔ)法拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、結(jié)構(gòu)等審題書(shū)寫(xiě)檢查4說(shuō)明文寫(xiě)前“2W”: what, why, 寫(xiě)中組織信息寫(xiě)后說(shuō)明文1. 背景信息2. Whats it?WhatWhy 1.Why is it special?2. Why do you like it?How 根據(jù)提示信息擴(kuò)展內(nèi)容Other.寫(xiě)前審題5說(shuō)明文WhatWhyHowOther寫(xiě)前審題5真題賞析6真題賞析6即將畢業(yè)的你，將如何處置初中階段的各種書(shū)籍和筆記呢？假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給學(xué)校英文報(bào)紙寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，分享你處理這些書(shū)籍和筆記的計(jì)劃與理由。(2019年陜西省中考英

6、語(yǔ)作文)put into different kindsgivetohave a book sale要求: 1. 參考提示語(yǔ)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整； 3. 文章不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、學(xué)校和地名等） 4. 詞數(shù): 不少于70詞。（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。） Dear Editor, My name is Li Hua. Im going to graduate soon. Id like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks. I hope文章的背景信息人稱:

7、 I時(shí)態(tài)：一般將來(lái)時(shí)7即將畢業(yè)的你，將如何處置初中階段的各種書(shū)籍和筆記呢？假如你是 說(shuō)明文1. 背景信息2. Whats it?WhatWhy 1.Why is it special?2. Why do you like it?How 根據(jù)提示信息擴(kuò)展內(nèi)容Other.寫(xiě)前Id like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks. 1.useful2.at low prices3.study at home on summer vacationput into different kindsgivetoha

8、ve a book saleStep 1審題8說(shuō)明文WhatWhyHowOther.寫(xiě)前Id lik 說(shuō)明文1. 背景信息2. Whats it?WhatWhy 1.Why is it special?2. Why do you like it?How 根據(jù)提示信息擴(kuò)展內(nèi)容Other寫(xiě)前Id like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks. 1.useful2.at low prices3.study at home on summer vacationput into different kinds

9、givetohave a book sale.Step 2第一人稱一般將來(lái)時(shí)審題9說(shuō)明文WhatWhyHowOther寫(xiě)前Id like t 說(shuō)明文1. 背景信息2. Whats it?WhatWhy 1.Why is it special?2. Why do you like it?How 根據(jù)提示信息擴(kuò)展內(nèi)容Other寫(xiě)前Id like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks. 1.useful2.at low prices3.study at home on summer vacationput

10、into different kindsgivetohave a book sale1.keep the notebooks for myself2.bring me a lot of sweet memoriesStep 3第一人稱一般將來(lái)時(shí)審題10說(shuō)明文WhatWhyHowOther寫(xiě)前Id like t寫(xiě)前 搜集、提取信息1. put books into different kinds2. give my textbooks to younger sisters3. have a book sale4. keep the notebooks for myself5. bring me

11、a lot of sweet memories6. Firstly,Secondly,Next,FinallyStep 4寫(xiě)前 搜集、提取信息1. put books into di寫(xiě)前依據(jù)呈現(xiàn)句子將第一條提示語(yǔ)轉(zhuǎn)化為第一條理由Firstly, I will put books into different kinds.將第二條提示語(yǔ)轉(zhuǎn)化為第二條理由Secondly, I am going to give my textbooks to younger sisters.根據(jù)上文添加信息They can study at home during the comingsummer vacation

12、.將第三條提示語(yǔ)轉(zhuǎn)化為第三條理由Thirdly, I have a book sale.Step 5根據(jù)上文添加信息Children can buy them at low prices.添加信息 I want to keep the notebooks for myself.Because they bring me a lot of sweet memories.添加信息The used paper will be taken to the waste center. 搜集、提取信息12寫(xiě)前依據(jù)呈現(xiàn)句子將第一條提示語(yǔ)轉(zhuǎn)化為第一條理由Firstly寫(xiě)中Step 1 First of all,

13、 I will put all my books into different kinds. Secondly, I am going to give my textbooks to my younger sisters. They can study at home during the coming summer vacation. Thirdly, I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices. I decide to keep the notebooks for m

14、yself. They bring me lots of sweet memories. Finally, the used paper will be taken to the waste center. These are my ideas. I hope they can help. Yours, Li Hua組織信息draft13寫(xiě)中Step 1 First of all,Whats moreIn this way寫(xiě)中 First of all, I will put all my books into different kinds. Secondly, I am going to

15、give my textbooks to my younger sisters. They can study at home during the coming summer vacation. Thirdly, I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices. I decide to keep the notebooks for myself. They bring me lots of sweet memories. Finally, the used paper wi

16、ll be taken to the waste center. These are my ideas. I hope they can help. Yours, Li HuaStep 2添加信息（寫(xiě)作小技巧）Besides寫(xiě)作小技巧4寫(xiě)作小技巧214Whats moreIn this way寫(xiě)中 主要內(nèi)容檢查詞數(shù)檢查語(yǔ)法拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、結(jié)構(gòu)寫(xiě)后Step 3 First of all, I will put all my books into different kinds. Secondly, I am going to give my textbooks to my younger siste

17、rs.In the way, they can study at home during the coming summer vacation. Besides, I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices.Whats more, I decide to keep the notebooks for myself. They bring me lots of sweet memories. Finally, the used paper will be taken to

18、the waste center. These are my ideas. I hope they can help. Yours, Li Hua15主要內(nèi)容寫(xiě)后Step 3 First o First of all, I will put all my books into different kinds. Secondly, I am going to give my textbooks to my younger sisters.In the way, they can study at home during the coming summer vacation. Besides, I

19、 want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices.Whats more, I decide to keep the notebooks for myself. They bring me lots of sweet memories. Finally, the used paper will be taken to the waste center. These are my ideas. I hope they can help. Yours, Li Hua最終呈現(xiàn)八年級(jí)的難度

20、16 First of all, I wi真題賞析17真題賞析17每個(gè)人都有自己喜歡的衣服，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示語(yǔ)，以”My favourite_” 為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹一件你最喜愛(ài)的衣服。(2017陜西中考英語(yǔ)作文)提示語(yǔ)：My favouriteWhat does it look like?Why do you like it?When do you wear it?.What is it made of?cottonfiber(纖維)wool(羊毛)silk.要求：1. 請(qǐng)將短文題目補(bǔ)充完整；2. 參考提示語(yǔ)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整；4. 文章不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、

21、校名和地名等）5. 詞數(shù)：不得少于70詞。（開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總數(shù)詞）18每個(gè)人都有自己喜歡的衣服，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示語(yǔ)，以”My favouMy favouriteWhat does it look like?Why do you like it?When do you wear it?.What is it made of?cottonfiber(纖維)wool(羊毛)silk.寫(xiě)前審題第一人稱一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)Step 119My favouriteWhat does it look 寫(xiě)前Step 2搜集信息My favourite T-shirtWhat does it look like?It i

22、s a T-shirt. It is white.Why do you like it?special gift,birthday giftWhen do you wear it?parties with friendsIt brings me a lot of sweet memories.It is made of cotton and fiber.審題20寫(xiě)前Step 2搜集信息My favourite T-shi組織信息My favourite_ Among all my clothes, I like one of the _best. It is white.It is made

23、of cotton and fiber. I like it because this is my birthday gift. Its a very special gift from him. He sent it to me last year for my 14th birthday. I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with my friends. This is my favorite T-shirt. It brings me a lot of happy memories.寫(xiě)中Step 1T-shirtT-shirtdr

24、aft21組織信息My favourite_寫(xiě)中SMy favourite_ Among all my clothes, I like one of the _best. It is white.It is made of cotton and fiber, so its very comfortable. I like it because there is a photo of my best friend and me on it. Its a very special gift from him. He sent it to me last year for my 14th birth

25、day. I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with my friends. It makes me remember the time we two spent together. This is my favorite T-shirt. It brings me a lot of happy memories.T-shirtT-shirttopic sentencewhywhenwhat is it made of寫(xiě)中Step 2添加信息22My favourite_T-shirtMy favourite_ Among all my

26、clothes, I like one of the _best. It is white, it is made of cotton and fiber, so its very comfortable. I like it because there is a photo of my best friend and me on it. Its a very special gift from him. He sent it to me last year for my 14th birthday. I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties w

27、ith my friends. It makes me remember the time we two spent together. This is my favorite T-shirt. It brings me a lot of happy memories.T-shirtT-shirttopic sentencewhywhensummarywhat is it made of總分總寫(xiě)中Step 3自我檢查23My favourite_T-shirtMy favourite_ Among all my clothes, I like one of the _best. It is w

28、hite, it is made of cotton and fiber, so its very comfortable. I like it because there is a photo of my best friend and me on it. Its a very special gift from him. He sent it to me last year for my 14th birthday. I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with my friends. It makes me remember the

29、time we two spent together. This is my favorite T-shirt. It brings me a lot of happy memories.T-shirtT-shirt最終呈現(xiàn)八年級(jí)的難度24My favourite_T-shirtPractice makes perfect!25Practice makes perfect!25某英文網(wǎng)站開(kāi)展關(guān)于“美麗校園，健康生活”的征稿活動(dòng)。親你根據(jù)一下圖示內(nèi)容積極投稿，倡導(dǎo)同學(xué)們“愛(ài)護(hù)校園環(huán)境，健康快樂(lè)生活”。(2020年陜西中考英語(yǔ))Practice要求：1. 請(qǐng)將短文題目補(bǔ)充完整；2. 參考提示語(yǔ)，可

30、適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整；4. 文章不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）5. 詞數(shù)：不得少于70詞。（開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總數(shù)詞）keep the school cleando sportslook after yourselfother Students need to have a healthy school life. What can we do to make it? Here Ive got some ideas to share with you.第一人稱一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)說(shuō)明文topic: whatHow26某英文網(wǎng)站開(kāi)展關(guān)于“美麗校園，健康生活”的征稿活動(dòng)

31、。親你根據(jù)說(shuō)明文Step1What:健康生活Why: How: 提示詞人稱、時(shí)態(tài) subject, tense頭腦風(fēng)暴:brainstorming列提綱: 搜集、提取信息Step2組織信息添加內(nèi)容 選取信息(根據(jù)內(nèi)容而定)自我檢查Step3檢查內(nèi)容（主要信息）檢查詞數(shù)檢查語(yǔ)法拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、結(jié)構(gòu)等審題書(shū)寫(xiě)檢查寫(xiě)前 important, goodWhy27說(shuō)明文Step1What:健康生活Step2組織信息Step寫(xiě)中 First, it is important to keep our school clean. For example, we can clean the desks and fl

32、oor every day,because good environment is helpful to our study and health. Second, its good to do some sports like running, playing basketball and so on. Third, wed better look after ourselves well, such as washing hands in time and wearing masks when it is necessary. Finally, if we always get on we

33、ll each other and keep happy, well enjoy a happy and healthy school life.draft28寫(xiě)中 First, it is important First, it is important to keep our school clean. For example, we can clean the desks and floor every day,because good environment is helpful to our study and health. Second, its good to do some

34、sports like running, playing basketball and so on. Third, wed better look after ourselves well, such as washing hands in time and wearing masks when it is necessary. Finally, if we always get on well each other and keep happy, well enjoy a happy and healthy school life.寫(xiě)作原技巧4：文章具有邏輯性和連貫性寫(xiě)作技巧4：簡(jiǎn)單句變成復(fù)合句if條件句“主將從現(xiàn)”點(diǎn)睛之筆寫(xiě)中29 First, it is important t寫(xiě)后 First, it is important to keep our school clean. For example, we can clean the desks and floor every day,because good environm