英語讀后續(xù)寫課件

1、Continuation writing 讀后續(xù)寫的具體要求 提供一段350詞以內(nèi)的語言材料，要求考生依據(jù)該材料內(nèi)容、所給段落開頭語進(jìn)行續(xù)寫（150詞左右），將其發(fā)展成一篇與給定材料有邏輯銜接、情節(jié)和結(jié)構(gòu)完整的短文。1如何構(gòu)思續(xù)寫的內(nèi)容 Step 1 Read for elements(要素） Step 2 Read for plots（情節(jié)） Step 3 Gather ideas Step 4 Make predictions（預(yù)測） Step 1 Read for elementswhen:where:who:what: why:my mom, I, receptionist, betw

2、een spring and summeron the road through the countryside gave flowers to nursing home，Leaving flowers for someone makes mom feel good.Tip1: We can get the main idea with the help of_. broke down5W questions Step 2 Read for plotsNo garage, no passers-byRead for plots and feelingswriters behaviorswrit

3、ers feelingsways to express feelings were driving,unhappyimpatient, annoyed“Do you know someone there?” curious,confused“Did you leave your name?”heard the car burst worriedhopelesssomewhere between spring and summer, Suddenly，in the middle of nowhereBefore she started the car,Not long after we cont

4、inued driving, Suddenly，adj.actions dialoguessurroundings timescried, skimmed, looked back“What?”“What did you do with the flowers?”no garage, no passers-byrebellious(叛逆的）.drove to ask:Tip2: While writing, we can express our inner feelings byadjActionsDialoguesSurroundingSimile(比喻)BeginningClimaxEnd

5、ingalways unhappycurious, confusedmisunderstandingworried, hopelessimpatient, annoyedFeeling analysisdevelopment?The writer has_with his mom Step 3 Gather ideasgather the ideas信息整理：genre(體裁)：narration(記敘文)tense(時(shí)態(tài))：the past tense(一般過去時(shí))main idea原文核心信息解讀：Between spring and summer, on the road through

6、 the countryside my mom gave flowers to a nursing home, because leaving flowers for others made her feel good. Unluckily, our car broke down.Step 4 Make predictions Group talking for the plot developmentsPara. 1：We were worried about what could be done. 1. How would the writer show their worries?2.

7、Did anyone come to help them?Who? feeling3. How did the writer feel about being helped?Tip3 The ending of Para1 should be connected with Para2The car should have been repaired Various ways to express worriesadj.:actions: dialogues: surroundings: After what seemed to be ages, I scratched my head, sta

8、mped my foot and walked back and forth hopelessly.“What if no one is willing to help us? Would we die from thirsty ?” I murmured in a low voice.The air was thick and the hot sun was burning us, I stood there clumsily with nothing to do.Deadly silence swallowed the road thoroughly, leaving nothing bu

9、t hopelessness. Worried and depressed, I was wandering along the road aimlessly.simile:比喻 I was walking back and forth like an ant on a hot pan.Group talking for the plot developmentsPara. 1：We were worried about what could be done. 1. How would the writer show their worries?2. Did anyone come to he

10、lp them?Who? feelingthe receptionist?an old garage man?a stranger?relievedthankfulhopeful3. How did the writer feel about being helped?1. Seeing a flower shop, what would the writer do?2. How would the writer feel?3. How could para.2 be ended reasonably?Para. 2：As we drove along, a flower shop came

11、into sight on the road.buy some flowers to mom?be given some flowers?.excited?proud?understanding?Group talking for the plot developmentsactive or negative?Tip4: passage can be ended variously usingfeeling ending surrouning ending meaningful ending natural endingfeeling ending:Just at that moment, a

12、 ripple of(一陣) excitement began to cross my face.surrounding ending: A pleasant breeze was blowing, making the leaves of trees swinging lightly as if to be cheering for us.meaningful ending: What mom did reminded me of a famous saying:Roses given, fragrance in hand.natural ending:We continued our tr

13、avel with a sweet smile.especially for the endingPara.1： We were worried about what could be done. After what seemed to be ages, under the hot burning son, I scratched my head, stamped my foot and walked back and forth hopelessly. All of a sudden, one man with his hands waving at mom came into our v

14、iew. “He is the receptionist from the nursing home.” Mom explained to me. “Why are you here?” Mom asked excitedly. “I just intended to thank you for your flowers formally.” How lucky we were! What amazed me most was that he was a retired garage man. As a consequence, he had our car repaired in a sho

15、rt while.One possible versionParagraph 2：As we drove along, a flower shop came into sight on the road. I paced quickly into the flower shop, where a bunch offlowersglowing(絢麗奪目) red in full bloom caught my eye. Having witnessed the effect of my mothers kindness, I decided to send mom the sweet flowers. Soon, the heavenly scent filled the car again. Mom tried to conceal(隱藏) her excitement, but the glittering(晶瑩的) tears filled her eyes. Through this trip, I discovered that, despite my occasional anger towards her, I actually felt proud of her. Just at that mom