英語專項訓練基礎寫作 詳細版課件

1、基礎寫作Basic Writing從遣詞，造句，謀篇方面分析一.遣詞方面1.措辭要貼切具體 A man is the street.(走) A man is the street. A man is in the street. A man is the street. (漫步,閑逛) (徘徊,漫游)(大步走)walking downstrolling downwanderingstriding down2.使用高級詞匯This is a difficult job. He learned about everything at last. I should thank you for tak

2、ing so much trouble to help me. (eventually)(challenging)(grateful)他以為偶像。HeHe HeHe He.3.避免重復使用詞匯his idols.regards.aschooses astakes.aslooks upon.asviews.as4.要善于運用短語When he was a child, he wanted to learn everything .-When he was a child, he knowledge.Hacker attackers are increasing.-Hacker attackers

3、 are .Your work is so good that it cannot be praised enough.-Your work is all praise.had a strongappetite for/ was thirsty foron the increase/risebeyond句式多樣文章增“靚”一. 使用非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔二. 巧用倒裝增強句子表現力三. 嘗試多樣化表達方式二、造句方面：句式要準確而多變.第一類是復合句，包括含有名詞性從句的復合句，含有定語從句的復合句，含有狀語從句的復合句。第二類是并列句，包括具有遞進關系的并列句，如由and，then，bes

4、ides，inaddition,furthermore，moreover,whatsmore等連接的并列句，具有轉折關系的并列句，如由but，however onthecontrary,afterall等連接的并列句，具有平行選擇關系的并列句，如由bothand，aswellas，aswell, neithernor，eitheror，notonlybutalso等連接的并列句。第三類是一些特殊句型，如使用強調句、倒裝句、含有with復合結構的句子、therebe開頭的句子、以形式主語it開頭的句子等。1如何在寫作中避免句式單一Rewrite the sentences 1. They arr

5、ived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed.3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard. 方法一. 使用非謂語動詞及復合句使句子簡潔高檔When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.If

6、 I am given another chance, I will succeed.Given another chance, I will succeed. In order to improve his English, he studies hard.方法二. 巧用倒裝結構增強句子的表現力1. He didnt realize his foolishness until he returned home. Not until2.We can save the earth by changing the way we live. Only 3.He is clever but he do

7、es not work hard. as/though4. The clock tower stands on the other side of the street. On the other side of the streetComplete the sentences he returned home did he realize his foolishness.by changing the way we live can we save the earth.Clever he is, he does not work hard.stands the clock tower.Use

8、 different ways to describe the picture 方法三. 嘗試多樣化表達方式一就受到歡迎As soon as Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed .On arriving at the airport , Lien Chan and his wifeLien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment they arrived at the airport.No sooner h

9、ad Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were 三、謀篇方面:結構要清晰流暢,巧用過渡詞下列各組表示列舉的短語非常實用,對高考寫作很有幫助: 1.firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally, 2.to begin with,then,furthermore,finally,. 3.to start with,next,in addition,final

10、ly, 4.first and foremost,besides,last but not least 5.most important of all,moreover,finally如果只有兩層意思,可選用下列兩組中的任一組.1.On the one hand,on the other hand2.For one thing,and for another thing常用的過渡表達法:1.表增加:and ,also, in addition, furthermore, moreover2.表時間順序:now, then, before, after, soon, gradually3.表空間

11、順序:near, beyond, above, around, outside4.表示比較:in the same way, just like, just as5.表示對照:but, still, yet, however, on the contrary6.表原因和結果:because, since, so, as a result, therefore7.表目的:for this reason, for this purpose, so that 8.表強調:indeed, surely, without any doubt, truly9.表解釋說明:for ,for example,

12、 in fact, actually10.表總結:in conclusion, in brief, in a word寫作請根據以下的情景說明，使用5個規(guī)范的英語句子描述全部所給的信息內容。情景說明根據提示寫出你對環(huán)境污染的看法。1.汽車的不斷增加，排放大量廢氣。2.森林減少，氣候變得干燥。3河流被污染，城市供水不足。 寫作要求1.標題：Environmental Pollution 2.必須使用5個句子介紹全部所給的內容3.將5個句子組織成連貫的短文評分標準句子結構的復雜度和準確性短文內容的完整性和連貫性 Though the development of industry and agriculture has improved our living conditions, it is doing great harm to our life. Now more and more cars and trucks give off waste gases, which are polluting the air. Moreover , more and more tre