【高考英語專題】二輪復(fù)習(xí)英語通用版課件：7步成文第（6）步 打磨開頭和結(jié)尾“與眾不同”把分添

1、“冤屈的”四檔作文(得分17分)Dear Leslie， Ive decided to teach you Tang poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours. Tang poetry is a symbol of Chinese traditional literature and plays an important part in Chinese culture, so its necessary for you to have a good knowledge of it.

2、 Besides, in order to learn Tang poetry well, youd better get some information about Tang Dynasty before class. Looking forward to your earliest reply.Yours，Li Hua升格后的五檔作文(得分23分)Dear Leslie， I am writing to tell you my plan for the coming Chinese lesson. Ive decided to teach you Tang poetry in Room

3、101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours. Tang poetry is a symbol of Chinese traditional literature and plays an important part in Chinese culture, so its necessary for you to have a good knowledge of it. Besides, in order to learn Tang poetry well, youd better get some informa

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