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1、2021屆高考英語一輪復習第三部分寫作專題提升篇層級二低檔作文升級為五檔作文策略告訴你第四講增添細節(jié)錦上添花學案新人教版2021屆高考英語一輪復習第三部分寫作專題提升篇層級二低檔作文升級為五檔作文策略告訴你第四講增添細節(jié)錦上添花學案新人教版PAGE 2021屆高考英語一輪復習第三部分寫作專題提升篇層級二低檔作文升級為五檔作文策略告訴你第四講增添細節(jié)錦上添花學案新人教版第四講增添細節(jié)，錦上添花在英語書面表達中，增加細節(jié)內(nèi)容的描述是必不可少的.在信息提綱類寫作中，考生一定不能簡單地翻譯或者僅僅完成所給條目的指定內(nèi)容；在看圖作文中更不能只是輕描淡寫圖片內(nèi)容,否則很有可能造成內(nèi)容不充實、詞數(shù)要求不達標

2、或者結(jié)構(gòu)不連貫等問題.適當增加細節(jié)內(nèi)容，能夠使習作流暢、豐滿，達到應有的表達效果.eq avs4al（技能一列舉具體的實例進行補充說明)1。 （2018年全國卷書面表達）另外,你最好帶一些小禮物。Besides， youd better bring some little gifts.Besides， youd better bring some little gifts， such as a special food or drink from your country2我們青少年應盡我們所能保護環(huán)境、拯救地球.We teenagers should do what we can to pr

3、otect the environment and save the earth.We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth。 For example，we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, refuse to use singleuse products， plant more trees and save water and energy3我要花一些時間和父母在一起.Ill spend some time st

4、aying with my parents.Ill spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework4我是一個充滿活力的健康男孩，我非常喜歡體育運動。I am a healthy boy full of energy so I like sports very much.I am a healthy boy full of energy so I like sports very much, especially outdoor activities. Whenever I

5、have time, Ill go hiking or mountain climbing with my classmates5我想找一個像我一樣喜歡旅行的筆友。Id like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me。Id like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me. If possible,we can travel together or share traveling experiences技能二增添與所寫信息相關(guān)

6、的神態(tài)、動作、心理描寫以及背景渲染等內(nèi)容1. （2018年全國卷書面表達）它講述了一所學校的發(fā)展歷程。It tells the story of a school growing up.It tells the story of a school growing up, from small to large, from weak to strong。 （背景渲染）2我有時去村西的小河游泳。I went swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then.Weather permitting, I went swimmin

7、g in the river of the west of the village now and then。 （相關(guān)背景）3旅行了一周后，他回到了家。After a weeks trip, he returned home.After a weeks trip， he returned home， tired but very happy. （心理描寫)技能三增加相關(guān)信息的時間、地點等內(nèi)容1. （2018年全國卷書面表達）歡迎任何對這部電影感興趣的人來學校報告廳觀看。Anyone who shows interest in the film is welcome to schools lec

8、ture hall to enjoy it.Anyone who shows interest in the film is welcome to schools lecture hall， located on the first floor of the third teaching building， to enjoy it. （增加地點）2我被這個城市的美麗所吸引。I was attracted by the beauty of the city.I was attracted by the beauty of the city as soon as I arrived here at

9、 6 oclock in the morning by plane. （增加時間)技能四適當增加與所給信息相關(guān)的原因、結(jié)果、條件、讓步、手段、目的等內(nèi)容1假定你是李華,你的英國筆友Henry最近來信詢問你高考后的暑假安排。請根據(jù)下面要點寫一封回信，說明你的計劃，并簡述理由.休息；讀書;參加社會活動（1)I need a good rest. Ill do some reading.I need a good rest because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these yearsOf course, Ill do some read

10、ing for fun， and for knowledge as well。 (因果關(guān)系）（2)Ill take part in some social activities.If I have free time， Ill take part in some social activities。 （條件狀語)If possible， Ill take part in some social activities. (條件狀語)Ill take part in some social activities so that/in order that I can know more about

11、 the society。 （目的狀語)2Tracy來電話說在咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)的見面取消了。Tracy called，saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee.Tracy called，saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee as she has something important to do。 （原因狀語)3我也幫助鄰里的孩子補習英語。I also helped children in the neighborhood with their Engli

12、sh lessons。I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons。 To my joy, they made rapid progress and their parents thought highly of me。 (增添結(jié)果)技能五結(jié)尾適當發(fā)揮,寫出個人感受、評價、希望、愿景、倡議等1. (2018年全國卷書面表達）Im looking forward to your arrival and joining me in experiencing it in the near future。 (

13、希望)2Although I was very tired this summer holiday，I felt very happy for what I did. (個人感受）3I think such activities are necessary and meaningful. （評價)4As a student，its our duty to protect our school environment and make it clean. （倡議）即學即練.按要求對下列句子進行擴充1每天要努力學習，為每一次考試做出仔細的計劃。（增加條件狀語)Study hard every da

14、y and make careful plans for every exam。_。答案：If we are prepared, we will not feel worried2復旦大學位于上海。（增加which引導的非限制性定語從句)Fudan University is located in Shanghai， _.答案:which is an international city where I can get a lot of knowledge and experience3不管我將面對什么樣的困難，我都不會屈服。（增加目的狀語)_，whatever challenge I wil

15、l face, I will never give in.答案:To realize my dream4我們應該學會如何與他人相處。(增加具體實例進行補充說明）We should learn how to get along well with others. _答案：For example,we should respect teachers and be friendly to our classmates5一些學生非常擔心考試以至于晚上無法入睡。(增加結(jié)果狀語）Some students are so worried about exams that they cant fall asl

16、eep at night._答案：As a result， they feel sleepy in the day time and cant concentrate in class.請為下面的短文適當增加細節(jié)Dear Sam,The College Entrance Examination lasts for two days. The examinees are tested on Chinese，math，science and arts. We are physically and mentally stressed during the examination and the qu

17、estions are difficult and complex._Yours,Li HuaOne possible version：Dear Sam,Thank you for your concern. Now Ill tell you something about the once。a.year College Entrance Examination.There is no doubt that the examination is very important. It lasts for two days from June 7th to 8th. The examinees are tested on Chinese and math on the first day。 The science and arts