2021屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫深度解讀六

1、2021屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫深度解讀六2021屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫深度解讀六2021屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫深度解讀六2021屆高考英語讀后續(xù)寫深度解讀(六）閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事.Lost, Injured, and ColdThree days earlier, I was on a guided group horseback journey through the Montana backcountry. After we pitched camp in the morning, I decided to go on a solo tr

2、ail run. I picked an 8mile circle on another guys map and showed him my intended route so he would know where I was headed. Then I packed a bag with snacks and water and planned to be back by midafternoon.I set off under a clear sky, but after about 1。5 miles， dark clouds rolled in。 Burnt， fallen tr

3、ees from a wildfire were covering the trail. It disappeared under the debris （殘骸) and I lost track of it。 I began to feel disappointed; everything felt much more remote than I had expected. As I considered backtracking, it started to rain, so I hid under a tree to stay dry.Daylight diminished and th

4、e temperature dropped。 I was wearing only running shorts and a T-shirtno match for an August night in Montana at nearly 6,000 feet。 I held my backpack against my chest, put my face in the opening, and sealed the flap around the edge of my cap. Each breath filled the backpack with hot air to warm my

5、body。 Soon I fell asleep。In the morning， sunlight crept (爬行） across the valley and finally warmed my back。 I wondered how long it would take for rescuers to find me off the trailbecause the trees were mostly burnt， I was in a fairly visible spot. But as the day progressed， I worried about dehydratio

6、n (脫水)。 I decided to head downhill in search of a stream. I lifted my leg and placed my foot flat on the ground, then propped (撐起) myself up on my hands and pushed my bottom forward. Carefully， I moved downhill， placing my leg ahead of me and crab-walking after it. It was slow going， but this method

7、 kept the pain to a minimum。續(xù)寫要求：所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;至少使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語;續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1：Around 4 p。m.， I heard the distant thunder of a helicopter. Paragraph 2：At sunrise I found the path. 【思路點撥】文本細解讀，確定續(xù)寫方向本文是記敘文,講述了一個作者在一次馬背之旅中，早上獨自一人去小道長跑,不料途中叢林著火；小徑在野火之下無法辨

8、認，作者也迷路了。夜晚，作者借著背包和帽子取暖，勉強度過了一夜.第二天,在等待救援的過程中,作者為了避免脫水,艱難地以仰臥的方式挪動著去找水。續(xù)寫部分應(yīng)為故事的結(jié)局，即作者是否獲救。根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容可知，作者出門前在一位伙伴的地圖上圈了自己打算長跑的路線，可以推知,作者最終是可能獲救的。段首句解讀，確定續(xù)寫方向續(xù)寫第一段首句寫道“下午四點鐘的時候，我聽到遠處傳來直升機的轟鳴聲,第二段首句寫道“日出時分，我找到了路”，由此可知，第一段內(nèi)容可以著重描寫作者看到直升飛機后興奮的心情，直升飛機離開后作者沮喪的心理，及第二個夜晚作者是如何度過的?？稍O(shè)想，作者在又累又餓又渴的情況下昏昏睡去。續(xù)寫第二段內(nèi)容應(yīng)著

9、重描寫作者找到路之后，如何獲救。可設(shè)想，作者找到了路,說明他已經(jīng)離開了人煙稀少的焦土地，這是他失聯(lián)的第三天,救援工作會更加緊張，最終的結(jié)果是作者得救了。劃線詞解讀，規(guī)劃續(xù)寫細節(jié)分類劃線詞人物-guy，rescuers時間night環(huán)境trail，stream事物-backpack，horseback,water動作-disappeared心情-disappointed構(gòu)思具體情節(jié)第一段情節(jié)：我很興奮直升飛機飛近我上空我揮手呼喊飛機飛離（disappeared）,我很失望（disappointed)夜晚(night）來臨，我昏昏睡去第二段情節(jié):我發(fā)現(xiàn)了路路上碰見了救援人員（rescuers)喂我

10、水（water）喝最終獲救?！痉段男蕾p】Paragraph 1:Around 4 p.m。， I heard the distant thunder of a helicopter。 Excitement shot through my mind.Someone was looking for me. The helicopter appeared over the canyon， then turned my way。 I waved， but it passed overhead and disappeared. I was disappointed。 Around 8：30 p。m。，

11、I stopped on a rock for the night. By the time it was completely dark, I was too exhausted to keep awake. Before I knew it， I was asleep。Paragraph 2:At sunrise I found the path。 As I sat considering my options, three men on horseback appeared down the trail。 My heart beat heavily. “Im over here!” I

12、shouted. The rescuers rushed over。 As they talked to me and I drank water, I realized just how inactive my mind was。 They told me I should be proud of myself， helped me onto a horse, and guided me to safety through the canyon that had almost killed me。亮點積累 詞匯disappear v。 消失；disappointed adj。 失望的; in

13、active adj。 不活躍的短語drift to sleep 昏昏睡去； rush over 沖過去；be proud of。. 為自豪提分句式They told me I should be proud of myself， helped me onto a horse, and escorted me to safety through the canyon that had almost killed me.分析本句是個復(fù)合句，me后省略了told的賓語從句中的引導(dǎo)詞that，canyon后that引導(dǎo)定語從句，修飾先行詞canyon.譯文 他們告訴我，我應(yīng)該為自己感到驕傲,并幫我騎

14、上馬,護送我穿過差點要了我命的峽谷,到達安全地帶。讀后續(xù)寫深度解讀:自主練習(xí)閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。I served as a Newport Beach ocean lifeguard for five seasons with pleasure and honor in Orange County， California。 Whenever I could, I got shifts working here, which was known for its massive currents. If you wanted to save lives， t

15、hats where you worked. Late in a shift， I was working Tower 15. Two blocks to my right was another guard named Mike， working Tower 17. Id known Mike for several years. He phoned me, “I got a couple kids. Im going to give them a warning。 Keep an eye on us。 Anytime you get out of your tower， youre sup

16、posed to let somebody else know, in case a situation develops。 He hung up the phone and grasped his buoy （浮標） when a surf came and the kids were getting sucked out。 Mike saw it before its happening， and hes running toward the ocean. I scanned but only to see two small noses floating above the water.

17、 I dropped my binos （望遠鏡） and called, “Double rescue 17-hes out. Im going?！?Mike was already pushing through the surf line. The mother of the two then realized what was happening. She screamed when Mike reached the kids. Mike told me later that he got to the boy first, and when he turned to the girl

18、， he had to reach down into the water and caught her by the hair to pull her back up。 Mike swam sideways out of the current into the clear water。 When I reached the mother， Mike was in waistdeep water. The kids were too exhausted to walk， so Mike was carrying them， one under each arm. I turned to th

19、e mother and said, “Hey, its OK. Theyre safe.” I saw her terror start to disappear。 However， when she glanced back and got her first good look at Mike, a crazy thing happened. I saw a new kind of panic wash over her as though theres some new, equally dangerous threat on her kids lives. She rushed up

20、 to Mike， caught her kids and turned up the beach. Not even a thank-you。續(xù)寫要求:1。 所續(xù)寫短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2. 至少使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3。 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;4. 續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1：Mike had a rough upbringing, which can be figured out just by looking at him. _Paragraph 2：To the mother， judging from

21、 the appearance， Mike wasnt a hero but a really threatening guy。_【范文欣賞】Paragraph 1:Mike had a rough upbringing， which can be figured out just by looking at him。 He has a number of really frightening tattoos (紋身), and his shaved head showed the scar he got from a broken beer bottle。 Maybe he wasnt the friendliest lifeguard on the beach an