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1、四級寫作模板班北京新東方學(xué)校 石雷鵬石雷鵬： :/TOEFL、IELTS、 考研、 四六級寫作Mini-test：你的水平首先，我祝愿大家更快樂，更健康。Above of all I congrataulate all the students to happier than before, body is healtier.First, I wish all students are happier and healthier.如何漲分？自己寫的內(nèi)容：保分背誦的內(nèi)容：漲分四級寫作和翻譯占總分20%，總分值為142；其中寫作15%，總分值為106.5課程目標(biāo): 從“蔡少芬 到 “貝多芬 70分

2、 90分2021年12月四級寫作復(fù)習(xí)重點(diǎn)：2005年12月-2021年6月1. 議論文：11次2. 應(yīng)用文：2次3. 圖表作文：0次課程介紹：四個(gè)板塊1. 四級寫作最有效復(fù)習(xí)方法2. 考試概況3. 功能段落模板及例題分析4. 應(yīng)用文和圖表模板關(guān)于模板那點(diǎn)事！擯棄傳統(tǒng)模板：問題：張同學(xué)模板，用還是不用？困惑功能模板的概念：提綱 功能段落四級考試一般有三個(gè)提綱，可以總結(jié)為六種功能段落。因此，掌握好六種功能段落，也就掌握了所有作文的寫作。2021年6月大學(xué)英語四級考試真題Part I Writing (30 minutes)Directions： For this part, you are all

3、owed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Online Shopping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:1. 現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已成為一種時(shí)尚2. 網(wǎng)上購物有很多好處， 但也有不少問題3. 我的建議2021年12月大學(xué)英語四級考試真題Part I Writing (30 minutes)Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay

4、entitled How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1. 目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切2. 為了讓孩子獨(dú)立, 父母應(yīng)該2021年6月19日大學(xué)英語四級考試試題Part I Writing (30 minutes)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic

5、of Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:1. 如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫2. 出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因3. 為了改變這種狀況，我認(rèn)為2021年12月大學(xué)英語四級考試Part Writing (30 minutes)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Cre

6、ating a Green Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:1. 建設(shè)綠色校園很重要2. 綠色校園不僅指綠色的環(huán)境3. 為了建設(shè)綠色校園，我們應(yīng)該2021年6月英語四級考試Part I Writing (30 minutes)Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay on the topic of Free Admission to Museums. You sho

7、uld write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:1.越來越多的博物館免費(fèi)對外開放的目的是什么？2.也會(huì)帶來一些問題3.你的看法？段落層面：六種功能段落1. 現(xiàn)象描述2. 危害分析3. 原因分析4. 建議措施5. 觀點(diǎn)闡述利弊6. 意義闡述篇章層面：六種功能段落的排列組合1. 問題解決型：2021年6月2. 觀點(diǎn)比照型利弊分析：2021年6月3. 現(xiàn)象闡述型：2021年12月請區(qū)分以下提綱所對應(yīng)的功能段落2021年12月：Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags1.一次性

8、塑料袋曾經(jīng)廣泛使用2.使用一次性塑料袋帶來的問題3.限制一次性塑料袋的意義2021年6月Recreational Activities1. 娛樂活動(dòng)多種多樣，2. 娛樂可能使人們受益，也可能有危害性，3. 作為大學(xué)生，我的看法。2007年12月What Electives to Choose1.各大學(xué)為大學(xué)生開設(shè)了各種各樣的選修課2.學(xué)生出于各種原因選擇了不同的選修課3.以我自己為例總結(jié)復(fù)習(xí)：1. 現(xiàn)象描述2. 危害分析3. 原因分析4. 建議措施5. 觀點(diǎn)闡述利弊6. 意義闡述寫作概況：1. 試題形式考場本卷須知2. 評分方法高分作文要求3. 評卷實(shí)例高分模版思路答題卡1：Part I Wr

9、iting 30 minutesPart II Reading Comprehension Skimming and Scanning 15 minutes試題形式：Writing：2021年12月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given

10、 bellow:1.一次性塑料袋曾被廣泛地使用2.造成的問題3.限制使用的意義筆記審題關(guān)注：英文指令：題材+話題漢語提綱：識(shí)別提綱功能字?jǐn)?shù)：至少120，最好140-150，假設(shè)題目讀不懂：英文題目+漢語提綱寫作概況：評分方法1.Global scoring2.Rewarding score原始賦分：總分值15分 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分：107分五個(gè)分?jǐn)?shù)檔次：0、2、5、8、11、14寫作概況：評卷實(shí)例0分：白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有幾個(gè)孤立的詞而無法表達(dá)思想。5分：根本切題，表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，連貫性差，有較多嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。14分：文章切題。文字通順，條理清楚，無重大語言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。 評卷實(shí)例:請思考

11、高分作文特征實(shí)例一 英文題目：BicyclesAn Important Means of Transport in China漢語提綱：(1)為什么自行車在中國這樣普及(2)和汽車的比較(3)自行車在中國的前途模版的提煉過程：思路和表達(dá)Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people - man and woman, old and you

12、ng - ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles.單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤：man and woman men and women詞性誤用：old and young the old and the young專有名詞：第一個(gè)和最后一個(gè)單詞首字母大寫，其他：實(shí)詞名動(dòng)形副代數(shù)首字母大寫；虛詞介連冠首字母不大寫。首句模板句式提煉：Bicycles are very popular in China. 詞性轉(zhuǎn)化：popular popularity. In China,

13、bicycles have gained great/wide popularity among Chinese people. 練習(xí)：(請暫停完成以下真題句子寫作:鉛筆2021-06：現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已成為一種時(shí)尚2021-06：如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫2021-12：建設(shè)綠色校園很重要2021-06：越來越多的博物館免費(fèi)對外開放的目的是什么？2021-12：一次性塑料袋曾經(jīng)廣泛使用 2021-06： 娛樂活動(dòng)多種多樣 2021-06：現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已成為一種時(shí)尚In the recent decade, online shopping has gained wide popularit

14、y among youngsters. 2021-06：如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫In China, English learning has gained wide popularity among students. However, 2021-12：建設(shè)綠色校園很重要In the contemporary society, the concept of green campuses has gained wide popularity among universities or colleges. 2021-06：越來越多的博物館免費(fèi)對外開放的目的是什么？In the prese

15、nt-day society, free admission to museums is enjoying great popularity among Chinese citizens. 2021-12：一次性塑料袋曾經(jīng)廣泛使用 During the past decades, disposable plastic bags gained wide popularity among people in the whole world. 2021-06： 娛樂活動(dòng)多種多樣 In this day and age, a variety of recreational activities hav

16、e gained wide popularity among individuals. 此外，簡單句(Bicycles are very popular in China. )長難句?我愛記歌詞In my eyes, you are the most beautiful.In my eyes, no one is more beautiful than you.高分句式: 雙重否認(rèn)結(jié)構(gòu)：No _ is/are more _ than _.原句：Bicycles are very popular in China. In China, no means of transport is more

17、popular and important than bicycles.我能想到最浪漫的事就是和你一起變老。二句模板句式提煉：Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles.調(diào)查法描述：Based on a recent report, a majority of Chinese families in the cities acknowledge that they have two or three bicycles. 練習(xí)：(請暫停:在完成首句之后，對以下現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行描述2021-06：現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已成為一種時(shí)尚2021-0

18、6：如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫2021-06：越來越多的博物館免費(fèi)對外開放的目的是什么？2021-12：一次性塑料袋曾經(jīng)廣泛使用 2021-06： 娛樂活動(dòng)多種多樣 2021-06：現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已成為一種時(shí)尚 Based on a recent report by China Daily, 72.34% of young people reckon that they have purchased clothes, books and other items on Taobao, Dangdang, Amazon and Group-buying websites. 2021-06：如

19、今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫However, according to a recent survey, a great many learners admit that they pay less attention to words spelling. 2021-06：越來越多的博物館免費(fèi)對外開放的目的是什么？Based on an investigation, a majority of visitors reckon that by visiting museums freely, they acquire rich knowledge on history, military a

20、nd customs. 2021-12：一次性塑料袋曾經(jīng)廣泛使用As a recent reports reveals, a majority of residents acknowledge that they have been using these bags to take food, books and many other goods. 2021-06： 娛樂活動(dòng)多種多樣According to a recent survey, a majority of folks admit that they participate in more recreational activiti

21、es: traveling, sports, watching TV or movies and surfing the Internet. 三句提煉：During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people - man and woman, old and young - ride their bicycles to work and study. 模板句式：During the rush hour, it can be noticed that thousands of people men and women, the old

22、and the young- ride bicycles to work and study. 練習(xí)：(請暫停:在完成前兩句之后，描述以下話題現(xiàn)象2021-06：現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已成為一種時(shí)尚Every day, it can seen that thousands of people men and women, the old and the young shop online to buy various goods. 2021-06：越來越多的博物館免費(fèi)對外開放的目的是什么？On the weekends, it can noticed that hundreds of people me

23、n and women, the old and the young visit museums to see the exhibits. 首段現(xiàn)象描述正面In China, bicycles have gained great popularity among Chinese people. Based on a report, a majority of residents in the cities acknowledge that they have two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, it can be noticed that

24、thousands of people men and women, the old and the young- ride bicycles to work and study. Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride. Second, riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Though轉(zhuǎn) cars

25、 are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents. 支持：利Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are ch

26、eap, convenient and easy to ride. Second, riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution.常用詞積累分詞結(jié)構(gòu)開頭: compared with cars 。 be superior to = 優(yōu)于 be inferior to = 低于 層次與邏輯：first, second, third, moreover模板提煉： Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. 2. 網(wǎng)上購

27、物有很多好處， 但也有不少問題Compared with shopping in departments, online shopping is superior in many ways. Compared with = In comparison with 常用理由：廉價(jià)：cheap / economical / inexpensive如：First, it is inexpensive to buy books or film tickets online. 方便：convenient / convenience / inconvenience如：Second, this means o

28、f shopping brings us great convenience. 對有益be good/ beneficial/ rewarding for 轉(zhuǎn)：模板提煉：Though轉(zhuǎn) cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive.欲抑先揚(yáng)：Though/Although + 優(yōu)點(diǎn)，+缺點(diǎn)弊請暫停電腦：練習(xí)Though讓步狀語從句進(jìn)行轉(zhuǎn)折2021-06：網(wǎng)上購物有很多好處， 但也有不少問題2021-06：1.越來越多的博物館免費(fèi)對外開放的目的是什么？ 2.也會(huì)帶來一些問題2021-12：使用一次性塑料袋帶來的問題202

29、1-06：娛樂可能使人們受益，也可能有危害性2021-06：網(wǎng)上購物有很多好處， 但也有不少問題Though online shopping is beneficial, it carries some risks. 2021-06：1.越來越多的博物館免費(fèi)對外開放的目的是什么？ 2.也會(huì)帶來一些問題Although free admission is convenient and beneficial, it does cause some problems. 2021-12：使用一次性塑料袋帶來的問題Although these bags are convenient and inexpe

30、nsive, they result in some negative impacts. 2021-06：娛樂可能使人們受益，也可能有危害性Although these activities are rewarding, they generate certain negative influences. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover they often cause traffic ja

31、ms and accidents. consume：time/ energy /money如：Choosing or selecting items in the Internet consumes plenty of time and energy. 我的看法In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Since China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese

32、 present conditions. It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time. 模板提煉：In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. I am convinced that the future of bicycle is very promising. what convinces me is that 高分特征：1.內(nèi)容相關(guān) 切題即可2.結(jié)構(gòu)清晰 新聞聯(lián)播三段論3.語言精彩 句子結(jié)構(gòu)詞多變)如何做到內(nèi)容切題和結(jié)構(gòu)清晰？三

33、步法：a.審讀英文題目和漢語提綱：識(shí)別提綱功能b.將三提綱轉(zhuǎn)化為英文句子充當(dāng)主題句 (假設(shè)提綱是兩個(gè)那么添加一個(gè))c.將主題句擴(kuò)展成英文段落內(nèi)容如何擴(kuò)展？以TOEFL寫作為例：萬能話題：環(huán)境類a.在你家周圍建一個(gè)工廠，你是否同意？b.你認(rèn)為科學(xué)家對人類的奉獻(xiàn)大還是藝術(shù)家對人類的奉獻(xiàn)大？c.你的職業(yè)夢想是什么？d.如果讓你創(chuàng)造一樣機(jī)器，你會(huì)選擇什么？e.如果你有一筆錢，你會(huì)用它來做什么？再以四級考試為例作業(yè)：題目：On English Learning1. 英語學(xué)習(xí)很重要2. 英語者所面臨的困難3. 如何學(xué)好英語1992-61.你在英語學(xué)習(xí)中有哪些困難?2.你是如何克服這些困難的?How I O

34、vercame my Difficulties in Learning English1993-61.我最喜愛的電視(或無線電)節(jié)目是.2.這類節(jié)目的內(nèi)容和特點(diǎn)3.我喜歡它的原因1994-61.人們對職業(yè)各有不同的理想2.我理想的職業(yè)是什么3.我怎樣為我理想的職業(yè)做準(zhǔn)備1997-11.怎樣理解“熟能生巧?2.例如：在英語學(xué)習(xí)中3.又如Practice Makes Perfect2000-11.上大學(xué)的費(fèi)用(tuition and fees)可以通過多種途徑解決2.哪種途徑適合于我(說明理由)How I Finance My College Education2000-61.很多人認(rèn)為有必要舉行

35、英語口語考試，理由是2.也有人持不同意見.3.我的看法和打算Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary2003.61.簡單表達(dá)一下這位同學(xué)生病(或受傷)的情況2.同學(xué)、老師和我是如何幫助他/她的3.人與人之間的這種相互關(guān)愛給我的感受是2003.121.建議報(bào)考的專業(yè)及理由2.報(bào)考該專業(yè)的根本條件3.應(yīng)當(dāng)如何備考2005.11.你認(rèn)為自己具備了什么條件(能力、性格、愛好等)可以勝任學(xué)生會(huì)主席的工作2.如果中選,你將為本校同學(xué)做些什么2005年6月1.向老師致以節(jié)日祝賀。2.從一件難忘的事回憶老師的教誨和無私的奉獻(xiàn)。3.我如何回報(bào)老師的關(guān)愛2006-6月1. 校學(xué)生

36、會(huì)將組織一次暑期志愿者活動(dòng)，現(xiàn)招募志愿者。2.本次志愿者活動(dòng)的目的，內(nèi)容、安排等。 3.報(bào)名條件及聯(lián)系方式2007年6月歡送辭，Welcome to our club1.表達(dá)你的歡送；2.對你們俱樂部作一個(gè)簡要介紹2007年12月1.各大學(xué)開設(shè)了各種各樣的選修課2. 學(xué)生因?yàn)楦鞣N原因選擇了不同的選修課3. 以你自己為例 2021年6月1.如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫。2.出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因。3.如何防止這一問題Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling請記住：內(nèi)容上熟悉什么就寫什么寫作根底：句子結(jié)構(gòu)詞多變a.遣詞b.造句遣詞兩方面：The spee

37、ch by ObamaIf there is anyone out there who still doubts that America is a place where all things are possible, who still wonders if the dream of our founders is alive in our time, who still questions the power of our democracy, tonight is your answer.1. 廣度：a wide/rich variety of . a.同義詞法 b.同根詞法c.范疇

38、詞法：下義詞 上義詞 相關(guān)詞匯d. 代詞替換Eg:think: deem = claim = hold = argue = maintain = 2.深度：棄用第一反響詞: academic Eg: importantsignificant=essential=crucial=indispensableExercise:very important = of great importancevery valuable = of great _very significant = of great _ very necessary = of great _If you dont know, wh

39、o knows?你不知道誰知道？Work hard and make progress everyday.好好學(xué)習(xí)，天天向上造句：中英文差異“hard forgetting “heart flower angry open“My heart is seven up eight down “you give me stop“fuck food 如何防止 ChinglishYesterday night, I was kicked by my girl friend. She ran away with a small white face. She is my green plum and ba

40、mboo horse. However, could you please tell my why the injured is always me. I am very regret that she spent me a lot of money.造句原那么a. 切忌逐字翻譯b. 漢語意思 英文結(jié)構(gòu)簡單句：Xiao Shenyang is disgusting. I like her.并列句：XSY is disgusting and I like her.造句根底：簡單句長難句復(fù)合句：If you shed tears when you miss the sun, you will al

41、so miss the stars.簡單句長難句我看到人。今天，我在電視上看到一個(gè)高高的、瘦瘦的、留著披肩發(fā)、踩著高跟鞋、穿著花裙子、瀟灑飄逸的男人。短長：加修飾成分名詞前：加形容詞、同位語、定語從句簡單句：加狀語時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、目的、方式等 2021：娛樂活動(dòng)多種多樣。 5 words: There are many recreational activities.33 words: In recent years, owing to the speedy development of our society, there are a great many recreational activi

42、ties in peoples daily life, which include sports, watching TV, surfing the Internet, and playing games. Review:六種功能段落1. 現(xiàn)象描述2. 危害分析3. 原因分析4. 建議措施5. 觀點(diǎn)闡述利弊6. 意義闡述問題解決型寫作思路：現(xiàn)象描述+ 問題分析原因或危害+建議措施, 例如：2021年6月Topic：Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling. 1. 如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫2. 出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因3. 為了改變這種狀況，我認(rèn)為現(xiàn)

43、象描述段正反引出現(xiàn)象+具體描述+總結(jié)1引出現(xiàn)象：首句1. Nobody/ No one could have failed to notice the fact that kids lack of independence has become a grave problem in many families. 負(fù)面：a grave problem 正面：a common/popular phenomenon/practice首句2. In the contemporary society, there is no denying the fact that + 客觀事實(shí)提綱1.首句3. On

44、 many campuses/ In the contemporary society/ In the present-day society/ In recent decades, the shortage of housing is one of the most serious problems with which people are confronted. 首句4(正反均可): Nowadays/In the present-day society/In recent decades, it can be noticed that children depend more on t

45、heir parents than ever before. (比較級引出問題)首句5(正反均可)： In the present-day society/ In recent years, it has become a prevalent/ popular tendency/ trend/ practice for _ to _. 首句6: 正面In recent decades, _ has/have gained great popularity among _.popularity public attention (負(fù)面)首句7：The past years /decades ha

46、ve seen /witnessed the huge/speedy advancement/ development of _.段落寫作原那么：1. 首句正確+開篇精彩,帥鍋： You are so beautiful! I love you.美女: Get away!帥鍋：May I have directions?美女: To where?帥鍋: To your heart.美女: 2具體描述：二句1：事實(shí)描述二步走第一步：提綱中涉及誰就說誰第二步：引申其中的名詞(由個(gè)體到群體，由小見大)第三步：給句子加修飾狀語：1時(shí)間：nowadays，recently；2地點(diǎn)：in our mode

47、rn society列舉：such as/including A，B，C and so forth/ 練習(xí)：現(xiàn)在很多父母替孩子包辦一切. Parents do everything for their children. . A great many parents do everything for their children. . In many families, a great many parents do everything for their children, such as food, clothes, education even marriage. 事實(shí)描述An in

48、creasing number of individuals/people find it difficult/ hard/ troublesome to _.2021-12: 父母替孩子包辦一切：An increasing number of children find it hard to live on their own without parents. 正面話題：difficult convenient/ inexpensive/ beneficial 2021-06: Online Shopping An increasing number of youngsters find i

49、t convenient and inexpensive to shop online. 越來越多的A growing number of People in growing numbers 二句2：舉例描述1A case in point of this is /A typical example of this is/This phenomenon can be best illustrated by the fact that . 舉例描述2Turning a look around, we can find a great many/plenty of/a good deal of e

50、xamples like this: 兩個(gè)或多個(gè)例子. (舉例描述3)：Our daily life has been filled with a variety of examples like this：兩個(gè)例子二句4：調(diào)查法描述：According to a recent survey/ report, a majority of /72.34% of people/ students /individuals /citizens /residents admit/reckon /acknowledge that _According to Based on 正面：a majority

51、of 負(fù)面：a minority of 3總結(jié)問題：承上+啟下三句1：承上Thus/Therefore/Hence, 啟下how to effectively has become a matter of concern. 用于總結(jié)負(fù)面話題實(shí)例：2021：父母替孩子包辦一切Thus, how to strengthen teenagers independence effectively has become a matter of concern. 漢語四六級試題：中英文篇章結(jié)構(gòu)差異閱讀理解：天涯遠(yuǎn)不遠(yuǎn)？不遠(yuǎn)！人就在天涯，天涯怎么會(huì)遠(yuǎn)？明月是什么顏色？是藍(lán)的，就像海一樣藍(lán)，一樣深，一樣憂郁。

52、明月在那？ 在他的心，他的心就是明月。題目：概括本段中心思想 三句2：承上As a result/ Consequently/ Accordingly，啟下_ requires/ necessitates/ calls for close attention of the whole society. 總結(jié)正面或負(fù)面話題三句3: (承上) So, 啟下1due attention should be paid to _/ 或we should pay due attention to _.現(xiàn)象描述寫作范例1：Unhealthy Living Habits1. 現(xiàn)在很多大學(xué)生有不健康的生活習(xí)慣2

53、. 這些習(xí)慣的危害3. 我的建議首段：負(fù)面現(xiàn)象描述1. 現(xiàn)在很多大學(xué)生有不健康的生活習(xí)慣, 如熬夜、沉溺于電腦游戲、過度消費(fèi)首句引出現(xiàn)象：On many campuses, there are more unhealthy living habits among college or university students than ever before. 二句具體描述：Turning a look around, we can find a great many examples like this: some stay up late; some are addicted to a va

54、riety of computer games; some consume excessively. 三句總結(jié)：As a result, these habits call for the close attention of the whole society. 現(xiàn)象描述正面: 2021-061. 如今網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物已成為一種時(shí)尚首句引出現(xiàn)象：In the present-day society, it has become a prevalent trend for individuals to shop online. 或：In the present-day society, online

55、shopping has gained great popularity among youngsters. 二句具體描述：A growing number of people find it convenient and inexpensive to buy/purchase via the Internet. 或萬能舉例法：Turning a look around, we can find plenty of examples like this: Taobao, Dangdang and Amazon are websites where we can buy clothes, boo

56、ks, and other items. 三句總結(jié)話題：Thus, online shopping calls for the attention of the society. 危害分析段四句話總分總主題句+危害1+危害2+總結(jié)危害分析危害：主題句主題句1：Such _ is /are bound to (generate/result in/ give rise to/ lead to) (severe/negative/serious) (consequences/effects/impacts) if we keep turning a blind eye to. 萬能詞匯：pheno

57、menon /phenomena主題句2: Apparently enough, there are some negative impacts which we should not ignore/neglect. 主題句3：Quite obviously, it is of great necessity to figure out the negative influences behind it.主題句4：To tackle this problem, it is of great/vital significance to analyze the potential negative

58、 impacts of this matter. 原因/危害/建議/利弊/意義分析邏輯：一個(gè)中心，四個(gè)根本點(diǎn)：以孩子學(xué)生、事件為中心以家長老師、相關(guān)人員、家庭學(xué)校、管理機(jī)構(gòu)、社會(huì)、法規(guī)道德意識(shí)為根本點(diǎn)危害1：To begin with, _ may damage/ hurt/ harm/ impair/ undermine the _of _.分析危害：當(dāng)前和未來危害2：Moreover, (強(qiáng)調(diào)句式) it is _ that exerts/ produces/ generates bad impacts on physical health/ psychological fitness.危

59、害3：In addition/ Furthermore/ What is worse/ Besides, _ set bad examples to others, leading them to _.對于他人影響危害4：Then, it is manifest that _ are developing/gaining _ at the expense/ cost of _. 得：convenience/ profits/ pleasure 失：honesty/ morality / health危害5結(jié)果論：Besides, the results/ influences / impact

60、s/ effects / qualities of _ are not always as positive/ credible / trustworthy / reliable as expected (because _). 危害6：(浪費(fèi)Besides, it can be argued that _ means a grave waste of time/energy/natural resources.危害總結(jié)危害總結(jié)1：As has been noted, _ do/does impact our _ negatively to a large/some extent. 危害總結(jié)2