江蘇高考英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作summary-技巧

1、江蘇高考英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作summary-技巧 Summary writing(約30個(gè)詞概括)概要:約30詞，少于25或多于40詞均扣2分 抄襲原文材料為無(wú)效要點(diǎn)；改變句式表達(dá)方式，并有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不認(rèn)定為抄襲。讀寫(xiě)作文寫(xiě)好summary 的意義 第一段是定調(diào)子，閱卷老師往往讀完第一段就已經(jīng)打出基本分了。 -高考閱卷老師 相對(duì)于寫(xiě)作的其他要求來(lái)說(shuō)，這一部分較難寫(xiě)，這一部分先讀后概括，而其他部分都是有中文提綱的。 -往屆實(shí)驗(yàn)班考生 What is a Summary? A summary is a short account giving the main points of something lo

2、nger or detailed.以約30個(gè)詞概括主要內(nèi)容 A peacock was very unhappy with his ugly voice, and he spent most of his days complaining about it. “It is true that you cannot sing,” said the fox, “but look how beautiful you are!” “Oh, but what good is all this beauty,” cried the bird, “with such an unpleasant voice!

3、” “Listen,” said the fox, “each one owns something good. You have such beauty. The nightingale has his song; and the owl has his eyes. Even if you had a sweet voice, you would still complain about another thing. Why cant you just be happy about what you have already got?”人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài) The story is about a pe

4、acock with beautiful feathers. The peacock always feels unhappy because of his unpleasant voice. The fox comforts him, adding that you should treasure what you have already got.feelscomfortsyouyou過(guò)多細(xì)節(jié) In the article above, a peacock was always complaining about not having a sweet voice until the fox

5、 pointed out that he possessed a beautiful appearance. And the bird agreed with it. Finally, the fox argued that he should value what he had instead of complaining about what he didnt possess.53 words直接引語(yǔ) A peacock was unhappy with his ugly voice. However, the fox reminded him, “No one is perfect, e

6、ach one should be happy about what you have got.” - - - -過(guò)早表達(dá)觀點(diǎn) Each of us has strengths and weaknesses, such as a peacock. A peacock was upset about his voice, but ignored his own beauty. A fox told him that he should be content with what he had already got .- A peacock complained a lot about his u

7、gly voice while actually he looked very beautiful. A fox advised him to be content with what he was blessed with.dos and donts 1、注意人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài)正確；2、不寫(xiě)過(guò)多細(xì)節(jié):實(shí)行精“兵”裁“員” 3、不用直接引語(yǔ)；4、不能過(guò)早表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)；5、不可完全照抄原文；6、不可加入自己的觀點(diǎn)；7. 思路清晰，巧用關(guān)聯(lián)詞增強(qiáng)文章的 連貫性。Styles of passageNarration（記敘文）1 Argumentation(說(shuō)明文)2Exposition(議論文)3圖文并茂的材料4

8、圖文并茂的材料42015高考作文圖文并茂的材料41.記敘文寫(xiě)作方法：串聯(lián)要素法六個(gè)要素：who; when; where; what; how; why某人做了某事, 結(jié)果如何？The passage mainly talks about. This story is about a peacock who complained a lot about his ugly voice while actually he looked very beautiful. A fox advised him to be content with what he was blessed with.（1）對(duì)

9、象、性質(zhì)功用、利好（2）問(wèn)題、解決方法（3）現(xiàn)象、原因、結(jié)果2、說(shuō)明文及新聞報(bào)道The topic-whatKoalas are unhappy and complainingThe reasons- whyTourists taking photosThe effects-howBeing repeatedly awakenThe solutionsGovernment ban the practiceThe conclusionBe more kind to animals koalas in wildlife parks that are repeatedly awaken from t

10、heir deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos. The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals. Koalas in wildlife parks cant fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The government is considering making the tourists behavior illegal to protect the animals.Prac

11、ticePassage A (2014年江蘇高考作文)板塊（次）重點(diǎn)1.概要（第一段-約30詞，少于25或多于40詞均扣2分） 1）英語(yǔ)詞匯被收錄于漢語(yǔ)詞典2）不同的人觀點(diǎn)不一2.發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)（第二段-觀點(diǎn)鮮明，不能騎墻） 1）自己的觀點(diǎn)（贊成或反對(duì)均可）2）理由2-3點(diǎn)（注：若寫(xiě)4點(diǎn)則從總分中扣2分）3.結(jié)論（第三段） 結(jié)尾句（無(wú)此項(xiàng)扣1分） Today, more and more English words find their way into the Chinese language. Even the Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese has

12、included 239 English words. Some people support it while others do not. WithEnglishwordsgettingpopularinbothmediaanddailylife,aChinesedictionaryhasincluded239ofthem,leavingthepublicdividedintotwoopposinggroups:“For”and“Against”三要素：論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)、論證。文章結(jié)構(gòu)：總分結(jié)構(gòu)、分總結(jié)構(gòu)、 平行結(jié)構(gòu)。3、議論文 Getting up early has been regard

13、as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all. In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and peopl

14、e are usually in the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day. If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier

15、. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry. Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it. If we stick to getting

16、up early every day, we will certainly benefit a lot from it.1. A strong statement of opinion. (the key idea):Getting up early /a good habit /of great importance 2. Support for the opinion (supporting sentences) a better memory a healthier body a better preparation for the day3. Conclusion/suggestion

17、s.a good habit / benefit a lot Getting up early in the morning is a good habit that will benefit us a lot. It enables us to have a better memory, healthier body and better preparation for the day. Teamwork is about people working together as a team. The idea has spread from the world of sports to bu

18、siness. In the 21st century, as people and their work are becoming more technically advanced, working as a team makes it easier to get things done. Some things cannot be done by people working individually. More complex goals usually require that people work together. Anyone who has ever been to a j

19、ob interview will almost certainly have been asked what teamwork means to them. This is because companies want people who are team players, who can get along with their colleagues and work together in a group. Because teamwork is required by many organizations today, they will often organize team bu

20、ilding events in an attempt to get people to work as a team than as individuals.Teamworkrequired byThere are seven important skills that one must learn in order to be a successful team player. They are as follows:Listening-listen and allow people to freely express their ideas.Questioning-ask questio

21、ns and discuss the objectives of the team.Persuading-encourage people to exchange, defend ,and rethink their ideas.Respecting-treat others with respect and to support their ideas.Helping-help ones partners, this is the general theme of teamwork.Sharing-share ideas and resources with the team to crea

22、te an environment of teamwork.Participating-all members of the team are encouraged to participate in the team.skills The passage states the importance of teamwork in business and that, in a more competitive world, people must co-operate in order to achieve their goals. Besides, seven teamwork skills

23、 are also described.Q1：圖文并茂的讀寫(xiě)歸納要涉及圖嗎？審題看圖畫(huà)或圖表的作用漫畫(huà)通?？珊雎詧D表看作用，有時(shí)不可忽略2015高考作文Think：2015高考的這幅圖在文字中體現(xiàn)了嗎？Tip1多個(gè)并列語(yǔ)段只要找出其共性 主題， 為某一段落服務(wù)的插圖 可不涉及。 Model 1: Topic + support The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may alsothreaten peoples lives. The three selectio

24、ns presented above are typical exles.(2015高考范文）觀察一下圖文的關(guān)系蘇州20162015高考作文的翻版 Cultural differences do exist in every corner of the world，where the same behavior often carries totally different meanings when we socialize with people. The three experiences of the author are typical exles.蘇州2016The panda i

25、s the most widely recognized symbol among foreigners to represent Chinese culture, followed by green tea and yin/yang, according to a survey conducted by the Beijing Institute of Culture Innovation and Communication. Researchers selected 18 symbols of Chinese culture, including Confucius（孔子）, Beijin

26、g opera and Kung fu.“It is interesting to find that foreigners have a very different understanding of Chinese culture from us, ”said Yu Dan, a professor of Chinese culture at Beijing Normal University.The survey collected 2,047 questionaires from the United States, United Kingdom, France, Australia,

27、 Japan and South Korea. Respondents were asked to rate their understanding of Chinese culture on a five-point scale from excellent to poor. The results were indicated in the following chart. 讀寫(xiě)讀寫(xiě)先讀后寫(xiě)The panda is the most widely recognized symbol among foreigners to represent Chinese culture, followe

28、d by green tea and yin/yang, according to a survey conducted by the Beijing Institute of Culture Innovation and Communication. Researchers selected 18 symbols of Chinese culture, including Confucius（孔子）, Beijing opera and Kung fu.“It is interesting to find that foreigners have a very different understanding of Chinese culture from us, ”said Yu Dan, a professor of Chinese culture at Beijing Normal University.The survey collected 2,047 questionaires from the United States, United Kingdom, France, Australia, Japan and South Korea. Responde